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@xxainy

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Posted: 17 years ago

#11

nice start love ur writing style
look like Bani found her dad
can't wait to read more about this
cont. soon.....

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jeenal

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Posted: 17 years ago

#12

gr88 start ranjana

plz cont soon

loved it

is nishikant banis father

wow jai is really falling for bani

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mujer

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Posted: 17 years ago

#13

Hey Ranjana, Good story. Reminds me of good old fashioned love with a twist ofcourse. But I do not want a short story , I feel, truly my feelings, that a SS will not be able to do justice to the subjects and its characters especially with your writing skills I totally expect a full fledged FF. I really like the little things that you point out in your stories so please if you can make it into FF

Update jaldi karo yeh bhi aur Nasha bhi.

P.S: And Oh!! McDreamy he is a dish.😉

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johnangad

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Posted: 17 years ago

#14

intriguing start- bani left just like that? awwwwwwww😭

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pptm469

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Posted: 17 years ago

#15

Nice story. please continue soon

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Binish

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Posted: 17 years ago

#16

ok hun.. soo im guessing nishikant omprakash dixit is banis father.. OK.. so here we gooo dear.. lol.. great part.. grat start.. and an SS is lovely ranju.. anywyayz conitnue osoon yaaar.. and plzzz update NASHA already.. im like this girls gonna update now but u never do.. hehe

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Nazneen

@chickster

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Posted: 17 years ago

#17

Ranjana,

I am a fan of Grey's Anatomy too (I prefer McSteamy though😳) - I guess your goinhg with the track that Nishikant abandoned Bani as a young child and has a whole new family.

Jai is already smitten and in love - I wonder how Bani will respond???

Can't wait to read the next part!

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Abhilasha Sharma

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Posted: 17 years ago

#18

so pia and bani are step sisters? i guess so...

nice start renu.... but why cant jai propose her soon... what is he waiting for?

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Saba

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Posted: 17 years ago

#19

hey

awesom part

why is bani called maya?

so is pia bani's sis?

continue soon

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tam2

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Posted: 17 years ago

#20

Hi Ranjana ... oh so this is the FF you were talking about .... well thanks for posting it ... nice start ... so Jai Walia is already fida over Maya/Bani ... 😳 ... well he needs to woo her back somehow ... lol ... what is this about Maya ... 🤔 ... I guess some raaz is behind it ... well do cont soon ... 😃 ...

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