Kismat Ka Khel ff updated pt33 pg91 - Page 18

It feels good to see shiv worrying for gauri 😳. aaw!! he saw varni, gauri n him as a family *hint hint* 😳 .He still doesn't believe that his mother is playing with him 😕 is he dumb or what?? 😆
he wants to cancel the loan n also stop the transfer of gauri.One thing is 4 sure man! he is nikhila's son that's why his mind can't stop plotting evil plans or shall i say urs 😉
by the way when r u going to take us out of this depressing phase, this hospital, illness and all makes me feel depressed yaar do something about it!
Overall a fantastic part, simply loved it 😳 😳 😳 😳
continue soon 😃

i liked u'r fanfiction a lot
More than daily update, i search for u'r update
i have one request...
can u please type it in different paragraphs, as i am finding it really difficult to read continuously in one single paragraph especially hindi as my hindi is not so good. sorry if i have hurt you

But your fan fiction rocks

Originally posted by: Iqbaladdict

Acha Maria, agar tumhara upar wala khalee portion aisa likta hai toh agar wahan kuch hota toh Kya hota, brilliant, update, mujhay neend nahi atee jab pata hota hai ke tum update karnay wali ho, keep up the good ork, jaanu, 👏 👏 😃

hahahaha. yaar i wonder the same thing. agar uper wala protion khali hai to me likhti kaise hoon. par pata nahi sab ko me uper se khali lagti hon. must be something they see. hain neend nahi atti omg yeh ff eik bemari ban ke pheli hai kya? thanks i will 😉😉😉

Originally posted by: sum2005

👏 nice update maria. 👏

yaar is varni missing gauri or shiv also started missing gauri 😳 .

mahen omg he said very correct ,shiv has no right on gauri.

shin thinking of holding gauris loan omg this shiv be na..............

waiting for next episode.

thanks sumi. they both seem to be missing gauri him having a dream of her proves it. yes mahen was right. shiv did not have any right he had lost al his rights on her ages ago. he should be punished . well he have a reason as i said in the the last update he does not her to go awa from his elders as they love her alot. i will post it today for sure😉😉😉

Originally posted by: iqbals4ever

awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!! 👏

thanks yaar for your huge applause😉

Originally posted by: prab_rockinn

👏
brilliant!!!!!!
hope gauri gets better soon and shiv holds back her loan.........
his dream was so nice........ jus hope he doesn loose gauri.....

thanks prab. yes me too. elts see when she gets discharged. i know the dream sequence are always nice and funny. 😉😉😉

Originally posted by: shivgauri

great part 👏 👏 👏 pls continue soon!!!

thanks i will😉

Originally posted by: jiya imdad

It feels good to see shiv worrying for gauri 😳. aaw!! he saw varni, gauri n him as a family *hint hint* 😳 .He still doesn't believe that his mother is playing with him 😕 is he dumb or what?? 😆
he wants to cancel the loan n also stop the transfer of gauri.One thing is 4 sure man! he is nikhila's son that's why his mind can't stop plotting evil plans or shall i say urs 😉
by the way when r u going to take us out of this depressing phase, this hospital, illness and all makes me feel depressed yaar do something about it!
Overall a fantastic part, simply loved it 😳 😳 😳 😳
continue soon 😃

yeah i know he is so cute when worrying about someone. yeah that was his dream. he had to do that you know otherwise he would not know how happy he would be with gauri. his dreams gives him future prediction 🤣 (joke) well nikhila is bad and shiv has no proof against it. him finding out that the guy was old is no proof. well let shiv care for gauri a bit then we willl take her out of there. hey i thought it was quite nice as shiv took care of her.thanks yaar i willl😉😉😉

Originally posted by: snehal1

i liked u'r fanfiction a lot
More than daily update, i search for u'r update
i have one request...
can u please type it in different paragraphs, as i am finding it really difficult to read continuously in one single paragraph especially hindi as my hindi is not so good. sorry if i have hurt you

But your fan fiction rocks

thanks. yaar. yeah i know. but i can't help it. i just keep writing and writing until i come to the end and se that there is only one paragraph. i can't be bothered changing it so i just post it as it is. but i will put it paragraphs if it is easier for you. thanks for commenting. 😉😉😉

