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Posted: 6 years ago
#21
Superb update Harsha!!!
Raj worry about playing with Rishi's emotions...
Kittu n her naughtiness...
Fighter girl...
Kittu n Rishi meeting😳...
Rano decided to make kittu as her daughter instead of Daughter in law...
Loved it to the core dear...
Eagerly waiting for next part...
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Posted: 6 years ago
#22
wow its super. Can connect to the story .Ca Can wait for theri second meeting. Aaki jiya equation is also suprr.
Plz update sooner.Egerly waiting
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Part 3:

Raj who was in stretcher tried to speak some thing..rishi kneeled down near him Raj slowly said .I.rishi...I saw happiness in ur eyes after ages...I want this smile on u fr ever...n I also know only tanu can bring this...go beta go n bring my daughter..don't worry fr me ...here every one is there fr me...they vl take care of me...n I'm sure nothing vl happen to me.as I have to c my tanu ...I have to c u both of ur happiness..go beta go ...
Rishi got tears...he kissed on Raj forehead
n said..ha papa..I vl bring tanu ...u vl c happiness in our life
Ahana :...jiju come back soon along with di
Rishi carassed her head...n said..I vl bring ur di ahana..I know ur bearing the same pain which I'm having...now no more pain
Ahana smiled n nodded her head as ok
Rishi rushed out from there
Raj: manpreet rishi needs u...u to go with him
Manpreet agreed he to went behind rishi

Other side:
Kittu came to home, Arun dida n jiyu saw her who is walking dreamily ..they all looked at each other..they called her..bt nothing was heard by her...this girl na...I never understand her...don't know how her mood swings..I can't understand how she behaves time to time..even reading difficult literature is easy than understanding her...
Jiyu laughed at her dadi remark
She rushed to kittu n shooked her...kittu who was in her own world..came out n saw towards jiyu confusingly
Jiyu laughed at her expressions...arey Didi kaha kho gayi thum...
Kituu stammered..woh woh. that guy...
All looked at her with big eyes
Kittu looked at them...
She gave her hand bag ...jiyu I'm feeling head ache...don't disturb me ..I'm gng to nap
By saying this she rushed to her room
Something striked in her mind..Arun beta she is saying abt some guy...vo tho nahi Hain as
Arun looked at her doubtfully
Im sure kittu met that guy Dadi said firmly
Jiyu intrupted...Dadi I think than Didi ur more interested in him..ur thinking abt his arrival more than Didi...Dadi tapped on her head playfully...arey buddhu ..ha I'm more interested. On that guy as I'm more concerned abt kittu life
Jiyu smiled ha of course..u vl have that concern..v r so great ful to have u as our Dadi
Jiyu hugged her n kissed her
Dadi to kissed her
Arun smiled at them
Okk now I vl go n disturb my didi
she said n rushed to kittu room
Arun :arey jiyu take care..don't know how is her mood if u do any mischief..i can't save u from sherni
Jiyu: ha papa don't worry I won't do any mishief
Jiyu slowly opened the door
She saw kittu is on bed upside down n she is thinking deeply by playing with her hair
Jiyu smiled seeing her
She slowly crawled on bed n lied beside kittu
She sudenly shouted in kittu ears by saying Didi
Kittu startled by her sudden shout
Jiyu started laughing
Kittu glared at her...u idiot ..u scared me
She thrown pillow on jiyu
Jiyu started throwing pillow
They both fought like little monkeys
Atlast they were tired
Jiyu sat beside kittu by keeping her head on kittu shoulder
So my didi who is sherni..who never scared to any thing...just frightened by my shout...that means she is in some other world

Now tell Didi...who is that woh woh that guy?
Kittu looked at surprisingly
Arey baba don't c like that...u know wat..I know heart reading...I can read my di heart...I know some one is disturbing u...if any incident happened with random guy...u vl lash him out...u won't think abt him..bt I can c ur mind is disturbed..some one disturbed ur heart..tell me di...I told u abt akki first...in same way u have to share me anything first

Kittu smiled
Arey baba I can say ur my friend than sister..I vl definitely share every thing with u..
Ha jiyu that guy disturbed me..I don't know y..when I saw him I lost in him..I felt like heaven in his arms...I saw my life in him..n those eyes ..I felt like..those eyes should gaze at me like fr ever..more than that .I felt some connection with his heart..I felt like I know him some time before...bt I don't know y I avoided him may b I don't want to proove Dadi stories true..may b my attitude made me behave like that...n I decided not to think abt him n I don't want to proove those superstition right...I don't believe those punar janm n all those concepts

