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Posted: 6 years ago
In the midnight
Rishi cups tanu's face n kiss on her cheek.. Suddenly manpreet pushes him..
Manpreet- bhai.. Chii.. Aap kya kar rhe ho..
Rishi wake up n see..
Rishi- I'm sorry chote.. Wo me sapne me tanu ko dekh rh th
Manpreet- ha or mujhe tanu samaz ke mujhe kiss kr rhe th.. Agar meri nind nhi khulti to pta ni kya kya krte.. Ab aap ke paas sona kathre se khali nahi h
Rishi- are nhi chote.. Mujhe maaf kr de.. Ab aisa nahi hoga.chal soja..
Manpreet- aj maaf kiya first time th.. Next time nahi karunga..
Manpreet sleep in a minute but rishi trying to sleep.. N when he closed his eyes tanu face comes in front of him..
Tanu.. Tum kyu mere paas nahi ho.. Suddenly manpreet put his hand on him.. Rishi removes his hand.. Dekho ise kaise so rh h.. Gade gode bech ke.. Mujhe apne bed pe ab tu nahi chahiye.. Aise hath jo tune rakha th wo tanu ko rakhna chahiye.. Ye jagah ab tanu ki h.. Kya karu bahut yaad aa rhi h tanu ki.. Plz aa jao tanu.. Suddenly clicked his fingers idea.. Wo nahi aa skti per meto ja skta hu waha.. Me aa rh hu tanu..
He stands n runs outside.. Manpreet sees him n stop him.. Bhai kah ja rhe ho..
Rishi- me tanu se milne ja rh hu..
Manpreet- are aadhi raat ko.. Bhai phle bhi hum dono gaye the Or fas gaye the.. Kl mil lena tanu se.. Wo bhi abhi so rhi hogi
Rishi- dekh chote mujhe tanu se abhi or isi baqt milna h.. Me pagal ho jaunga.. Use nahi dekha to..me ja ke rahunga.. Jo hoga wo dekha jayega
Rishi runs outside..
Manpreet- are bhai.. Suno.. Manpreet also goes behind him
Rishi n manpreet enter into tanu's room by window..
Manpreet- bhai hum yah aa to gaye per inme se tanu kon h.. Dono ne chadar dali hai
Rishi- chup kr.. Waise bhi wo purani jagah per hi so rhi hogi na..
Manpreet- ha bhai..
Rishi- ab tu yahi khada rahega
Manpreet- ha ha.. Me room ke bahar khada hu.. Taki koi aye to me apko alert kr dunga..
Rishi removes blanket n shocked that she is ahana..
Ahana murmuring dii kya kr rhi h sone de na
Rishi hides n say kya kr rha hai rishi.. Agar isne tujhe dekh liya hota to aj to pakka mera muh tod deti

Rishi comes near to tanu n removes blanket..his heart beats very fast..he deep breaths N said in his mind.. Is chand ki roshni me kitni pyaari lag rahi ho.. Bilkul chand ki tarah.. Mera chand.. Ab sukun mila mujhe.. Pta nhi kya ho rh th mujhe.. Man to kr rha hai puri raat tumhe aise hi dekhta rahu.. He slowly diverts his hand on her head.. N kiss on her cheek..

