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lovelyyrose

@lovelyyrose

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Posted: 16 years ago

#101

that was cool update

dialogues superb .

cont soon

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ANANYA ROY

@yakkudimag

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Posted: 16 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: jeenal20
gr88 part plz cont soon
wow jai smootvhing bani=hmm..I knew that you will be happy..very happy..😆

and bani kicking jai in retun=Bani is a donkey..kiss k badle kick..😡

that was hilarous=Thank you.😊

now wats the complete truth about jais parents=hmm..keep reading..you will know..😉

plzzzzzzz tell soon

plzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon

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swati

@swatinarang

Sparkler

Posted: 16 years ago

#103

great part dear, so JW was in love with bani and got married, but then why bani ran away can't wait to read more so continue soon

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ANANYA ROY

@yakkudimag

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: tam2
it seems things were heating up between these two ... 😆 yes ..heat..lots of heat..like the fire in jungle.😉... but Bani's kick definitely put water on the fire... 😆 yes..She arranged the fire brigade..actually..she is inspired by WWF ... So Jai always loved her,yes He loved her always..Bani was an attractive teenager..it was normal..😉 ... but what about Bani ... 🤔 .Bani..yes..Bani..let's keep it secret..you will know later😉.. anyways do cont soon ...

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ANANYA ROY

@yakkudimag

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Posted: 16 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: phool527
haha.. lmao.. great part yaar. THANK YOU. continue soon..I will update very soon. but i really want ot noe bani ko itni nafrat kyun??hmm..that is the main secret my dear..keep waiting..😉😆

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ANANYA ROY

@yakkudimag

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Posted: 16 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: teenzs
gr8 part...plzs continue soon..

yes yes...sure..I will update soon..😛

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ANANYA ROY

@yakkudimag

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Posted: 16 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: lovelyreddyrose
that was cool update..NOOOOOOO😡..it was a HOTTT update..😛😆😉.
dialogues superb =THANK YOU..😃👏

cont soon=yes..I will..😊

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ANANYA ROY

@yakkudimag

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Posted: 16 years ago

#108

PART 9

[FLASHBACK 1.3]

KUNWARJEE IS IN LOVE

Jai buri tarha se Bani k pyaar me geera hai..Falling in Love..shaayad isi ko kahte hain..

Jai ko sharam aati hai..chhoti hai umar me,par bachchi nahi hai,15 saal ki hai... samajhdar hai...sab samajhti hai..mard aur aurat ka rishta..samajhti hai..jis din se Bani k saath ghoom kar aya hai..Jai..usko mauke ki talaash rehti hai..Bani se kaise milega woh.

yeha tak..baat yeha tak pahuch gayi hai..k Jai..Bani ko phone bhi karta hai..poochta hai.. .."aa rahi ho na?kaha milna hai?main intezar karoonga.."

ab itni besabri se agar kisika intezar koi kare..toh usko generally PYAAR hi kaha jata hai..

ab ..Jai ki taraf se toh..yehi baat thi..

Bani k bare me pata nahi tha..ab..Jai uske saath waqt beetana chaahta hai..usko phone karta hai..aur Bani usse milne bhi aati hai..iska matlab kyaa banta hai?Jai ko toh lagta hai..k Bani ko bhi usse milna achha lagta hai.

Jai ko ab yeh jaanna hai..k kya Bani bhi wahi mehsoos karti hai..jo Jai uske lia mehsoos karta hai..?

iske lia waqt ki zaroorat hai..zyada se zyada waqt..Bani k saath guzarna hai..par..waqt hi nahi hai..Bani aur kuchh hi din Jaisalmer me rahegi..uske baad Shimla chali jaayegi..usse pahle Jai ko pata karna hai..k Bani kyaa sochti hai..aisa toh nahi..k Bani samajhti nahi..k Jai usko kis nazar se dekhta hai..samajhti toh hai..bas...pretend karti hai ..naa samajhne ka..haa..yehi baat hai..par..Bani jab chali jaayegi..tab kyaa hoga?Jai ko hi jana hoga..Bani k paas..

ek idea hai...Jai agar Shimla me business expand kare..aur Bani ka local gaurdian ban
jaaye..toh?bingo!!...achha idea hai..par kya Dad raazi honge iske lia?mushkil hai..par manana hoga unko..

par agar Bani usko reject kar de..tab Shimla jaane ka faida kyaa??

bahut sara calculation baaki hai abhi..

