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Posted: 6 years ago
Very emotional update foxi😭 finally they have unite😳 very emotional n touchy scenes u have wrote😳 n ur mysterious precap. What will be next.i am curious so plz update soon😛
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: vinushi

Wow haya I just loved the update 😭...finally after so many days i just love your update😳😭...awww tanu rishi😳...bad aise hi rahna aap dono hamesha ek sath 😭 ...pta Nahi kyun mujhe emotional romance inke itne jyada kyun pasand hai😳 ...may be bcz they r blast in emotional scenes😳👏...😭

PS : jaldi update nahi kra to tu janti hai achhe se mujhe😳

hayeee!!! Very happy k tu khush hogyi...❤️
Koi nhi jesa tujhe psnd hai mn wesa hi dedongi...❤️
Yeah!!! But they are blast in every scene..
Updating ri8 now...❤️
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Smita_rawat

Very emotional update foxi 😭 finally they have unite😳 very emotional n touchy scenes u have wrote😳 n ur mysterious precap. What will be next.i am curious so plz update soon😛

wo word lemon...😳
Happy that u liked it...😳
Yeah!! Finally they r..❤️
Lets see...😉
Updating ri8 now...😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
[Chapter 16]
[ANOTHER SIDE OF THE STORY]

"Kon hai ye Rishi..."

Tanu said..

"Tanu wo..Tanu.."

He looked at her...nd a drop of tear fell from his eye...

"Rishi ro q rhe ho...hua kya..."

She said wiping his tears with her thumb...

"Tanu chalo yahan se..."

He said nd pulled her outside with him...

They went into the garden...

"Rishi hua kya...hai kon ye??"

Tanu said all confused...

"Tanu ye...ye Disha ka bhai hai..."

He said crying...

"Kon Disha??"

Now Tanu got some kind of fear that he had an ex...

"Wo...wo jo Manpreet ki girlfriend thi..."

He said now bursting into tears nd sitting on the ground...

Tanu also sat on the ground...

"Tanu aj phr mere zakham taaza hogye...
Tanu aj phr mujhe mere bhai ki yaad agayi...
U know tmhri wajah se mn sab bhoolta ja rha tha...but i think i cant...
this world wont let me..."

He said crying...

"Ssshhh!!!"

Tanu said holding his face...
nd wiping his tears with her thumb...

"I m with u..nothing will happen..."

She said consolling him...
Nd Rishi held her hands nd then hugged her...

"Wait.."

He said breaking the hug...

"Jab Abhay ko iska pata tha to usne isko apni shadi mn q bulaya.."

He said going into a thinking mode...
Tanu also started thinking...

"Tanu plzzz go nd call him..."

Rishi said...

"Hmm.."

Said said standing up...
Nd gave her hand to Rishi...

"Stand up..."

He held her hand nd stood up...

"Dont cry..."

She said holding his face...

She went inside nd came out with Abhay...

"Han Rishi.."

Abhay said...

"Tu ne usko q bulaya..Disha k bhai ko.."

He said angrily holding Abhay's collar...

"Mne nhi bulaya Rishi calm down.."

Abhay said removing Rishi's hands from his collar...

"Then how he came Abhay..."

Rishi said li'l bit pushing him..

''Rishi dad ne bulaya hai usko...'
wo dad ka friend hai...
Or mn kya krta...kya bolta unko...
Unko nhi pata uska...
Coz tu ne hi batane se mana kiya tha...''

Abhay said...

"Abhay mn kese rhon yahan ab...
I cant...mn nhi reh skta...
mujhe bar bar chote ki yad ayegi..''

Rishi said...

''Rishi yr...sorry...
mn kuch krta hon...tu fikar na kr..
mujhe khud nhi pata tha k aisa kuch hone wala hai...''

Abhay said consolling him...

"Abhay!!!! ''

Rishi said nd hugged him...

"Rishi chillax.."

Abhay said nd patted on his back..

"Tanu..."

Abhay called her as she was also standing there...

He broke the hug and gave Rishi's hand in hers...

"Take care..."

He said to Tanu nd ran inside...

"Tanu..."

Rishi said crying...

"Rishi chuppp!!!... come lets go inside..."

She said..

"No i wont..."

He said...

"Rishi we will go in room...come..."

She said...

Nd took him with her...
They went in Rishi's room...

"Lay down.."

Tanu said...

Nd Rishi laid down on bed...
She pulled a blanket over him...

"Close ur eyes..."

She said...

Nd so he did but suddenly opened them...

"Tanu i cant..."

Nd a drop of tear fell from his eye...


"Ssshhh!!! Dont cry...i m here with u..."

She closed his eyes with her hands...
Nd kissed on his eyelids...

First on ri8 eyelid...
then on the left one...
Nd then on the forehead...

"Now sleep..."

She said...

Nd he held her hand tightly placing his head on her lap...

She caresses his hairs...
He held her hand tightly nd slept there...

Abhay came in his room...

"Shhh!!! "

Tanu said to Abhay...
He came silently nd whispered...

"All ok??? "

"Yeah!!!"

Tanu said.. nd she tried to stood up but Rishi didnt let her...
He held her tightly nd in his sleep he said...

