FF:DOBARA ,PART 22,PAGE 33,22/09/09

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jeenal

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Posted: 16 years ago

#111

ohh god ananaya

wat a part men

supereb

things were getting hot

and then bani ne jai ko thapaad mara

wow

that was a gr88 updateplz do cont soon

kya bani aayegi? i think so she will go to meet jai

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amisha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#112

wonderful parts loving the story so far cant wait to read more

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MrsKhan-Sobti

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Posted: 16 years ago

#113

jai is acting like a love sick puppy...

pad gaaya na zoor ka chaata...

waiting to see if bani comes to meet him or not...

i guess she'l come...

do continue soon...........

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ANANYA ROY

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Posted: 16 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: tam2
Hi ... thank you for such wonderful update ... =thanks for loving it😃.... Jai needs more self-control ...=yes ..he needs indeed. behaving such way with a 15 yrs teenager is not appropriate ...=very true cant blame him also ...😆... he seems to be too much in love with her 😳... to keep himself away from bani 😳😆=yes..he is in love..... wonder if Bani will go and see him ... do cont soon ... 👏... =yes..I will update soon.

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ANANYA ROY

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Posted: 16 years ago

#115

Originally posted by: lovelyreddyrose
oh my god
thisis hotttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt update dear=thanks a lot

ananya

u rockkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk==hmm..I know..😉

enjoyed to hilt

cont soon=yes..of course.

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ANANYA ROY

@yakkudimag

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Posted: 16 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: jeenal20
ohh god ananaya
wat a part men

supereb==THANK YOU VERY MUCH

things were getting hot=VERY HOT

and then bani ne jai ko thapaad mara=bahut bura kia Bani ne...😆

wow

that was a gr88 updateplz do cont soon

kya bani aayegi? i think so she will go to meet jai==keep reading..

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ANANYA ROY

@yakkudimag

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Posted: 16 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: amiee
wonderful parts loving the story so far cant wait to read more

thanks for loving my fic..keep reading..you will know..😉

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ANANYA ROY

@yakkudimag

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Posted: 16 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: teenzs
jai is acting like a love sick puppy...=😆
pad gaaya na zoor ka chaata...==that was the best part.😆

waiting to see if bani comes to meet him or not...=hmm..big question..😉

i guess she'l come...

do continue soon...........==wait and see..

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ANANYA ROY

@yakkudimag

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Posted: 16 years ago

#119

PART 10

[FLASHBACK 1.4]

THE BOTH SIDED MATTER

pata nahi Bani ko usdin se kyaa ho gaya..bachpan k din uske beet chuke the..jawaani abhi aai nahi hai aur aise me Jai ka is tarha usko chhoona,Bani par kaafi asar kar gaya.

Dheere..dheere..Bani yeh samajhni lagi..k Jai us din..chala gaya..kyonki uske mann me koi paap nahi tha..agar uski niyat kharab hoti..toh woh us shaam ko kuchh bhi kar sakta tha.. Bani k saath..Bani me taakat nahi thi itni..k usko rok sake..Jai jo chaahe karta..aur chala jata ..par usne aisa nahi kia..chup chaap chala gaya..kyon ki Bani ne usko roka.

kuchh aise talwarbaazon ki kahani hum sunte hai aaj bhi..jo..talwar kisi chees par chala te the..par tukde dikhte nahi the..par talwar chalane k baad..agar us chees ko hilaya jata ..toh pata chalta..tookde hue hai,tookde apne aap alag ho jaate the..aise talwarbaazon ki taarif toh karni chahie..is baar..uparwale ne..aisi talwarbaazi dikhai..Bani par..uske bachpan aur jawaani k bich ek lakeer khinch di bhagwan ne..bachpan ..jo guzar chuka hai..jawaani ..jo abhi aai nahi..bahut hi sensitive waqt hai yeh...ek ladki k lia.

kahte hain..is waqt..ka koi bhi rishta...har chhoti se chhoti baatein...har ladki ko yaad rehti hai..bachpan aur jawaani ki baatein bhale hi shaayad koi bhool jaaye..par is waqt ki baatein.. koi ladki nahi bhoolti..agar yaadein achhi ho..toh ek meetha sa ehsaas de kar jaati hai..agar yaadein boori ho..toh zindagi bhar peechha nahi chhodti..ek bura sapna ban kar reh jaati hai..aur is waqt..jo shaks Bani k saamne tha..woh tha Jai..