Jai k andar jo baitha hai..woh din raat Jai ko bhala bura kehta hai..

"Jai ,sharam kar..kyaa kar raha hai..?bachchi hai..tujhse bahut chhoti hai..aisa mat kar yaar.. koi 20-22 ki ladki pata..uske saath jo jee me aaye kar..chhoti bachchi ki zindagi k saath kyon khel raha hai..?"

Jai bhi jawab deta hai..

"koi bachchi nahi hai..18 saal hone me 3 saal aur baaki hai..3 saal ..dekhte dekhte guzar jaayenge..koi bachchi nahi hai..she is a grown up girl..may be she is not adult..but she is not a child..sab samajhti hai.."

Jai ko fir se daant padti hai.."Kal ..uski taango ko bahut der se dekh raha tha..tujhe sharam nahi aati?"

Jai kehta hai.."khud mini skirt pahen kar agar apne nange pairon ko mujhe dikhayegi..toh main kyon nahi dekh sakta?"

"Jai..yehi fashion hai..school girls aise hi kapde pahenti hai.."

"achha?oohh..aise kapde pahenne ki zaroorat kyaa hai..jisko dekh kar admi ka khoon garam ho.."

"Jai..yeh zyatti hai..Delhi me tune kabhi aisi ladki nahi dekhi..jo mini skirt pahenti thi?Bani ka dress bahut achha hai...tu bhool gaya ..un ladkion ko..jo almost.."

"nahi bhoola hoon..."

"Kabhi unko dekh kar tera khoon garam hua?"

"nahi.."

"There you are..saale..tu khud kameena hai..bachchi par aashik hai..aur dosh us chhoti si bachchi par daal raha hai..??shame on you Jai..ho kyaa gaya hai tujhko?Bani ka khayaal chhod..arre..us par rahem kar.."

"I can't do that.."

"Tab toh ek hi upai hai..intezar kar..jab tak woh 18 ki naa ho jaaye..par usse bhi kyaa faida? age difference toh rahega hi.."

"9 -10 saal ka difference..chalta hai...yaar..koi doodh peeti bachchi toh hai nahi.."

"Tujhe bol kar koi faida nahi..tu gaya hai kaam se..jaa..teri Bani tera intezar kar rahi hogi...tu itna geer jaayega..maine nahi socha tha.."

"yes..I have fallen in love..I am in love..I don't have any regret.."

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28th December,1997...

Bani baithi hai..Kakni nadi k paas....

Jai bhi hai saath me...

bahut der se Bani ne kuchh kaha nahi hai...

Jai--Bani..

Bani--kyaa hai Victor?

Jai--hum doosri baar aa rahe hain na ..yeha par?

Bani--hmm...

Jai--maine ek faisla kia hai...

Bani--kyaa?

Jai--main Shimla me ek business start karna chaahta hoon...

Bani--karo...

"Karo..?Sirf karo?uff..itna thanda response?Bani..kyaa yaar..main Shimla aa raha hoon.. aur tumko zara bhi khushi nahi hai?Do you have a heart Bani?tumne yeh nahi socha k main kyon ana chaahta hoon waha?kis wajah se?"

Jai mann hi mann yeh saare sawal kar raha tha..Bani se...saamne bolne ki himmat nahi..

Jai--waha par..kis chees ka business kia jaaye...kuchh suggest karo...

Bani--Victor..agar business ki baatein karni hai..toh mujhe drive pe mat laao..apne Dad ko yaa mere Dad ko laao..they are more intelligent in this case..

Jai--bhadakti kyon ho?

Bani--main bhadak nahi rahi hoon...bas ..bata rahi hoon..

Jai--OK ...is baat ko khatam karte hain...kuchh aur baatein karte hain..

Bani--hmm...

Jai--ek baat poochhoo?

Bani--ghatia baat nahi..

Jai--ab baat kahe bina kaise pata chalega k..baat achhi hai yaa buri?

