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Posted: 6 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: TearDrop50

Lovely update 👏

chapter 7 bohot pyaara tha, just loved it ❤️
update soon 😊

wo word moni...😳
Awww happy that u loved it...😳
Will update soon...😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: gopsss

Superb updates Foxi 👏!!! Wo word for late dear... TanShi bond grew... Rishi's chit chat with Tanu❤️... Tanu n her irritating talks😆... Rishi started to share things with her... Aww Rishi went to Tanu's house for dinner... Tanu made him smile😳... A handsome smile...❤️... Oh god what happened to him?? What was in that phone call...
Interesting precap... Some shattered pieces of past... Eagerly waiting for next part Hayu... Update ASAP dear...

wo word cotton candy...😳
Its totally ok...😳
Heee...😆
Lets see what happened to him...😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: arya1210

ja ghum le . Enjoy your vacation .We will wait till then.

coming update it was fantastic one .Ong the smile .And rsb joke also . Beautiful bonding update sonner

heee ghoom liya...😆
Wo word for ur wishes...😳
Wo word sweetie...😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: Divya333

Lovely update Haya...their bonding is increasing on each passing day... .Loved how Rishi laughed to Tanu... Hope everything is good... Update soon

wo word titli...😳
Happy that u loved it...😳
Lets see whats next...😳
Will update ASAP...😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: as55amol

It was wonderful part plz update next part soon

wo word bro...😳
Happy that u liked my story...😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: paru000

haya my dear what a brilliant piece of work.rishi and tanu getting close rishi sharing his past with tanu. tanshi caring each other. everything just perfect. super work dear.

awww...thank u sooo much choi moi...😳
Glad that u liked it...😳
Awww...thats a precious compliment...😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: vinushi

Ham to Mar Gaye Yar 😳rsb ki smile par😃 ...as usual rocking update ...ja Happy journey 😳enjoy ... waiting for updates ik u'll update when u get time😊

abhi nhi mar...abhi to or bhi boht kuch baki hai...😉😆
Wo word baby...😳
Wo word for ur wishes...😳
I enjoyed too much...❤️
Will update ASAP...😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Wonderful update foxi😳
Wo for late😛
Pta nahi kaise rh gaya padne se..wo word yaar
Waiting for next

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Update soon Foxi... Waiting for next...
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Posted: 6 years ago
[Chapter 8]
[SHATTERED PIECES OF PAST]

"Rishiii!!!!!"

She said and shook him by his shoulder...

And he just looked at her...
She cuped his face...

"What happened Rishi???"

She said calmly...

"Tanu...Aa..Ab...Abhay..."

He said this and bursted into tears...

"What happened to him???"

She questioned...

"Tanu...Ab..Abhay..."

And then he ran from there...
Coz he wasnt able to say anything...

She also went behind him...
He sat in car and so she did...
He drove recklessly...

"Rishi aram se...kuch nhi hoga usey..."

She said inorder to calm him but of no use...

After few minutes of crazy drive they reached the hospital...

They went to the reception...
And the receptionist told him the room no.

When they reached the OT...doctor was talking with nurse...
Rishi didnt even bother to wait...
He ran towards doctor...

"Doctor Abhay kesa...wo theek hai na...usey kuch hoga to nhi..."

He said worriedly...

"He is in danger...just pray for him...i will give my best..."

Doctor said and went into OT...

He fell on his knees...
Crying all his heart out...
Tanu came and sat with him on ground...
Held his hands...

"Hey dont worry nothing will happen to him.."

She said politely...

"I dont wanna loose him Tanu he is my life...i lost my everything...i lost my home...i lost my family...and now Abhay..."

And there he stoped...
He looked down...
Now properly sitting on ground and resting the back of his head on the wall...
She also sat on his side...

He rested his head on her shoulder unknowingly...
She didnt reacted coz she know he isnt in the state to do things properly...
And he initiated the talk...

"You know why i love Abhay too much..."

She quietly listened to him...and he continued...

"Coz he is sooo cute loving and caring...he was with me at that time when i had no one on my side...ul
U know his habbits his style his everything is like my lil brother...we met 2 years ago...
When i lost my everything and he stood with me as my supporter...
U questioned me several times that why i dont laugh...its not like that i didnt ever laugh...i was a very cheerful guy...finding cheers in a single sec of my life...
I shattered when my mom died...but i had my dad my brother manpreet...they were my everything...
Dad remained ill after mom...and after 1 year he also died...and now another piece of my heart broke...then my world revolve around manpreet...i gave my all concentration and love to him...
He was a very sweet boy...and obedient brother...he loved me so much...always cares for me...u know why i smiled when u called me bunny...coz he used to call me bunny...ufff those days..."

And he smiled and cried both at same time...

"One day manpreet came to me...and he told me that he is in love...
I was very happy for him...i said to him that i want to meet her...
The meeting was fixed on the weekend...when he came with her...i was shocked to see her...
She was a sister of underworld don...
That meeting was peaceful...but when we came home me and manpreet had a big fi8...
I ordered him that i wont let him marry her...
And he was behaving like a small child...he wasnt even ready to listen to me...
I told him that i wont let him go in lion's den but of no use...and he said to me 'is this ur final decision'...i said 'yes'...and then he said to me 'ok then see u never'...i ordered him 'dont u dare to go anywhere'...
But he didnt listened and he said the same thing that u said..'its none of ur business whether i live or die'...and he went from there...
I thought he was just blackmailing me...
But for some security measures i went behind him...
He went in his car and i was in mine...
I was following him..
he drove very fastly and at that time my heart came into my throat...
I also drove fastly...and then i saw his car going in ditch...and then the blast...and those little pieces of that demolished car came to my car due to strong blast...
And i was helpless...Tanu at that time i lost my world...i lost the last flower of my garden...and then my garden became barren...Tanu Abhay will be ok na???"

He said holding her hands and sitting straight...
And she also bursted into tears after listening the story of his tragedic life...

"Ya Rishi believe me he will be ok..."

She said consoling him and wiping his tears...

Doctor came out...and they both ran towards him...

"Doctor how is he???"

Rishi said crying...

"He is out of danger...and the other best thing is that he is now concious...its a miracle...by the way u can meet him..."

Doctor said and pat on his shoulder...

And they both went inside...
Rishi went angrily to Abhay...
And started cursing him...

"Bata nhi skta tha k tu arha hai...apne fuzool surprises apne pass rakha kar...jahil...tujhe pata hai tu ne meri jaan le li thi..."

And Abhay was just smiling...
Rishi continued...

"Nhi tujhe to bs surprise dena hota hai...ab has q rha hai...boht maza arha hoga na mujhe tang kr k...kya zaroorat thi aise aney ki...ab chup q hai bol na..."

He said angrily not noticing that ri8 now Abhay isnt in condition to say anything...

"Bol na...now why are u silent..."

He yelled...

"Rishi he isnt in condition to talk.."

Tanu said from behind...

"Abhayyy!!!!"

He said calmly and hugged him...
And Tanu smiled on their cute bonding...

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Precap: ignorance...

Hope u guys like it...
Do comment and hit like...😳

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