Kismat Ka Khel ff updated pt33 pg91

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Posted: 18 years ago

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hey are u continuing today? hope so!

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suni

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Posted: 18 years ago

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no update today 😭 ..........honey please update aadat hogayi hai tumare ff ke ......desperatly want to know how shiv will take care of gauri........

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Posted: 18 years ago

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Originally posted by: Numera*
hey are u continuing today? hope so!

sorry my computer broke down yesterday so could not continue. hopefully i will continue today

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maria

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Posted: 18 years ago

#374

Originally posted by: sum2005
no update today 😭 ..........honey please update aadat hogayi hai tumare ff ke ......desperatly want to know how shiv will take care of gauri........

sorry sumi di. mera computer kaam nahi ka raha tha. hopefully today i wil be able to update.

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ashwini_k

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Posted: 18 years ago

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cont soon, pl dont stop like other writers, who starts very well & they will be lost somewhere in middle of interesting turns

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maria

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Posted: 18 years ago

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part23

gauri before going to sleep thought about shiv. "kitna badal gaye hain na shiv. pehle to mujeh har waqt kuch na kuch kehta rehte the lakin abb meri har bat ka dhayan rakhte hain. me kyun un ki taraf kichti chali jati honn. har bar me apne app se ahed karti hon ke ke abbnahi jaon ki shiv ke pas lakin jab bhi me un ke kareeb hoti hon me apne ap ko rok nahi pati. kya hoa agar me ne un se phir pyar kiya or agar phir wo mujeh chor gaye to me kya karon gi." a tear escaped her eye. "jo hota hai ache ke liye hota hai shayad itne dhokon ke bad meri khushiyon ki bari hai shayad meri rothi hoi khushiyan mujeh wapis mil jaye. she went to sleep smiling. shiv saw him gauri and varni leading a happy life. "oh gauri jab se tum meri zindagi me ayi ho meri zindagi badal gayi." he had ben happy with gauri he had never repented by letting gauri stay with him. he was angry nikhila was taking gauri away from him dragging her. "chal is ghar se bahri to ne pata nahi kya jaduu kiya hai mera beta mera nahi raha mere ghar wale mere nahi rahi. tu to ja yahan se. nikal mere ghar se" she was throwing gauri out and gauri kept on saying one thing. "shiv plz in ko rokiye shiv me app ke baghair nahi reh sakti. shiv app or varni meri zindagi hain me apni zindagi ke baghair kaise rahon gi. SHIV I LOVE YOU" shiv stood there hearing her until his heart allowed. he ran towards her. he takes gauri from his mom. "ap ki himat kaise hoi gauri ko yahan se nikalne ki. yeh us ka ghar hai us ke pati ka ghar hai jab tak me yahan hon gauri yahan hai.me gauri se hon. samjhi app." gauri looked at him in surprise. " haan sahi keh raha hon gauri me tum e se boot pyar karta hon. i love you gauri" he hugs her so hard. shiv wakes up from his dream he was sweating surprised but smiled. he did not know what was happening to him. he did not know why he was happy after this dream. he did not know what made him smile. he did not know why he felt alive while around gauri. now he was calm he was happy from heart. he wanted to call gauri but it was too late in night and she must be sleeping., he did not want to disturb her she had to undergo a surgery tomorrow. so he laid down again trying to sleep. but the dream kept on coming in front of his eyes. he kept smiling and thinking about gauri and varni and him. finally he went to sleep.
gauri wakes up early in the mnorning. she takes a shower and gets ready. she picks u[ her cell and rings shiv. "haan gauri me abhi tumhe hi phone karne wala tha" "hmm acha shiv me natasha ke sath 15 minutes me nikal rahi hon. me ne socha app ko infrom kar don" "haan acha kiya. me bhi nikalta hon kuch dair me." "ok" she was about to keep the phone "or gauri" "ji" "i missed you" "mee to shiv mee too" sayin this she puts the phone down. it was true she had missed him. she woke up in the middle of the night. she dreamed oif herself with varni and shiv and they were happy after taht she could not sleep. she kept thinking about the operation and what if she did not make it. she prayed all night all becausse of varni. she did not want to leave her alone. meanwhile shiv phoned vivan. "haan vivan mere room me aao ge mujeh jana hai hospital" vivan comes to shiv's room. shiv gets ready. he comes upto varni and kissed her on the forehead. "i am sorry beta ajj pora din mama papa app ke saath nahi honge. papa ko ajj mama ke sath rehna hai. so be a good girl and stay with chachu." he straightened up. "acha vivan me chalta hon wahan gauri mera intezar kar rahi hongi. or suno agar varni ziyada roye to muejh phone kar dena me dekhon ga ke me a jaon. waise me gauri ke operation complete hone tak wahin rahonga."
