Davia's FF: Krishna part 52 + note Pg 70 - Page 2

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Interesting start davs. 👏 Bani's had triplets after she left WM after the incident. ]Jai truelly was a 🤬 for forcing himself on Bani like that.

Kids sound really cute. Sharaarti bacche hai.😛 So Krishna is gonna meet her daddy dearest in the next part😃 Nainital visit will be interesting

Cont soon

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Posted: 17 years ago
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great start....
jai was sooo😡....poor bani😭
plzz cont.soon...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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great start Davia......I'm so angry with Jai now 😡.......but after 3 years I'm sure he has changed......please continue......looking forward to the next part......thanks Tam for posting......
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Nice Story. Cant wait for the meeting of Jai and his children. Update soon.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hi Davia oh I hate Jai in this ff (nothin new) means how could he.Loved the starting.Hope ull cont DMG.cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thank You Guys for all your wonderful comments .... 😃 .... will be posting the next part soon... 😃... Thanks.....
Edited by tam2 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Davia's Message:
I was happy knowing that i got good comment hope it continue..thanks for the comment for all who commented...
rem jitni comemnt and in good lenth atleast 2-3 (that is fair enough) .ye f kisi ka fav hua ta and whow anted em to start lekin ab usne shayd bhool gayi.. aur coment nahi kii is baad ka duk to rahega... hamesaa..
kher hoope u peopel continue enjoying reading it.. sab gusse hain jai see.. i know .relax... age abhtu kuch hoga....
only I can says krishna krishna.. krishna.

Part 2....


Jai flight land there in the airport and he steps out of the flight and she also steps out of the taxi.. and make each kid get down.. and holds them and pays the taxi walia and goes to buy tickets..to get inside airport jai comes out and get inside the airport to collect his luggage.. and suddenly the kids says mamma muje bhook lagi haii.. as one say other continue its.. so she says ok and takes them to coffe shop near by and gets them something to eat. Making them to sit one by one in the chair.. and then she says no sharat as I am going to get something for u three to eat. Aur yahan se no moving ' and if u try to move no eating.. and leaves.. and then the girl on seeing something.. says bhaiya haan bolo.. her brothers she says wahan dekhiye paint.. someone was painthing the flower potss in near by the shop and he was soo busy in decorating the pot.. and she sayss chalo hu, bhi to da paint karthe hain.. (their seats were really far away from the eatables placed and it was near the door and in the corner .. and bani couldnot se them properly.. )nahin Krishna.. agar kaye too mamma kana nahin degii .. bhaiya hum jakar jaldi laut ayenge.. mamma dekne se pehle.. too tum javoo mein yinn rahoongga.. her big bro.. and the next one sayss haan mein bhi yaheen rahoonga.. too teek hai mein hii chalthi hoon and climbs down the chair and runs.. as it was next to door.. and when she comes she says mein bhi paint karma chathi hoon to that painting person.. he sayss beta.. jab aap bade honge tab paint karma.. abb tum javoo ya phir yahan rehkar dekhoo kii mein kaise paint kartha hoon.. and continuous his work Krishna being naughty puts her two little fingers along with her thumb in the black paint and (the painter was too busy to notice..) and was about to put her fingers over the person .. she sees bani coming back..

she then turns to goo but remembers that her hand was with paint soo she doesnt know where to rub it.. then suddenly jai comes there to have coffee and stands next to Krishna.. and she when turn to other side she sees a person standing and she lifts her head to see the person and notices white hair in his head soo a idea clicks to her.. and then she pulls that person's pant and he looks down to see this little girl and smiles as he felt soo good after long time..(from getting down the flight itself he felt soo happy did not know why.. but felt today he felt meet someone ' who will his apne.. did not why.. he felt soo)and she show her arms signaling him to pick up.. on seeing her he felt soo happy and he immedietly picked up and sayss beta aapka nam kya haii and in process of putting her hand back of his head. Slowly wipes her hand on his grey hair or white hair which turns the hair to black and paint in her hand goes almost.. and she smiles and says muje neeche uthariye he was surprised as first she asked him to carry him and now asking to let down and he did.. on letting down she sayss meri maa ne kaha hai kii ajnabee oon se baat ya apna naam nahi batete.. and runs away..and he was like.. cute little girll and naughty too.. and turns away as he was called by his driver saying the car is ready.. and Krishna goes to bani and pulls her black pant which wipes all her paint.. and it was in her right hand and she was a lefty like jai..

bani turns Krishna meine tumein yahan se move karne keliye mana kiya haina .. she sayss mamma woo mein bhii nahii jana chathi thii par jab meine us flowers ko dekhoo to chali gayi pointing towards the pink roses bani smiles fades.. and she sayss mein khud koo rok hii nahi payi..

bani remeberss an incident.. flashback in the wgi when bani was working there before the all the wedding fiasco jai was in his cabin and bani and him were discussing some important tthing and when his eyes goes on the bunch of red roses placed there he immdietly gets up and goes there and sayss ye kisne raka yahan par'????? Kyun sir she asked because I coudnt resist my self kitne pyarii haii this flowers' .. how nice and rub his face against the flower .. flashback end there.. and she was brought out by Krishna saying kya hua ma/ ?????? kuch nahi beta and makes her sit in the chair and starts to feed her kidss.. and she starts to feel uneasy.. after this.. but avoids it.. and few min later rano arrives.. and all hug.. and then after cute talks with kids.. all leave for the house..

jai was now coming out of his bathroom in the guest house which was back side of bani's house only walls between them.. he was in robe. And goes to his bed to take his clothes..and remmbers what that day was today as it was now almost night nearing 6:30.. and he remberss the incidents which took place how she and bani was forced in this marriage and after it .. what happen and that incident which he raped bani in all maners.. due to pia and puskar's marriage.. and flashback after he returned from the trip he comes to know that bani has ;left the house.. by jig and so he decides to find her where she was.. and goe to his office and first he tries to find where puskar and when he turns he sees aditya.. and he shout saying I will destroy them all.. I will not leave them live in peace'when aditya says nahi jai u wont do anything to them.. if u try muje majboor hoke muje sacchayii batana padegaki.. kii kya aditya???? Yahii ki tumne bani ke saath..

preview:aditya stops jai from taking revenge..and flashbacks get over..

promo:kids were playing balls in the backyard of the house when the ball falls over jai in the back house and hits his shoulder..

Davs ... 😃😃😃...

Edited by tam2 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#18
hey great part please continue soon.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hi
great parts
sorry link pehele nahin mila
isliye coments late hua
loved the parts
cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hellow Davs i finished readding both parts their just wonderful👏... so bani had triplates 😃lol ...reminds me of baby love your other FF.....
man these kids are sooo funny but cute.....so the kids are 2 and half years old ...but tooo shytaa....badmash....
OMG krishna...painted jais hair lol this gal is so cute...i guess jai didnt even realise.....when is jb meeting ???????
continue........
sonam

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