Jai ka khayaal..naa Bani ko raat ko sone de rahi hai..naa din me kisi aur baat ka hosh hai usko..

parso tak..Jai ne waqt dia hai..Jai ko accept nahi kar paa rahi hai..naa hi usko ignore kar paa rahi hai..as if Jai uski taraf dekh raha hai..aur hans raha hai..aur keh raha hai..LOVE ME..OR HATE ME..Your choice..but..don't you ever try to IGNORE ME..

Aya--Beti..Hukum toh abhi aaye nahi..k karoon?

Bani--pata nahi..phone bhi nahi kia Dad ne..aap unke lia khana bana k rakh do..aayenge to khaa lenge..varna..hum bana ke rakh do..

Aya--achhi baat hai..

Bani--aur kuchh bolna hai?

Aya--haa..Kunwarsaa ka phone aya tha...

Bani--kyaa kaha unhone?

Aya--poochh rahe the..k aaj aap unke saath baahar jaaogi k nahi?

Bani--aapne kyaa kaha?

Aya--aapko sote hue dekha..maine bata dia..k aap ki tabiyat theek nahi..unhone kaha..aapka khayaal rakhne k lia..

Bani--achha..theek hai..main unko phone kar loongi..

Aya--jee..achha..

kal shaam ko Jai bol kar gaya hai..24 ghante beet chuke hain..par..ek pal aisa nahi gaya.. jab Bani bechain nahi rahi..raat bhar neend nahi aai..agle din shaam k 4 baje milna hai Jai se.. agar Bani milna chaahe toh..varna THE END..Jai kabhi usko pareshaan nahi karega..

Bani k dimaag me peechhli kai mulakaton ki baatein yaad aai..Victor ka uski taraf us tarha dekhna..Bani ne kai baar mehsoos bhi kia..k Victor uski taraf dekhe hi jaa raha hai..

jisdin dono Palace k Garden me ghoom rahe the,usdin ki baat bhi yaad aai..dono pedh k niche baith kar baatein kar rahe the...achanak se Victor ka haath Bani k kamar ko gher raha tha..aur ..uske hips ko chhoo raha tha..

Lake k paas dono khade the..Bani bahut jhoonk kar dekh rahi tha.Lake k lotus ko..achanak se Victor ne usko khincha..Victor ka haath Bani k saamne tha..Victor ne usi haalat me Bani ko peechhe khincha tha.

yeh saari baatein dheere dheere yaad aa rahi hai Bani ko..Kakni nadi k kinare..doosri baar dono jab gaye the...Victor ne Bani se uska weight poochha tha..Bani ne bata dia..par uske kuchh hi der baad..jab andhera ho gaya tha..tab Victor ne aur bhi kuchh kia tha.

Victor--Bani..main tumko goad me uthaoon?

Bani--main koi bachchi nahi..

Victor--tumhara matlab hai..sirf bachcho ko goad me uthaya jata hai?

Bani--aur nahi toh kyaa?

Victor--OK..but..tum 42 kilo ki ho na?

Bani--haa..par iska matlab yeh nahi k..tum ..agar weight lifting ka shaukh hai..toh Gym jaao..

Victor--OK..bhadakti kyon ho?

Bani--tumhari behuda baaton ki wajah se...

aur fir achanak Victor ne peechhe se usko pakad kar utha lia..

Bani--Victor..neeche utaaro..mujhe darr lag raha hai..please Victor...nahiii...

Bani ko ab yaad aya..Victor ne usko seene par bhi haath rakha tha..apni mazboot baahon me Bani k seene ko jakad kar rakha tha..

yaad karte karte..Bani k kaan garam ho gaye..ankhe laal ho gayi..usike ankho k saamne .. usike saath Victor itna kuchh karta raha..aur woh bewakoof..kuchh dekh nahi paai..kuchh samajh nahi paai..usne khud mauka dia hai..taa k Victor uske saath aisa kar sake..par..ab sab kuchh yaad kar k..Bani ko itna bura bhi nahi lag raha hai...Bani apne jism me abhi tak Victor ki haathon ki garmi ko mehsoos kar sakti hai..agar Victor uske saath kal shaam ko kuchh aur karta..toh sach much kya Bani Aya ko bula leti?

