FF: A Lifetime with you... END: pg18 - Page 3

just read first 3 parts
awesum parts.... loved it
keep it up
eagerly waiting for next part

wow so now dil mein kuch kuch ho raha hai!!!!!

Zeeny is so cute!!!! love her yaar!!!!!


fabulous work!!!

all i can say is that this is a really cute and innocent story..im lovin it so far...no worries about the names...and its not going too slow...ur the writer so u carry on at the pace that suits you

xxxx

splendid update a.i.c, so luv is in the air already eh 👏 can't wait for further updates.
Cheers

Originally posted by: Catwoman

wow angel so simple and real! that why i like your stories!

kat 😳

thnks😳 Kat! ur comments r always so encouraging....

Originally posted by: Mintfresh

just read first 3 parts
awesum parts.... loved it
keep it up
eagerly waiting for next part

hope the 4th n 5th one's were gud...thnx 😊

Originally posted by: Prab_rockin

wow so now dil mein kuch kuch ho raha hai!!!!!

Zeeny is so cute!!!! love her yaar!!!!!


fabulous work!!!

thnx 😳 yup Zenny's cute...

Originally posted by: Raihena

all i can say is that this is a really cute and innocent story..im lovin it so far...no worries about the names...and its not going too slow...ur the writer so u carry on at the pace that suits you

xxxx

thnx raihena! luved ur comments...

Originally posted by: Jenna Dutt

splendid update a.i.c, so luv is in the air already eh 👏can't wait for further updates.
Cheers

yup Jenna...luv is in the air...it always is 😆

Originally posted by: nerdybrody

👏 👏 👏great part

thnx 🤗 again...

prt5's up 😊 ...enjoy...n plz. keep the comments coming...they're really encouragin

Absolutely brilliant update 👏 and luv the way Mr. Zee and Zenny are flirting with each other 😆 I just hope that Zeeshan's anger and possessive side does not overtake his rather luving nature, pls. continue soon.
Cheers.

amazing....keep writing...very touching story...update soon!!

great part plus u have a title now.... which is cute like this pair *sigh*

Kat