On the other side manpreet thinking bhai kya kr rhe honge kitni der ho gayi h.. Koi aa na jaye..jaldi karo bhai
That time bani goes to the kitchen.. She sees manpreet.. She shouting chor chor
Manpreet runs inside the room
Here when rishi moved to other cheek.. Tanu wake ups n shouting..
Rishi- tanu..tanu me hu rishi..
Ahana also wake up.. Kya hua dii..she shocked to seeing rishi
Tanu also shocked n asking tum yaha kya kr rhe ho
Rishi- kya kr rha hu.. Me tumse milne aya th..
Tanu- ye milne ka konsa time h.. Kl mil lete
Rishi- mujhe nind nhi aa rhi thi.. Bus tumse milna th.. Bus tumhaari yaad aa rhi thi
They sees each other n their eye lock..
Manpreet- bhai hame abhi jana hoga.. Chachi ne mujhe dekh liya hai
Rishi- Or Tu ye ab bta rh h
Ahana- dii.. Isse phle koi yah aye.. Inhe chupana hoga.. Rishi tum bathroom me chup jao.dii kya kr rhi h jaldi kr
Tanu holds rishi's hand n enter in to the bathroom..
Ahana holds manpreet hands n covers by the curtain n told chup chaap yahi khade rhna.. Bilkul bhi awaz mt krna..
Manpreet- are per me bhi bathroom me chup jata huna
Ahana- are buddhu.. Wah un dono akele time spend krne do
Manpreet- ohh..
In the bathroom
Tanu- acha tum yah Chup jao me bhar jati hu
Rishi holds tanu hands n pulling his side.. Tum kaha ja rhi ho
Tanu- rishi mera hath chodo mujhe jane do
Rishi- me nhi chodunga..ye achi jagah h romance krne ke liye
Tanu- tumhe aisi situation me bhi romance sujh rh h
Rishi- ha.. Rishi hugs her
Tanu- rishi kya kr rhe ho.. Chodo..
Tanu pushed him n want to going outside but rishi holds her again..
Bani enter into the room with whole family..
Tanu say something but rishi keeps finger on her lips.. N say Chup rho.. Agar tum bahar gayi na to me bhi chalunga.. Isliye Chup chaap mere sath raho
Tanu- tum mujhe black mail kr rhe ho
Rishi- ha jb ghee sidhi ugli se nahi nikalta.. To ugli tedi krni padti hai
Tanu- tum ek no ke lafanter ho
Rishi- kya kah tumne me lafanter hu.. Abhi batata hu lafanter kya hota hai.. Suddenly rishi keeps his lips on her head..
Tanu- tumne mujhe kiss kiya
Rishi- tumne mujhe lafanter kyu kah..
Tanu- me to kahungi tumse.. Lafanter lafanter lafanter.. Adhi raat me kissi ladki ke room me ghus ater ho.. Lafanter kahi ke..
Rishi keeps hand on her lips..n said chup..agar ab lafanter kh na..phir me kya karunga mujhe bhi nhi pta.. Soch lo..
Tanu hearing some voice from outside side..
Rishi- kya hua
Tanu- sshh.. Sunne do bahar kya ho rha hai

Ps: wo word for u cotton candy for appreciating me..n wo word for late.. Rishi dream scene mera fav scene hai. .isliye mene ise likha hai..
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Posted: 6 years ago
Hayee lemon what an update lafanter rishi always want tanu near to him. Pls update soon. Cotton candy where are u
Come update soon.
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Posted: 6 years ago
Wo word for u paru😊. .rishi hamesha tanu ke sath hi rhna chahta hai😉.. Where r u cotton candy. Missing u so much come na yaar😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
Out side
All came to Tanu's room...
B:Maine dekha tha... He will be here...
V:par yahan koi nhii dikh rahe hain...
S:Par Tanu aur Ahana kahan h??? Tanu... Ahana...
V:Wash room me hogi...
B:dono ek sath???
V:poochte hain... Beta Tanu tu kahan h??? Ahana...
In washroom
T:Oh God pura parivar yahan aaye h... Ab main kya karungi...
R:Batao unko hum log yahan h...
T:hum log???
R:main aur tum...
T:haan good idea chal batate hai...
By saying this Tanu slaps Rishi in his shoulder...
T:phir kyu yahan aaye h...
R:hide karne k liye...
Just then come to his senses what was he saying... He bites his tongue...
R:kya karun tumhare sath rahkar ab mujhe thodi bhi akal nhii h...
T:Rishi...
Rishi laughs n side hugs Tanu...
R:just kidding...
Tanu's father asks frm outside... V:Tanu...beta... Tu andar ho???
Rishi signals Tanu to answer...
T:Jii baauji... Koi baat h bauji???
V:nhii beta... Hum sirf tujhe dekhne aaye hai... Waise ahana kahan h beta???
T(herself):Ahana??? Woh wahan nhii??
R:where is ahana???
T:mujhe kaise pata??? Bhagvan woh kahan h???
Rishi says something in tanu's ears...
T:yeh jhoot h na??? Par abhi koi aur rasta nahin he...
T(to her father): She went to kitchen for drinking water...
V:oh theek hai beta
B:par main abhi tak wahan thi na... Main usse nhii dekha...
V:shayad woh Abhi to gayi hogi...
S:Haan... Yah koi nahi hai... Hum chalte hai...
Veerendr:Haan...
B:Par maine dekha tha... First we should check...Uske bad decide karna koi h ya nhii...
All start searching... At d same time AhaMan are still behind the curtain...
A:Sirf tumhari wajah se mujhe apne hi ghar men...
M:Apne hi ghar men???
A:Chipane pada...
M(in angry): Meri wajah se?? Main aise kya kiya???
A:aadhi raat ko koi aise ladkiyon k kamre men aata h kya???
M:main?? Maine kab aaya??? Main nhii Rishi bhai ne aise kiya!!! Unki koi galti nhii???
A:Rishi Tanu di se pyaar karta h... Usko di k bina neend nhii aati...isliye usne yahan par aaya... Par tum zaroor us Neha se flirt karne aya hoga...
M:Haan main us Neha se flirt karne k liye tumhare kamre me aaya hu... Bhagvan is moti k dimag men kya chal raha h... Isko thodi si akal dijiye...
A:Kya mujhe akal ki kami h???Sukde tille... Tu ne kya socha... Muh tod dungi main tera...
Unknown to her, her voice was increasing...
B:Yeh ahana ki awaz h na???
Both AhaMan gets shocked...

