The Story Under Wraps [TanShi SS] [Chapter 18 &19 Page 21]

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Haya Zehra Jafar

@HayaJafar313

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Posted: 6 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: arya1210
Both aea awesome updates .Tanshi ki doriya kaam ho rahi .PPlan is working.Wo word for late comment update sooner

wo word Aru...😳

Yup its working...😳

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Haya Zehra Jafar

@HayaJafar313

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Posted: 6 years ago

#132

Originally posted by: paru000
Haya super. Cute moments between tanshi. Tanshi care for each other. Want more moments like this. Abay making tanshi close is also superb. And about your health are u fine. Take care ok

wo word Paru...😳

Yup!! I will give such more moments...😳

Happy that u enjoyed them...😳

Yes i m fine now...wo word for asking...❤️

Yes i will...❤️

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Haya Zehra Jafar

@HayaJafar313

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Posted: 6 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: vinushi
😭😭kitne tume baad update kra... tanshi moments😃😭😳...loved the update haya😳..maine pareshaan kr na update k liye 😡koi wo word nhi uske liye 😆...update sooon... n thus time mujhe khna na pade😡

tu har dafa rota hua comments hi q krti hai...😆

Aisa lgta hai jese mn mar gayi hon...😆

Khr JK...😆

Happy that u liked the update...😳

Haahahha wo mujhe pata hai tu meri jaan khayegi...😆

Wo word for late...but dekh is bar mne khud bola mn kl update dongi...😆😛

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Haya Zehra Jafar

@HayaJafar313

Dazzler

Posted: 6 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: Smita_rawat
Awesome update foxi.. 😳 Full of tanshian style❤️...N wo for late.. I hope u r now feeling well.. Update soon

wo word lemon...😳

Happy that u liked it..😳

Its totally ok babes...😳

Yes i m feeling well now...❤️

Wo word 4 asking...❤️

Updating ri8 now...😳

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Haya Zehra Jafar

@HayaJafar313

Dazzler

Posted: 6 years ago

#135

Originally posted by: gopsss
Awesome update Foxi 👏!!!! TanShi garland moments😳...
Oh due to afraid Tanu unknowingly cut Rishi's hand... Tanu's care for Rishi😳... Rishi stared Tanu...😛...
Abhay's master mind😉... He sent Tanu too to Rishi's room... Aww Rishi fed Tanu😳... Loved it to the core Hayu... Eagerly waiting for the update...

wo word cotton candy...😳

Glad that u liked their moment...😳

He is way too smart...😉

Happy that u loved it...😳

Updating ri8 now...😳

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Haya Zehra Jafar

@HayaJafar313

Dazzler

Posted: 6 years ago

#136

[Chapter 13]

[DHOLKI]

Dholki has to start after few hours coz they decided to do mid night dholki...

Guests started to arrive...

And after few hours dholki started...

Tanu was busy in taking care of guests and so was Rishi...

They both went towards the kitchen and bumped into each other...

Rishi held her from her waist...

"Sorry..."

She said moving inside...

And he also moved into the kitchen ...

No one was present there...

"Abhi tk naraz ho??"

Rishi said not looking at Tanu but looking at the tray standing by her side...

"Mmhhhmm!!! I m not angry on anyone.."

She said moving away but he held her hand...

"See i m sorry...but u shouldnt had done that..."

He said making her to turn towards him...

"Excuse me...i just let u know my feelings...but u behaved so harshly with me..."

She said and tears formed into her eyes...

"Hey!! Dont cry...i m sorry...ok it was my mistake that i behaved harshly and i m really very sorry 4 that...cant we be just frnds as before???"

He said...

"Hmmm ok...we are frnds already..."

She said moving away and turning her head towards the door and a drop of tear fell from her eye...

She cleaned it hastely but he saw her wiping the tear...

And felt too bad that he cant do anything 4 her...

*---------*----------*------------*

Few girls were dancing and few were singing...

Abhay called the DJ and ordered him to play a romantic song...

And so he did..

Abhay then called a girl...

"Listen!! Do anything but take Rishi and Tanu to the floor..."

Abhay said...

"Hmmm...ok..."

The girl said...

And went to take the mic...

"And the next performers are Rishi and Tanu..."

She announced and ran towards them and took them to the floor and they were totally confused that what just happened..

The song played...

And the whole crowd started to cheer them...

Finally after a lot of struggle from Abhay's side they started dancing...

Rishi held Tanu from her waist and she placed her hands on his shoulder...

They started to move in a sync of song...

Tanu was looking down and Rishi was looking at her...

She looked up only to find him staring at her...

Their eyes met and shared some grief which they kept inside...

Tanu felt an unknown pain in Rishi's eyes...

"Rishi is something wrong with u?? "

She whispered...she was totally tensed for him...

"Nope nothing..."

He said looking here and there...

And they just completed their dance loosing their selves in each other...

