Kismat Ka Khel ff updated pt33 pg91

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Shagufta

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Posted: 18 years ago

#351

awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!!! 👏

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jiya imdad

@jiya imdad

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Posted: 18 years ago

#352

wow! he locked maya n palak in the room 🤣 , i used to hate shiv at the start of ur ff but now when he is soo protective towards "his wife" it makes him look all the more adorable. I heard that when men reach the old age they consider themselves as young as teenagers and this is soo obvious seeing dadaji's flirtious nature. ur pink comments were damn funny especially the one about teaching varni wrong things at this age and that punjabi saying , it is soo true in practical life although shiv came back to his senses quite early otherwise it take men their whole age to realise .
Oops! i m back to my long comments , sorry can't help it! u got to bear with me 😆
continue soon 😃

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zainab

@fida-cute

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Posted: 18 years ago

#353

i think dheere dheere pyaar key taraf kadam badte ja raha hai 😉 😉 😉
dat was really nice apni beti ko abhi se yeh sikhao taake baad mein woh yehi kare 😆 wat varni wud have thought 😆
wat to tell abt dadaji he is really a big flirt 😆 😆 😆
nikki 😡 😡 😡 y does she hates her so much i mean gauri se sirf class difference hone ke kaaran to she can't behave like dat

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maria

@crystalclear

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Posted: 18 years ago

#354

part 22

varni laughs seeing them. shiv holds gauri by her waist. gauri stops laughing. her face left with a huge smile. shiv whispers into her ears. "dil nahi kar raha gauri tumhe chor ke jane ko. sochta hon ke tumhare baghair varni ko kaise sambhalon ga. wo to tumhare baghair bohot tang kare gi. aisa karte hain hum log yahin reh jate hain waise bhi is tarhan tum bhi pareshan nahi hogi or varni bhi tumhe miss nahi kare gi." gauri was surprised by what shiv said. then she giggled. "agar app yahan rahe to sab ko shaq ho jaye ga. ghar pe kya kahe ge ke app kahan hain" "le what gauri come on gauri kya me apni wife ke saath nahi reh sakta. is me logon ke sawalon ka kya. waise bhi tumhare saath rehne ke liye mujeh kisi ko koi explaination nahi deni hogi." he kissed her on her cheeks. "lakin tumhare treatment bhi zaroori hai. tumhe recover hona hai jaldi agar ghar pe pata chal gaya phir to koi chance nahi is liye mujhe is baat ko secret rakhte hoe yahan se jana pare ga. chalo koi nahi. acha is ko dhoodh de ke sola do takay mere liye asani ho." "why dont you buy a crib for her so it will be easier for you." "app ka humkam sir ankhon pe maam" he leaned forward and kissed her. her lips were soft. Softer than petals. Though a lot better than petals. Warm and round and animate enough to move under the press of his lips. he was brushing his lower lip against hers. Running the tip of his tongue along the edges between her lips. he was gentle with her at first. then more instantly, his lips scorching hers and sending wild flames licking right through her. his lips pressing hers more urgently. she twined her arms around his neck. they were away from the world. just gauri and shiv. it was like nothing happened between tgem he did not want to let her go. she did not want him to pull back. she wanted to live the moment away from her fears. she did not trust him nor did she loved him . or may be she was wrong she never stopped loving him. but she would never give hersefl away easily this time. shiv found himself lost in her taste. he did not want to let her go. as if he fear that she will go away if he let her go. this was their moment. and he is gonna live it. they stayed attached. not taking a single breath. they kissed each other with passion as if there is no tomorrow. they kissed until they were got so weak. until gauri could not stand anymore. they broke the kiss. breathing hard. as if getting a touch of oxygen after hours. shiv still held gauri who was blushing hard. a smile borke on his lips. he had never seen er blush so hard he did not want to let her go but decided to spare the porr soul. he let go of her. gauri instantly picked up varni and fed her milk. she looked at shiv now and then only to find hiim staring at him constantly. which only made her blush more. gauri tried to make varni sleep but she just won't sleep. gauri then sang her the song.

Dil Churale O Chaand Se Chehre Wale
Muskurale O Chaand Se Chehre Wale
Din Raat Main Tujhse Pyaar Karoon
Par Kaise Bhala Ikraar Karoon
Tu Na Samjhe Meri Bekarariyaan
Dil Churale O Chaand Se Chehre Wale
Muskurale O Chaand Se Chehre Wale
Dil Churale

Ab To Meri Zindagani Hai Tujhse
Aane Wali Kalki Jawani Hai Tujhse
Meri Chahat Ki Nishani Hai Tujhse
Meri Yaadon Ki Kahani Hai Tujhse
Maine Dekha Tujhko Mehsoos Kar Ke
Meri Saason Ki Rawani Hai Tujhse
Ghum Bhulale O Chaand Se Chehre Wale
Muskurale O Chaand Se Chehre Wale
Dil Churale