Bani k honth jal rahe hai..yeha par Victor kiss karne jaa raha tha..aur Bani ne rok dia tha, Bani ne apni saheli ko phone kia..Delhi..phone par sab kuchh bataya..k kyaa kia hai ek admi ne uske saath..Bani ki is saheli k ab tak 4 Boyfriends reh chuke hain..she is very experienced in these types of cases.Saheli ka naam hai Leena.

Leena ne sab kuchh bahut ghaur se suna..

Bani--ab bata..main kyaa karoon?

Leena--sach sach bata..tujhe uska yeh sab karna..bahut bura laga?

Bani--matlab?

Leena--Didn't you like it?Didn't you enjoy?

Bani--matlab..aise nahi..par...

Leena--dekh...life me har baat ka maza lena chahie..hum saari friends k Boyfriends hai.. sivaye tere..agar yeh ladka tere me interested hai..then why are you stepping back?

Bani--main kyaa karoon?

Leena--uske paas jaa..ab dekh..tere jaisi ladki k saath ghoom fir kar..koi ladka sirf teri ankho ki taraf dekhega..aur tujhse fizul ki baatein karega..agar tu aisa sochti hai..tu gadhi hai ..main bata rahi hoon tujhko..

Bani--Shut up Leena..I am not interested..

Leena--Babes..you are equally interested in ..naam..kyaa bola tune..?haan.. Victor.. Baby.. tumko bhi achha lagta hai..uska aisa karna..and isme koi paap nahi hai Bani..this is very normal..behti Ganga me har koi haath dhota hai..tujhe kis baat ka intezar hai?agar tujhe achha lagta hai..k Victor tujhe touch kare ..yaa kiss kare..then go for it honey..I am assuring you..yeh jo tere saare depressions hai na..jhat se ghayab ho jaayenge..

Bani--agar usne aur bhi kuchh kia toh?

Leena--teri marzi k bina woh kuchh nahi karega..ab tujh par depend karta hai..k tu kaha tak usko aage badhne degi..

Bani--agar usse mujhe shaadi karni pade toh?

Leena--what?paagal hai tu?arre..chaar din ki chandni hai Baby..shaadi k bare me kyon sochti hai?aisa zaroori nahi..k woh tujhse real me shaadi karega..yaa tujhse sach me pyaar karta hai....

Bani--toh?

Leena--sidhi se baat hai Darling..Basic Instinct..woh apne instincts ko tere zariye pura karna chaahta hai..tu bhi kar..agar tu bhi yehi chaahti hai toh..koi zabardasti nahi hai..jo tu chaahe ..ek akhri baar uske paas jaa..aur uske baad..tu decide kar..k aur kuchh karna chahie k nahi..

Bani--main jaaoon?

Leena--teri marzi..agar jaayegi..toh uske lia main kuchh tips zaroor de sakti hoon..

Bani--Bye...mujhe nahi jana..

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us shaam ko Jai haveli waapas aya..

par puri tarha se chidha hua tha..Bani ne bahut zor se thappad mara tha..nazook haathon ka thappad bahut karara hota hai..itne din tak Bani naatak kar rahi thi kya?jaise aaj pehli baar Jai uske saath kuchh kar raha tha..

Jai ne jaan boojh kar Bani k breast ko touch kia tha..Bani Car ka darwaza khol nahi paa rahi thi..Jai uski taraf jhoonka..aur haath badha kar Car ka darwaza kholne gaya..jaan boojh kar tab Jai ne uske breast ko touch kia..tab toh bahut achhi tarha baithi thi..as if.. bas.??!!itna hi karna tha?

Lake k kinare ghoomne aai thi..shaam ki us sardi me..Mini Skirt me..uske knees se kaafi upar skirt ki length khatam ho chuki thi..Jai ki nazre bar bar usi taraf jaa rahi thi..aur Bani bhi bar bar..kabhi right leg k upar left leg..kabhi left k upar right..is tarha apne taango ko rakh rahi thi..Jai ki haalat kharab ho gayi thi.bar bar jhoonk kar Lake k lotus ko dekh rahi thi..aur bar bar uska cleavage dikh raha tha..