Bani--Victor..jo poochhna hai poochho..mera sar mat khaao..

Jai--tumhara wazan kitna hai?

Bani--what!!!?

Jai--haa..tumhara wazan kitna hai?yeh toh ghatia baat nahi...

Bani--last month jab weight machine me dekha tha..42 kilo tha..

Jai--hmm..kaafi kum hai..thoda aur wazan badhana chahie...

Bani--tumhara kitna hai?

Jai--72...

Bani--hmm..thoda kum karna chahie..exercise kyon nahi karte?

Jai--mere height k hisaab se theek hai..isse kum hua,toh,main under weight ho jaaoonga...

Bani--hmm..

Jai--ek baat aur poochhoon?

Bani--ab kyaa?mere shoes k number?

Jai--nahi...

Bani--toh fir kyaa?

Jai--aaj tak kabhi kisine tumko propose nahi kia?

Bani--nahi...

Jai--kyon nahi kia?

Bani--yeh maine kisika gireban pakad kar poochha nahi..k ,"kyon Bhaisaab?aapne mujhe propose kyon nahi kia?"

Jai--tum fir se bhadak gayi?

Bani--tum baatein hi aisi kar rahe ho...

Jai--OK..sorry...main tumko kuchh dikhana chaahta hoon...

Bani--kyaa?

Jai--kal ghar aao..toh dikhata hoon...

Bani--nahi..Her Highness ...Jyoti Devi...mujhe paka daalengi...

Jai--main aa jaoon..tumhare ghar..?

Bani--haa..kitne baje aaoge..?

Jai--kal..dopaher ko..3 baje..kuchh projections tumko dikhane hain..

Bani--OK....

Jai--par..tumhari woh Aya..

Bani--woh disturb nahi karegi,...aur ,..tumko toh jaanti hai...koi baat nahi...aa jana...

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agle din dopaher ko...

is waqt..Bani k Dad ..gaye hain..Jodhpur..kisi kaam se..raat ko laut sakte hain..ho sakta hai.. agle din subha bhi aaye..

door bell baji..

Bani ne darwaza khola...

Jai--Hii..right on time..

Bani--yaa..aao ,andar aao...

Jai--thanks..achha..mujhe bahut pyaas lagi hai..Aya se kaho..mere lia Juice laaye..

Bani--woh nahi aa sakti..apne kamre me hai..unke pair me moch aa gayi hai..abhi thodi der pahle...tum baitho..main laati hoon...

Bani kitchen me gayi...

Jai ne check kar lia..Aya ko dhoondha usne..aur haa..woh apne kamre me so rahi hai.. Bani se aram se baat kar sakta hai...

Bani thodi der baad aai..."here is your juice.."

Jai--thanks..chalo..woh parda geerao..light geeregi..toh achha nahi lagega...

Bani--tum mere kamre me chalo...waha par..sab theek hai,,

Jai--lekin..tumhare Bedroom me..?nahi..Bani...yehi theek hai..

Bani--Victor..kya main nahi gayi thi tumhare room me..come on..chalo...

Bani Jai ka haath pakad kar le gayi....

Jai(man hi man)--green signal...khud hi..achha hai..tab toh...koi pareshaani nahi..mamla set hai...

Bani k kamre me pehli baar gaya Jai..

projector rakha..table par..sab kuchh theek kia..diwar par paiting lagi thi..usko hatana pada ..projection k lia..projection shuru hua..bahut se purani tasveeren...sildes..sab kuchh...

Bani--My God..Victor..you have such a good collection...

Jai--thanks..ab light on karo..

Bani--haa...

Jai sofa par baitha tha...

Bani--main tumhe apne photographs dikhati hoon..baitho..

Jai--yaa...

Bani--main zara..aati hoon...tum yeh album dekho..main abhi aai...

Jai k haath me yeh album de kar Bani baahar gayi...Aya ko dekhne...Aya dard se tadap rahi thi..Bani ne davai di...aur kaha..aap leti rahiye..main darwaza baahar se ,lock nahi kar rahi hoon..bas..aise hi..taa k..aapko koi disturb naa kare..

