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Posted: 6 years ago

#121

Rishi reaches hospital

He shouted doctor doctor

He lay down tanu on Stecher n said to nurse where is doctor..

Nurse said doctor is coming before u fill up forms

Rishi- (angry) iska kitna khoon beh rh h or tumhe form ki padi h..kh h doctor..bulao unhe..agar meri tanu ko kuch ho gaya na to is hospital me aag laga dunga..he shouted again..kh h doctor??

Doctor came..n said yah kya ho rh h??

Rishi- doctor doctor..plz meri tanu ko bacha lo..dekho na kitna khoon bah rh h..he folds his hands n request to doctor..plz meri tanu ko bacha lo n crying

Doctor holds rishi's hand n said no worry..hum puri koshish karenge..nurse icu me le kr aao.

Rishi- doctor..plz use kuch nahi hona chahiye..agar use kuch ho gaya na to me jee nahi paunga..mar jaunga

Doctor- we understand..plz corporate with us..we trying my level best

Rishi's phone is ring.. rishi's said hello n crying

That was yuvi

Yuvi- hello..Rishi kya hua..tu ro kyu rh h

Rishi- (crying) yuvi..tanu..tanu ka accident ho gaya h

Yuvi- accident ho gaya h..kh h tu

Rishi- city hospital

Yuvi- don't worry rishi..hum aa rh h wah..ok..tu apna dyan rhkna

Bedi n khurana family reached hospital

Sarda crying n asked to rishi..kh h tanu..kya hua use

Rishi- wo wo icu me

Sarda crying n virendra console her

Virendra- mt ro sarda..kuch nahi hoga tanu ko

Ahana aksed to rishi ye sb hua kaise

Yuvi- ha rishi..kya hua th

Rishi told everything..

Rishi- usne mujhe Bachane ke liye apni jaan khatre me daal di..meri bajah se aj wo n crying

Raj console to rishi

Rishi hugs raj n asked usko kuch nahi hoga na..

Raj- ha use kuch nahi hoga..dekh tujhe kitna khoon beh rh h..chal dressing krwa le

Rishi- nahi..jb tk tanu ko hosh nahi ayega..me yah se hilunga bhi nahi

Rano- per rishi tanu ka treatment chal rh h..wo thik ho jayegi..chal beta dressing krwa le

Rishi- nahi..mene kh na me kahi nahi jaunga

Yuvi n manpreet forcefully brings rishi into ot.

Rishi- tum dono mujhe yah kyu laye ho..mujhe tanu ke pass jana h

Manpreet- bhai plz.. dressing krwa lo..phir chale jana

Rishi- tujhe sunai nahi diya..mujhe tanu ke pass jana h samze.

Nurse gives sleeping dose to rishi n dressing him..

Nurse- dekhiye inko bahut khoon nikl gaya h isliye mene glucose drip lagaya h plz dekhna ye bed se na uthe

Here tanu's operation has completed..

Doctor came n said operation is complete successfully

Everyone is happy to listen this..

Ahana- hum usse mil sakte h..koi problem to nahi h na..use hosh aa gaya kya?

Doctor- Abhi nahi aya..or I hope jaldi aa jaye..nahi to

Raj- nahi to kya doctor

Doctor- agar tanu ko agle 5 se 6 ghanto me hosh nahi aya to wo coma me ja skti h

Everyone shocked..sarda crying n veeru console him

After 5 hours

Rishi wakes ups n muttering..tanu..tanu

Manpreet- bhai aapko hosh aa gaya..ab kaisa lag rh..

Rishi- me yah kaise aya..ta..tanu kh h..

Manpreet- bhai tanu thik h..

Rishi- mujhe usse milna h..

Manpreet-per bhai apki halat thik nahi h..aap baad me mil lena

Rishi- mene kh na mujhe jana h tanu k pass..hat samne se

Yuvi enter into the room

Yuvi-ye kya ho rh h

Manpreet- dekho na bhai..ye tanu se milne ki jeed kr rh h

Yuvi- rishi tanu se baad me mil lena... tumhari halat thik nahi h

Manpreet- ha bhai waise bhi tanu ko abhi hosh nahi aya h..kya baat karoge aap usse

Rishi-(tensed) hosh nahi aya h.kyu??

