FF: It’s In His Kiss: My Family on Pg 129(08/07) - Page 7

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Posted: 17 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: akaur

the prologue wz gr8
i cant wait 4 them 2 meet each other


thank you so much!!there is little more to the prologue!!will update soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: amneet89

didi ji...update...jaldi...



Asever 😳

Amneet 😉


😆will update now
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Posted: 17 years ago
#63


PART 2

Nikhila and Gauri were waiting at the Airport for Shiv to come out. Suddenly Shiv comes out, and he sees them standing and walks towards them.
Shiv: "Hey Mom!!!"
Nikhila hugs Shiv. Then Shiv looks at Gauri.
Shiv: "Hey Gauri!!!"
Gauri smiles at him.
Nikhila: "Lets go then?"
Shiv: "No, lets stay here and watch the planes take off and land."
Nikhila slightly hits Shiv: "Badmaash!!"
They start walking towards the car, when suddenly Gauri felt someone touching her fingertips, and when she looked down at her fingers; it was Shiv's hand. Gauri looks at Shiv, and he winks at her, and she starts blushing, and Shiv very slowly holds her hands and starts talking to Nikhila.

Shiv's house.

Shiv was getting irritated. Its been over an hour since they reached home, and Gauri hasn't said anything to him. When they were eating also, she didn't say anything. She is busy doing her "blushing-bride" act!!! Suddenly he sees Gauri walking towards the kitchen, he stands behind the pillar, and when she reached near him, he pulls her close. Gauri was about to scream when she realized it was Shiv.

Gauri: Rudr, what are you doing?
Shiv: Holding you and thinking about kissing you.
Gauri: Have u gone crazy?
Shiv: Yeah, crazy about u!!!
Suddenly Nikhila calls out for Gauri, and she pushes Shiv and runs off.

After sometime, Nikhila and Gauri were talking while Shiv had gone off to take a shower.

Nikhila gives Gauri a jewel box, "This is for you."
Gauri opens it and sees a diamond set, "Mummyji, I can't take this, this is too expensive."
Nikhila: " No Gauri, you have to take it."
Gauri: "But it is too expensive."
Nikhila: "If you don't take it, then I will feel bad. And I will think that you don't consider me as your mother."
Gauri was quiet for sometime, then "I will do one thing, I will give it to Shiv, he will keep it for me till we get married, then after marriage I will take it from him."
Nikhila: "But u won't take it now?"
Gauri: "No Mummyji."
Nikhila: "Okay, if that is what you want."

Shiv was putting on his shirt when he heard someone knocking on the door.
Shiv: "Yes?"
Gauri slightly opens the door and looks in and sees Shiv standing with water still dripping from his hair and he looked so sexy that her heart skipped a beat "Can I come in?"
Shiv: "Gauri, this is your room, you can come in whenever you want."
Gauri walks in. When Gauri had come inside the room, Shiv closes the door and locks it. Shiv slowly starts walking towards Gauri and Gauri starts moving back.
Gauri: "Actually, I wanted you to keep it for me till we get married."
Shiv takes it says "Okay" and keeps it on the nearby table and continues walking towards Gauri. Gauri suddenly feels the wall on her back and looks at Shiv and he starts smiling. He puts both his hands on her sides, blocking her escape. Gauri suddenly closes her eyes, Shiv shakes his head, and water droplets falls on her face, and Gauri opens her eyes to look at Shiv, and he comes closer to her and sips the water droplet which was on her cheeks, he continues to sip the water like that, and then he slowly reaches her lips. He slowly starts nibbling on her lower lip for sometime. Suddenly Gauri wraps her arms around him and they start kissing. Gauri felt like she was loosing her control, Shiv's kiss was too passionate, the way he was kissing her she realized how much he loves her, and everything was in his kiss.

It's been few weeks since Shiv had come. Gauri and Shiv are always together, and whenever they get chance they start making out.

Gauri was coming down the stairs when she sees Mahen sitting with Alok and talking.
Gauri: "Hello Uncle"
Mahen: "Hello beta!!! By the way Gauri, I am going over to Shiv's place from here, do you want to come?"
Gauri looks at Alok and starts smiling.
Alok: "Be back soon."
Gauri runs to him and hugs him: "Thanx Baba."

Shiv was sitting in his room, Mahen and Gauri walks in.
Mahen: "Shiv, you have been saying how much you miss Gauri ri8? So see, who I brought here for u!!"
Shiv starts smiling: "Hey!!!"
Gauri confused to Mahen: "We see each other everyday."
Mahen confused: "Then what was all those talks about missing her?"
Shiv: "Y I can't miss her, if I see her everyday?"
Mahen rolls his eyes: "Anyway, sign these papers and then you two can go wherever you want."
Shiv immediately signs the papers, "Bye Uncle."
They both start walking out, when Mahen calls out to Shiv, and tell him to get Gauri back home soon.

Shiv and Gauri were sitting in his car, when Shiv's cell starts ringing. It was Milind on the phone, and after talking Shiv hangs up the phone.
Shiv: " I have to go for Milind's wedding."
Gauri: "Can I also come?"
Shiv gets excited: "Sure!!"
Gauri thinks for sometime: "But Baba won't allow, specially to go with you."
Shiv: " We will make up something."
Gauri: "Like what?"
Shiv thinks for sometime: " We will tell Baba that, your friend is getting married and you have to go to Pune and I will tell Mom that since you are not here, I will go meet my friends in Mumbai."
Gauri: "Hmmmm but were will I stay?"
Shiv: " I will be staying at Milind's place, maybe you can stay with Prachi. I will talk to Milind"
Gauri: "Okay!!!"