Jiyu smiled at her Didi stubborn behaviour..arey didi if u like him..y u all thinking abt all other stuff...just leave all those n think abt ur feelings
No jiyu I even don't know who is he .may b it's just infatuation ...how can I say I have feelings fr him.woth in first meet..that to last fr few seconds..I didn't talk with him too
Do u really think it's infatuation jiyu asked
Kittu looked at her confusingly
Kittu too know that it is not mere infatuation...it is some thing which she doesn't have answer

Jiyu looked at kittu doubt ful xprsns..she want to change her mood
Didi have to say some thing
Ha tell kittu said
Akki called di..he said he want to talk with me personally
Wow that's gr8 kittu excitedly said
Di...plz na u too come.with
Wat? Wat should I do there
Di plz di..he told he is.arranging party..u too come di .
Jiyu requested with puppy face
Kittu agreed

On the other side
It's raining heavily
Rishi is walking in rain
Manpreet saw this
He rushed towards him with umbrella
Rishi saw this
He took umbrella from man hands n thrown away
Man: Bhai wat r u doing
Rishi smiled
Ur bhabi loves rain
C ur bhabi is dancing like peacock
Man saw in direction
He didn't find anyone he understud rishi is dreaming
Rishi rushed towards tanu
Tanu stopped her dancing
N looked at rishi
Rishi smiled
Tanu signalled him to join hands fr dance
Rishi holded her waist with one hand and shoulder on another hand
They started danching
In middle of danching rishi whispered
I love u tanu
Tanu blushed
U too love me na he questioned her
Tanu smiled n said do u think I came back to u without loving u
Rishi hugged her tightly
he got tears
Tanu too hugged her
After some time tanu released her hug
Rishi look into my eyes she said
Rishi looked into her eyes
Rishi eyes became red
She understud he cried because of rain she can't able to his tears
Tanu asked wat happened rishi
Rishi hold her finger...n said promise me u won't leave me again
Tanu smiled she kissed on his finger which he hold her...n said promise...vl never think of leave again
Rishi smiled
Rishi: pakka he asked like kid
Tanu : pakka
Rishi went towards her n started placing kiss on her face
n finally landed on her lips
They enjoyed the kiss
They released hug
They started again dancing
main phir bhi tumko chaahunga,
main phir bhi tumko chaahoonga...
is chaahat mein mar jaaunga
main phir bhi tumko chahunga...

tq guys fr gr8 support..sorry fr irregular updates..busy with classes..bt I vl try my best to upd


Jasmine : I wrote Dadi charcter thinking Jagdish Grand ma kalyani Devi frm bv




Edited by honeyrosid-6 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#24
Awww an emotional but awesome update...😭
Rishi going to get Tanu back...that scene was too emotional...😭
Kitti jiyu talks...❤️
Rishi thinking about Tanu in rain...
And the last part...😳
Brilliant...👏
Update soon...😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
#25
Superb update👏
Every part is beautiful😳
Jiyu n tanu cute convo 😳
N rishi dream sequence is superb n heart touching❤️
N last part is awesome❤️
Waiting for next
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Posted: 6 years ago
#26

Liked raj ahana encouraging rishi to bring back his tanu.liked krithika sharing her feelings with jiyu.that whole paragraph off dialogues were beautiful.like jiyu said krithika should not back out if she really loves him just to prove that rebirth n all is a superstition.rishi imagining tanu dancing...rishi dancing with tanu n kiss were romantic.their conversation was so emotional.like tanu said in rishi's dream that she has come back to u in real too tanu has come bak as krithika 4 him



Is this Dadi?

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Posted: 6 years ago
#27
Wow dear both parts were Soo beautiful
... Uhhh rishi going through so much pain 😭
.that fall ... Dream sequence loved it ❤️
...tysm dear for pm ... update soon whenever u get time bcz studies r imp
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Posted: 6 years ago
#28
Loved the story... Loved Kritika...the story is just awesome... Waiting for Tanshi next meeting... Update soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
#29
Awesome update...
dream sequence is sooo beautiful 😳
tnx for pm...keep update soon😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
#30
wonderful update dear .Tanu also feels for rishi love the bonding of both sis .Superhit update .Pl Please update sooner

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