PS: Superb update Lemon... Wo word dear... The dream scene is my fav... Aww lovely update dear... Wo word Choi moi... I too missed u guys...
Edited by gopsss - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
Cotton candy super piece of update
Ah man nokk jok is always superb. Pls update soon. Okk bye dear

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Posted: 6 years ago
Get guys keep updating ...love all the update
Jaldi jaldi update karo wait nahi hota mujhse
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When bani reached near to curtain... That time neha reached n said..
Neha- are mummy..
Bani scared because her voice
Bani- ohh..tune mujhe dara diya
Neha- dara diya..kaise..chalo chodo..Kya aapko bhi na adhiraat ko kya kya dikhta rhta h.. Kahi aapko wo hallucination to nahi ho gya..
Bani- kya.. Hello cello
Neha- are mummy hallucination.. Yani ki confusion.. Yani ki aapko laga ki koi wah h Or wah to koi th hi nahi.. Mujhe lagta h aap nind me the
Bani hits on her shoulder
Neha- kya yaar mummy kyu maara
Bani- apni maa per tujhe biswas nhi.. Mujhe pta nhi kya kh rhi h hillu billu.. Mene dekha th kissi ko
Neha- wo hallucination hota h.. Or yah koi th to kh h.. Faltu me sbki nind kharab kr di
Bani- chup kr.. Mujhe is curtain ke piche se ahana ki awaaz ayi th
Neha- kya wo moti ahana is curtain ke piche kyu chupegi
Bani- wahi to mujhe dekhna h
She moves near to the curtain
On the other side
Tanu- rishi mujhe bahr jane do..
Rishi- pr kyu.. Tumhe mera sath acha nahi lag rha h
Tanu- aisi baat nahi h.. Pta nahi ahana kh h.. Kahi aisa to nhi manpreet ko chupte hue wo fas gayi ho.. Isliye mujhe jane do
Rishi- ok jao
Tanu comes outside..
Here ahaman is tensed.. N bani holds curtain that time tanu said loudly aap sb yah itni raat me.. Bauji, ma, chacha, chachi.. Kya hua??
Sarda- kuch nhi bani ko aisa laga ki koi ghar me ghus aya h
Bani- are mene sach me kissi ko dekha th.. Or wo isi room ki taraf aya th
Tanu- pr yah to koi nahi h.. Aapko koi galat fehmi hui hogi
Bani- mujhe koi galat fehmi nhi hui h.. Jb mene use dekha uske baad teri bhi to chillane ki awaaz ayi th.. Ab ye mt khna wo bhi galat fehmi th.. Wo to sbne suna th
Tanu-ha wo kamre me chuha ghus aya tha.. Isliye chikh nikl gayi th
Bani- acha..to kh h chuha
Tanu- chala gaya..
Bani- ek baat bta chuhe ke sath ahana bhi chali gayi kya
Tanu- mene bataya na.. Wo kitchen me gayi h pani lene
Bani- acha to wo ab tk kyu nhi ayi
Tanu- wo kuch khane lagi hogi.. Ma ahana ko raat me bahut bhook lagti h.. Or wo pani ke bahane kuch khane chali jati h.. Aj jaroor icecream khane gayi hogi..
Bani- icecream.. Wo mere hisse ki bhi icecream kha jayegi moti.. Kha kha ke kitni moti hoti ja rhi h
Bani realized what she said
Bani- wo mera khne ka mtlab h.. Itna khati h na isliye moti hoti ja rhi h
Ahana angry when bani called her moti
Ahana in her mind aj agar dii ko nhi bachana hota na to aj to tera me muh tod deti chachi..
Virendra- lagta h bani ko galat fehmi hui th.. Chalo sb chalte h
When everyone moves outside.. Something is drop mistakenly by rishi..
Virendra- ye Kaisi awaaz th
Bani- dekha.. Dekha bhaisaab.. Me galat nahi thi.. Is tanu ne jarur kissi ko is bathroom me chupa rakha h.. Ye awaaz bathroom me se ayi h