Manpreet- pta nahi bhai doctor ne kh h ki agar hosh nahi aya to wo coma me chali jayegi

Yuvi- (angry)tujhe ye batana jaruri th kya

Manpreet- sorry wo muh se nikl gaya

Yuvi- tu kabhi kuch soch k krta h kya

Rishi- kya..mujhe tanu ke pass jana h abhi..he removes drip n walking stumble n when he falls down manvi holds him

Yuvi- plz rishi teri tabiyat thik nahi h tu aram kr ke..baad me tanu se mil lena

Rishi- chodo mujhe..mujhe tanu se milna h..

Yuvi- nahi hum nahi jane denge

Rishi-(angry) chodo..mujhe tanu ke paas jana h..n he called tanu

Here ahana with tanu

Ahana-(crying) dii..uth na..kuch to bol dii

Tanu heard rishi's voice in her unconscious stage..her conscious is back..n calling rishi's name

Tanu- rishi..Rishi

Ahana happy to sees this

Ahana- dii..tujhe hosh aa gaya..tujhe pta h me kitni dar gayi th..

Tanu opens her eyes

Tanu- ahana ri..Rishi kaisa h

Ahana- dii wo bikul thik h

Tanu again heard rishi's voice..

Tanu- rishi..n she moves to sit

Ahana- dii..tu uth mt..tujhe aram krna h

Tanu- nahi ahana rishi mujhe bula rh h.. mujhe uske pass jana h

Ahana- dii..Rishi tujhe nahi bula rh h..wo to abhi behosh h

Tanu- nahi ahana..wo mujhe bula rh h..mene behoshi me bhi uski awaaz suni th. Dekh phir se uski awaaz ayi.

Ahana- nahi dii.. Koi awaaz nahi aa rhi h.. Dii tu aram kr plz

Here rishi pushed yuvi n manpreet

N walked towards to tanu

When tanu going to stand up that time rishi enter

Ps: wo word for vinushi n paru..wo word for liking..n I am updating again..I hope u liked this.. cotton candy where r u?? Plz join na..miss u