Few days later, they reach Mumbai.

Shiv takes Gauri to a hotel, since Milind had asked them to come there, as their old friends were giving a party for Milind and Prachi.

Shiv was talking to Milind.
Milind: "So did you talk to your Mom?"
Shiv: "No!!!"
Milind: "When are you going to talk to her?"
Shiv: "I will…. Its just that Mom wants me to take over the business, as Mahen Uncle has been looking after it for so long, and I don't want to hurt her by telling her that I want to start another business with you."
Milind: "So did you talk to Mahen uncle?"
Shiv: "No, I only told Gauri about it."
Suddenly, Shiv heard someone behind him talking.
"Wow who is that chick?"
Shiv recognized the voice, it was Moksh, he turn to see who he was talking about, and realized he was talking about Gauri. The next minute Moksh was next to Gauri and soon they had gone off to the dance floor to dance. Shiv continued to watch them dance for sometime, and he was not liking the way Moksh was holding Gauri and soon Gauri started looking uncomfortable. Shiv decides to intervene.
Shiv: " Can I dance with my girl?"
Before Moksh could say anything, Gauri "SURE!!!" and she was in Shiv's arms. Moksh glared at them for few minutes and then walks off.
Shiv: "Why the hell were you dancing with him?"
Gauri shocked: "Because he is your friend."
Shiv takes a deep breath: "You dance with Milind, Samar, Vivan and Dhruv, there is no problem, but not him, he is a leech."
Gauri: "Sorry Rudr"
Shiv gives her a reassuring smile: "It's okay."
Shiv was still holding her really tightly.
Gauri starts smiling: "Where you jealous Rudr?"
Shiv: "No!!!"
Gauri suddenly kisses Shiv and Shiv looks at in her shock for a second as Gauri never kisses in public, then they start kissing. After sometime, they part and look at each other for sometime.
Shiv holds Gauri's hand: "Come with me!!"
Gauri nodes her head and they both start walking to the hotel reception hand in hand.
Shiv gets them a room under Mrs and Mr Shiv Kapoor, and they walk towards their room. Shiv opens the door, and Gauri walks inside. Shiv walks in and locks the door. He goes near Gauri and keeps his hand on her shoulders, she slowly turn around and look at him for sometime, then suddenly she moves towards him and starts kissing him.

Shiv carries Gauri to the bed, and slowly starts removing her dress and tries to kiss her at the same time. Gauri very hesitantly (as she was scared but wanted to) starts removing Shiv's shirt. Shiv helps her in getting rid of his shirt, after that Gauri starts running her hand down from his face to his chest. Shiv kisses Gauri on her forehead, tip of her nose, then her lips and then teasingly bites her chin, then he moves down towards her neck, and starts kissing her neck and then he moves down (that's it guys!!! I can't imagine anything more☺️)

After that Gauri and Shiv were lying in each other's arms.
Shiv: "I love you Gauri!!!"
Gauri: "I love you Rudr!!!"
After sometime, Gauri: "We didn't do anything wrong ri8?"
Shiv smiles: "No, we love each other, and we just showed each other how much we love each other."
Gauri: "And we are getting married."
Shiv: "After I got you in bed, y shud I marry you?"
Gauri starts hitting Shiv: "RUDR!!!"
Suddenly Shiv's cell starts ringing, he picks it up and talk.
Shiv: "It's Milind, he saying that Prachi is going home and she is calling you."
Gauri: "We will stay here!!"
Shiv: "Okay!!!"

Then he talks on the phone for some more time, and then hangs up.
Suddenly, Gauri: "No, I have to go!!!"
Shiv confused: "Y?"
Gauri: "I don't know how to drape a saree and Prachi's mom was supposed to dress me up!!"
Shiv: "It's okay, I will dress u up!!! I know how to drape a saree!!"
Gauri looks at him suspiciously: "How do u know?"
Shiv: "Between u and me"
Gauri: "Okay"
Shiv: "When I was small, I used to wear Mom's saree"
Gauri starts laughing: "U r so cute Rudr."
Gauri after sometime: "Actually Rudr, I will feel shy when u help me wear the saree… I will only be in my blouse and petticoat."
Shiv: "Don't u think it is a little silly to worry about that when you are lying naked next to me?"
Gauri starts blushing.
Shiv: "I love you so much Gauri."
He starts kissing her, and soon they are making love.

Please comment guys.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#64
im wondering nw
frm where r u going to get shashank frm?
do u plan to add each n every villain to this story?
mokesh is already in 😆

nw hw do u plan to create probs between gauri n shiv?

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Posted: 17 years ago
#65
Fabulous work...... Gauri and Shiv are great when it comes to lyin 😉 😆 😆
Shivy knows to drape a saree??? Now that will be a brilliant scene.....

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Posted: 17 years ago
#66
now i can't stop wondering what went wrong between shiv and gauri that gauri landed up with shashank?. 😕
eagerly waiting for the next part! 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#67
omg!!!
lol!!!
great part!!!
continue soon plz!!!
😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#68
hey!!just read the parts and i love em...it is sooo great..shiv and gauri love each other..i'm guessing the two wont get married..wonder what will go wrong..plz conti soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#69
that wz quick!!
thanx 4 the romantic update
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Posted: 17 years ago
#70
👏 👏 👏 ...omg kuku!! well done... u seriously are hooking me in this ff 😉

Love ill Kat 😳

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