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Posted: 6 years ago
o updates ...feel bad k ye Mera fav BNA 😭...kyunki iske updates nahi nkarti tu😡...or dusre end Kar diya😭
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: vinushi

o updates ...feel bad k ye Mera fav BNA 😭...kyunki iske updates nahi nkarti tu😡...or dusre end Kar diya😭

sorry yr for late...
Aise na bol yr...i m feeling bad now...😭
Krti to hon...jb bhi time milta hai...
Yr wo to krna tha...
Khr cheer up update de rhi hon thori der mn dekh lijiyo...only 4 u 2 updates today...❤️
Always stay cherished...😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
[Chapter 9]
[IGNORANCE]

Abhay recovered day by day...
And the gap between Tanu and Rishi increased instead of decreasing...
Rishi started to ignore her...
She didnt know the reason but she knew that something is wrong...

His best friend is now ignoring her after telling the summary of his life...
Rishi forbade Abhay to go back...
And ordered him to stay with him always...

Abhay knew that its impossible to make Rishi leave his decision so he left the work there and started to live with him...

Rishi gave his all response to Abhay...
Everything changed in these few days...
First Tanu thought that Rishi is giving his all concentration to Abhay thats why ignoring her...

But when Abhay recovered and Rishi still behave like that then it made her to search the reason...

*--------*---------*---------*

Today was a day off from office...
Tanu went to Rishi's house to meet Abhay...
She rang the bell...

Rishi opened the door...
With a beautiful smile plastered on his face...
Which vanished on seeing Tanu...

"May i come in???"

She said seeing Rishi's shocked expressions...

"Ahan!!! Han han...ajao..."

He said now controlling his expressions and leaving the space for her to enter...

And she entered staring at her face...

"Rishi kon hai??? "

Abhay came runing and smiling widely...

And he saw Tanu...

"Arey Tanu tum aao aao andar aao..."

Abhay said...

"Hmmm..."

She said and smiled still looking at Rishi...

And Rishi bent his eyes...

Tanu sat in dining hall with Abhay and Rishi...

Rishi's servant offered them juice...

They did chit chat for few minutes...
Then Rishi stood up to leave...

"Kahan ja rha hai???"

Abhay said...
And Tanu also looked at his escaping technique...

"Yr i have a head ache...will see u soon.."

He said just looking at Abhay...

"Why???"

Abhay said..

"Dont know...wanna take rest..."

He said pating on Abhay's shoulder...

"Tanu ko bye to bol de..."

Abhay said...

"Bye see ya..."

Rishi said but didnt look into her eyes...

"Bye..."

She said softly looking at his face...

And he left...

"I wanna talk to u Abhay..."

She said...

"Ya i m listening..."

He said now concentrating...

"I wanna say that..."

And she paused...

"Be comfortable yr...itni to frndship hai hi hamari..."

Abhay said enheartening her...

"I was saying that..."

She said...

"Hmmm??? "

Abhay said...

She closed her eyes...

"I love Rishi..."

She said in a flow...

Abhay was shocked and happy at same time...

"Seriously??? "

He said happily..

"Hmmm.."

She said opening her eyes...

"Arey to jao na Rishi ko bata do..tmhe pehle usey hi batana chahiye tha..."

Abhay said...

"I cant..."

She said...

"Why??? "

He said...

"Coz i think he dont..."

She said...

"And u know what i think...i think he is also in love with u..."

Abhay said...

"I dont understand what to do..."

She said playing with her hands...

"Go and tell him..."

He said...

"Pakka???"

She said...making a pout...

"Hmm...pakka.."

He said..

And she started thinking...

*---------*----------*----------*

Precap: yes or no???

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Edited by HayaZehra313 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
For u gilehri...😳
[Chapter 10]
[YES OR NO???]

"Kya soch rhi ho Tanu??? "

Said Abhay ..

"I m still confused..."

She said biting her lips...

"Arey bs kro...mn to kehta hon abhi jao or usey bata do..."

He said...

"Abhi??? "

She said...

"Ya abhi..."

Said Abhay ..

"But he is resting ri8 now..."

She said making a pout. .

"No he is not...he is just fooling us...i know him..."

He said...

"Ok!!! Pray 4 me..."

She said standing up and walking towards Rishi's room...

The door was opened slightly...
She knocked at the door and peeked in a little...
And saw him standing on the window...

"May i come in??"

She said...
And he turned to see her...

"Tum?? Yhn?? "

He said shocked...

"May i come in???"

She repeated...

"Ahan!!!! Ya ya..."

He said..

And she entered...

"Rishi...i wanna talk to u..."

She said playing with her hands looking down...

"Hmmm bolo..."

He said...lil bit confused...

"I...I...I..."

She closed her eyes...

"I love u..."

She said and opened her eyes with smile plastered on her face...
Which became dim on seeing Rishi's shocked expressions..

"Sorry..."

Was all he said...

"Rishiii!!!!"

She said with broken heart...

"I m sorry Tanu...i dont...dont love u..."

He said turning his face away and controlling his tears...

And she was shocked to know the answer...

"Ok u dont na then its ok...it will be a one sided love but atleast stay with me..."

She said smiling slightly...

"No...i m sorry...i cant..."

He said...and a drop of tear slipped from his eyes...
Still not looking at her...

"Acha meri taraf to dekho..."

She said now bursting into tears...

"Sorry...i cant...plzzz leave..."

He said...

"Why Rishi why???"

She shouted...

"Coz i dont wanna see ur face..."

