Davia's FF: Krishna part 52 + note Pg 70

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hi Guys ... hope you all are well ... this is Davia's FF called Krishna.... and I will be posting her updates ... hope you all will co-operate .... and read and comment on her FF ... all your wonderful comments and support will mean a lot to her....

Thank ... 😃😃😃 ...

Davia's message:
I love to write stories but never got chance to expose it but after i came to if i used to write on JB and itni saari kahniyaan i started getting cant stop my imagination from flowing .. isliye aaj phirse I am starting a new ff ... hope u like it varna plz let me know I will stop it.
as i ditn want to post directly my ff as muje wahan nahi ana ta par I cant stop my imagination isliye.. Tam will post form my side...
Bani will always be Prachi for me..
FF start form the place where pia get married and Jai comes to bani and they have the conversation and Jai says i will show what husband mean....
Bani was sitting in the bed of Jai ' and her( for name sake it was hers too)and she was sitting only in her blouse and in skirt fully, hurt with some nail marks and and she was sitting holding both her legs tightly which was near her chest..she had folded them near it.. sitting scared.. and her mangalsutra was lying near her some black rounds breaded and scattered and it was broken.. and her sindoor was moved from her place.. and everything was scattered here and there in the room and her saree was far ay from her.. tears were completely flowing from her eyes and she was scad.. off ,because of what happen just before a while.. jw destroyed her life being her husband he forced her.. and she was destroyed by her own husband.. and he was in the bathroom applying creams on his wounds.. with a anger filled in him'. And he says this wounds will be vanished soon but the wounds u and ur sister gave will never get vanished.. and after today the wound I gave u will never be forgotten by u' he was fully in anger after pia's and puskar's marriage' and dint realize he had destroyed someone's life'.. and outside she was I have lost my everything to him he had taken without my will.. and I was helpless...

He comes out she gets more scad as if he going too do it with her the same thing for one more time.. and she gets more scared he comes near her and she moves from her place saying pls pls don't come near me.. pls' but he comes and holds her.. and says bahut daar lag raha hai? I liked it baniii and next time u wont able to take any steps against me.. the wound u and ur sis gave me , what u think I will forget it and today u plotted against me and made pia get married to puskar in front of my eyes..and I will leave u like that' .. holding her and she was trying to free herself from himm geting more scad and she says pls chodiye.. plss how could u baniii have u ever thought how I wd have felt when I got hurted'.. and u was enjoying in ur sisters marriage'. And he sayss today u waked up my animal inside me and I forced u.. and remember after this if u try too do something don't forget I may do it with uu again.. what I have done today'.. and leaves her and goes out (he was dressed now fully in suit)and goes to his study.. and starts to drink and he starts to remember what he had done with banii and breaks the glass'

She gets up and goes inside the bathroom and sits under the shower starting it.. and starts too cry.. and suddenly sshe becomes quite .. and '

......3 yrs late......


in nanital ' in mandir' we see a women is praying folding her hands' hey bahwann kamse kam aaj mere bacchon koi sarathi na karein.. aur rano bhi aarahi haii isliye pls' aur woo aunty ka imean padosii ka glass na thodein'.. and thenn she opens her eyes and sees the kidswere near the lord statue next to panditji slowly was removing his dodi's grip from his waist' her two son and her daughter naughtiest of three was doing it on otherside.. bani was like oh nooooo she thenn imeedietly calls panditjii jara samal ke.. before he turns and ask what from his rituals he get feeling that something is wrong and sees his dothi have been falling immedietly he catches it one hand and the kids run away and bani catches them.. tum theenooon panditji was .like ramramm rammm and goes and hides behind the statue. Other standing there were trying to control their laugh.. .. bani was like not again and sayss tum 3 koo aaj mein dekloongiii kames kam panditjii koo bachdoo sab ke saath.. and panditji comes out after doing it .. and sayss agele baar int logon ke haath koo jarror bandh kar aana pls.. .. hey baghwann ajkal kii bachoon bhii na.. and she was feeling very bad ask maffh kardijiiye woo bachee ke waje see I am really sorry.. and takes them outt but three were laughing.. she was like ghar chalkar dekthi hoon..