shiv arrived at the hospital. he went to the receptionist and asked where gauri's room is. he then proceeded towards her room. he was scared he had been in such a position before. last it was ipshita. he lost her but did not want to loose her. he saw gauri who seemed so weak and tensed she smiled when she saw him he walked upto her then hugged her. he then kissed her forehead. "gauri tum itna ghabra kyun rahi ho kuch nahi hoga. me hon na. me tumhe kuch nahi hone don ga" shiv remembered ipshita. he remebered watching ipshita going into the surgery alone and never coming back. she died. he did not want teh same to happen to gauri. he could not afford to loose her as well. she was his daughters happiness his happiness. he would not let her have the same fate as iphista. tears ran down his cheeks. falling on gauri's face. gauri who was already scared. she tooo started crying. she became emotional. she was scared of loosing what she just got shiv and varni. she did not want to leave them alone. natasha who saw this got angry. "what is this shiv. agar tum is tarhan roo ge to gauri ko kon sambhale ga. us ko or mat darao. us ki himmat nahi tooti lakin tumhare ronay se toot jaye gi. plz chup raho. or waise bhi yeh konsi life threatning operation hai. is me jaan ko koi khatra nahi hai. gauri theek ho jaye gi. or bohot jald apne ghar me wapis hogi. or sharam nahi atti itni khubsurat larki ko rolate hoe." shiv and gauri smiled at the last remark. shiv took hold of gauri. "hmm gauri i know you wil make it. you have too. and i wil be there for you on every step." gauri wiped her tears. "yes shiv i will make it for my daughter. i love varni alot. and i have to be ok for her. " and tehy laft for OT. shiv held gauri's hand and kissed it. telling her that she wil be ok and he wil bethere for her. gauri smiles. "shiv khana kha lena" "hmm me kha lon gaab to meri chinta karna choro. is hal me bhi meri chinta kar rahi ho" gauri and shiv both smiled and then the took gauri in. leaving shiv alone in the corridoor. she was pacing up and down in the corridoor. this is when natasha ame. she was surprised to see shiv concerned for gauri like that. she had not seen him worried for anyone like that except from ipshita. shiv felt that their realtionship was changing. this shiv cared about gauri alot. and what it seemed to her. he most probably loved her. natasha's cell rang it was nikhila. "ji aunty me theek hon app kaisi hain" slient she was listening to niki. "aray zaroor aunty yeh bhi koi pochne ki baat hai me zaroor aaon gi party me" she then goes toward shiv. "shiv mujeh nikhila aunty ne invite kiya hai party ke liye jo unho ne gauri ke jane ki khushi me throw ki hai. or wo chahti hain ke me tumhare liye larki dhoondhne me madad karon. un ki sari friends apni betiyon ke saath a rahi hain so she wants to choose a bride for you." shiv was furious. how could his mom think like that. "yaha meri biwi ka operation ho raha hai or wahan un ko meri shadi ki pari hai. unho ne yeh soch bhi kaise loya ke me un ko baat mano ga. khabhi nahi abb to bilkul nahi. unho ne apne app ko samujh kya rakha hai jab chaha jis kissi ki bhi zindagi badl di. un ko kya lata hai me gauri ko choron ga me gauri ko khabhi nahi chodo ga me varni se us ki maa ko alag nahi hone doon ga. natasha me gauri ko le kar apne gahr me shift hona chahta hon. me nahi chahta ke gauri us ghar me rahe jahan aye din us ke insult hoti hai. jahan us ko koi izzat nahi milti. jahan us ko beizzat karne ka koi moka haath se nahi jane diya jata. me gauri ko wahan wapis le ja kar us ko meri ma behen ki galiyan khane ki liye nahi chor sakta. me janta hon us ghar me bohto se aise log hain jo gauri se be had pyar karte hain. par ue ke pyar se ziyada gauri ki izzat hai. me us ko aise beizzat nahi hone de sakta. mujeh kuch karna hoga" natasha came upto her. she puts a hand on his shoulder. "don't worry shiv sab theek ho jaye ga. yeh hum baad me dekhe ge. aajj tum ghar chale jana tumhe party attend karni hai. agar nahi gaye to nikhila aunty shak karien gi." "jaisa tum theek samjho" shiv cell rang it wa nikhila shiv switched the phone off. "i hate you mom. me ne khabhi nahi socha tha ke ap aisi hongi app itna kaise gir gayi mama gauri ne ap ka kya begara tha. mama app bhagwan nahi jo humari kismat likh de gi. hum wo nahi kairen ge jo ap ne kaha hai. me gauri ko nahi chodo ga. khabhi nahi. wo meri beti ki maa hai or me apni beti ke sir se maa ka saya khabhi nahi chootne doon ga.
gauri was in recovery room. her operatin was successful . shiv stood in teh mandir made in the hospital and thanked god. "shukriya bhagwan. app ne gauri ko bacha liya agar isse kuch ho jata to me bhi mar jata. app ka bohot bohot shukriya" he went towards gauri's room. he saw the doctor. "doctor gauri" "woo thek hain. hum ne fibroids remove kar diye hain and one ovray to. she will have 50 % chances of being pregnent. otherwise she is fine." shiv did not care about the 50% chances he was happy that she was alright. "doctor kya me us se mil sakta hon" "sory mr kapoor. right now she is sedted and unconsious." he wited outside. until he was allowed he went in with natasha. gauri seemed so weak. shi could not se her state. he went and sit beside her and held her hand gauri who was stil unconcious held his hand tigher. "me bahir intezar karti hon. sirf ei hi allow hai room me" shiv kissed her hand. tears falling down his eyes.

