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Posted: 6 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: vinushi

No words Yar haya agn rocking Wala update...awww rishi missing her n she ignores him ...he felt bad or usko bhi bura lga ...last scene was emotional one awesome ... U know Mera fav ho gya ye ...hope you'll update soon for me plss

awww...wo word gilehri...😳
Heee...i m glad that its ur fav...😳
Sorry i didnt read ur reply...but for u i will update today or tomorrow...😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: Smita_rawat

Wonderful update foxi

Tanu ignores to rishi n rishi apologized to her
N finally rishi told about his past to tanu
Very emotional n touchy
Very well yaar
Waiting for next

wo word lemon...😳
Awww...thats so sweet of u...😳
Will update soon...😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: gopsss

Superb update Foxi 👏!!! Wo word Hayu for late... I had read the update earlier itself but I was unable to comment... Aww Rishi missed Tanu😳... Rishi apologized her...❤️... Oh he don't celebrate his birthday as his mother died on the same day... Some glimpses of past... Now I cant control my self for knowing his past... Foxi I'm at the peak level of excitement... Update soon na...

wo word cotton candy...😳
Arey its ok yr...😳
Heee...you will know soon...😃
Will update ASAP...😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
#74
[Chapter 6]
[SOMETHING NEW]

He stood up , picked up his laptop and said...

"Lets go home i will drop u.."

She was still siting on the ground all shocked that what kind of man he is????
In a second he is different...
And in other second he is totally different...
He gave her his hand and said...

"Dont u wanna go home?? What happened??"

She just shook her head...
Held his hand and stood up...
They walked quietly to the car...
Their journey was also silent one...
He was giving his full concentration to road..
And she was lost in her thoughts...

She was glaring at him...
Feeling a gaze on himself...
He turned his face towards her...
And said...

"What??"

With the action of his brows...
She shook her head and turned her face towards the window...
Thinking about him...

"I m feeling bad for him...
he faced too much in his life...
His mother died on his birthday...
He thinks that he is responsible...
His family his father no one is with him...
Where is his father???
He has no siblings???
Ufff...his life is also confusing just like him..."
Her reverie was broken when the car stopped with a jolt...

"We reached ur home.."

He said...

"Thank u.."

She said leaving the car and biding him a bye...

*------*-------*--------*

Someone for the first time touched his heart...
He for the first time cared for someone...
He felt her pain...
He felt bad for insulting her...
For the first time he fell on his knees in front of someone...
He shared a painful piece of his past with someone...
Know one knows about his past not even lil bit..
And he dont want anyone to know about it...
Rishi Singh Bedi who is a very strong person broke in front of someone...
He told his past to her...
He was getting involved in her day by day...
A strong bond is forming between them...
Lets see what is next waiting for them...

*-------*---------*--------*

That night passed peacefully...as he discused his past with someone...not whole but lil bit burden was lessen...

Sunshine woke this handsome guy up...
He opened his eyes and looked out of window...
He took a deep breath on the sight of beautiful day which was going to be busy for him...
His phone rang...
He picked it up...
And was glad to see a message of Tanu...

"Good morning..."

But as usual he didnt smiled...
As smile is not a part of him...

"Good morning..."

He replied...
on getting the message she smiled...

And both left for their respective works...

*------*--------*-------*

On entering his office he found Tanu standing with a smile plastered on her face...
He looked at her and then went to his desk indulging himself in his precious work...
After few minutes of silent working she came and sat in front of him...
And initiated the talk to break the silence...

"You dont do any work instead of being a worm of file???"
She said gaining his concentration but of no use...

"Its my life.. "

He said still looking at the laptop...

"Dont you get fed up...i mean how do u live like this...always working???"

She said to break his tempo of working but all in vain...

"I m sitting in front of u alive...thats how i live..."

He said going through a file and lil bit irritated from her continuous blah blah...

"Why are u always like this?? I mean its all bcz of ur mom or something else..."

He closed his eyes for a sec on her question...
And then said...

"I dont wanna talk about this.. "

She felt sorry for him...
She understood that he is pleading not to touch this topic...

"Sorry.."

She said...and he understood that she is embarassed...

"Its ok...i didnt mind it..."
He said again looking at his laptop...

"Dont u ever laugh???"

She said...again starting...

"Is there any reason in my life to laugh??? If there is...then tell me i will laugh..."

He said...
And their chit chat continued...
She eating his brain and he replying to her stupid questions along with working ...

*-----*------*------*

Days past with them being best friends now...
She irritating him all the time and he getting pleased by her silliness...
He cried in front of her many times...
But this time knowingly ...
As it gives him comfort and his burden lessens lil bit...
After Abhay now he shares his every single step with Tanu...
But his past is still unknown to her as he dont want to talk about that...

*------*--------*--------*

One day when he was passing by a corridor...
Tanu was also standing there talking with Ahana...
Water was spilled there...
He steped on it and slipped...
And he held the person standing on his side...
It was none other than Tanu...
But they didnt fell fully as he held the pillar with one hand and with other hand he held her by her waist...
They both were lost in each other...
But as the crowd gathered around them...
They came to their senses...
Ahana helped them to stand straight...
He left from their without uttering a single word...

*-------*--------*--------*

The very next day he came to office and he was very angry...
He sat on his desk...
Held the glass of water and it broke in his hand...
He looked at his hand but didnt cared...
But someone was present there who cares...
She came to him runing...

"Hey Rishi what happened??"

She came to him...
took his hand in her hand...
He tried to pull it...
But she didnt let him...

"Sit straight and let me see..."
She said showing her anger...
And he admired her...

She brought a first aid box...
And bandaged his hand...
When she applied antiseptic on his hand...
He shouted like a baby...