Bani ek T-shirt aur Pajama pahne hue thi...shaam ho chuki thi..thand badh rahi thi..fire place me aag jala dia usne..

kamre me aai..dekha Jai bed par baithe album dekh raha hai..

Bani ko dekh kar Jai concious ho gaya..

Jai--meri kamar akad gayi thi..isi lia..main..

Bani--no problem..you are most welcome..

Jai--achha..yeh kaun hain?inki shakal tumse milti hai..

Bani kareeb aai.."dikhao kaun?"

Bani Jai k paas aa kar baith gayi...

Bani--My Mom...

Jai--kaha hain?

Bani--nahi hain ab..5 saal pahle...

Jai--I am sorry..

Bani--it's OK...Victor..

Jai--tumse kaafi mel khaati hai shakal...

Bani--isn't that very obvious?

Jai--hmm..achha yeh kaun..

album me sab k bare me poochhte poochhte..aur jawab dete dete..Bani Jai k bahut kareeb aa gayi..is baat ka pata hi nahi chala usko...almost Jai k goad me baithi thi ...

Jai yeh samjha..k Bani khud hi uske kareeb aa rahi hai..jaan boojh kar...green signal Jai.. abhi..bol dena chahie..

Jai ne dekha...ghar me almost koi nahi hai...aur Bani k bedroom me..Bani k bistar me... Bani usiki goad me baithi hai..

Bani apne mann ki baatein kie jaa rahi hai...apne school k bare me..bole jaa rahi hai...

usko achanak ne ehsaas hua..k Jai..kuchh kar raha hai...kuchh aisa..jo theek nahi hai..

Jai k right side me Bani baithi thi..aur Jai ka right hand hi kuchh kar raha hai...

jab tak Jai ka haath Bani k kamar me the..Bani ko kuchh bura nahi laga..it was normal..par Bani Jai k itne kareeb baithi hai..Bani ko pata hi nahi chala..

Jai ka right hand..Bani k under arms se guzar kar..Bani k saamne aana chaahti hai...in very simple words..Jai is trying to cup her breast..he is not trying..he is cupping it..and pressing it in a tender way...

Bani k roam roam me hulchul...yeh kyaa kar raha hai Victor?

Bani jaise patthar ban gayi..in dus dino me woh Jai se roz milti aa rahi hai,usko ab samajh me aa raha hai..k Victor kyaa karna chaahta hai uske saath..kisi na kisi bahane se..Bani k kamar ko cover karna..uske hip ko touch karna...aur kai baar..by chance..Bani k breast par bhi..Jai ka haath lag chuka hai..tab Bani ne socha k..it is just by mistake..by mistake..par aaj jo Victor kar raha hai..yeh jaan boojh kar ,kar raha hai..isme koi ghalati nahi hai...

Jai ne dekha..Bani kuchh bol nahi rahi hai..chup chaap baithi hai..Jai ko laga..Bani ko achha lag raha hai..

Jai ne aur achhi tarha se haath rakha..Bani k breast par..

Bani ko lag raha hai..bahut bada toofan uski taraf aa raha hai...aur Bani us toofan me barbad ho rahi hai...Jai ne Bani k chehre ko apni taraf kia...

Jaane anjaane me..Bani ne bhi Jai k seene me haath rakha...

Bani ki saanse bhaari ho rahi hai..is tarha kabhi kisine usko nahi chhooan...infact aaj tak kisine usko nahi chhooa..Bani Jai k baahon me thi...

Jai ne bahut dheemi awaz me poochha.."ek sawal aur poochhoon?"

Bani ne bahut dheemi awaz me poocha,"kyaa?"

Jai--kabhi kisine tumko kiss kia hai?

Bani--nahiiii...

Jai--aaj main karoonga...

Jai ne Bani k maathe par chuma..fir uski gaal par..aur jab uske honth Bani k hontho se lagne gaye...

Bani ne dia.. Jai ko ...zor ka thappad....aur jhatak kar bistar se uth gayi...

Jai ko bahut zyada shock laga...

Jai--Bani...!!!

Bani--You know what?you all are same...har chees par hak jatana..tum Sisodias ki fitrat hai...

Jai--kyaa?!!!!