Tere Hi Khayalon Ki Duniya Basaye
Kahi Ab Tujhko Na Dil Bhool Paye
Meri Betabi To Badhti Hi Jaaye
Meri Tanhaayi Na Koi Mitaaye
Meri Zindagi Aaja Tujhko Bataoon
Meri Har Dhadkan Tujhe Sirf Chaahe
Aazmale O Chaand Se Chehre Wale
Muskurale O Chaand Se Chehre Walie
Din Raat Main Tujhse Pyaar Karoon
Par Kaise Bhala Ikraar Karoon
Tu Na Samjhe Meri Bekarariyaan
Dil Churale O Chaand Se Chehre Wale
Muskurale O Chaand Se Chehre Wale

gauri got so emotional while singing it tears escaped her beautifull eyes. which caused pain to shiv. he knew how she felt. she loved varni dearly. she had lost topop many realtionship. he too had lost a very dear relation his love. he knew how exactly she felt the fear of going away from her. the fear of not being beside her. shiv goes and sits beside her on the bed he puts an arm around her and wiping of her tears with the other. "plz gauri roo mat. abb to tumhe khushiyan mili hain abb kyun ro rahi ho. ab jab ke sab theek ho raha hai" gauri kept looking at varni "you know shiv. kal ke bad me varni ko pakar nahi apon gi me us apni bahon me nahi le sakon gi. mujjhe soch ke dar lagta hai ke me kaise itne din is ko pakray baghair reh sakon gi. i dont for how many days i will be in such condition that i will not be able to hold varni. lakin shiv mujeh se vaaad a kariye ke app roz is ko le ke aao ge apne saath me is ki eik jhalak dekh ke hi thek ho jaon gi. cho nahi sakti to kya hoa dekh to sakti hon. plz shiv vaada kariye" " haan gauri me vaad karta hon ke me varni ko roz le ke aaon ga" varni was a sleep. gauri kissed her forehead. "acha gauri abb hume chalna chahiye kafi dair ho gayi hai" gauri became sad she did not want to let her go. "dair ho gayi is liye ajj dada ji or dadi ji ko shak ho gay hoga" gauri gave shiv to varni with tears in her eyes. shiv holds varni in his one arm and holds gauri and hugs her. "don't wory gauri sab theek ho jaye ga me hon na. promise me you will take care of yourself. hmm plz" " i promise but you wil have to come with varni remeber" "haan" "ok bye" "bye" both gauri and shiv were in tears. they did not want to let go each other.
while driving back to the house. shiv thought of gauri. why was he so worried about her why did he not want to go away from her. in machan house he felt so sad leaving gauri he felt the urge building up inside him to go back and huh her make her his not wanting to let her go away from his eyes. wanting her to sty in front of him every second. why did he always lost control of himself when gauri is around him or he is with gauri. he kissed her so many time. before with hatred but now he did not want to let her go. did not want to break the kiss. he arrived home. "aray a gaye tum. yeh tum kon kahan gaye the. park me itni dair lag gayi. mujeh to laga tha ke ajj tum ghar nahi aoo ge. kab se gayab ho raat ho gayi hai. waise raat ko varni ne kya enjoy kiya" "kya dada ji app bhi na me apne doston ke ghar chala gaya tha is liye dair ho gayi. ghar ata to varni roti is liye" dada ji thinking to himself "sahi bol beta ke gauri ki yaad a rahi hai. wo ghar nahi hai to tu ghar se bahir. wo ghar pe ho to shaam me bhi jaldi a jata hai" "chalo theek hai." dada ji starts watching tv shiv whispers to vivan " vivan kal me subha jaldi chala jaon ga to tum ghar pe rehna varni ka khayal rakhna" "ji bhai" he leaves for dadi's room just then gauri calls. "aray gauri beta kaisi ho" "theek hon dadi or haan me sahise pochench gayi ap kaisi hain or varni kaisi hai. ghar me sab theek hai na" "aray han sab theek hai to bas apna khayal rakh. acha chal to aram kar le baad me phoen kar lena" shiv then talks to dadi for some time and leaves varni with her who was sleeping. he goes for dinner. where nikhila was busy enquiring about maya and palak. "aray yeh dono kahan hain" "pata nahi subha se kahin dikhayi nahi di" she calls their cells but no one picks up. shiv gets angry a the incident of the morning came in front of his eyes. he did not eat as he had eaten at machan's house. dada ji saw shiv not eating so he again thinks that he is missing gauri too much that he does not even feel hungry.
mahen went to the garden for a walk. it was his habbit he always walked after dinner. it relaxed him. he looked up and was shocked. he saw that gauri room light was on. he thought gauri had left it on. he looked there for a second then went in. he took the keys. which were put back by shiv he did not want to be caught so left it there. mahen walked upto gauri's room. he opened the door. once the door opened mahen was shocked and also maya and palak who were cught by the worst person who loved gauri a lot and they were in trouble. mahen looked around in the room it was a mess. her clothes ripped and her things scattered everywhere in the room. mahen was so shocked and angry. he went upto the. "yeh sab kya hai haan. tum log gauri ke room me kya kar rahi ho. or kya halat bana di ahi uske kamre ki. us ko to chain se rehne nahi diya abb us ki cheezien bhi barbad kar di. tum log kab choro ge us ka peecha kya beegara hai us massom ne tum logon ka. jo tum log us ko tang karte ho shame on you." tashhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh slap one then the other one. both maya and palak were shocked. shiv had heard everything from his room he was happy. "ab tum log is room ko saaf karo everything should be at its place. i want it all done in half an hour." aying this he left while maya and palak were too shocked to move. their hands on their faces. "ajj tak hum pe kissi ne hath nahi uthaya. lakin ajj. samujh me nahi ata hume lock kis ne kiya " while shiv was smiling. he took his phone and called. "hi gauri" gauri was surprised to hear shivs voice bt happy. "shiv sab theek to hai varni to theek hai na. app ko tnag to nahi kar rahi thi" " sab theek hai me ne tumhe bas kuch kehne ke liye phone kiya tha" "kya" "i miss you" "i miss u too" "good night" "good night" and the both went to sleep.