"Dont leave me alone.."

Tanu looked at Abhay...

"U have to be with him...
When he will go in deep slumber then u can leave..but plzzz not ri8 now...
he is already disturbed..."

Abhay said...

"Hmmm...ok..."

She said nd smiled...

Abhay smiled back nd left the room...

Tanu watched Rishi's tensed face continuously...

Nd after a short period of time she also fell asleep there...
Placing her head on his head...

*-------*--------*--------*

When the sun embrace the couple with its sunlight...
Tanu woke up due to this...

She looked at Rishi who was in deep slumber nd peaceful sleep...

She stood up carefully...
Nd placed his head on the pillow...

He held the blanket tightly...
She gave him a morning kiss on his head...

Closed the curtains so that the sun wont disturb him...

Nd left the room...
It was early morning...

In between Rishi nd Tanu's room there was a guest room in which Vivian the brother of Disha was staying...

She passed from the room but heard him taking Rishi's name ..

Her steps halted...
She went close to the door nd placed her ear on the door...

He was talking on the phone...

"Rishi ki to lg gayi thi mujhe dekh kr...uska moo dekhne wala tha...
Boht maza aya...
Ithink this poor guy still thinks that his brother died just coz of him..."

He said to someone nd laughed out loud...
Then he continued...

"He dont even know who was behind all this...
i was the one who killed his brother...
Nd ur idea of break failing was awesome...
Iwatched that Manpreet dieng in front of my eyes...
That sight was really very inetresting nd delightful...
now its Rishi's turn..
We did this all...nd he thinks its all his fault...
I mean how interesting na...
It will be fun teasing him...
I will enjoy alot...well talk to u later buddy.."

He said nd cut the call..

Tanu was shocked hearing all this...
She cant even move...

Rishi thought nd still thinking that his brother died coz of him but he dont know it was not his fault...

Even Manpreet didnt attempted suicide..
It was a murder...
It was all planned...

Suddenly door opened nd she hide behind the wall...
That man came out nd went downstairs...

Tanu watched him leaving...
Nd was still in a big shock...

It is the hidden side of this story...
Which only jow Tanu knows...


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Precap: not decided yet...

Hope u guys like it...
Do comment nd hit like...
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Posted: 6 years ago
Super part foxi😳 rishi's pain n how easily tanu take cares of him😳
all part is beautiful❤️ now waiting for next
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Posted: 6 years ago
Agn beautiful update hayu ...chalo jaldi update karo...waiting
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Smita_rawat

Super part foxi 😳 rishi's pain n how easily tanu take cares of him😳

all part is beautiful❤️ now waiting for next

wo word sweetie...😳
Yeah!! She knows him well...😳
Updating ri8 now ...😳
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: vinushi

Agn beautiful update hayu ...chalo jaldi update karo...waiting

wo word SH..❤️
Updating ri8 now...😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
[Chapter 17]
[WEDDING DAY]

Rishi woke up nd found him alone in the room...

"Tanu..."

Rishi said nd looked here nd there but found no one...

"Goshhh!!!! My head is still spining..."

He said nd jumped out of the bed...

*---------*------------*-----------*

Abhay talked to his Father nd they shifted Vivian to their another house ...

Where mostly guests were staying...

Rishi felt better after hearing this news...

*---------*-----------*-------------*

It was the wedding day of Abhay nd Shanaya...
Preparations were on the peak...

Tanu nd Rishi were doing preps together..

"Tanu store room se garlands to le aoo..."

Rishi said...

"Hmmm ok..."

She said nd went to the store room...
She tried hard but couldnt find...

After few minutes Rishi also came to the store room...

"Tanu...ek kaam bhi nhi hota yr tumse..."

He said nd got shocked after looking at her...

Nd then he laughed out loud...

"HAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAAHAHA!!!! "

Coz Tanu was all covered in flour...

"Rishi meri help kro...has q rhe ho..."

She said lil bit angrily...

"Oh sorry sorry.."

He said in between his laugh...

She dusted herself nd few of the flour went into her eyes...

"Aaahhh!!! Rishi..."

She said...
Nd Rishi came towards her...

"Kya hua??"

He said nd looked at her closed eye due to flour...

"Tanu tum bhi na...bachi ho...idhar aao.."

He said nd came closer...
He lifted her chin lil bit nd opened her eye with his thumb...

He started blowing air in her eye...
She just looked at him...

His sight fell on her beautiful eyes...
Nd he lost himself in those beautiful eyes...

They shared their moment for few minutes then something fell down...

Nd Tanu saw a mouse...

"Rishi mouse.."

She said nd jumped in his arm...
He caught her...
Nd started laughing again...

"HAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAAHA!!! ''

Tanu looked at him angrily...
She punched on his chest...

"Kya hai??"

She said...

"Mne kuch nhi kaha.."

He said supressing his laugh nd again laughed out loud...

"Neeche utaro mujhe..."

She shouted...
Nd punched him again...

"Ok ok wild cat.."

He said nd left her..
She stood straight...

They took the garlands nd when opened the door for going out it didnt open...

"Shittt!!! Its jammed..."