part12


shiv goes to sleep thinking about gauri. he just could not keep his mind away from gauri no matter how much he tried. shiv was in a deep sleep but woke as he heard varni crying. it was early morning. "gauri dekho varni..." he remebered that she was in the hospital. she was taking care of varni for a week now. shiv got used to it. she was always up when varni cried. shiv picked up varni and turn to take the bottle. which was empty. he gets up from bed holding varnii and bottle. he walks towards the kicthen. shiv went into the kitchen and saw shyla chachi and ramu kaka there. they were busy preparing breakfast. chachi saw him and came towrds him. "good morning shiv ziyada tang to nahi kiya is ne raat ko. aray is ki bottle to khatam hai lao me fil kar deti hoon." she took the bottle from shiv. and went towards the sink to wash it. whilt telling ramu kaka to warm up the milk. shiv took the phone and dialled dadi's number. "hello dadi. kaisi hain" "me theek hon shiv tum itni subha kaise uth gaye" "kuch nahi dadi wo varni uthi hoi hai. gauri kaisi hai" when he said that shyla chachi looked at him in surprised which went unnoticed by him. she then again started filling in varni's bottle. "haan wo theek hai soo rahi hai." "ok theek hai dadi app apna or us ka khayal rakhna me kuch dair theher ke aaon ga." he cuts the call. and takes varnii's bottle from chachi and feeds her. varni drinks the milk and then started playing shiv took her to his room and wanted to change her clothes but he had no idea what to do. he saw gauri giving varni a bath. so that was the first thing he did. he gave varni a bath with warm water. and then wrapped her in a towel. he laid her on th bed and went to the draer to take out her clothes. he took eveything he needed. but one thing still he could not o. he did not know how to put on a diaper. shyla chachi watched him struggle from the door. she came in "me kuch madad kar doon" shiv stepped a side. "god gauri pata nahi kis tarhan kar leti hai kab se laga hon theek hi nahi lag rahi" chachi smiled "yeah gauri always know everything." shyla chachi prepared varni. "chachi mama kahan hai" "wo to subha subha kahin chali gayi palak ke saath. i think un ke club ki koi meeting thi." shiv was hurt and furious about his mum. she left him alone when ever he needed her the most. she was never around to help him with varni but also would not like gauri taking care of her. his mobile rang. "shiv varni tang to nahikar rahi na" "nahi dadi. gauri ko miss kar rahi hai." "bachi hai na lagao ho gaya hai.kiya kar rahi hai" "kuch nahi chachi us ko tayar ka rahi hai" "to nikhila kahan hai" "wo apni club ki meeting pe gayi hain" "kya ghar ke halat theek nahi or wo club ki meetings attend karne me busy hai chalo koi nahi shyla to hai na tumhari madad karne ke liye. me a jati lakin gauri akeli ho jaye gi" "nahi dadi me manage kar lon ga app wahin rahiye gauri ke saath jab tak me app ko lene nahi ata."
shiv and dada ji was playing with varni. he was waiting for shyla chachi to make tings for gauri. so he could take them she did not trusted teh hospital food. so she said she would prepare it herself. "varni beta idher dekho" shiv took a picture of her sitting in dadaji's lap. shiv gave her toys and she thrwoed it away and laughed shiv gave her it again she again threw it. she seemed to be enjoying it. and laughing at the same time. shiv kept giving her things and she kept thorwing them. and once shiv stopped giving gher them she would start crying. shiv took hold of her. shiv took hold of her and swung her in air. which made her very happy. shiv saw that she was beginning to laugh more. she was les moody. it would not have been possible if not of gauri. he saw nikhila come in through the door. his expression tightened. "kaise ho shiv. hello varni kaisi ho" she touched her cheek and she started crying. she moved her. and she stopped crying. "or shiv gauri ka pata chala kaisi hai wo." "theek hai mom raat ko ziyada tabiat kharab thi." "my foot. drama kar rahi hai. us larki ko drama karne ke ilawa atta hi kiya hai. jab dekho natak. sab kuch tumhari attention pane ke liye kar rahi hai. is liye kehti thi khud bhi door raho or varni ko bhi dor rakho." shiv left from there angrily. he was angry with nikhula but did not want to tell her as he was stil confused why his mother was doing this.
