FF:DOBARA ,PART 22,PAGE 33,22/09/09

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visma

@kuttu

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#121

This story seems to gt interesting even more. A person who was so keen to know about what she feels doesn't trun up. Something sure is fishy over here. Is it that the family goes in straight for marriage or something like that.

Loved the way you have potrayed Jai's and Bani's conflicting emotions. So Bani was ready to accept Jai then where did everything start going wrong.

Waiting to know

Bye

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ANANYA ROY

@yakkudimag

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: tam2
Hi ... that was wonderful ... I just loved the way you wrote Bani and Jai's perspective on the things that has occurred between them ... very nice indeed... Actually I really like ur writing... it's really very good.... I thought Bani will not show up for the meeting that was fixed by Jai... but it was totally unexpected that Jai never came to see her when he was so eager to meet her and form a relationship with her .... very strange ... and I want to know his reason ... so plzzzzzzzzzzz update soon .... 👏....

first of all..thanks a lot for reading my fic..

Bani and Jai..they met long time ego..the concept of their relation changed by the time..in this story..expect the unexpected..😉

just keep reading..you will get to know..

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ANANYA ROY

@yakkudimag

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: kuttu
Hi

This story seems to gt interesting even more. A person who was so keen to know about what she feels doesn't trun up. Something sure is fishy over here. Is it that the family goes in straight for marriage or something like that.

Loved the way you have potrayed Jai's and Bani's conflicting emotions. So Bani was ready to accept Jai then where did everything start going wrong.

Waiting to know

Bye

Thanks for your precious comment.

Yes..there is some mystery..Jai was so keen to meet Bani..but..

I have sketched the character of Jai and Bani as per the story..

and keep reading and keep loving my fic..

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jeenal

@jeenal20

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#124

hey bhagwan

god jai itna kuch kar raha tha bani ke saath and usko kuch pata hi nahi chala raha tha

and wat kind of freinds bani has

wow and bani went to meet jai but jai didnt turn up thats surprising

plzz cont soon

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ANANYA ROY

@yakkudimag

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: jeenal20
hey bhagwan
god jai itna kuch kar raha tha bani ke saath and usko kuch pata hi nahi chala raha tha

and wat kind of freinds bani has

wow and bani went to meet jai but jai didnt turn up thats surprising

plzz cont soon

Bani k dost ..pahle darje k chaloo..aur Bani..woh sab se badi.. ITEM ..😉

aur usko bhi kum interest nahi hai..Jai k baare me..😳

aur sara kia dhara Bani aur Jai ka hai..tum Bhagwan ko kyon bula rahi ho??😆

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ANANYA ROY

@yakkudimag

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#126

I couldn't update as I was very busy for Durga Puja..sorry..now I will give regular updates..I promise..😕

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jeenal

@jeenal20

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: yakkudimag
I couldn't update as I was very busy for Durga Puja..sorry..now I will give regular updates..I promise..😕

itss okk dear

no need to feel sorry

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ANANYA ROY

@yakkudimag

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#128

PART 11

GET WELL SOON

26/06/2007

Roshni--Bani...you have improved a lot..all because of Jai...

Bas..Roshni shuru ho gayi..din me do baar Roshni Jai ka gungaan kar k jaati hai..Abhi bhi Roshni bolti chali jaa rahi hai...aur Bani uski baat ko ek kaan se le kar doosre kaan se andar kar rahi hai..Roshni sach me Jai ki bahut taarif kar rahi hai..

Bani--Dr. Roshni..aap chup hone ka kyaa lengi?

Roshni--What happaned?

Bani--Mera sar..

Roshni--kyaa??

"Bani k sar me bahut dard hai..hai na Bani??"..yeh kahte hue Jai andar aaya..

Roshni--Hey..Jai...yaar..tabiyat meri bhi kharab hoti hai..par Jit kabhi is tarha mera take care nahi karta...

Jai--arre..tum khud Doctor ho..isi lia..ab meri gharwali hai Vakil..uska toh take care mujhe hi karna hoga na..hai naa Bani..?

Roshni aur Bani ,dono samajh gaye ..k Jai aaj irada kar k aaya hai Bani ko chhedne ka..

Roshni jaane waali thi...Bani ne uska haath pakad kar waapas bitha dia..Jai ne dekha,Bani uske saath akele rehna nai chaahti ..yeh bhi samajh gaya woh..

