Kismat Ka Khel ff updated pt33 pg91 - Page 16

shiv aur gauri key ssaath 😉 hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm waise gauri ko kya hua hai don't tell me its cancer or something 😕 😕 😕

omg i think gauri had stomach cancer!! plz i hope not shiv was finally getting out from under nikhila!! continue soon!

part 11

shiv carried gauri to the car. dadi came behind her. shiv could see the pain on her face. what was wrong with her. why was she in so much pain. shiv was hurting allover because of the state gauri was in. she qlenched to his shirt. gripped it hrad. shiv could feel that gauri's pain was increasing. he held gauri tight against him. dadi opened the car door and sat in shiv puts gauri in her head on dadi's lap. gauri cried with pain. "shiv jadli karo" shiv drove wildly. he was constantly looking thorugh the mirror. he saw her sweating shivering. shiv wanted to change that. make her pain go away. if he had a magic wand he would have puched the back. free gauri from this pain that she was suffering now. she looked miserable. shiv stopped in front of the hospital. he opened the door and took gauri into his arms. "kuch nahi hoga tumeh gauri. sambhalo apne app ko" he was assuring himself more than her. fisrt ipshita now gauri this could not happen to him. he would not let anything happen to gauri. what will varni do without her she needed her. he would not let varni loose her mother for second time. he hurried toward the emergency. no doctors were available. as it was late in night. shiv put gauri down on a stretcher and phoned machan. "hello machan. natasha ko le ke jaldi app hospital gauri ki tabiat bohot kharab hai. she is in pain. plz huryy up." "kiya hoa us ko kahin us ne suicide ki to koshish nahi ki. nikhila aunty ne kuch kaha tha kiya" "god machan shut up. jaldi aoo. she is in a bad state." he tured toward gauri he picked up her hand. she held him tight. she was cold. shiv started to rub her hands. gauri was crying holding her stomach. "gauri plz hosla rakho. natasha ati hogi." "dadi ap dekhiye na gauri ko kitna dard ho raha hai. kiy ahoa hai isse." "gauri bache kuch nahi ho ga tujhe. meri jaan doctor abhi ati hogi." "dadi ahhhh bohot dard ho raha" she shook her head with pain her eyes closed. her face paleand sweaty. her hand trembeled in shiv's hand shiv took hold of her hand tight. with the free hand he diallled machan's number. "machan kaha ho...... jaldi plz" he ut the phone into his pocket. "natasha a rahi hai gauri thora sabar karo." he sat and held her in her against his chest. he body trembled in his arms. it took the life out of shiv seeing her that way. "oh god plz don't let anything hapen to gauri." he saw natasha coming hiv took gauri and followed her. she was put into emergency ward. natasha checked gauri and gave gauri a pain injection. shiv was not in room as natasha told him to wait outside as it get too crowded. "aunty kiya problem hai. kiya hoa hai usse." dadi tells her everything and also tells her not to tel anyone. she goes out and shiv hurries upto her. "natasha kiya hoa hai gauri ko."abhi kuch nahi keh sakte shiv. abhi subha us ke kuch test karne hain. phir hi bata sakti hoon. hume usse ajj raat under observation rakhna hai. if you like you an go home. and don't worry about her she wil be fine." shiv thanked her. he felt all his worries ease off. but one thing was still bugging him. why did she had so much pain. if it was nothing. she felt so pale so fragile. so much in pain. well if there was anyhting he will know tomorrow. a nurse came upto him handing him the precription. and asking him to sign the papers at the reception and also pay the fee there. shiv went upto the reception he asked for the regeister to sign. the receptionist gave him the register he was about to fill it in. when someone stopped him. "rok jao." "par dad" "nahi shiv tumhe koi haq nahi hai yeh papers sign karne ka. yeh haq tumhe zaroor milta agar tum gauri ko chor kar na jate. jis raat tum ne us ko chora