Edited by Smita_rawat - 6 years ago

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Gopika

@gopsss

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Posted: 6 years ago

#122

Rishi enters d room... Tears are falling from his eyes... He rushes to Tanu...
Ahana stands up n goes to inform her family about Tanu...
R:Ta...Tanu...
By holding rim of d bed Rishi moves towards Tanu... Tears r continuously falling from his eyes...
T:Rishi...
Rishi comes n sits beside Tanu... He cups Tanu's face...
T:Rishi...
R:Tanu...tum theek ho na???? Tumhe jaanti hai mn kitna dar gaya tha...
T:mn theek hu Rishi... Tumhari awaaz sun kar kuch aur theek ho gayi... Kyun itna pareshan ho rahe ho??? Mn mar...
Suddenly Rishi places his finger on Tanu's lips...n nodds in no...
Tanu smiles emotionally... She holds Rishi's hand n says...
R:Aise marne ki baat mat karo... Agar tumhe kuch hua to...mn bhi...mar...
Tanu stops Rishi...
T:nhii...aisi baatein karne ki aadat...chod do Rishi...
By saying this Tanu starts crying...
Rishi cups her face...n says...
R:nhii Tanu rona mat... I cant see u crying...
In a sudden... Tanu hugs Rishi... Rishi too hugs her back... As they really felt insecure by loosing each other...
Rishi breaks d hug n says...
R:tum kyun mujhe bachane ki koshish ki??? Maine kaha tha na...
T(by cutting Rishi in middle):nhii mn kabhi bhi tumhe chodti nhii...hamesha tumhare sath rahungi... I can't even think about it... Tanu stops her words...
Rishi looks Tanu in shock... N he says by teasing her...
R:Tumhari shaadi k baad??? Tab bhi tum mujhe saath lekar jaogi????
T(in sudden):nhii mn tumse hi shaadi karungi...
Both TanShi looks each other...
T:oh...sorry...yeh galti se muh se nikal gaya...
R(in mind):Kaash sach me Tanu aise kehti to...
T(in mind):yeh kya h Tanu...
Both TanShi sit there silently... To break the silence...Rishi says...
R:tumhe apne maa baap se nhii milna???
T(emotionally):haan milna...kahan hn woh???
Rishi was about to stand...just then they heard...
Sharda n Veerendr:Hum dono yah he...
They both rushes to Tanu...
S:beta Tanu... Tujhe jaanti mn kitne dar gayi thi... hamari jaan nikl gayi...tumhe jaanti sab kitne pareshan ho gaye the??? Yeh Rishi...
Just then Rishi holds Sharda's hands n nodds in no...
S:tujhe hamare bare me koi chinta nhii...
Both mother n daughter crying hugging each other...
T:maa... Mat royiye... Mn theek hu...
V:Sharda... Yeh kya h... Bacchi ko pareshan mat karo...uski tabiyat abhi theek nhii h...
Saying so veerendr goes near Tanu...
V:beta...
He softly cresses tanu... Tu aaram karo beta...
Tanu nods with moist eyes...
Rishi stands up n was about to go... Veerendr holds his hand...
V(by joining hands):bhut dhanyavad beta... Sirf tumhari vajah se hume apni Tanu ko vaapas mila...
S: Tum hame hamari jaan waapas diya...hamari Khushi waapas diya...
Rishi holds his hands...
R:aise mat kaho uncle... Tanu meri bhi jaan h...
Veerendr n Sharda looks at him with a surprise...Tanu feels an unknown happiness...
R:woh...meri dost hai

ManVi n other Bedis come to d room...

PS:Awesome updates Lemon... U rocked it dear... While reading ur updates I really missed kasam... Hats off u dear... Mine part will be boring...u had written that much superb... Really wo word dear for late... N woh word for understanding me... Love u dear... Missed u too...

Edited by gopsss - 6 years ago

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paru000

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Posted: 6 years ago

#123

Hayee cotton candy and lemon. What a awesome update. Both update is super. Rishi taking tanu to hospital and everyone coming to hospital . And thank God tanu is fine tanshi emotional moment family emotional moment. All these made me very emotional. And while reading your updates really feel like kasam should not have ended. Even now missing tanshi krasha very much. Cotton candy your update is not at all boring. Love u cotton candy and lemon and miss u both very much.

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arya1210

@arya1210

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Posted: 6 years ago

#124

finally read all the parts.Super story guys.I love it so much.Tanu rishi bound is so beautiful.Aahaman ,bedi bro neha pawan all are great.Plz continue and update sooner

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Smita

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Posted: 6 years ago

#125

Manpreet-bhai ab to aap khus hona aapki tanu bilkul thik h..n he smile

Rishi gives angry expression

Doctor comes n examin tanu..

Rishi- (worried) doctor sb kuch thik h na

Doctor- ya everything is alright..bus rest karengi to or bhi thik ho jayengi..bus aap sb inka khayal rakhiye inhe bed se bhi uthne mt dijiyega..

Rishi- (sudden reply)ha me iska pura dhyan rakhunga..

He realized what he said.. mera matlab h hum sb dhayan rahenge

Manvi looks to each other n smile..

Rishi- acha ab aap sb log ghar jaye..me yah rukta hu

Virendra- nahi beta tumhe bhi chot lagi h..tum ghar pe aram karo..me hu yah per

Rishi-pr..

Manpreet holds rishi's hand n say bhai plz

Rishi upsad but couldn't do anything

Raj- acha hum chlte h tanu k dhyan rakna or kisi cheez ki jarurat ho to bta dena

Virendra- ha bilkul

Rishi says bye to tanu but his heart is not allow to him

Everyone goes..