When the lights on...

And they suddenly left the floor...

*--------*--------*----------*

Precap: mehendi...

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Smita

@Smita_rawat

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Posted: 6 years ago

#137

Awesome update hayu👏

rishi's apologize to tanu n tanu's pain😭

N last part rishi n tanu dance n their closeness is mind blowing😳

Eagerly waiting for next

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Haya Zehra Jafar

@HayaJafar313

Dazzler

Posted: 6 years ago

#138

Originally posted by: Smita_rawat
Awesome update hayu 👏
rishi's apologize to tanu n tanu's pain😭
N last part rishi n tanu dance n their closeness is mind blowing😳
Eagerly waiting for next

wo word lemon...😳

Happy that u liked it...😳

Updating ri8 now...😳

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Haya Zehra Jafar

@HayaJafar313

Dazzler

Posted: 6 years ago

#139

[Chapter 14]

[MEHENDI TIME]

The function of dholki ended with peace...

Tomorrow is the day of mehendi...

Tanu after a lot of tiredness went to the terrace to get some relaxation...

Everybody else present in the house were sleeping...

There was a complete silence in the city...

As it was mid night..

Tanu was sitting on the swing present on the terrace..

Her eyes were fixed on the moon...

The light of the moon was glowing her face more...

The moon light enhanced her beauty more...

Someone sat next to her due to which her trance of thoughts was broken...

It was none other than Rishi...

"You??? Arent u sleep yet???"

Tanu asked...

"No...sleep is far away from me...tum bhi to nhi soyi.."

He said making a pout...

"Hmm...mujhe bhi neend nhi arhi thi..."

She said...

And they both started looking at the moon...

There was a complete silence for a minute...

"Wese how beautiful this view is...this moon is in too much peace...it just looks at us silently...and we here are soo restless...everyone keeping a deep grief in their hearts..."

He said releasing out a deep breath...

And she just looked at him...

"Yes!!!! Some people have a ton of grief in their hearts due to which they feel burden..but who cares..."

She said making him to look at her...

But when he looked at her she started looking at the moon...

They talked like that and after some time both fell asleep there on the swing...

Tanu's head on Rishi's shoulder and Rishi's head on Tanu's head...

They both were holding each other tightly...

It seemed like there was a fear of loosing each other...

*---------*----------*-----------*

Morning came with another birght day for the family...

Abhay woke up early and came runing to Rishi's room...

But he did not find him there...

He searched the house but of no use...

Then he went to terrace and saw the beautiful couple sleeping in each other arms...

He immidiately took out his phone and clicked a picture...

He captured there moment...

"Sweet dreams..."

He said smiling and left the place...

*-------*----------*---------*

After few minutes Tanu woke up...

But Rishi was still asleep ..

As her head was under Rishi's head so she cant stood up...

After few minutes Rishi also woke up...

And he on seeing her awake suddenly sat straight...

"Sorry...meri ankh lg gayi thi..."

Rishi said...

"Its ok...i also went into deep slumber..."

She said...

"Chln??"

He said...

"Hmmm..."

She said and they both stood up to go...

*-------*---------*----------*

Everyone was getting ready in their rooms...

As Rishi got ready fast so...

Abhay's father said to Rishi to bring the gifts from the store room...

Which was next to Tanu's room...

He went there and picked up some gifts...

He came out locked the door and when he turned he saw an angel coming out of the room...

He was mesmerized by her beauty...

And his feet freezed there...

He just looked at her...

And her eyes also fell on him...

"Huh???"

She questioned...

"Mmm nothing..."

He said looking here and there...

When she turned to go he called her...

"Tanu.."

And she turned towards him...

"Yes!! "

She said...

"Ur kajal is li'l bit spread from the side.."

He said...

"Here?? "

She questioned pointing beneath her eye...

And he noded ...

She tried to remove but she cant...

"Wait..."

He said placing the gifts on the table and came closer...

He held her cheek slowly and wiped the kajal with his thumb...

Due to which she got shivers down her spine...

And she closed her eyes...

He left her suddenly on her reaction...

And she saying "thanks" just left from there...

He picked up the gifts and saw his hand which was yellow with the colour of mehendi...

And what just he said was "shittt!!!! "

Coz he removed her kajal with the same hand...

He picked up the gifts and left...so that he can find Tanu as soon as possible...

*-------*--------*----------*

Precap: not decided yet...

Hope u guys like it...

Keep supporting...

Ab to khush hoja Vid..😆

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vinushi

@vinushi

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#140

Dono updates ko combine karu to ek update kra hai tune ...n ththis time I like updates finalllyy ...poor tanu I know pyar Marta hai use but y he isn't accepting...tarrace...scene was nice ...tanshi moon talks ki yaad aa gayii ...chal SB next bhi update jaldi karna ...thode goons LA story me taking rishi realize kare that he also love her

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