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good uve decided 2 con! 😆loved da update.how could he hold her by her hair jus 2 make her drink. 😡 his temper man... keep it in control shiv!!!1 😆 😡
do con asap

HEY U UPDATED
👏 GR8 PRT 👏
PLZ PLZ CONT SOON
THNX 4 CONT

Originally posted by: jiya imdad

thanks soo much for updating 😳 i thought u were never going to continue!!
shiv is being unneccessaryly stubborn, he's behaving like a moron;
how could he be soo rude and dry with the only woman he loves,
seriously! he needs anger management classes and gauri needs to stop obeying him only then he will get his mind set straight!
will be waiting for the next update 😳

thanxx a lott yaar, iam really really very sorry for not having continued for soo long but i was helpless 😭😭, next time i will try to post the updates without taking too much time and troubling you all in the process.

Originally posted by: iqbal-pallavi

yeay finally you've continued, i thought that you totaly forgot about the fan fic anyways brilliant part 👏 shivs being an absaloute pain 😡 that is no way to treat a girl and especially the girl he loves and reminds him of his mother hope you change his attitude towards gauri soon and make him confess his love for her 😳 and please don't let rudr be the kabab mein haddi i really like shabbir alawaliah and i don't like it when he plays evil i think you should introduce another girl for him so he leaves our shivgauri alone 😳 anyways i loved the part where shiv was giving gauri the drink and gauri kept it on the table eachtime and at the end he forced her to drink although it was rough the way you described it was soooooooo cute 😳 and the way you describe shiv's emotions and the turmoil he' going through within is amazing 👏 once again brilliant part and please don't disappear again and dooooooooooo continue soooooooooooooon pleassssssssssssssssssseeeeeeeee 😊

i really feel on top of the world with all your comments☺️ ☺️, bring me down someone 😳 😳i promise i won't disappear i promise 😆😆😆

finally u continued!!!!!! 😊 an awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!! 👏

very nice im egerly waiting for next story

thx for update plz update soon ,i can't wait. u r story is too good

gr8 part
cant wait for the nxt bit

oh wounder what happenplz update soon