Sarda- ye tu kya kh rhi h bani.. Hos me to h na meri beti aisa kuch nhi kr sakti
Bani- to thik h na parjai.. Bathroom me dekh lo dudh ka dudh pani ka pani ho jayega.. Hai ki nahi
Rishi scared.. N his mind.. Ye mene kya kr diya.. meri bajah se meri tanu ko kya kya sunna pad rhe h is chipku chachi se
Tanu- aisa kuch nhi h.. Chachi mene kissi ko nahi chupaya hai.. Wo.. Wo Wohi chuha hoga jarur.. Bahut pareshan kr rakha h usne.. Apko mujh pe biswas nahi h.. Chaliye aap khud hi dekh lijiye
Tanu holds bani hands n comes near to the bathroom
Tanu- chaliye khud hi dekh lijiye.. Aapko pta chal jayega.. Ki koi nahi h chuha h
Rishi in his mind ye tanu kya kr rhi h.. Kahi ye mujhe sabak to nahi sikhana chahti..Aj to Tu gaya rishi
Bani in her mind ye tanu to bahut confident me h.. Iska mtlb ander koi nahi h.. Chuha hi h.. Chuhe se to mujhe bhi dar lagta h.. Or koi nahi mila to parjai sunayegi wo alag
Tanu- kya hua chachi.. Kya soch rhi h
Bani- kuch nhi beta.. Me bhi na jane kya kya bol gayi.. Wo kya h na tujhe apni beti manti huna.. To bus tension ki wajh se muh se nikl gya
Sarda- to soch samaj kr bolna chahiye.. Kisske baare me bol rhi ho.. Meri betia mera guroor h
Virendra- ab bahut ho gya.. Raat bahut ho gayi h.. Sb jake so jao
Everyone goes outside n tanu closed the door.. N deep breath
Rishi, ahaman comes out..
Rishi- wah kya acting krti ho.. Mujhe to laga aj tum mujhe marwa ke rahogi.. Per kya acting krti ho.. Man gaya me tumhe
N he holds her shoulder.. She jerks n said
Tanu- aj jo bhi hua na tumhari wajah se hua h
Ahana- ha rishi.. Aj sb tumhari wajah se hua h.. Dekho rishi agar ab tumhe kabhi bhi dii se milne ka man kare to.. Tum behichak aa jana kabhi bhi per is sukde tile ko mt leke ana plz
Tanu- muhje laga tu ise mana karegi.. Pr tu to
Manpreet- tum kon hoti ho ye decide krne wali moti kahi ki.. Tum lucky mano apne ko ki aj tum itne handsome admi ke sath itni paas khadi thi
Ahana- kya.. Me Or lucky.. Apni sakal dekhi h kabhi sukde tile.. Bada aya handsome.. Hahaha
Tanu- chup karo tum dono.. Abhi gaye h sb.. Tum dono ki awaaz sunkr yah aa jayenge..
Rishi- waise ahana thanku.. Shaali ho to tumhare jesi..
Tanu- ho gaya.. Ab tum dono jao..
Rishi- tum kitni unromantic ho
Tanu- rishi
Rishi- acha ja rh h.. Chal chote.. Kl milte h.. N he gives flying kiss.. Bye jana..

PS: wonderful update cotton candy... N wo word for liking paru, vinushi, n cotton candy.. N wo for late..
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ManShi leaves from there...

T(with a smile):Paagal...

A:Dii... Mere jiju k mazak mat udao.....

T:Oh... Matlab abhi saali aur jiju ek hi team mein???

A:Haan...

T:Ok... Mujhe koi problem nahi hai... Tum saali, aur jiju ek saath milkar mera mazak udana... Ok... Ab main tum logon ki team k bahar hu na...(with fake anger) Chal abhi se main tujhse baat nhi karungi...

A:Aww meri dii mujhse katti h...

By saying this ahana goes close to Tanu and hugs her...

A:I love u dii... I love u d most in this world... Nahi tu hi h meri duniya...

T(with teary eyes):Ahana...

Both sisters hug each other tight...

T:Teri aur tere jiju ki wajah se aaj meri neend toot gayi... So no more stories... Lets sleep...

A:Dii... Tu phirse shuru ki...

