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Posted: 17 years ago
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Chapter 4:

The next morning, while Jai was bathing Masi entered his room. As she entered, she heard his phone ringing before could answer, it stopped ringing. While she kept the phone back in its original place she saw a glimpse of a picture, she was curious. She checked and saw that it was Bani's picture but she didn't say anything. She kept it back as she heard Jai coming out of the bathroom then she went out of the room so that Jai doesn't know that she was there. A few moments later, she came in as though she just entered. "Good morning, Munna," said Masi cheerfully. "Good morning, Masi. What's the matter? So early in the morning here in my room," said Jai. "Nothing Munna. I just came to call you down for breakfast. By the way, what time do you plan to pack? I can help you because you can't pack very well," said Masi. "Thanks Masi. I think I will be packing tonight because after breakfast Aditya, Ranveer, and I will be going to the office for a meeting with the staff. After lunch, we will be discussing on a certain project in the study so I will be free on after dinner. Is that ok with you Masi?" said Jai. "No problem Munna. I will definitely help you pack tonight," said Masi.

With that, Jai and Masi came down and joined the others for breakfast. During breakfast, Jai asked Bani how are her side of preparations going on and whether she wants to follow him to the office to take anything. She politely replied that she doesn't want anything from the office. After breakfast, Jai, Aditya and Ranveer went to office for the meeting. They came back just in time for lunch and right after lunch they went to the study to discuss about what they will be doing during his absence. After that, they had their dinner and called it a night as Jai still had to pack. As promised Masi help Jai to pack his clothes and other necessary items. By the time they finished packing it was already midnight. After wishing his Masi good night, he straight went to bed as he was very tired. The next morning, by the time he woke up was already 10 am. He got ready and came down; Masi prepared some light breakfast for him. After that he went to the study because Aditya and Ranveer had some doubts regarding their work. Then all of them had their lunch together. After lunch Jai spent some time with the family as he will be going for one month. He saw that Masi was a bit sad but he assured her that he will be back soon and will take good care of Bani. They had their dinner early together with Bani, Pia and Rano. After dinner Jai and Bani went to take their things, before leaving Jai did a last minute check up and by the time he came down Aditya and Bani were waiting for him by the car together with Masi and Dadi. Bani took blessing from Masi and Dadi, Jai also did the same. Aditya then drove the both of them to the airport. At the airport before leaving Bani took blessing from Aditya and requested him to keep an eye on her sisters. He agreed to it and he hugged Jai. Later they checked in and their flight was also announced. They went and took their respective place, Bani was sitting by the window while Jai was next to her. Jai saw that Bani was a bit nervous therefore he assured her that everything will be fine. When the flight was taking off, she held Jai's hand tightly and buried her face in his chest. When Bani did that, he had an unknown feeling which he had never experienced before with anyone. After a while, he saw that she was a bit relaxed. When he checked, he saw that she was fast asleep with her head on his chest and was holding his hand tight. After a while he also slept with his head on hers.

Hope you all liked it. Please give me some feedback on how it was, good or bad. Thank you. 😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
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So maasi knows about Jai liking Bani. Great. But why didn't she say anything. Is she hoping that thing go further in next month when both of them are together.😉😉. I bet she likes Bani better than that Pia.

Bani with her face buried in Jai's chest. god itmust be torture to jai. Jai ko definately KuchKuchhota hai. How about bani?
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wonderful part pls cont soon.....
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Posted: 17 years ago
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gr88 part
plz cont soon
good that masi knows that jai also has some feelings for bani
and as for the title gose
i can suggest 1 name
it is " kashmakash"
this title becoz jai is in a delimia about his feelings
that is is he doing the right thing by marring ia or he should listen to his heart and marry bani
Edited by jeenal20 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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That was a great part!
As for a name for the FF how about Kya Dil mein Hai?
By the way, does Bani have the same feelings as Jai???
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hi Jeevika ....
Just caught up with your FF ... must say the storyline is very nice ... liked the way you've potrayed Jai's character and his confusions ... I liked the name suggested by Jeenal 'Kashmakash' ... and 'Kya dil mein hai' is also good... so you can take ur pick ... anyways looking forward to next part ... do cont soon ... 😃 ...
Edited by tam2 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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stars_shine*, suwas, amiee, jeenal20, chickster, tam2, and Rainbow29
Thanks for all you wonderful comments. I really appreciate them. I will posting the next part soon.
Edited by jeevikagurl88 - 17 years ago
jeevikagurl88 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Chapter 5:

?Good evening ladies and gentlemen. This is your captain speaking; I hope you had a pleasant flight. I hope you would enjoy your stay here,? said the captain. The sound of the announcement woke them up. It was an 8 hour flight (assumption) so when they reach there it was still Sunday evening. After checking and taking their luggage, Jai like a true gentleman was pushing the troli of bags while Bani was holding their passports. At the entrance the driver was already waiting for them.

After putting the bags in the boot, they sat in the car and went to Jai?s house. On the way, Bani was excited as this place was new to her so Jai told to her what the name of the place is. By the time they reached Jai?s place it was already 7 pm. They kept their bags and freshen up and came down for a simple dinner. As they were tired due to their traveling on the plane, they bid each other good night and went to sleep. The next morning, Jai woke up due to the nice aroma that filled his nostrils. By the time he got ready and came down he was very hungry. When he came to the dining hall, he saw that his favorite food was there, aloo paratha, and he was shocked. Aloo paratha and that also in London, he thought he must be dreaming so he pinched himself and saw that it was real. He thought how come his London butler can cook this. Then he heard the sound of the bell and someone singing the aarthi. He followed the voice and it brought him directly to Bani?s room. There he saw her praying and the way Bani was praying reminded him of how his mother used to pray. She would also be doing the same things as Bani would be doing. When he saw Bani praying there, he felt like he was seeing an angel because she looked so pure and innocent. He kept looking at her that he didn?t realize that she had already stopped singing.

Bani was shocked when she turned around after finishing her prayers and saw that Jai was standing there. She didn?t realize when he came there or how long he had been standing there. Bani then took the aarthi thali and went to him and said, ?Good morning, Mr. Walia. I?m sorry if I have disturbed your sleep.? ?Good morning, Bani. No you didn?t disturb my sleep,? said Jai. ?Come lets go and have breakfast, I?m feeling very hungry,? added Jai. He and Bani then made their way towards the dining table where their breakfast awaits them. ?Alfred,? Jai called out his London butler and asked him to serve them breakfast. While serving, Jai said, ?I must say Alfred your cooking skills have improved tremendously.? ?Thank you, Sir but I didn?t cook this,? said Alfred. ?Then who cooked all this,? he wondered aloud. ?Sir, Bani ma?am was the one who cooked all this,? said Alfred. ?I?m sorry Mr. Walia but I?m not used to this kind of food so I decided to cook on my own, I hope you don?t mind,? said Bani quickly. ?No Bani actually I want to thank you for doing all this and I certainly don?t mind if you cook everyday,? Jai said. Bani blushed and said, ?Mr. Walia I don?t know whether you like it or not. Please taste and tell me because I never cooked for anyone else except for my sister, Masi and Dadi.? When he tasted the food he was very quiet and this made Bani very nervous, ?How is it, Mr. Walia? Is it that bad,? she said finally. ?It is very good. It tastes almost like how my mother used to cook. Although Masi cooks well also, still it is not as good as how my mother used to cook. Masi always told me that you cooked very well but this is the first time I?m tasting it,? when he said this Bani blushed and he told her to eat her food as well.

Hope you all enjoyed it. Please give me some feedback, good or bad. Thank you.
Edited by jeevikagurl88 - 17 years ago
jeenal20 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#29
gr88 part
loved it
that was a sweet update
plz cont soon
MrsKhan-Sobti thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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very sweet update...
tension mat lo jai...shaadi ke baad bani roj khana bana legi..😉
bas propose kar lo jeldi...
sab theek ho jaayega..😊
plzs continue soon..

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