In Rishi's room

Rishi sat on the window n sees moon

Manpreet comes there

Manpreet- bhai aap abhi tk soye nahi..kuch der baad din ho jayega..aap ko aram ki jarurat h..chalo so jao

Rishi- (angry) mujhe nahi sona.. mujhe tanu ke sath rukna th..per tu jabarjasti yah le aya..

Manpreet- per bhai aap kaise or kis ristey se rukte..wo apki kya h..girl friend h ya wife h

Rishi- dekh manpreet tu pareshan mt kr..tu achi tarah se janta h wo meri dost

Manpreet-acha per mujhe to ye dosti nahi lagti

Rishi- tu.. tujhse baat krna bekar h..tu ja yah se... mujhe sone de

He lays down on bed n adorns blanket

Manpreet- are abhi to aapko nind nahi aa rhi th..or ab... mujhse baat bhi nahi kr rh ho.. bahut galat baat h

That time manpreet phone is ring.

Manpreet pick ups the call..n shocked

Manpreet- bhai suno na bahut important baat btani h

Rishi- kya h?? Tu sone de..

Manpreet- bhai apki car ke break fail nahi hua th..balki apki car ke break fail kisi ne kiye th

Rishi- kya tujhe kaise pta

Manpreet- are wo mechanic ne..mene apki car ko garez me diya th..usne mujhe bataya..

Rishi- kon kr sakta h aisa??

Manpreet- ha bhai kon h apka dushman..bhai pawan..uske alawa..koi aisa nahi h

Rishi-ha sahi kh rh h..ab me us pawan chavan ko nahi chodunga..uski wajah se meri tanu ki ye halat hui h

Manpreet- meri tanu

Rishi-tu phir suru ho gaya..tu ja yah se

Manpreet- acha acha jata hu..aap so jao..

Rishi- agar sach me bhi ye sb tumhara kiya hua h na to me teri wo halat karunga ki tu soch bhi nahi skta pawan chavan

In hospital

Rishi asking about tanu health to the doctor

Rishi- sb thik h na doctor

Doctor- ha thik h per unhe km se km ek month k rest lena hoga..

Rishi- or discharge

Doctor- discharge 7 din baad ho jayega

Rishi enter ot

Tanu- rishi

Rishi- kaisi ho

Tanu-thik hu..Rishi doctor ne kya kh

Rishi- doctor ne kh ki tujhe one month rest krna hoga

Tanu- nahi rishi me bor ho jaungi..me nahi karungi

Rishi- acha baba tum ghar se kaam kr lena..ab to thik h

Tanu- sach me phir thik h

Rishi- acha to ab tum aram kro me jata hu..bye

Rishi leaves

After one month

Tanu n ahana talking to each other

Ahana- di..tu kyu mujhe bor krti h..me yah baat kr rhi hu or tu h ki office ke kaam me busy h

Tanu- mera kaam ho gaya h..bol kya kh rhi h

Ahana- acha tera pura dhyan is file me h

Tanu- ahana kl presentation h or agar ye achi nahi bani to project haat se nikl jayega..acha ye complete ho gaya h tu rishi ko de aa

Ahana- are me nahi jaungi..kl bhi tune bheja th or manpreet mil gaya th..usne pura mood kharab kr diya th..

Tanu- chal me hi de aungi..me nahi chahti meri wajah se uska loss h

Ahana- dii..ek baat puchu..tu datengi nahi

Tanu- puch

Ahana- dii..us din hospital me tujhe kaise pta chala ki rishi tujhe bula rh h..jabki uska room bahut door th

Tanu- mujhe awaz aa rhi th isliye

Ahana- dii..tu maan kyu nahi leti ki tera or rishi k soul connection h..dekh na usne wah awaz di or tujhe wo sunai di..tu maan kyu nahi leti ki tu usse pyaar krti h.