Garden me baithi thi Jai k saath..bar bar Jai k feets ko apne feets se touch kar rahi thi..Jai ne mauka dekh kar..uske kamar ko chhooa..aur baad me uske hips ko..par Bani..zara bhi naraz nahi hui..is tarha invite karti hai..bar bar...Jai ka hi dosh hai sirf..?pehli baar toh Jai ne uske breast ko nahi haath lagaya tha..jis din Jai ne uska weight poochha tha..uske baad..peechhe se Jai ne usko utha lia tha..usi waqt..Jai k dono haath..Bani k breasts ko cover kar rahe the.. aur us din Jai ne zyada zor se pakda tha Bani k breasts ko,aaj toh bahut achhi tarha se pakda tha..usdin Bani ne kuchh nahi kaha..uske baad bhi..aise usse milne aai..jaise kuchh hua hi nahi hai..aur sara dosh Jai ka?!!Sisodia family is a Gang.. Criminal Gang..aise bata rahi thi Bani usko..khud ko samajhti kyaa hai?

par parso shaam tak ka waqt dia hai Jai ne usko..kya woh aayegi?agar nahi aai toh?tab Jai kyaa karega?aur agar aa gayi toh Jai kyaa karega?

yeh sab sochte sochte..Jai so gaya..

subha jab neend se jaga..usne Bani k ghar phone kia..suna uski tabiyat kharab hai...zaroor Bani ne uski Aya ko bol kar rakha hoga..k agar koi Haveli se phone kare..toh yehi keh dena..

pura din Jai ukhda ukhda sa raha..

shaam ko apne kamre me baitha tha..ek Novel padh raha tha..achanak phone ki awaz..

Jai ne phone uthaya..

Jai-hello..

koi awaz nahi..

Jai--hello..kaun hai?

koi jawab nahi..

Jai--arre..baat nahi karni toh phone kyon kia...?

abhi bhi koi jawab nahi...

achanak Jai ko aisa laga..k..Bani hai...

Jai--kaun?Bani?

bas..phone kat gaya..

Jyotijee aai Jai k kamre me..

Jai--Good Evening..baithiye..

Jyoti--aaj Bani k saath koi program nahi tha?

Jai--nahi..mera mood nahi hai baahar jaane ka..

Jyoti--ek baat karni thi..

Jai--Jee..kahiye..

Jyoti--Bani..kaisi lagti hai tumko?

Jai--achhi hai...

Jyoti--achhi matlab...kis tarha se?

Jai--matlab?

Jyoti--agar uske saath shaadi karni pade..toh karoge?

Jai--maine is tarha socha nahi Mom..aur..she is too young..to get married..uske baare me aap aisa mat boliye..

Jyoti--toh...Bani tumko pasand nahi?

Jai--maine aisa nahi kaha..par..abhi chhoti hai..I mean..woh jawaan ho jaaye..

Jyoti--ohh..aur tumhare bare me Bani kyaa sochti hai..tum jaante ho?

Jai--nahi...

Jyoti--pata kar k batao...

Jai--Jee..

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agle din subha..Jai bahut der se neend se jaagaa..

aaj shaam 4 baje..Bani se milna hai..matlab Bani ka intezar karna hai..aane k chance bahut kum hai..naa k barabar..fir bhi naa jane kyon..dil me ek ummeed kaayam hai abhi tak..k Bani aayegi..zaroor aayegi...

andar se kisine kaha.."Jai..Beta..you were being very much physical with Bani.You deserved what you got.Tu chaahta kyaa hai saale?Insaan hai k kuchh aur?Mulakat hue ek maheena nahi hua..aur usko jidhar chaahe haath laga raha hai?!!Sharam kar kameene.. sharam kar. Tera kameenapan usidin baahar aa gaya tha..jis Dhabewale ko tune dhoya tha..jab usne Bani ko teri Bahen kaha tha..tu hai kyaa Jai?Pahle din se..uska faida utha raha hai!!She is a school girl Jai..10th ka exam dene wali hai..aur tujhe yeh sab soojh rahi hai??Jai...don't be so sick. Tu jo kar raha hai na..that is a case of Woman Abusing...rather Child Abusing.. samajh raha hai na?"

Jai chidh gaya..."What do you mean?bar bar Bachchi kahne se bachchi nahi ban jaayegi woh..kal jo mehsoos kia maine..Bloody hell..she is not a kid..Cigarette peeti hai..kyaa pata ..sab se chhoop kar drink bhi karti hogi..and she is a kid..!!Wow.."

