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plzz contu soon u done a great jod 👏

Happy birthday
im sure u will soon be back with ur relatives

hey,
that was a gr8 part. do con when ever u get time 👏

thanks soo much for updating 😳 i thought u were never going to continue!!
shiv is being unneccessaryly stubborn, he's behaving like a moron;
how could he be soo rude and dry with the only woman he loves,
seriously! he needs anger management classes and gauri needs to stop obeying him only then he will get his mind set straight!
will be waiting for the next update 😳

awesome part!!!loved every bit of it!!!!pls continue soon

amazing part 👏 👏
looking forward for next part 😊

yeay finally you've continued, i thought that you totaly forgot about the fan fic anyways brilliant part 👏 shivs being an absaloute pain 😡 that is no way to treat a girl and especially the girl he loves and reminds him of his mother hope you change his attitude towards gauri soon and make him confess his love for her 😳 and please don't let rudr be the kabab mein haddi i really like shabbir alawaliah and i don't like it when he plays evil i think you should introduce another girl for him so he leaves our shivgauri alone 😳 anyways i loved the part where shiv was giving gauri the drink and gauri kept it on the table eachtime and at the end he forced her to drink although it was rough the way you described it was soooooooo cute 😳 and the way you describe shiv's emotions and the turmoil he' going through within is amazing 👏 once again brilliant part and please don't disappear again and dooooooooooo continue soooooooooooooon pleassssssssssssssssssseeeeeeeee 😊