Rishi said...

He pushed the door but of no use...

"Manpreet..."

Rishi shouted...
Nd then became silent...

"Manpreet??"

Tanu asked suddenly...
Nd tears fell from Rishi's eyes...

"Ssshhh!!!"

She said nd wiped his tears...

"Ek dafa mn store room mn lock hogya tha tb Manpreet ne mujhe bahar nikala tha...
Tanu wo chota tha but boht smjhdar tha...
Pata nhi usne aisa q kiya..."

He said nd fell on his knees...
She also sat with him...

"Rishi tum in sab baton k bare mn mat socho...
Abhay ki shadi hai aj...bs wohi socho..."

She said wiping his tears...
nd he suddenly hugged her tightly...

"Rishi!!! Ssshhh!!! "

She said nd rubbed his back...

"Kese bataon tmhe Rishi k Manpreet such mn boht samajhdaar tha...
usne kuch bhi aisa nhi kiya blke uska to murder hua tha...
tm nhi manoge i know...
Tmhe lagega k shayad mn ye sab isliye bol rhi hon k tmhara gham door hojae...
But nhi Rishi...
lekin mn tmse tb hi baat krongi jb mere pas saboot hoga.."

She thought in heart...

"Acha chalo bahar nhi nikalna...Abhay ko bulate hn..."

Tanu said nd broke the hug...
They both stood up...

"Abhay!!!"

Tanu called him...
As Abhay was passing from there he came on first call...

"Tanu are u inside??"

Abhay said knocking at the door...

"Yeah!!! Rishi is also with me...this door is jammed..."

She explained...

"Wait lemme call carpenter.."

Abhay said nd he called the carpenter...

"Carpenter will take time in coming..."

Abhay announced...

"Abhay koi or rasta nhi hai yahan se niklne ka??"

Rishi said...

"Hai but wo window boht uper hai or wo garden ki taraf hai wahan mud hota hai poora..."

Abhay explained...

"Wait yahan rope hai...ek kaam kr tu wahan ja or Tanu ki help kr bahar aney mn..."

Rishi said...

"Ok.."

Abhay said nd went to the garden...

Rishi stood on the chair nd gave Tanu his hand...
She held it nd climbed on the chair...

She was about to fall but rishi held her by her waist...

He helped her in getting out...
From the other side Abhay helped her...

"Rishi how will u come??"

Abhay said...

"I am enough for myself.."

Rishi said...

"But its too high...dont jump Rishi.."

Abhay said...
Nd Rishi jumped...

"Rishiii!!!"

Tanu nd Abhay shouted...

"I m fine.."

Rishi said standing straight covered in mud...

"Rishi tmhe lagi to nhi..."

Tanu said holding his face...

"Nhi i m fine..."

He said nd kissed on her forehead...

"Rishi u should get a shower..."

Abhay said looking at his condition...

"Hmmm..."

He said nd went to his room...

*---------*---------*----------*

After getting freshed up...
Rishi came down ...

"Rishi lets go to the mall...i wanna buy something..."

Tanu said...

"Hmmm ok..."

Rishi said nd they both left for the mall...

On reaching the mall...
Tanu went to the jewellery shop...

Nd so did the Rishi...

Tanu was buying the jewellery...

"Rishi ye kesa hai??"

Tanu asked...

"Hmmm acha hai..."

He didnt even looked at her...
He was busy in phone...

"I dont want this..."

Tanu said to shop keeper...

Nd Rishi looked at her in disbelief...

"Why?? What happened..."

Rishi said...

"No i dont want anything..."

She said making a sad pout...

"Why???"

Rishi said...

"U r ignoring me Rishi..."

She said...nd turned her face away...

"No i m not...acha sorry..."

He said ...

He put his phone in pocket nd then picked up a pair of earings...

He turned her towards the mirror...

Came closer nd made her wear those earings...

Nd she just smiled at him...
He looked at her after making her wear those earings..

"Beautiful..."

He complimented...

Nd she just looked at the ground..
Her cheeks were red due to shyness...

"May God keep ur couple always like this.."

The shop keeper smiled nd said...

"Thnx.."

Rishi said...
Nd Tanu removed the earings nd gave them to shop keeper...

"Pack them..."

She said nd smiled at Rishi ...
Which he returned back...

They bought the jewellery nd then did the shopping nd left the mall...

*-----------*-----------*------------*

(Mall scene's credit goes to Aru...my SH..❤️ )

Precap:dhishoom dhishoom...😉

Hope u guys like it...
Keep supporting...😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
Superb updates Foxi👏!!! Rishi went to Tanu to say about haldi... But she went from there... Oh TanShi emotional talk at the terrace😭 Rishi shared his fear of losing her... TanShi reunion❤️😳... Oh Rishi stopped seeing a person... He was Disha's brother Vivian... Rishi again felt a fear... Poor Rishi😔... Tanu took care of him... Oh God Manpreet's death was not an accident... Instead it was a planned murder... Now Tanu came to know all about it... Waiting to see how she will save Rishi's life... Eagerly waiting next part Hayu... Now story become more interesting... Loved it to the core Foxi❤️... Really wo word dear for late...

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