Jai--Bani..don't worry..main aaj tumko smootch nahi karoonga..Roshni ko jaane do..usko hospital k round me jana hai..

Roshni--Jai..you are impossible...main samajh rahi hoon..Bye..take care Bani...

Bani--Yaa..see you later..

Jai aa kar Bani k paas baitha...

Bani--kyon aate ho yeha?

Jai--apni gharwali se milne..

Bani--Stop calling me gharwali...gawaaron ki tarha baat mat karo...

Jai--OK...apni lugai se milne aaya hoon...

Bani--Shut up...

Jai--Achha..apni aurat se milne aaya hoon..aaaaaaaa..Bani..chhodo..nahi.....

Bani ne Jai ka gala pakad lia tha...

Jai--AAAAAA... CHHOODOO.....

Bani--nahi...mujhe irritate karna bandh karo..aur jaao yeha se..

Jai--OK..main aur nahi chhedoonga tumko...

Bani--Good...ab chup chaap jaao yeha se...

Jai--I think..tumse chhedkhaani karna zyada interesting option hai..mere lia..

Bani--Ohh..no...

Jai--tumse ek baat poochhna chaahta tha..

Bani--kyaa?

Jai--yeh Bani Bhagat toh samajh me aati hai...par Bani Ferdaus Bhagat ka kyaa mamla hai?

Bani--What do you think?

Jai--I don't know..but want to know..

Bani--main batana zaroori nahi samajhti...

Jai--I have every right to know Bani..batao..London me tumne doosri shaadi ki thi...?

Bani--Doosri shaadi..?Meri pehli shaadi kisse hui?kyaa bak rahe ho..?

Jai--OK..tell me the truth..yeh Ferdaus kaun hai..I mean kaun tha?

Bani--tumko kyaa karna hai jaan kar?

Jai--Ferdaus se tumko bahut pyaar tha..?

Bani--abhi bhi hai...

Jai--Well..main zara confused hoon..wajah tum hi ho..meri tasveer apne locket me rakhti ho..aur Ferdaus se pyaar hai tumko..and ..sochne ki baat jo hai..k shaadi k baad..Maid surname pahle..fir Husband ka surname ata hai..Ferdaus se tumne shaadi ki..toh ..I mean Legal marriage..toh tumhara naam hona tha..Bani Bhagat Ferdaus..............par case toh ulta hai..

Bani--sab kuchh ulta hi tha..main uska hath maangne gayi thi..ghodi chadh kar main gayi thi..baaraat le kar..isi lia..you know ..what I mean..

Jai--main tumko chhedne aaya tha..ab tum ulta mujhe ..khair..aaj kaisa lag raha hai...?

Bani--roz ki tarha..naya kuchh nahi..tum bore mat karo...

Jai--arre..meri har baat tumko bore karti hai kya?

Bani--Haa...

Jai--suno..bahut jald tumko yeha se chhutti mil jaayegi..uske baad ghar chalenge..

Bani--Haa..mere apartment ki haalat bigad gayi hogi itne dino me..

Jai--nahi...actually..waha se tumhari cheesen..har saamaan maine shift karva dia hai..

Bani--KIDHAR??

Jai--humare ghar me..

Bani--WHATTT???NAHI ..MUJHE JANA HAI WAHA...

Jai--impossible..waha k log tum ghoosne nahi denge..

Bani--KYAA MATLAB??

Jai--maine woh flat ..kiraaye par de dia hai...2 saal k contract par...

Bani--OHHH...I WILL KILL YOU..

Jai--kuchh bhi..rehna tumko mere hi saath hai..

Bani--haa...jaise shaher k sare hotels ko bomb se kisi ne udha dia hai..khwaab dekhte rehna ...main..aur tumhare sath..carry on..

Jai--main zara baahar se aata hoon..Roshni se kuchh baat karni hai..abhi aaya main...

Jai ko baahar gaye kuchh hi minutes hue hain..aise me ward boy ek guldasta laya..kaafi bada guldasta hai..Bani ne dekha..usme ek card rakha hai...

likha hai..

GET WELL SOON,MY LOVE..