"Ouch!!!!!!! Aram se aram se..."

She laughed at his antics...

"OMG...mujhe aaj pata chala...Rishi Singh Bedi a famous kharoos business tycoon cries on applying antiseptic..."

After taking a pause she said...

"Baby!!!"

Pinching his cheeks...

"Hey dont call me that..."
He said lil bit irritated...

"Baby!!!"

She said again laughing out loud...

And when he opened his mouth to say something...
She again applied antiseptic on his wound and he shouted...

"Ahhh!!!!!"
He made a baby face...

"Wild cat..."
He said making a pout...
On which she laughed out loud...
And she bandaged his hand...

*------*--------*-------*

On the other day she hurted her feet badly...
He made her sit on chair...
And this time he bandaged her feet...
He was blowing air on her feet and she was staring at him...
He felt a gaze and looked at her...

"What???"

He said...
And she just shook her head...

*-------*--------*--------*

She made him live again...
The beautiful part of RSB which slept due to his past was awaken now...
He was caring for her...
Rishi Singh Bedi was caring for someone...

*-------*--------*--------*

Precap: life is going so smooth...

Hope u guys like it...
Sorry for late...
This one i gave IN EMERGENCY for u gilehri...😆
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Posted: 6 years ago
#75
Wonderful update foxi👏
Chirpy tanu n khadus rishi combo is superb😉
Finally ice melting between tanshi😳
N they cares about to each other😳
Waiting for their love relation❤️
Update soon dear..I am waiting.
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Posted: 6 years ago
#76
hye mai mar jawa this care for each other ..One of the beautiful update .Rsb is getting closer to tanuja.Now she is an important part of his life.plz update sooner
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Posted: 6 years ago
#77
Kya kahu ...lovely update Yar ...awww baby rishi n wild cat tanu ...n precap interesting ha ...plsss update tom or Tom ..haya really can't wait for this ff parts ...hope to samjhegi ...n thank u nahi bolungi iska update late Diya tune ...mujhe jaldi update chahiye
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Posted: 6 years ago
#78
[Chapter 7]
[SMILE :) ]

Today she invited him for dinner...
He agreed to come...
When he was on the way he texted her...

"I m coming..."

"Ok waiting..."

She replied...

"Are you cooking or ordering???"

He texted...

"I m cooking..."

She replied...

"You are cooking???"

He replied...

"Ya...do u have any problem??"

She replied...

"OMG!!! I m too young to die..."

He replied...

"Are u mocking me???"

She replied..

"No no...me or mocking u...never...i just wanted to be alive...thats it..."

He replied...

"Come then i will see u..."

She..

"I m here...open the door..."

He...

"Its opened come in..."

She...

And he entered her house...
But she wasnt present...

"I m in...but where are u???"

He texted...

"I m in kitchen..."

She replied...
He came and stood on the door of kitchen...
She was cooking...

"I m behind u..."

He texted...

"I think if u r behind me then there is no need to text..."
She said smiling and looking at him...not on texting...

"Sorry..."

He said putting his phone in his pocket and entering the kitchen...

"Its ok..."

She said...

"Let me help u..."

He said...

"No its all done...u go and sit i m also coming..."

She said...

"Hmmm ok..."

He said going out of the kitchen...
And settling himself on the dining table...

She also came after few minutes with a bowl of rice...

They had a peaceful dinner talking to each other...

Once they are done...
They started their chit chat...
In between she joked but he didnt laughed or smiled but gave a compliment. .

"Nice one.."
He said...

"Hey dont u ever laugh...or even a smile...i mean u only smile on texting being an emoji...but u never smiled in front of me...i mean i m curious that how ur smile is...i mean u r hand..."

And she stopped...
He understood...

"What hand???"

He said lifting his eye brows...

"I..i was...i was just..saying...that.."

She stammered and he completed her sentence...

"Handsome.."
He said...

And she got lil bit embarassed...

"U r too much smart..."

She said...

"I know thanks for the compliment..."

He said with pride...

"U r...bunny..."

She said making a pout on which he smiled..

And she was shocked...
Rishi smiled...
Rishi Singh Bedi smiled...

"Hey did u smile??? "

She said...
And he just looked at her...

"Wait u smiled...OMG...u were looking too much handsome.."
And she said in a flow...

"Please once more..Rishi once again...please smile again...please please please..."

She started pleading which made him smile...

"Oh wow...i m going crazy..."

And his phone rang...
He picked up...

"Yes?? Rishi Singh Bedi speaking..."

He said on phone...

"What???"

He stood up...
And phone sliped from his hand...

Tears started rolling down his cheeks...
He lost his senses...
He stood there like a statue...
She came runing to him...

"What happened Rishi???"

And he wasnt in a state to say something...

*-------*---------*----------*

Something happened and that handsome smile vanished not to come again...
The first ever smile which won her heart vanished...
What was that phone call about???

Precap: shattered pieces of past...

Hope u guys like it...
Do comment and hit like...😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: Smita_rawat

Wonderful update foxi 👏

Chirpy tanu n khadus rishi combo is superb😉
Finally ice melting between tanshi😳
N they cares about to each other😳
Waiting for their love relation❤️
Update soon dear..I am waiting.

wo word lemon...😳
Heee...ya nice combo...😳
Yup...the ice is melting...😉
U will see soon..😳
Its updated ..😃
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Posted: 6 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: arya1210

hye mai mar jawa this care for each other ..One of the beautiful update .Rsb is getting closer to tanuja.Now she is an important part of his life.plz update sooner

heee...😃
Wo word butterfly...😳
Yes..😳
Its updated...😃

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