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Sareeta

@sareeta

Sparkler

Posted: 18 years ago

Hello Everyone...

Jus penned some random lines and felt they related to Shiv's situation at the moment...

Dekhe the
Nazare
Aakhon se
Tere...

Paayi thi
Panaah maine
Dhadkanon mein
Tere...

Chala tha yun
Sang tere
Thaame tera
Daaman

Choota jo
Tera daaman..
Dekha
Choota saath
Zindagi ka...

-Sareeta

Edited by sareeta - 18 years ago

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Roop

@Rock_Star

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

dii like always beautiful lines 👏 👏

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mad

@*mad*

Rocker

Posted: 18 years ago

Nice 1 sareeta di
smal n easy for me to read
after reading this i feel like listening to a song frm parineeta 😆
no idea y

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Sareeta

@sareeta

Sparkler

Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Rock_Star
dii like always beautiful lines 👏 👏

Aww, thank you so much Roop...

Arre aise hi zehen mein aa gaye lines tho likh daale.... ! Thank you once again! 😊

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Sareeta

@sareeta

Sparkler

Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: ash9
Nice 1 sareeta di
smal n easy for me to read
after reading this i feel like listening to a song frm parineeta 😆
no idea y

Aaashu, yaar , you are jus too much! Now that was random what I wrote... but yeah I like it short and simple.. cant write complicated stuff babes!

U thought of Parineeta Songs! 😆 Good Lord... didnt realize the lines could have that effect! Hmmmm *scratches head... lost in thought...*

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Saregama_fan

@Saregama_fan

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 18 years ago

Nice... like ash said simple yet effective... 👏👏👏

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sourav1

@sourav1

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

👏 Nice nice!! I just wish this was dedicated to a more worthy character 😳 😛 😆

Edited by sourav1 - 18 years ago

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Sareeta

@sareeta

Sparkler

Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: sourav1
👏 Nice nice!! I just wish this was dedicated to a more worthy character 😳 😛 😆

Yeah I know what you mean! 😆 The good thing is I never wrote it with that Stupid dimwit Shiv in mind... it was random... but KAA par post karne ke liye kisi ko tho relate karna padega... call of the day! 😳 😆 But glad you liked it Sourav Ji!