Bani--haa..tumne..dekha..main kyaa sochti hoon..tumhare parents k bare me..aur tumne doosra raasta chuna..mere saath..

Jai--tumhare saath kyaa..bolo Bani...kyaa?

Bani--tum jaao yeha se..

Jai bistar se utha...Bani k saamne khada hua..bahut gehri nigaahon se dekhne laga Bani ko...

Jai--tumko kyaa lagta hai..k maine kyaa kia?

Bani--Get out..

Jai--Bani..tum itni bhi bachchi nahi..jo yeh naa samajh sako...k..main kyaa sochta hoon.. mujhe baaki logon se koi matlab nahi..main tumhara jawab jaanna chaahta hoon....

Bani--kaisa jawab?

Jai--ab tak jitne bhi sawal maine poochha tumse...ek sawal maine nahi poochha...

Bani--kaisa sawal....?

Jai--Do you love me?

Bani--kyaa?

Jai--I love you...

Bani--kyaaaaaaaaa?!!!

Jai--I love you..

Bani--you are mad..

Jai--kyon?isi lia k main tumse pyaar karta hoon?

Bani--tum..mujhse pyaar nahi karte..

Jai--tum zyada jaanti ho?

Bani--look at yourself..damn it..you are almost 25 years old..don't you have any sense?

Jai--hmm..big problem..par..mujhe yeh koi problem nahi lagti..I am a young man..you are a young teenage girl..mujhe koi problem nahi hai..

Bani--mujhe hai....

Jai--Bani..wajah yeh nahi..jo tum bata rahi ho..go for an arranged marriage..you will find this type of age difference..

Bani--Marriage?!!!baat shaadi tak pahuch gayi?!!!

Jai--abhi nahi..tum ..18 ki ho jaao..tab baat karenge...

Bani--Get out..right now..varna main chilla kar Aya ko bulaoongi...

Jai--koi yakeen nahi karega,tum khud mujhe apne bedroom tak laai,log yehi poochhenge ..k ghar par koi nahi tha..toh tumne mujhe andar kyon aane dia?tab kyaa bologi?

Bani--Get out...

Jai--OK..abhi main jata hoon..but..main tumko sochne k lia waqt deta hoon,tum faisla karo ..parso tak waqt hai tumhare paas..Palace k peechhe ..jo purana toota hua Mahel hai.. parso ..shaam..theek 4 baje,main intezar karoonga,agar tum aai toh main samajh jaaoonga k tum bhi wahi mehsoos karti ho..jo main karta hoon..agar nahi aai..toh main samajh jaaoonga,k tumhare mann me kuchh nahi hai..mere lia..yeh mera wada hai,uske baad ..tumhare raaste me kabhi nahi aaoonga..aur jo kuchh bhi hua..abhi..humare bich.. main kisiko nahi bataoonga....hmm..think about it...

Bani--Get out...

Jai--parso..4 baje..yaad rakhna..

Bani--Get out...

Jai--ek sawal poochhoon?

ab Bani bhadak gayi..buri tarha se...

Bani--kyaa poochhna hai?mere Bra ka size?

Jai--nahi..yeh mera sawal nahi tha..par tum batana chaahti ho..toh..main zaroor jaanna chahoonga..

Bani--Get out and get lost..

Jai--parso...4 baje..hmm..yaad rakhna...main intezar karoonga...and..tum zaroor aaogi..

Bani--You think so?

Jai--I don't think so...I know so...k tum..zaroor aaogi..aaogi tum...because..I also love me... bas..yeh Ego ki problem hai..isko hata do..sab theek ho jaayega..

Bani--jaaooo...

Jai--parso..4 baje..hmm..bye love..

Jai chala gaya...

Bani ne darwaza bandh kar dia..andar se...aur daur kar apne kamre me chali gayi..

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Edited by yakkudimag - 16 years ago

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tam2

@tam2

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#109

Hi ... thank you for such wonderful update ... 😃... Jai needs more self-control ... behaving such way with a 15 yrs teenager is not appropriate ... cant blame him also ...😆... he seems to be too much in love with her 😳... to keep himself away from bani 😳😆... wonder if Bani will go and see him ... do cont soon ... 👏...

Edited by tam2 - 16 years ago