Tanshi & Ahaman ' Kyunki Tum Hi Ho ' Updt Part 5 pg 23 - Page 9

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: --HANISA--



Thank you im going to do it


i am waiting for ur update.please update soon 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey please update the next part soon we are waiting for it please
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Posted: 8 years ago
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wow nice update...waiting for next
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Posted: 8 years ago
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HELLO GUYS REMEMBER ME I KNOW IM QUITE LATE WITH UPDT BUT DUE OF LACK RESPOND I WAS NOT INTERESTED TO UPDT MY STORY .


HOPE IT WONT REPENT


HERE WE GO


PART 4


In office rishi was in hurry when he will be with his pretty wife to be with her ... some time he lost on her thought n giggle all alone ... for rishi he always want to be with tanu to get her one glimpse of her ... when ever he remember her on closing his eyes he can see her with her sweet smile which make him forget all his tired or tension ...

His world is his wife n family .


Same to tanu she too wait when time will arrive for rishi will be back home then both can spend time together ... she too giggle n blush when she recall there romance moment


Tanu happiness lies on rishi happiness ... she love to spend time with raj rano n beeji also they used to chat do some jokes or even some times they play games like snake n ladders tanu n raj love to see how beeji n rano get angry when they get bite with snake or if they lose ... raj was a happy man on seeing how his DIL adjust with family n how she brought happiness in his house .

After rishi came home that times tanu give it to rishi both spends time together some times they go for drive after diner or cinema .


In univers neha decide to separate ahaman closeness ... she try every things to broke there friendship or put a rift between them ... during lunch time in canteen ahana was sitting with her girls friends while maanpreet with his ... neha join maanpreet ... she talk to him n ask if he dont like like who look hot like her ... one of maan friend reply he cant resist girl who look hot ... she try to get his attention but maanpreet was not interested in her talk n was watching what a guy was doing


A guy was teasing ahana with mirror on her eyes ... she try to avoid when she could not she went to him n slap him hard ... maanpreet was happy to see what she did .


Pawan hold ahana hand n twist it she get hurt n yell in pain ... he said since he like to harass girl who avoid him like her ... ahana get more furious she take glass water n pour on him n glare at him for his behavior n warn him to stay in his limit ... every one was watching the scene n laugh on him ... the guy said he wont leave her now ... he leave from there in furious .

Maan preet go to ahana n clap for her cleverness n braveness ... she glare at him to not rescue her if she would not used her brain .


M " Arey stop being angry what you think i would not come , when i know you can handle this small thing " .

A : saw neha on his table " How would you come , you were busy talking , you wont change na lafantar " .


M " Phir se lafantar , i dont link you call me lafantar , moti " .

A : in fume " How dare you call me moti han ? " .

M " Some one who is moti , toh moti hi kahege na moti " .


Both argument cont on pointing finger on other one on showing angry look until both fingers crosses to other one they look at each ever n then bluff out laughing n they hug ... neha fume on seeing them n leave from there ... later maanpreet drop ahana home like always .


Rishi return home he relax n do his routine like every day he spend some time first with his family then after diner he spend with tanu .


Later in tanshi room


Rishi went toward tanu n hug her from back ... put his face on her shoulder ... on his touch n being so close to her make her always become weak ... his touch still has affect on her .


Rishi in his romance mood " Tanu tell me how much you have been missing me ? " on saying so he peck her shoulder .

T : with close eyes n feel his touch " I cant express how much i have been missing you rishi , i was waiting when you will be with me n to hold me in your embrace , where i can forget everything just to feel your love for me " saying so she peck his arm .


Rishi was please to hear how much his wife love him ... he was blushing on knowing what he meant for her " Im happy to know how much my sweet wife love me n how she too wait for me to be with her , that why i love you a lot tanu , when ever i thought on us , i felt its like a dream which is coming true , being with me its like world has been surrender to me " he turn her to face him .


Tanshi get an intense look for over one tanu said " Every moment i spend with you its like my beautiful dream comes true , i can give my life for you but cant see you in pain , i will take all pain sorrows which come for you , my love for you is from is birth to another birth rishi " she put her head on his chest .




Rishi hug her in his embrace which she too respond the hug " Dont talk dies or think to leave me , i cant imagine my life without you being away from me , my life will not be the same , you are in my each breathe which i take , you are my life my love my happiness my strength my passion , you are around i can feel happiness n live , without you i will be devaster , we have been made for each ever , we are incomplete without other one , if needed i too can give my life for you but wont let any thing to warm you , i promise you that i wont leave your hand until im alive , you are my life my love tanu " he peck her forehead .


Later both sleep in each over embrace after talking laughing spend a good times ... next day morning tanu felt little weakness n felt as her head was spinning , she dont take it seriously n later do her routine work ... arrange rishi clothes n his stuff ... rishi who has the habit to saw her around him every morning he always hide his stuff then call her out for searching where he can be little romance with her before going to work .



THAT ITS GUYS HOPE YOU WILL APPRECIATE IT N WILL HIT LIKE BUTTON PLEASE DO YOUR COMMENT TOO .


NEXT PART TANSHI GOING TO BE PARENTS 😃.

THX HANISA 😃








Edited by --HANISA-- - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#85
Too cute four love birds 😳 and as usual one davil in their story 😡 very cute update 😳 don't dishearted please 👍🏼 i read your ff it's really good ye bhi or dusra wala bhi love it 👍🏼 keep it up 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#86
Love ur update. Please continue ur both ff and don't care about comments because there are very less member who comment.We love ur ff.Please don't stop writing and update soon.
PS:Update ur second ff also that is also very interesting.
Please keep updating ur both ff both r really good
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Posted: 8 years ago
#87
Great episode nd plzz don't stop writing. We love ur ff nd there r more silent readers then active members in our forum. So don't bother about comments. We love it nd will always support u
Edited by mommyangel55 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: ManazzaShahid12

Too cute four love birds 😳 and as usual one davil in their story 😡 very cute update 😳 don't dishearted please 👍🏼 i read your ff it's really good ye bhi or dusra wala bhi love it 👍🏼 keep it up 😃


Thank you but its not finish yet i just stop there i lost internent but will cont it
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Posted: 8 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: ayra1210

Love ur update. Please continue ur both ff and don't care about comments because there are very less member who comment.We love ur ff.Please don't stop writing and update soon.
PS:Update ur second ff also that is also very interesting.
Please keep updating ur both ff both r really good


Thank you but its not finish i have to complete this part
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Posted: 8 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: --HANISA--



Thank you but its not finish i have to complete this part


Oo complete it soon. 😆

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