Tanu- ahana mujhe pareshan mt kr..(acts) she is also feels for rishi but don't accept

Acha mujhe ye file deni h me ja rhi hu

She leaves

In Bedi house

Tanu pushes the bell

Yuvi opens the door

Yuvi- tanu tum yah

Tanu- ha wo me rishi ko ye file dene ayi th..aap de dena use

Yuvi- are tum hi de dena..wo upar terrace pe h..

Tanu- ok

Rishi is standing in front of the moon..n smile

Manpreet- kya hua bhai..is chand me aisa kya h..jo har kabhi ise dekhte rhte ho..isme kahi tanu to nahi dikh rhi

But rishi didn't reply

Manpreet shocked

Manpreet in his mind..bhai ko kya hua

Manpreet holds rishi's shoulders n said bhai aap thik to ho na

Rishi- tu pagal ho gaya h tere samane acha bhala khada hu

Manpreet- bhai aj mene tanu ka naam liya per apne mujhe nahi data

Rishi takes deep breath n looks at the moon

Rishi- ha kyuki me phle ye samaz hi nahi paya ki me tanu se kitna pyaar krta hu

Manpreet-(shocked) really sach me aap tanu se pyaar..

Rishi- ha or jb jb me is chand ko dekhta hu na mujhe uska chehra is chand me nazar ata h

Manpreet- per bhai apko kb pta chala ki aap tanu se pyaar krte ho

Rishi- us din hospital me..jb mujhe aisa laga ki me use kho dunga..meri jaan nikl gayi th..aisa laga use kuch hua na to me bhi jinda nahi rh paunga

Manpreet-(happy) n hug bhai me apke liye bahut khush hu

Suddenly something is dropped..both sees behind..that is tanu..she is listen everything

Manpreet- acha bhai me chalta hu

Tanu slowly slowly came near to rishi n her heart is beating very fast

Tanu- rishi..tum..wo

Suddenly Rishi kept his finger on her lips

Rishi- kuch mt kaho tanu..ha..ha me tumse bahut pyaar krta hu.. hamesha tumhare bare me sochta hu..tum hoti ho to sb kuch acha lagta h or tum nahi hoti ho to me pareshan ho jata hu..me tumhare bina nahi rh sakta

He cups her face

Or me janta hu ki tum bhi mujhse bahut pyaar krti ho..krti hona

Tanu holds rishi's hand n say ha. Krti hu n smile

Their eye lock..

suddenly rain falling..n rishi runs from there

But Tanu is still there..she is happy n spreads her arms n dancing..

Rishi sees that n came closer to tanu..tanu hesitated n goes but rishi held her hand n pulling his side.. she collides with him..her heart is beating very fast..n because of shyness she closed her eyes..

Rishi hugged her n some time later he removes her side lines hair n kissed on her neck..tanu shivering..she jerked to him n running..but rishi holds her hand again n asking for a dance..both r dancing

Ha hasi ban gaye..

After dancing their eye lock.. rishi cups her face n kissed on her forehead, both side of cheeks.. when he moves towards on her lips..tanu jerks n running from there..

Rishi is running behind her n calling tanu..tanu

Ps: wo word for late...ur brilliant cotton candy..ur update is fabulous.. don't judge urself..u r awesome all the time..n wo word for u arya, vinushi, paru, teardrops..for liking our updates..n wo word for any mistakes..I hope u liked this..n song is my fav..n last scene is copied by kasam because that was my fav..if it's long so wo word for that