shiv gave varni to shyla chachi and told her to take care of her. "sorry chachi me app ko bar bar takleef de raha hon mama hoti to un ko de deta lakin un ke liye apni parties ziyada important hain." "aray beta kaisi batien kar rahe hon bhala mujeh varni sekiya takleef hogi. bachon ke saath to ronaq hoti hai. bache to ache lagte hain. bewakoof hi hon ge jin ko un ka khayal rakhna takleef lagta hai" he went upto his room and called the bank manager. "hi me shiv kapoor bol raha hon" "yes mr shiv kapoor kahiye me app ke liye kya kar sakta hon ajj." "mujeh app se us loan ke bare me baat karni thi. which gauri applied for." "yes mr shiv kapoor hum ne app ke kehne pe un ka loan approve tokar diya tha. koi problem hai kya" "ji contract me yeh saaf likha tha ke un ko loan milne ke bad yahan rehna hoga lakin woh apna transfer kara rahi hain. or me nahi chahta ke loan milne ke bad wo kahin pe bhi jaye. she will have to work in the same school. so could you please hold the loan for a while. until she decides what she wants to do." "sure mr kapoor that would not be a problem. app ne ok kiya tha. ab app keh rahe hain to hum kiya kar sakte hain. akhir uski guarantee bhi to app ne di thi. your work will be done." "thank you so much" shiv put the phone in his pocket thinking to himself. "i am sorry gauri mujeh nahi pata ke tumhe in paison ki zaroorat kyun ahi mujeh sirf itna pata hai ke mere baron ki khushi tumahare yahan rehne me hai. tum jana chahti or sab ko dukh dena chahti ho. or me nahi chahta ke tumhari waja se kissi ko dukh pochenche. i have to do this for my elders sake. apni khusi ke liye tum itne dilon ko dukhi nahi kar sakti. me is ki ijjazat khabhi nahi doon ga."
shiv was on his way to the hospital. he came to send dadi and dad home. so they can rest as they stayed overnight. he wanted to give them rest. he came upto dadi "dadi kaisi hain." "me theek hon ghar pe sab theek hain na" "ji sab theek hain varni chachi ke pas hai or mama or palak kissi party pe gaye hain" "yeh nikhila bhi na" "dadi gauri kaisi hai abb" "hmm haan theek hai" "acha aisa ki jiye ap or papa abb ghar jaiye me yahan rok jaat hon gauri ke saath app log thak gaye hon ge" nahi is ki koi zaroorat nahi hai gauri ko tumhari koi zaroorat nahi hai tum ja sakte ho yahan se"said mahen angrily. "dad plz app ko apni sehat ka bhi khayal rakhna hai. agar app log bemar par gaye to." "yeh thek keh raha hai mahen hume chalna chahiye thora rest kar ke phir a jye ge." mahen could not argue. they left. shiv went into gauri's room. she looked so weak he rembered nikhila words. but then thought how could she lok so weak if she was faking it. if only her mother sees this. he went near her. "kasi ho gauri." "shiv varni kaisi hai us ne ziyada tang to nahi kiya app ko" shiv smiles. even now she was worried about varnii when she should be worried about herself. "haan wo theek hai." he was touched by her concern for varni. "tumhe bohot miss kar rahi hai. us ko tumhari adat ho gayi hai. jab bhi dekho tumhe dhoondhti rehti hai. jaldi se theek ho jao. or us ko sambhalo. mujeh se nahi sambhalti. ajj phir me ne diaper change karne ki koshish ki lakin nakam. wo to acha ho shyla chachi wahan thi. nahito pata nahi me kaise karta." gauri smiles. she was satisfied. "meri samujh me nahi ata app pehle kaise uska kahayal rakhte the." siv laughed a bit on that. he took out the food and helped gauri to sit up. gauri experienced the pain again. she took hold of shiv's hand tightly. lets out a little cry of pain. "gauri kiya hoa phir se dard hoa. omg dekho kuch nahi hoga hosla rakho me doctor ki bolata hoon" he did not want to leave her for a minute so he screamed. "doctor" he said that about four times when natasha came running in. "gaui natasha a gayi sab theek ho jaye ga. hold on" gauri was in so much pain she was not even listening to her. natasha checks gauri. while shiv stood there holding gauri's hand worried. his forehead got sweaty seeing gauri in such state. he held her hand tight not wanting to let ge. assuring her that he is by her side. "mujeh gauri ko test ke liye le ke jana hoga" shiv does not move he still held her hand tightly. "don't worry shiv. me tumhari wife ko bilkul theek condition me tumhe lotaon gi. she wil be alright" shiv was stunned by what natasha said. he loooked at gauri who did not even heard what natasha said. she was having svere pains. shiv let go of her.
shiv ges a call from office. "sir ajj humari mehta's ke saath important meeting hai" "to me kiy karoon i am busy tum log handle kar lo." "par sir" "me nekaha na i can't come" he cuts the phone and switched it off. he saw machan coming his way. "hi shiv tum yahan gauri kaisi hai" "hmm us ko phir se pain hoa. she looked miserable. i am scared machan. us ko bohot dard ho raha hai. her pains look deadly. mujeh dar lag raha hai kahin me gauri ko kho na don. agar aisa hoa to varni phir se apni ma kho de gi. varni needs her alot." machan kept staring at him wide eyes. "kuch nahi hoga shiv uperwale pe bharosa rakho. or waise bhi ua ka ilaj natasha kar rahi hai. she is the best in her work." shiv closed his eyes. machan looked at him then smiled. "abb ayi na gari patri pe. muje pata tha sachayi pata karne ke bad tumhara rawaiya badal jaye ga or dekho me kitna sahi tha." he puts a hand on his