Dil hai tumhara Tanshi FF updated pg 21 - Page 2

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Athough i didnt get good response I am updating part 2 if i didnt get response in this also this will be last.Thanks to all those who support me it realy means a lot .Thanks a lot.
Part 2

At morning tanu'home .
Tanu come to veeru and tell him that she wants to take the responsiblity of marrege hall.Veeru become happy that tanu want to move on in her life forgetting Rishi.He immediately agree for that.Tanu take blessing from her parents as well as good and ask Ahana that she will come or not.Ahana tell her that she has some work she will join from next day.Tanu leave.

At afternoon .
There was a knok at door Ahana open the door .Bedi family was at the door. She donot recognize them .Raj introduced himself and ask her name.Ahana reply in shock as yesterday they got mail that they will never come to India and today they are here.Ahana welcome them and call her parents.
A-Papa papa come fast look who had come.
V-Coming beta .
Then veeru and sharda come out.They saw Raj Rano.They were happy as well as shock .Raj hug veeru and got emotional.
Raj-we meet after 17 years .I am very happy.
Ve-I miss u.I am very happy that u come back
R-I miss u too.I meet ahana she is very quite as she was in childhood. Where is tanu?
Ve-Tanu had gone to marriage hall.By the way where is Rishi and manpreet. They didnt came.
R-No No they are coming .They miss there flight They are coming from next flight.They will be ther in 2 to 3 hours.
Ve-Oo that's good
They both start taking about there childhood.
After some time.
Manshi arrived in patiala.
M-So finally we reached here.Come lets to veeru ungle house .Dad send us the address.
R-We will go but after meeting some beautiful girls.
M-Wow what a plan. But we will not go in same way.
R-But why
M-Beacause if we go together every girl we look at u .They will not give any bhow to me.
R-ok as u wish
They go in different way.
Rishi by mistakly go to crowded market. Tanu was also in market with her freind who was her first client also. Rishi got frustrated due to crowd.Rishi was about to leave but suddenly he saw most beautiful things in his life.
He saw two eye.Those eye which he always used to see in her dreams. Those eye which make him forget every things around him.Those eye which make him desperate. Those eye which is most beautiful eyes in the entire world.Those eye which belong to tanu.He wanted to see the face who is owner of such a beautiful eye.But due to crowd he not able to see the face.He tried his best but that girl lost in crowd. He become upset and came out.
Suddenly Rishi feel a hand on his shoulder. He turn back.It was manpreet.
M-What happen to u bhi .
Rishi was about to tell man about that girl but stop
Rishi in his mind-If I tell chote about that girl he will make fun .At first I will search that girl and them i will tell chote.
Ma-what happen ?
R-Nothing, come lets go to veeru uncle hose.

Precape-Rishi not able to sleep due to those eyes.
Ahana heard manshi conversation and get angry.


That's part 2 hopefully u guys like this.plz comment and give ur reviews. 😛

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Part 3

They start their way to kuran'house. Whole way rishi not utter a single word .He was lost in those eye. Manpreet was surprise at Rishi'behavior. But he though that Rishi may got tired due to traveling for long hours.
They reach at kuran'house.
Man-Bhi finally we reach veeru uncle'house.
Rishi not listen him .As he was lost in his dream.
Man in loud sound-Bhi what happen to u.
Rishi come in his sence-what ,nothing had happen. Come let go inside .Otherwise we have face anger of our jalad dad.
They go inside. Raj introduced them.Sharda ask them for dinner as they may got tired after long journey.After dinner they went to sleep.Tanu didnt come home because next day there was sangeet of her best freind who is her first client also.Veeru and raj also went to marriage hall.
On the other hand Rishi was trying to sleep but he can't . He went near window and look and moon and start taking to him.
R-I donot what I am feeling after watching those beautiful eye.I had seen many beautiful eyes of many beautiful girls. But i never feel this type of restlessness. Why do i feel those eye are saying a lot to me.why I feel those eye was asking many question from me.Will i will see those eye again. Will i came to who was the girl whose only eye make me crazzy. yes i will.Now i promise to u i will surely find that girl. Now she is mine .I coming to u miss beautiful eye. U are mine.I will find u at any cost.
We will find her. A sound come from behind. Rishi turn and see manpreet was standing behind him
M-yes bhi we will find her.I also want to meet that girl whose eye make my bhi lost everything.
R-Chote I donot know i feel a conection to those eye.Thank you chote .I thought u will make fun so i didnt tell u .
M-I can never make your fun.
Both hug each other and went to sleep. With a difficulty Rishi sleep.
At morning Rano went to sharda and start her drama 😡 .
S-Rano why are you crying?
R-I love my son very much but i can not give him his happens.
S-What happen please tell me?May be I can help u.
R-You will help me.
S-yes I will help u .But please tell me what is matter.
R-Rishi love a girl very much. But rajji is against this marriage because of his promise to Veeru ji.He tell Rishi if he will not marry tanu and meet that girl again them raj ji will give all his money to poors. my Rishi love that girl so much that he will die without her.
Rano start crying loudly. Sharda become shock but he mange herself and say.
S-I am also a mother .I cam understand your pain .I promise u .I will do something for Rishi.


Precape-Veeru break Tanshi marriage and Tanshi meeting.


Here is part 3 .Please comment. It inspire me to write as I am not a writer and this is my first ff.
Please give some suggestions also.Thanks .
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