Edited by Smita_rawat - 6 years ago

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Gopika

@gopsss

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Posted: 6 years ago

#126

Rishi goes behind Tanu... Tanu turns n see Rishi... He stops there... She winks at him n laughs... Rishi gave an expression of getting shot... She runs away...
Khurana house
Tanu rushed to her room...
Ahana is enjoying rain through window...
T(with tears of happiness):Ahana... Ahana...
A:kya hua di??? Why r u so wet??? Aur teri yeh khushi!!!!
T:ahana woh...woh...
A:kya woh???
T:ahana... Rishi loves me...
A(with excitement):kya???
T:haan ahana woh mujhse pyaar karta h...par woh bhi meri tarah yeh nhi samajh rha tha...
Ahana in excitement goes n goes Tanu... N twirls her...
A(by teasing):teri tarah nhi samajh rha tha matlab... Tujhe pehle hi usse pyar ho gaya tha😉???
T: Woh...woh... Kisi se mat batana... Haan... Mujhe pehle hi usse pyar ho gaya tha...
A:accha... Meri bholi bhali di ko pehle hi pyar ho gaya tha!!! Phir kyu tu accept nhi ki???
T:woh... Mujhe laga sirf mujhe hi usse pyar h... I thought its one sided... Par jab main Rishi k muh se yeh sab suna...mujhe nhi janti main kitni khush hun...
A:aww meri pyari si behan ko sharam aa rahi hai!!!
T(trying hard to control blushing):chal yahan se...
A:main chalti hu... Abhi toh tujhe privacy chahiye na... Ok... Par sapne dekhne k pehle apne kapde change karna... Warna u cant go office... Apne Rishi k saath romance karna mushkil hota h...😉...
T(☺️):Ahana... Tu bhi...
Tanu goes n change her dress...
Rishi's room
ManVi comes to room... Rishi was sneezing...
Y:Rishi yeh sab sach h kya??? Tu teri feelings accept ki???
M:yeh koi sawal hai kya??? Dekho Yuvi bhai...bhai sneez kar rha hai... Matlab...ek rain dance bhi kiya h!!!
ManVi giggles...
R:Chhote...
Y:bolo Rishi... Ab tum sab accept ki???
R:haan... Now only I came to know that I am in love with Tanu...
Y:yeh sab hum bhot pehle hi samajh gye the... Did Tanu also accepted it???
Just then ManVi sees that Rishi is lost somewhere... N smiling as dreaming someone...
ManVi giggles...
ManVi: Apni Tanu ke sapnon men h...

PS:Superb part Lemon... Really sorry dear for late... Now a days my network connection is very poor... Aww that last part!!!! Rishi realised his feelings... Caring Rishi... Loved it to the core dear... Hats off u dear!!!! Wo word for ur compliment even mine was worthless...

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Gopika

@gopsss

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: paru000
Hayee cotton candy and lemon. What a awesome update. Both update is super. Rishi taking tanu to hospital and everyone coming to hospital . And thank God tanu is fine tanshi emotional moment family emotional moment. All these made me very emotional. And while reading your updates really feel like kasam should not have ended. Even now missing tanshi krasha very much. Cotton candy your update is not at all boring. Love u cotton candy and lemon and miss u both very much.

Wo word paru for liking our updates... Yeah really missing Kasam, TanShi n KraSha... Kasam is only show which is so close to my heart... Wo word Choi moi for ur compliments... Miss u too...

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paru000

@paru000

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Posted: 6 years ago

#128

Hayee what an update. Kasam wali feeling. Manpreet teasing rishi tanshi care for each other and at last tanshi confession manvi ahana all getting happy by hearing this everything is just perfect. And lemon the dance is mine favourite also. Cotton candy and lemon beautiful update and waiting waiting. 😊

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Smita

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Posted: 6 years ago

#129

Superb part cotton candy😛 ahana teasing to tanu n manvi teasing to rishi mesmerizing😛Wo word for cotton candy n paru😛

Wo for liking updates .. I feel no one has come to read update.. So i was quit to come hear.. But today when I came here.. Happy to see both of u😊😊 I missed u so so much guys😊

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Gopika

@gopsss

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#130

Originally posted by: Smita_rawat
Superb part cotton candy😛 ahana teasing to tanu n manvi teasing to rishi mesmerizing😛Wo word for cotton candy n paru😛
Wo for liking updates .. I feel no one has come to read update.. So i was quit to come hear.. But today when I came here.. Happy to see both of u😊😊I missed u so so much guys😊

Oh really wo word Lemon for not coming... Ur efforts n writing skills r really appreciative...👏 wo word dear for liking it❤️!!! I will come to forum at least once a day... Don't quit writing dear😭... I'm really missing ur stories...

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