T:is mein kya hai jhooth... Main to sach hi keh rahi hu... Aaj kya kya hua tha yahan!!!

A:tu kyun mujhe lecture de rhi ho?? Tell it to ur Rishi...

T:tum dono ek team wale h na!!!

A:Dii...

T:Ok...ok... Chalo so jate...

Both of them went to bed... Ahana sleeps in a little time... Tanu is still in d hangover of Rishi...

ManShi room

M:bhai... Jab aap agli baar Tanu se milne jate h...tab mujhe mat bulao...

R(with confusion):Maine kab tujhse kaha mere saath aane ko?

M:Aap nhii kaha...par chote hu main aapka... Kabhi bhi aapko akele mat chodunga...

R:chodna mat... Hamesha aise hi karna... Saath aa ke problems mein phasayena...

By saying this Rishi taps Manpreet in his shoulder...

M:bhaiii...

Rishi laughs n says him to sleep...

M:haan bhaii so jaten... Kal aapko Tanu se milna h na...

Rishi was about to kick manpreet... Manpreet runs out...

R:baat to sachi h... Mujhe subah subah uthkar Tanu se milna h...

Manpreet sees Rishi n chuckles...

Khurana house

Bani is still thinking something... Neha goes to her n asks...

N:Mumma... Mummaaa...

B:Haan... Kyun chilla rahi ho???

N:Mujhe laga aap yahan par nhii h...

B:teri aankhon mein kya h?? Main yahan hi khadi hu phir bhi chillake baat kar rhi h...

N:Oh mumma!!! Mere kehne ka matlab yeh h ki aap yahan h par aapke man kahin aur jagah pe h...

B:haan woh to baat h...

N:aap kya soch rhi thi???

B:main Tanu ke bare men soch rhi thi... Us Pawan se kuch nhii hoga... Dekh... Abhi bhi Tanu us Rishi k saath hi h...

PS:Superb update Lemon!!! I was reading it again n again... Ahana n Rishi bond... Manpreet... Loved it to the core dear... Wo word Gilehri n Choi moi... Really wo word lemon for late...gopsss2019-02-26 10:54:54

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Next morning
Rishi embrace tanu.. n say I love u tanu, tanu
Rano comes n say rishi rishi..kya badbada rh hai ye nind me
Rishi in his dream n tight hug a pillow n murmuring..
Manpreet sees that n saying mom aap yah kya kr rhi h
Rano- me to bus yuhi ayi th..per ye rishi kuch badbada rh h..mujhe sunne de
Manpreet- are mom wo to bhai roz hi nind me bad bad krte h..koi nayi baat nhi h
Rano-tu chup kr.. mujhe sunne de .. mujhe lag rh h ye kisi ladki ka naam le rh h..
Manpreet- are mom aisa kuch nhi h
Rano- tu chup kr..agar ab phir bola na tu to dekh lena
Manpreet in his mind are bhai aj apni pol kholke rahoge kya..uth bhi jao ab
Rano comes near to rishi for hearing but that time rishi opens his eyes..n he sees rano n shouting...
Rishi- mom aap kya kr rhe ho..dara diya..waise aap kya kr rhi th
Rano- me to yah tujhe uthane ayi th..per tu nind me kuch badbada rh th..kya badbada rh th tu
She raise her eyebrows
Rishi- me..me kya badbada rh th..mom me to kuch nhi kh rh th..he acts..oh no
Rano-kya hua
Rishi-mom mujhe late ho rh h..aj bahut important meeting h.. chaliye hatiye..me fresh hoke ata hu
Rano-meeting kaisi meeting..
Rishi- bahut important meeting h..pucho manpreet se
Manpreet- ha mom bahut important meeting h..ye nhi jayenge to bahut bada nuksan ho jayega bhai ka..
Rano- itni important meeting h..nhi jayega to lakho ka nuksan ho jayega kya
Manpreet saying slowly nhi jayenge to bhai ke dil ka nuksan ho jayega..
Rishi gives intense look to manpreet..
Rano-kya kh tune
Manpreet- wo..wo mene kh ki bahut nuksan ho jayega..
Rano- acha..acha..tu jaldi ready hoja..me breakfast lagati hu
Rano leaves n rishi takes deep breath n said bach gaya..
Manpreet- ha bhai bacha liya mene.
Rishi hits manpreet
Rishi- tune bachaya..jhuthe.kya bol rh th tu
Manpreet- kya bhai me nhi hota to mom sb sun leti..or aap mujhe daat rh ho
Rishi- acha acha thanku..or tune mom ko kaise roka..jutha n hits .. agar meri nind nhi khulti to mom sb sun leti
Manpreet- are mene mom ko rokne ki bahut koshish ki th..per unhonne meri nhi suni..or aap mujhe hi kh rh ho.. mujhe aap se baat nhi krni
Rishi- ohh..acha sorry ab nhi kahunga..
Manpreet- thik h
Manpreet hugs tightly to rishi..
Rishi- ab aise hi rhega kya..chal hut teri bhabhi se milne jana h..tune hi kh th meeting h n rishi smiles

