Dil hai tumhara Tanshi FF updated pg 21

Hi guys I am free now a day as my board exam had just finsh.so i am going to write on ff hope you like it 😉
Intro part
All the chacter are similar like the
show.
The story will strart from where Rono send e-mail to Veerendra {tanu's father} that rishi had selected an America girl and want to mary her...

Please coment me shall i write or not . I am not a good writer and I am writing first time as I have free time 😉 . I will update after some comment. Its my first time so please , please comment it will encourage me .

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I would like to see you writing

Ya sure waiting for your ff every one has skills bus confidence or khud pr faith ki zarorat hoti hai mujhe bhi nai ati writing but you should try it best of luck.

Hi guys here I am writing first part.This is my first time so if I do some mistake please ignore it and forgive me. 😉 .Hope you guys like it.

Part-1

In America

In Rono and Raj'bedroom.They are arguing .

Rono-we should not go to India.Rishi will never like an Indian girl. You know him.He not believe in marriage and all.He can't spend a single day with single girl.How can You except he spent his hole life with single girl .
Raj-Once rishi will see Tanu he will fall for her I am sure.
Rono-This is impossible.
Raj-you know na only Tanu is written in Rishi birth chart.She Will protect him .I had my friend .We will to India otherwise I will my all money to poors.This is my last decision. Got it. 😡
Rono thik something in his mind and say-What if Tanu herself reject rishi? Then what will you do.
Raj-I know Tanu will never reject Rishi but if she will reject . I will never force her and let her marry whoever she want.
Rano-Then ok we will go to India .
Raj become surprise that rano agree so soon .But he was very much happy .Raj thank rano and tell her to do packing. After Raj left Rono think in her mind -Now tanu will say no to this marriage.(we all know how is Rano 😡 ) she go to manshi room to tell them that they are going to India.

In manshi room
Both brother is flirting on phone.Then Rono come there.
Rono-Pack your bags.we are going to India.
Man-India for vacation. Why we are not going to pais .
R -we are not going for vacation .we are going for your Rishi bhi marriage.
Both manshi get shock.
Ri-Mom you know na I never want to get married.I am not going to India.
Ro-you have go to India otherwise .
Man-what mom.
Rano told them Raj'decision and told them the she will surely do something .She has a plan .But they have go India.
Ri-ok we will go to India but not get married.
Ro-I promise you .
Ri-ok we will go.
Rono left.
Man-Bhi why we agree to go India when you hate India?
Ri-chote we had flirted with many American girls. Now I want to do some masti with Indian girls.(wo krishna hai was playing in bg )
Man-what an ieda bhai .we will have fun with Indian girls 😉 .
Suddenly Rishi saw the moon and think why do I fill some one is rembering me.

In lndia
Tanu was sitting behind window and rembering her childhood movement with rishi.she was complete breaked after receiving e-mail.
Then ahana come there and conl her.
an-Di why are you upset this is his badluck.I am sure you will get a boy better than him
Ta-I am not upset because of that ,I am upset for maa ,papa.They are upset because of me.
A-This is not your fult .
T-I want do something for maa papa.
A-what?
T-I an decided to take the reseponcebilty of marriage hall.
A-It is relly a good decision .I will also help you.when we both are together we donot need anyone.
Both hug each other.

Precape :Bedi reach tanu house.Evreone was shock.

That's it .I know it could be boring .I have tried my best.
Please comment shall i cont. Or not plz comment. And if u donot like then please tell i will try to improve. 😆
Thanks .love u all

I loved ur starting part almost similar to thr show but really waiting for the nrxt part. I hope that you are not including the terrorist attack , I mean I guess becos ur precapvmade me to think like this. Anyways continue soon, Tanshi story is always a treat.

Originally posted by: Lornab

I loved ur starting part almost similar to thr show but really waiting for the nrxt part. I hope that you are not including the terrorist attack , I mean I guess becos ur precapvmade me to think like this. Anyways continue soon, Tanshi story is always a treat.

I know it is similar to the show but in this tanu parents will not die they will be alive till last.Thanks for comment.

iam silent reader of forum n liked ur update...plz continue...

I am getting very less response. plz comment shall i contune or it is so boring. If it so boring i will not continue it .

No u continue that next part it's awesome 😛yaar love reading ur story

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