Arvind Raina..

yeh dekh kar..Bani k hosh hi udh gaye...Arvind Raina..!!!Yeh yehaan tak bhi pahooch gaya Ohh no...!!Iska matlab Arvind Raina ki nazar Bani k har harkat par hai..Bani hospital me hai..yeh baat bhi jaanta hai..Bani tak bahut aasaani se pahooch sakta hai..ab Bani kyaa karegi?Arvind Raina is a dangerous man..zindagi barbad kar dega ..mumkin hai..k Bani k ghar ka pata bhi Arvind ko malum ho..aur..nahiiiiiiiiiiii..aisa nahi ho sakta...Bani..aage kuaan ..peechhe khaai..ek taraf Sisodia ..ek taraf Raina...oo baap re...ab kyaa hoga??

Arre..Bani..Bhagwan ne tera pura bandobast kar dia hai..tu gayi kaam se..Bhagwan ko aur koi kaam nahi hai shaayad khaa pee ke..jab bhi Bani ki zindagi zara stable hoti hai.. haath dho kar usike peechhe pad jaate hain..yaar..duniya k saare terrorists mar gaye hain kya? Yaa fir George Bush Gandhijee ko follow kar raha hai..?India k saare Ministers ne ghoos khana bandh kar dia hai?Mahengaai khatam ho gayi hai?Unemployment khatam ho chuki hai??Nahi..toh fir in sab problems ko solve karo na...Bani k peechhe hi kyon pade hain Bhagwanjee?Aap k tabele se kaun si bhains khol di hai Bani ne??

Aisi hi ulti sidhi baatein Bani soch rahi hai...aise me..."Hello...Hellllloooo..Bani..arre...kyaa hua?"..yeh baat kaano tak pahoochi..

Bani ne dekha Jai khada hai...Bani khamosh rahi..

Jai--Kyaa hua?achanak se Baba Baninanda kyon ban gayi?Maunvrat dhaaran kar lia tumne.

Bani--kuchh nahi...aaj ek cigarette milega..??please...

Jai--Ohh..isi lia mood itna kharab hai...par nahi..jaan boojh kar tumhare lungs main kharab nahi kar sakta..kuchh aur maango..aahh haan..yeh guldasta..very nice..kisne bheja..?

Bani--Arvind Raina ne bheja hai..

Jai--yeh kaun..?

Bani--London me rehta hai..NRI Businessman hai..haath dho kar mere peechhe pada tha.. aur main India bhaag aai..ab yehaan bhi mujhe chain nahi hai..

Jai--hmm..yeh Arvind Raina agar tumse milne aaye..toh mujhse zaroor milana tum...

Bani--KYAAAAAAAA??

Jai--arre..uska shukriya ada karna hai...

Bani--KYOOONNNN??

Jai--arre..naa woh tumhare peeche padta..naa tum London se bhaagti..aur tum India aati.. agar yeh sab nahi hota..toh dobara tum mujhse kaise milti...?

Bani--tum paagal ho?

Jai--nahi..main ehsaanmand hoon..Mr. Raina ka..

Bani--maine jo bola..cigarette..doge..?

Jai--nahi..

Bani--bade kameene type k ho...bhool gaye..??jab tum mujhse maangte the..main bina sawal kie..apne cigarettes me se tumko deti thi..aur aaj..main ek cigarette maang rahi hoon..aur tum..chhee..!!

Jai Bani ki taraf dekhne laga...kuchh der baad Jai ne kaha,"main kuchh nahi bhoola..tum bhool gayi mujhe..varna itni berahem ban kar tum mujhse..is tarha door nahi jaati.."

Bani--OK..fine..cigarette nahi dena..mat do..itna lamba bhaashan nahi sunna mujhe...

Jai--OK..I am sorry...mujhe is tarha nahi bolna chahie tha..par agar tum bologi nahi..k actually kyaa hua tha..mujhe kaise pata chalega?

Bani--Mujhe aur koi baat nahi karni...

"bilkul..yaar..hum log bolne ka paisa lete hain..hai na BFB?Bani khud..ek ghante k consult ka Rs.30000/- charge karti hai..Jai..fees de uski...Vakilon se free me baat karvaayega kya?"

..yeh kahte hue Aparajit Dev andar aaya...

Bani--Hello..AD..kyaa haal hai..baahar ka mausam kaisa hai..??

Aparajit--kal main club me baith kar cards khel raha hai..Advocate Mehta ne achanak Shilpa Shetty wale case ka zikar kia..

Jai--Richard Gere wala case..?

Aparajit--Jai..tu bahut khabar rakhta hai aise cases ki?