shoulder. "shiv calm man everything will be alright." "i hope so machan." shiv looked up to see dadi coming their way. "shiv gahr pe office se phone aya tha ke udher eik important meeting hai." "ji dadi me ne un ko kaha hai ke khud handle kar le" "nahi shiv yeh to sahi nahi hai tum jao me yahan rukti hon" "nahi dadi me bhi...." "me na kaha na tum jao me yahan rukti hoon." "ok dadi. par jaise hi doctor bahir aye or gauri ke bare me pata chale mujeh phone kar di jiye ga" "haan theek hain" saying this he laeves with machan. natasha comes out. " dadi app. mujeh laga tha ke shiv yahan ho ga." "haan me ne us ko bejh diya. sab theek to hai" "ji sab theek hai. lakin hume doo ro din gauri ko yahan rakhna hoga" "theek hai jab tak wo theek ho aye mujeh koi problem nahi." dadi gets a call its shiv. "haan shiv haan wo theek hai" "ok dadi me khana le ke gaya tha plz app usse de dena" "ok baba de doon gi"
shiv kept visiting gauri about four of five times a day. and also looking after varni in every visit she would ask about varni. shiv every times told her that varni was fine. gauri was recovering fast which was a good news. two days been passes shiv was sitting in office. he thought of gauri and phoned natasha. "hello natasha. hauri ki reports a gayi." "nahi shiv wo abhi nahi ayi. i say it would take about one or two weeks for it to come back. relax us ko kuch nahi hoa hai. i am sure reports will say the same." shiv worried eased off a bit but not fully as the reports had not came in yet. shin put down the phone. he wanted to take gauri home from hospital but stayed back and mahen said he will do it. mahen was angry with shiv. so he did not go to pick her up.
mahen filled in all the formality and paid the fees. gauri was discharged form the hospital. they entered the home. where dadi stood with the arti thali. she done the arti and let gauri in. gauri was hapy to be back. everyone greeted her except from nikhila maya and palak. who completely ignored. she did not care about them anyway. the people she cared about was theer. she looked at varni and shyla chachi handed varni to her. gauri took her in her arms and kissed her countlessly. she had missed her so much. she was caring for her as a mother. she kissed her again and again as if she satyed away from her daughter a long time. shiv who wjust came into the house just stood silently and watched gauri loving varni. everybody seemed to smile at the way gauri was loving varni. "dadi me varni ko apne room me le ke ja rahi hoon me ne is ko bohot miss kiya hai. or lagta hai varni ne bhi. hospital me din bitana mushkil ho gaya tha." shiv smiled. nikhila who was watching gauri doing all this said. "drama acha karti ho gauri. acha bahala sakoon tha pata nahi kyun ayi tum wapis." "nikhila shut up" mahen said angrily. nikhila left from there in anger.
gauri in her room was playing with varni. she was so weak. but would not let go of vani. it was as if she was seeing her after 3 years rather than three days. she loved her a lot. she made her feel complete. "gauri bas kar bache is ko mujhe de do. abhi to theek bhi nahi hoi sahi se. dekh kis tarhan ki shakal nikal ayi hai. chal to aram kar." "dadi plz rehne di jiya na mujeh acha lag raha hai." just than shiv comes to the room. "dadi varni ko mujhe de di jiya is ka khayal me rakh leta hon ap bhi thak gayi hon gi. app dono aram kar li jiye. gauri abhi tum rest karo. varni ko baad me le lena." he tok varni from her. gauri seemed a little angry. but let her go. where dadi was hapy seeing shiv's concern for gauri. "aye bhagwan in ki jodi ko humesha salamat rakhna. yeh aise hi haste muskurate rahe."
shiv was in his room with varni. he was playing with her. putting out her toys while she was more interested in his chain so he put it forward towards her so she can play. just then nikhila entered the room. "shiv meri samujh me nahi a raha tumhe ho kiya gaya hai. tum gauri ki itni chinta kyun kar rahe ho. bhol gae us ka maksad kiya hai. wo kiya karna chahti hai. i am sure yeh sab bhi eik drama tha zaroor us ki koi chal. wo chahti hai ke is ghar se na jaye transfer rok jaye. woh janti hai mahen us ko abb khabhi nahi jane de ge. is liye us ne yeh kiya tha. me ne to socha tha ke is ka transfer kara don go ti acha hoga. jab tum ne yahan rehne ka faisla kiya to tab hi me ne is ka kissi dosre school me transfer kara diya. mujeh kiya pata tha ke yeh itni chalak nikle gi. humari zindgi se nikalne ka naam hi nahi leti tum bhi abb us ki taraf mayl ho rahe ho me ne us ka transfer is liye kara take wo tumhari zindagi me ipshita ki jaga na le sake par tum ko samujhte hi nahi ho." saying this she leaves leaving a shocked shiv behind. he wondered why his mom was so bitter about gauri. he wanted to find the reason about his mom being angry. that was one more thing included into hi to-do list.