He said coldly...
Supressing his lips...

"U dont even bother about my feelings..."

She said...

"No..."

He said clentching his eyes...

"It will be hard to forget u but i will try my best..."

She said with pain visible in her voice..
.
And left the room by hitting the glass which broke into pieces just like her heart...

*-------*---------*----------*

She came running downstairs...
Abhay saw her coming but was shocked to see her crying...

"What happened Tanu???"

He said tensed...

"Nothing happened Abhay...just a sorry..."

She said and ran outside crying all her heart out...

*---------*---------*----------*

Precap: mission on...

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Posted: 6 years ago
omg tanu confess her feeling...rishi ignores her he dont want to see her 😒 ...yyy rishi behaving like this... as alwts u rocked haya loved both the updtes... but that haddi abhay wo nahi chahiye merko😒 sirf rishi or tanu chahiye... 👍🏼...update soon wo word for double update hops ull updte soon this time
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Posted: 6 years ago
so emotional .I know why rishi is doing this i think rishi has fear to lose tanu in the same way he lose his parents and man .I am right na 😆 .Mission on what kind Mission i can guess this also to make rishi jalo 😆 .Lets see how much I am right 😉 update sooner plx.Tu bahut tine leti hai .Itna wait nhi hota humse
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Posted: 6 years ago
Wonderful update foxi😉
Finally tanu realised her love for rishi❤️
Rishi ignorance😳
Tanu proposal n rishi rejection really painful💔
Waiting for next
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Posted: 6 years ago
[Chapter 11]
[MISSION ON]

Few days past...and TanShi didnt met each other...
They met in office but didnt talk...
But the staring system kept on...
Sometimes Tanu stared at Rishi...
And sometime Rishi stared at Tanu...

*------*-------*--------*

Abhay met a girl and fell in love with her...
Her name is Shanaya...
Abhay wanted to marry her...
And Rishi supported him...
Abhay's parents gave the responsibilty to Rishi...as they are in London...
Rishi met the girls parents...
And the date was fixed...
Rishi remained very sad...
Coz Tanu wasnt with him...
When she was with him...she didnt talked to him...
The pain of broken heart ate them both day by day...

*------*--------*--------*

A month passed and the date of wedding came closer...
Two weeks were left in the marriage...
Abhay's parents also came from London...

Mehendi preparations were on...
Abhay and Tanu's frndship also increased..
Shanaya also made a good relation with Rishi nd Tanu both...
And Abhay said to TanShi that they will take the responsibility of the wedding's preparation...
Both first forbade but then on Abhay's insisting they agreed...
As this is his time...
Coz he is a groom...

*------*---------*---------*

Today is the dholki of Abhay and Shanaya...
And tomorrow will be the mehendi day...

TanShi were busy in decorations...
But still didnt talked to each other...

Abhay was watching all the scene...
Their love and their ignorance...

He met Shanaya...

"Yar Shanaya...there is a problem..."

Abhay said making a pout...

"Dont say Abhay that preparations nhi hui...Abhay mera BP low horha hai..."

She said tensedly...

"Arey Shanaya plzzz...mn Rishi or Tanu ki baat kr rha hon..."

Abhay said hitting his palm on his head...

"Kyun kya hua???"

She said being normal...

"Yr tum unko dekho...ek doosre se pyar bhi krte hn ...pr sath bhi nhi rehte...dekho baat bhi nhi krte...mne unko is hi liye kaha k sath preparations krn k thori si to baat hogi.. pr nhi...abhi tk ek lafz tk nhi bola...poora ek month hogya inko baat kiye hue..."

Abhay said sadly...

"Hmmm...phr to kuch sochna parega ..."

Shanaya said thinking...

"Kya??"

He said curiously...

"Suno.."

She said...
And they discussed their plan...

*---------*--------*------------*

Tanu was going on stairs and Rishi was just behind her...
Actually staring at her from behind...

Shanaya spread few drops of oil on stairs from side so that no one can see her...

And Tanu steped on it...and phewww!!!!

She slipped...

But before she hit the ground a familiar pair of arms held her by her waist from one hand and the stairs from other...

Tanu fearfully held Rishi's collar...

"Chorna mat chorna mat chorna mat..."

She said fearfully...closing her eyes...

And he just smiled at her antics...

"Nhi choronga..."

Tanu opened her eyes she saw him smiling...
But that vanished and he left her suddenly...

"Sorry"

Was all she said and turned to go but again sliped...
And Rishi again held her...
He suppressed his laugh...

"Why are u laughing??? It isnt funny.."

She said angrily and he stoped smiling...

"Sorry..."

He said...

And Tanu again turned to go but Rishi this time held her hand...

She just looked at him...

And they walk through the stairs holding their hands...
But once done he left her...
And an awkward silence spread...
And Rishi left looking at ground...

Shanaya and Abhay shared a high five...

*-------*--------*----------*

Precap: love moments..

Hope u guys like it...
Do comment nd hit like...😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
Wo word to all of u...
I read ur comments...😳
Thnx 4 ur support...😳
And wo word 4 not replying indiviually...
Time nhi tha coz 2no stories ki update deni thi...wrna Aru or Vid mujhe mar dete jaan se...😆
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Posted: 6 years ago
Haya awesome . Rishi ignoring tanu tanu . Tanu sharing her feelings for rishi and telling rishi what she is feeling. But rishi refusing it and abay shanya plan to bring them close. All just fabulous. Waiting for the love moments between tanshi.

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