Decent Love [TanShi SS] [last part on page 16]

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Ok guys i m trying to write an ss on tanshi...i will give you short update bcz its first time i m writing ss...
Guys i edited it its a new story doesnt belongs to kasam but few scenes will from kasam...

Part 1

A boy whose name is rishi lives in mumbai is an angry bird and a girl who also lives in mumbai is a beautiful and cheerfull girl and her name is tanuja who lives alone in house bcz her parents died when she was 3 years old and her chachi(neha) threw her out of house bcz she refuses to marry a boy her chachi choose for her...

Story starts from when rishi was going home and heading towards his car suddenly a girl came and strike with him because of too much bleeding from her head she became unconcious and falls before she touches the ground rsb caught her in his arms...

*wind*

Rsb was continuously staring at her...suddenly some goons came and said to rsb hand over this girl to us or otherwise we will shoot you...rsb who is an angry bird stares at them with an angry face...and he made tanuja sit on the front seat... rsb:come let me show you how to torture a girl...and the fight starts and offcourse rsb won and those goons run away...

Rsb was thinking what to do with her bcz she is unconcious and wouldnt be able to tell him who is she and where is her house...so he thought that he will take her to his home...he sat in the car and starts driving...

Next:tanuja wakes up and saw rsb sitting beside her...

Guys plzz ignore mistakes and mujhe bilkul sach sach batana k kesi thi story...😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: HayaZehra313

Ok guys i m trying to write an ss on tanshi...i will give you short update bcz its first time i m writing ss...

Its after tanu's death and rebirth...

Part 1

After 20 years...
Rishi who became angry bird and tanuja a beautiful and cheerfull girl who lives alone in house bcz her parents died when she was 3 years old and her chachi(neha) threw her out of house bcz she refuses to marry a boy her chachi choose for her...

Story starts from when rishi was going home and heading towards his car suddenly a girl came and strike with him because of too much bleeding from her head she became unconcious and falls before she touches the ground rsb caught her in his arms...

*wind*

Rsb was continuously staring at her...suddenly some goons came and said to rsb hand over this girl to us or otherwise we will shoot you...rsb who is an angry bird stares at them with an angry face...and he made tanuja sit on the front seat... rsb:come let me show you how to torture a girl...and the fight starts and offcourse rsb won and those goons run away...

Rsb was thinking what to do with her bcz she is unconcious and wouldnt be able to tell him who is she and where is her house...so he thought that he will take her to his home...he sat in the car and starts driving...

Next:tanuja wakes up and saw rsb sitting beside her...

Guys plzz ignore mistakes and mujhe bilkul sach sach batana k kesi thi story...😳

bohat interesting ha dear❤️ . am loving your punishment 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: mohsin.gamer33

bohat interesting ha dear❤️ . am loving your punishment 😆

hahaha soon i will love your punishment too...tum bhi bhot jld meri category mn ane wale ho phir maza ayega jb tumhe bhi punishment mile gi...😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Seems interesting I m also loving ur punishment 😆 but still understand ur problem aur mohsin best of luck
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Posted: 7 years ago
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i am loving ur writing dear.So excited for next update.Jaldi se update dena.
wase punishment rule se mujhe to bahut maza aa raha hai.Mast mast stories aur vms mil rahe hai.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice start Haya... Well I have confusion that is Tanuja's n Tanu's face same... Loved it waiting for next update
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Divya333

Nice start Haya... Well I have confusion that is Tanuja's n Tanu's face same... Loved it waiting for next update

oh shit i didnt thought about it i will correct my errors tomorrow...ye first time tha na is liye thori mistkes ho rhi hn...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wao yar ye punishment rule to mast hai haya ka talent bahir a gaya 😉 buht acha likha hai haya interesting plz continue
Or pm k liye buht wo 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: ManazzaShahid12

Wao yar ye punishment rule to mast hai haya ka talent bahir a gaya 😉 buht acha likha hai haya interesting plz continue
Or pm k liye buht wo 😆

😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Guys mne kuch changes ki hn start mn to read kr lena sirf start mn changes he baki sb same he...😳
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