Saving Grace (Short FF)Part 21 on Page 26 - Page 7

wow!!

brilliant story, just read all of it..~!

please do continue soon!!~!!

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wow!!

brilliant story, just read all of it..~!

please do continue soon!!~!!

👏

ohkiee shiv nd shaurya are so devious...such a mischevious kid cannot b shashanks..plz update soon..loved the last part especially the last line

Originally posted by: prab_rockinn

cute part!!!!!
now they both are fallen for each other.......
Shaurya has no sense about the right time for sure 😆 😆

thank you so much!!! Yeah I know Shaurya has no sense of time.... but it might come in handy since I suck at romance😳😆

Originally posted by: mintfresh

awesum ff
keep it up
cont soon

Thank you so much

Originally posted by: sum2005

kuku they r still friends ...omg from 4 yrs...yaar make them fall in love.....yaar wasting their time ....they too have to spend some rommantic time together before they become budda and buddi 😉

thanx to u I have got them kissing, hopeful they will confess their love in the next part.

Originally posted by: fida-cute

they have such a cute relationship 😃 😃 well belt scene was funny 😆 😆 😆 they r leading a happy life 😃 but shashank 😡

thanx saut!!! Oh God I have to bring him back also😕!!!What all I have to do!! Confess their love, get them married, then old villain re-entry

Originally posted by: lil_desi_goddes

wow!!

brilliant story, just read all of it..~!

please do continue soon!!~!!

👏

thank you so much!!!I have updated the new part.

Originally posted by: shiv-gauri4eva

ohkiee shiv nd shaurya are so devious...such a mischevious kid cannot b shashanks..plz update soon..loved the last part especially the last line

he he he thank you so much😳!!! Shaurya's guru in all this is Shiv thts y he has become mischievous!!!!

-kuku

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great work!!!!!
finally the long waited kiss 😳 😳
grt help sumana... cool idea....

oho u r not a bad romantic scenes writer remember in shivgauri sooooooooooooooooo many awesome scenes........... 😆 in this 1 romantic scenes r lil difficult as they didn't tell their feelings wow......... 1st kiss..........let me who disturbs them.......... 😆

great part!!!
continue soon
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kuku thts a gr8 part
so tht mean r they finally going to confess to each other?? 😃
u better nt tell me tht whole thing was a dream or sumthing 😆 😆 😆

Originally posted by: prab_rockinn

👏
great work!!!!!
finally the long waited kiss 😳 😳
grt help sumana... cool idea....

thank you so much😃

Originally posted by: fida-cute

oho u r not a bad romantic scenes writer remember in shivgauri sooooooooooooooooo many awesome scenes........... 😆 in this 1 romantic scenes r lil difficult as they didn't tell their feelings wow......... 1st kiss..........let me who disturbs them.......... 😆

yeah i know and i am trying my best to make them confess their feelings, but nothing is coming into my head!!!I am totally blank out here😭!!! Who else wud disturb them other than Shaurya😆????

Originally posted by: gujibabe

great part!!!
continue soon
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thank you so much😃
the nest part is up.

Originally posted by: ash9

kuku thts a gr8 part
so tht mean r they finally going to confess to each other?? 😃
u better nt tell me tht whole thing was a dream or sumthing 😆 😆 😆

I shud have made it a dream, then I wudn't have had to bother with them facing each other... but sadly it is reality😭😭!!! I still cudn't make them confess!!I will try my best to make them confess!!!!I really have to come up with something😳

-kuku

well not a bad scene 😉 it is good they both like each other ..... 😃 ....shivgauri shashank is coming 😡