and in mumbaii jai was in his cabin busy working and suddenly'. His mind goes on the date.. and something strikes on .. he was like aajjj.. and was distracted by adii he comes in saying jaiii .. and he comes out of the thought' and in nanitall bani takes three of them too home and was holding them very tightly and was angry.. she makes them stand there infront of her.. she sayss aap loog aaj bhii hamesha kii tara ' u kids will never change???? Always being naughty I always get complain.. I asked u all to not play pranks on others yet u all didit and that too in mandir' and u know naa today rano massi is also going to come and u all see how the house is messy after cleaning also.. why r all like this???????? Aap sab logg m'. and starts to have tears in her eyes.. seeing her crying three of them.. goes to her and say sorry mamma.. holding their ears.. on seeing it she hugss them .. beta mein to sirf isliye kehrahi hoon kyunki I don't want others to point out towards my kids..and they says don't cry mamma we wont do anything after this.. she sayss beta.. pls ayindar se pls aise kuch math kije jiskeliye muje sharmindar hone pade.. .. and remembers someone.. and his deeds..and then she comes back to reality by her children calling her saying mamma bhook lagi hai.. she sayss chaloo and takes them to the dinning ..

in wgi in jai's cabin he was sitting and discussing some project ..and they says congratulation the deal is urs.. and all shakes their hands..the file is placed there.. and it was written walia hotels nainital project.. dundund'and then later all leaves.. and he was now alone in his cabin.. and his mind again goes to the date.. the date which change his life.. his wedding date.. and then he remembers the day after that incident flashback:he was in his study drinking and he broke the glass and then he received a call saying he was needed urgently in the maurisus project as some problem have arrived.. so decided to leave in the next morning so he calls and ask the pa to book the flight for him .earliest flight and he gets ticket in the early morning flight. .. he returns to his room and sees bani was not in her room. And then he comes and pack his bag and leaves to office to collect some files and from there he decides to go to airport and he thinks she must be in rano's room.. and leaves.. and he doesn't see bani was sitting in next to the cupboard in the corner near the wall. actually in between cupboard and wall she was sitting in and the lights were so dull that .he doesn't see her.. and he was busy in his packing and he was getting in between calls so he leaves in a hurry.. and she was sitting there changing her clothes and folding her legs near her chest and placing her face down and crying without noise

....flashback ends there.he was back to the present by the ring of the phone.. and he then picks it up to hear that he has got tickets for today to naitital as other flight were booked so he need to leave.. now.. and he says ok and leaves.. in the nainital.. bani was sitting with her children and her phone rings and rano says di I will be reaching today afternoon flight around four p.m. she says bye rano I will come to pick u up.. haan di. Pls come.. even I want to meet u soon.. I miss u di I too bye ranoo'and then she sees the kids playing there and thinks baghwan ne mere sath itna bura mazzag kyun kiya.. aur insab mein mere bacche ka kya kasoor hai.. my kids did not get what they deserve not their fathers love nor a good life .. in sab ke waje mein hii hoon.. kash woo sab kuch nahi hua hota joo mere saath hua.. too today my kids will be very happy born somewhere else where they have both the parents love and symbol of love not the symbol of my husband's hatred' and little tears fall from her eyes .. and when she her kids coming towards her she wipes it.. and says bacche taiyar hojavoo we r going to airport to receive rano mausi.. and she will be coming soon so we need to leave soon.. and somehow mange them to get ready.. as their r very naughty kids'

preview: bani reaches airport to know that rano flight is delayed so she waits ther.. but jai arrives there and her daughter meets him.. and he gets happy after so many days and he doesn't understand why..


promo:Jai and bani meets and bani runs away before he could speak to her.. and remembers everything...


Do leave few words....😃😃😃


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Posted: 17 years ago
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very nice start. So Bani left jai & had thrplets. I guess Jai doesn't know about his kids.

Can't wait himmeeting his daughter.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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whoa!! pelase continue doon...well...contineu NOW!!! great job!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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yeappppeeeeeeeeeeeeee thankx Davia and Tam for starting a new FF...havnt got enough time to read .....but im happy that D started a new one...i will read and comment later....
p.s D plz do continue DMG...im diying to read....
sonam
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Posted: 17 years ago
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davia dear... i would have been more happy if you had posted it 😕

The start is good... will wait for the next update..😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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beautiful start
please cont soon....
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Posted: 17 years ago
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WOw that was fast...
Kids..3
Three years..
Awesome update!!!
Loved it...
Hmm...Nanital...
Really nice place..
That was really cute....
XXXX
Nikita,,,
U BETTER UPDTAE SOON
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Nice start Davia...... although I posted it .... sorry for late comment....😔😆..... anyways .... I too would've been more happy if you had posted the FF ... anyways do cont soon.....😃.....
Edited by tam2 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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very interesting start!!! i'm hooked!

ufff..........so many questions and no answers........did bani leave before jai got back? did he kick her out? did jigs kick her out? wht happnened when he found out she left....where's pia and rano in this..............cant wait to see wht happens next.......

pls continue sooon...................want to know my answers

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Wow that was awesome
please continue soon can't wait for Jai to meet his daughter.

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