Jai--News me aaya tha yaar..

Bani--Mehta Saab kyaa bol rahe the..?

Aparajit--woh Shilpa k against hi kah rahe the...k..publically..aur ek Social Awareness Function me yeh sab...par..maine samjhaya..k jo hua..sab ne dekha..achanak se Richard Gere..Shilpa par toot pada...Shilpa khud bhi chauk gayi thi..kyon bechari aurat ko pareshaan kar rahe hain sab?

Bani--Ladkion par humesha sab ilzaam lagaate hain....Richard Gere ka kuchh bigaad nahi paayenge..

Jai--AIDS awareness function me aakar koi kissam kissi karega..toh aisa hona hi hai...

Aparajit--haa...Bani...he has a point..Social Cause ..

Bani--ha..Social Message hi tha na..Richard aur Shilpa k Kiss me..

Jai aur Aparajit dono chauk gaye.."KYAAAAAAAAAA..??"..dono ne aise hi react kia..

Bani--naatak mat karo..

Aparajit--nahi..bolo..kyaa social mesage tha?

Bani--yehi ..k khullam khulla..public function me kissam kissi karne se AIDS nahi hota..is baat ko saabit kar dia,...dono ne..uske baad,Richard yaa Shilpa..kisiko AIDS hua?nahi ..simple..as simple as that...yehi message tha..khullam khulla kiss karo..AIDS nahi hoga...

Aparajit hansne laga..zor zor se..Jai hakka bakka reh gaya..Bani..aur uska itna bhayankar logic sun kar..

Roshni andar aai..yeh kahte hue,"kis baat par hans rahe ho Jit?"

Aparajit ne Roshni ko kiss kia..

Roshni--yeh kis khushi me..??

Aparajit--isse AIDS nahi hota..is khushi me...

Roshni--WHATTT??

Aparajit--Bani se poochh lo...usika logic hai..

Roshni bhi hanse lagi...

Jai--Bani..AIDS toh nahi hota..main kiss karoon tumhe?

Bani--nahi..main abhi bathroom nahi jaa sakti..

Jai--matlab?

Bani--agar tum mujhe kiss karoge..toh Dettol se apna muh saaf karna hoga..isi lia..bol rahi hoon...

Aparajit aur Roshni dono hansne lage...

Jai--OK..ghar chalo..Dettol ka family pack kharid k rakhoonga..

Roshni--Jai..ab bas karo..Duty Hours par..itni zor se main hans rahi hoon..mere naam par report jaayegi...

Jai--I am sorry..par yeh itni jali kati baatein karti hai..dimaag jal jata hai..

Bani--mere dimaag ka dahi bana kar..ab mujh par yeh ilzaam..achha hai..lage raho..

Aparajit--Munnabhai mat bolna...

Bani--kyaa?

Aparajit--Arre..Mausijee Jai ko Munna bulati hain..Jai ka nick name hai Munna..aur Bhai toh tum bula nahi sakti..

Roshni--tum chalo..Jit..chalo yeha se..challooo...

Roshni Aparajit ko waha se pakad kar le gayi..

Jai hansne laga...Bani gusse me laal peeli hone lagi...

Edited by yakkudimag - 16 years ago

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swati

@swatinarang

Sparkler

Posted: 16 years ago

#129

great part, aab mr. rana bhi aa gaye,

yaar jaldi batao who is firdaus?

do continue soon

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jeenal

@jeenal20

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#130

gr88 part

i was laughing like crazy

bani and her sense of humor

somewat similar to me

loved this paagraph about bani cursing to god

'Arre..Bani..Bhagwan ne tera pura bandobast kar dia hai..tu gayi kaam se..Bhagwan ko aur koi kaam nahi hai shaayad khaa pee ke..jab bhi Bani ki zindagi zara stable hoti hai.. haath dho kar usike peechhe pad jaate hain..yaar..duniya k saare terrorists mar gaye hain kya? Yaa fir George BushGandhijee ko follow kar raha hai..?India k saare Ministers ne ghoos khana bandh kar dia hai?Mahengaai khatam ho gayi hai?Unemployment khatam ho chuki hai??Nahi..toh fir in sab problems ko solve karo na...Bani k peechhe hi kyon pade hain Bhagwanjee?Aap k tabele se kaun si bhains khol di hai Bani ne??'

and whose this riana

Edited by jeenal20 - 16 years ago

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