1. kal ka sabak bhol gaye bola tha bachi ko mat bagro par tum logon ne kasam khayi hai us ko beaghrne ki.
2. shiv bahiya app ko lovariya ho gaya hai or is ka ilaj gauri ke pas hi hai plz make sure ke is bar varni saath na ho.
3. mahen you have disappoined me you had to punish them. to koi achi dete. eik din kya poray das din tak ghar ki safai un se karate.
3. his lips pressing hers more urgently. shiv bhai jan ka bas nahi chalta us ko kacha kha jaye. kissi bache ne dekh liya to police ko shikayat laga de ga ke uncle aunty koo kha rahe the.

ok folks that is al from me tonight.

Edited by crystalclear - 18 years ago

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Numera

@Numera*

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Posted: 18 years ago

#355

LMAO omg i love ur end comments!! soo funny!! aww that was soo cute hmmm so shiv lost his "love" huh well whats he doing with guari, only attraction?? i hope he realizes he loves gauri and its not like only attraction!! continue sooN!

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Shagufta

@JanuaryEmbers

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#356

awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!! 👏

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zainab

@fida-cute

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Posted: 18 years ago

#357

uncle aunty ko kha rahe the 😆 dadaj kabhi kabhi kuch sahibhi sochlete hai larkiyon ke elava 😆 shiv ko loveriya ho gaya kissi doctor ko bulao gauri he loses his control 😉

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sonia

@Mrs.soniayk6

Voyager

Posted: 18 years ago

#358

hi friend again ur updates r simply superb 👏 .last time i told u that i hate shiv's charecter but now he is so adorable n he is so caring towards his gauri 😳 😳 but make him realize his love towards gauri n the way ur commenting after the update is simply superb. finally plz continue soon

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Iqbaladdict

@Iqbaladdict

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Posted: 18 years ago

#359

hehe, Maria ur coments r killing me, what a superb update, Like u guessed U do hate them 2 devil women, and they got the shock of their lies with that karara thpaard,lol,,,

Shiv loves his kisses 😳 😳 but somehow never forgets to remember his love lost , but he will come around soon or later, brilliant, Vivaan is doing a great job and the goodnite call was a breath of fresh air especially coz shiv was the one who made the call, he wants her now I think but won't admit it yet and I like GAuri's thinking of not letting go off herself so easily make him want her till he admits from his awn mout that he wants her and can't do without her, 😳 😳 😳 what a thought, 😛 👏 👏

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suni

@sum2005

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Posted: 18 years ago

#360

🤣 maria ur pink comments were so nice .....omg my stomach is paining......uncle is eating aunty or i say varni thinking papa mama ko karahahai ???

relly nice and wonderfull update 👏 ,shiv loosing himself to gauri ....per janaab ko samaj me nahin aaya ki woh gauri is pyar karthahai......ippi ki kayalo me .....uuuufffshiv wake up mannow ur heart beats for gauri.....the kiss was so so so hhhooootttttt,the way he kisses her everytime omg as is she is his ........

palak and maya omg what a treat by mahen ,they did deserve it ....mahen u did a right thing but u must punish them by getting them whole housce cleaned for a weak....

dadaji u r right .....shiv missing gauri so he even dint had food....poor dadaji hope dadaji have nice time at the party...... 😉

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