"uska personal matter hai..Jai ..you are trespassing...this is not right..Jai,tu jo kar raha hai.. aur kyaa pata ..kal ko uski zindagi me koi aisa aaye..jo usike age group ka ho..tu jo kar raha hai ..that is forced...ho sakta hai..tere zid k aage woh haar maan le..par..kal ko kisi aise se agar woh mili..jisse usko apne aap hi pyaar ho..aur teri wajah se woh usko paa naa sake..tab kyaa karega??"

"aisa kabhi nahi hoga.."

"agar aisa hua toh?bardasht kar paayega woh pal..jab Bani tere saath toh hogi..par uska mann kisi aur k paas hoga..tu Bani k saath hokar bhi nahi hoga..kyon ki uske dil me koi aur rahega.."

"ghadi ghadi dhamki mat de..kisi aur k naam ka..Bani ki zindagi me koi nahi hai.."

"ab tak nahi hai..kal ko koi aya to?"

"arre..us anjaane insaan k lia main kyon daroon..jiska ata pata nahi...jo aayega hi..is baat ki bhi surity nahi hai..dekh yaar tu mujhe dicourage mat kar.."

"Bani..tujhse 10 saal chhoti hai.."

"nahi..9 saal..main 24 ka hoon..woh 15 ki...chalta hai yaar.."

"nahi chalta.."

"haa..main usse pyaar karta hoon..zindagi k saari khushian de sakta hoon..aur sirf aur sirf isi lia main uske laayak nahi..kyonki main usse 9 saal bada hoon..aur koi lookkha type ka ladka ..uske laayak hai..kyon ki woh uski umar ka hai?!!!This is so illogical..!!"

"tujhe kaise pata..Bani kisi lookkhe k chakkar me padegi,...haa..pad sakti hai..tere chakkar me jo padi hai..zaahir si baat hai..uska test bahut achha nahi hai.."

"kehna kyaa chaahta hai?main lookkha hoon?"

"teri harkatein isi taraf ishara kar rahi hain.."

aise me naukar aya.."Kunwarjee..aapko baahar bula rahe hain..."

Jai baahar aya...

Jyotijee aur Mr. Sisodia baithe the...saath me Bhagatjee bhi the.

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theek 4 baje..Bani pahoochi.Purani haveli me..usko bhi pata nahi tha k woh kyon gayi...par khud ko bhi jaane se rok nahi paai,aisi koi baat toh thi,jo usko khinch kar le gayi,usko kuchh aur bhi malum karna tha Victor k baare me..par woh baat kyaa thi ..Bani khud bhi nahi jaanti thi.Par usko jaanna tha...

ab toh Bani ko bhi yeh lagne laga hai..k yeh rishta..sirf dosti ka nahi hai..nahi ho sakta... yeh rishta kuchh aur hi hai..yaa fir kuchh aur ban sakta hai..aur woh kuchh aur kyaa hai.. yehi pata karna hai..usko yeh jaanna hai..k asal me Victor chaahta kyaa hai..Dil toh keh raha hai.. k is rishte ko ek naya roop dia jaaye..par ..bharosa nahi hota..naa Victor par..aur naa hi khud par.

par Victor nahi aya abhi tak...Bani ne socha kuchh der intezar karna chahie..wrist watch me dekha..4:45 ho gaye hain..abhi tak Victor nahi aya..

Bani ko laga tha..usko sukoon milega..k Victor nahi aya..par..aisa nahi hua..Bani ko achha nahi laga..k Victor nahi aya..pahle woh thodi niraash hui..aur fir dheere dheere gussa jama hone laga uske mann me..

Victor k bolne aur karne me..jo fark dikha..Bani se bardasht nahi hua..Victor aise kaise kar sakta hai??!!

5 baje Bani waha se chali aai..

ghar aakar..sidhe apne kamre me gayi..aur darwaza bandh kar k..bistar me let kar rone lagi.. buri tarha se rone lagi...usko khud par gussa aane laga..kaash usne Victor ko thappad nahi mara hota..toh Victor is tarha wada kar k..mukarta nahi..

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Edited by yakkudimag - 16 years ago

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tam2

@tam2

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#120

Hi ... that was wonderful ... I just loved the way you wrote Bani and Jai's perspective on the things that has occurred between them ... very nice indeed... Actually I really like ur writing... it's really very good.... I thought Bani will not show up for the meeting that was fixed by Jai... but it was totally unexpected that Jai never came to see her when he was so eager to meet her and form a relationship with her .... very strange ... and I want to know his reason ... so plzzzzzzzzzzz update soon .... 👏....

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