Rishi reaches the office
In Rishi's cabin
Rishi- kb ayegi..ab intejar nhi ho rh..
Manpreet sees rishi's condition n sing a song
Intehaa ho gayi intejaar ki...ayi na kuch khabar..apke yaar ki..n beats the table
Rishi hits manpreet n said chup kr waise hi mera mood off h..or tu besoora
Manpreet- kya bhai me to apka mood divert krne ki koshish kr rh hu or aap mujhe besoora kh rhe ho..
Rishi- tere gaane se mera sir dard suru ho gaya h..or ye tanu bhi ab tk nhi ayi
Manpreet- bhai per wo abhi itni jaldi kaise ayegi..abhi to 9 hi baje h..wo roj 10 bje ati h
Rishi- ha yaar me usse milne ke liye itna desperate th ki time pe dhayan nhi gaya..per jaise me before timing aya wo nhi aa skti..uska man nhi krta milne ka
Manpreet- thori der ki hi to baat h bhai..ati hogi
Somebody knocks the door
Rishi- aa jao tanu..
But he is peon..sir apko kuch chahiye..
Manpreet- sir ko jo chahiye wo aap ke paas nhi h..aap jao
Peon- aisa kya chahiye..agar market se lana hai to me le aunga
Manpreet- wo market me nhi milta
Peon- aisi kya cheez h
Rishi- shut up..tum dono ka ho gaya..aap jaye mujhe kuch nhi chahiye
Manpreet- bhai meto bus yuhi..
Manpreet teasing rishi
At 10 am
Rishi- abhi tk nhi ayi..ane do me aisa datunga..nhi.. nhi datunga.. agar use meri parwah nhi to me kyu kru.. me usse baat hi nhi kahunga
Manpreet- sach me bhai aap tanu se baat nhi karenge
Rishi- ha nhi kahunga..chal ab tu ja mujhe bahut kaam h
When manpreet opens the door.. tanu stands there..
Manpreet- tanu tum aa gayi..n he smile..aao aao tumhara hi intejar th
Tanu enters into the cabin
Manpreet- bhai dekho tanu aa gayi
Rishi is happy n say tanu tum aa gayi
Tanu- ha wo..me..
Manpreet said in between
Manpreet- bhai aapne to kh th..ki aap tanu se baat nhi karenge
Rishi gives fake smile n gives sign to stop
Tanu- rishi ne tumse ye kh ki wo mujhse baat nhi karenga..kyu?
Rishi- nhi nhi ye to mazak kr rh h..
Rishi said slowly to manpreet..tu meri love story ko shuru hone se phle end kyu krwana chahta h
Tanu wants to listen but she can't listen anything..in her mind kuch to pak rh h in dono ke beech
Tanu- manpreet tumne aisa kyu kh ki rishi mujhse baat nhi karenga?
Manpreet- wo kb se tumhara wait kr rhe he..or tum ab ayi ho
Tanu- ohh
Rishi-ye juth bol rh h.. iski baat mt sunna
Tanu- acha..to kya tumhari baat sunu..mene tumhare liye kya kya nhi kiya..pta h jaldi uthi or kaise kaise bahane bana ke sbko convince kiya.. specially chachi ko bhi..or to or aj auto bhi kharab ho gaya th or me pedal ayi hu yah tk..kiske liye..she points a finger on him.. tumhare liye..phir bhi tum..me tumse baat hi kyu kr rhi hu.. mujhe tumse baat hi nhi krni
She moves to outside but rishi held her hand..
Rishi- sorry..ab aisa nhi hoga
But she jerked him n going outside..

Ps: superb part cotton candy..I loved it..n wo word for liking my part...n wo word for late

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Posted: 6 years ago
Superb part Lemon👏!!!! ManShi😉😆... Rishi waiting for Tanu... Wo word Lemon for not uploading d part... I had some issues with internet connection... Tonight I will try to update it dear😳...
Edited by gopsss - 6 years ago

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