1. kitni soch milti hai dono ko dream bhi eik hi aya tha. lagta hi nahi ke do insan hai. yeh to aise hai jaise do jism eik jaan. jo dream uko aya wo isko bhi aya. yaan kaho ke dono eik ho deemag share karte hain.
2.eik to humara ghabroo jawan rota bohot hai. yaar larkon ko rona siut nahi karta. sahi kaha natasha ne. gauri us ko rota dekh ke dar gayi thi. darna hi tha. rotay hoe khufnakk ho gaya hoga na is liye us ne bhi rona shoro kar diya.
3. yaar shiv tum ne to ipshita ke marne se pehle bhi yehi kha tha ke me tumhe marne nahi doon ga ipshita. tumhe kuch nahi hoga me tumhare sath hon wo mar gayi bechari tumhare pe bharosa jo kiya. lagta hai gauri ne nahi kiya. is liye bach gayi. so bachon eik sabak loo. bharosa nahi karo ge to geo ge karo ge to maro ge. app ka husband kahe ap ko kuch nahi hoga to us ka bharosa mat karo. sare ke sare jhoothe hain. jhoothi tasaliyan dete hain.
4. waise gauri ne shiv ko maaf kar ke bohot bari galati ki. yaar us ne is ko kitni galiyan di. jo ke gauri ko yad hain. latter on wo shiv ko kahe gi. shiv yaad hai app ne mujeh eik bar b***h nola tha yaad hai eik bar W**** bola tha. mujeh churail dayan bola tha. even ke mujeh strangle karne ki koshish bhi. lakin phir bhi shiv i love you.

Edited by crystalclear - 18 years ago

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maria

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Posted: 18 years ago

#377

Originally posted by: ashwini_k
cont soon, pl dont stop like other writers, who starts very well & they will be lost somewhere in middle of interesting turns

i wil rty my best not to make it boring. i am glad you likes my ff. thank you. 😉😉😉

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suni

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Posted: 18 years ago

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🤣 maria omg ur comments.....so gauri made it as he dint believe shiv and ippi dint make it as she believed shiv.....

yaar as gauri gyan maria i will lisen to ur gyan, maria gyan .....never trust or believe hubby when they say we will make it means we r not making it.....maria thank u for ur wonderfull piece of advice. 👏 .

today update is very very emotional one .....so shiv and gauri both dream a happy life and shiv shiv was so emotional and even confessed to himself that he cant live if gauri cant make it....and nikki shiv ki shaadi karne ki taan lihai.....and shiv gauri aur varni ko alag ghar me......shiv ur so good husband.....yep u r caring so much for gauri.....

Edited by sum2005 - 18 years ago