SS: Waiting for you-end-part 10/epi page 28 26-09 - Page 23

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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey Ranjana,
just caught with the updates,simply amazing. from Jai's love to Bani's eagerness to tell him that she loves him.each and every emotion was etched out soo beautiful.loved every bit of it.the ending was beautiful, even though I didnt want ND any where near bani, seriously that man makes my blood boil.Jai's love for bani really shines in this amazing story.truly enjoyed every bit of it.you are fabalous writer,hope to read more amazing stories from you.
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Posted: 17 years ago
superb epilogue- i suppose bani cud only hv such a relationship wid her father, he can never make up for the tym they lost. jai is adorable!
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Posted: 17 years ago
awwwwwwwwwwwnnnnnnnnn.. ranju dear that was fabulous.. great ending.. i hope another FF is on its way from u though.. lol..
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Posted: 17 years ago

hey Renudi

wonderful story 👏
read in one go
thanks to Khushbooappu who recommanded me to read this SS
will be waiting for your next story
take care
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Posted: 17 years ago
I am glad that there is a kind of waiting where her father is concerned........

a ahppier ending would have spoiled it for me but ever the great writer, you know how to do it to it huh?

great writing as always Ranjana, I think you could only type Ts and I would still write and say it was the best update ever.
Really great read and hope to see another one soon!!!

Cheers!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
👏....btw this is a standing ovation😉
This is a lovely story..........i just read it all in one go😛..........and loved every minute of it😊...........
and to tell you the truth i actually had tears in my eyes at some pts. of the SS and laughed at a couple scenes.......it had everything I'd want to see in a film.......
although i would hve to say that the accident sounded greusome...and i'm into this gory stuff but couldn't even imagine the accident
I'm also very happy that Mr and Mrs Dixit weren't a pt of the wedding..meaning giving the bride away rasam and am glad that Jigs and Aditya were👍🏼....i truly loved Jigs character in your SS, she's a very strong woman😃
😆...also i'd like to add that Pushkar and Pia's wedding decorations also suited their character.....well at least Pia😆
now JB...........wow......the love showed b/w them is "lakhon mein ek"😉.........on a side note.....i can kind of relate w/ B in a different situation because these days i see so many marriages ending in divorces that i'm double minded...to get married or not....(although i don't really hve a groom...but am thinkin about the future😆)
of course JB won't be where they are w/out J's family's support especially Jigs who technically initiated it all...........and oh😲...i forgot....she brought them together unconciosly after so many yrs.....
lovely story.........am "waiting for you"😉😆 to start another SS/FF😛
~Noor
P.S. once again i got a lil carried away w/ my comments.....😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
loving ending ,, i really loved ur ff

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