us raat tumhara yeh haq bhi chala gaya." shiv was hurt listening to his father but he was right shiv had lost this right ages ago. he lowered his eys and stepped away. "you are right dad. i have lost that right." shiv goes away from there he came near dadi. she was prying. shiv sat next to her. "kiya baat hai dadi. app aisi hi ghabra rahi hai kuch nahi hoga gauri ko. she wil be allright." dadi heard him then looked towrad the room. "shiv mujeh dar lagta hai agar gauri ko kuch ho gaya to. agar wo hume chor ke chali gayi to. hum mar jaye ge shiv. gauri humari zindagi ban chuki hai. us me humari jaan hai. agar usse kuch ho gaya to hum kaise jiye ge. aye baghwan plz gauri ko kuch na ho. apna karam ki jiye us par. meri bachi ne bohot saha hai abb to us ki pariksha lena band ki jiye." shiv just sat there. he did not know that she meant so much to them. they were right they would be lost without her. his thoughts broke out of a noise. it was his cell. home was falshing. he hoped everything was alright there. "hello" "shiv beta kab tak aao ge" "chachi me hospital me hon koi problem hai" "beta varni jab se ro rahi hai chup nahi ho rahi. tum plz ho sake to ghar a jao. na tum ho na gauri hai is ka hayal rakhne ke liye or mujhe se chup nahi ho rahi" "ji me dekhta hon" he cuts the call "dadi wo varni" "han beta tum jao yahan hum log hai gauri ka dhayan rakhne ke liye. varni to kissi se chup bhi nahi hoti" "ji dadi plz agar koi problem ho to mujeh phone karna." "zaroor" shiv goes into gauri room. he looks at her. then without saying anything leaves. shiv goes home. he went in and saw shyla chachi stuggling to quieten varni. shiv went in. "laiye chachi mujeh de di jiye" "han lo chup hi nahi ho rahi. gauri kaisi hai" "ji abb behter hai pehle s doctor ne kaha ha keunder observation rakhna hoga." "ohhh shukar hai ab theek hai" "chachi mama kahan hain" "wo to co rahi hai" "ohh ok good night" "haan good night agar zaroorat ho toknock kar dena" "ji" shiv left hurt. his mum did not care about him.he took varni and fed her she jus would not let him feed her. with great difficulty he fed her. he takes her to gauris rom but remembered that she was not in the house. she was in hospital. he felt for the first time that he needed her. he needed her to take care of varni. he came back to his rom trying to make varni sleep but she would not sleep he started singing the song he heard gauri singing the other day. varni fell a sleep. shiv pute her beside him and picked up ipshita picture. "ipshita kya hum ne galat kiya mama pe bharosa kar ke. ipshita mujeh dar lag raha hai ke meri ma ne mere saath khel khela hai if she did. then i committed a sin. me ne gunnah kiya hai ipshita. bohot bara gunnah. meri much samujh me nahi a raha. aj pata chala ke gauri sab ghar walon ke liye kya hai. ipshita ajj me dadi ki ankhon me un ki awaz me gauri ke liye tarap dekhi hai. me nahi chahta ke un ko dukh ho. gauri ka transfer se wo waise hi pareshan thi lakin ab to us ki beemari ki waja se or pareshan hongi. mujeh uska transfer rokna hoga. me usse dadi dada or papa ko hurt karne ki ijazat nahi de sakta." he puts the picture on the table again. thinking that the first thing he will do tomowrrow is hold gauri's loan as she will not be able to leave without it. shiv dozed off. he was standing at a beach. his arm around someone. he heard hmself laugh. "shiv plz eik bar sirf eik bar. i promise kuch nahi hoga" he looked at gauri sweetly. smiling yet angry "no gauri tum varni ko pani me nahi le ke jao gi. she will actch a cold." "shiv kuch nahi hota yeh app ka weham hai. varni ko kuch nahi ghoga. me wada karti hon. sab mayien apne bachon ko le ke ja rahi hain or sirf me yahan bethi hon" "gauri zaroori nahi jo sab karien wo tum bhi karo" "shiv plz" "ok chalo" he saw her smiling with her beautifull dimples. he took her into the water. her face lit up. she smiled innocently. it seemed that varni was enjoying it to. "papa" shiv took hold of her hand. and stood beside her. when he felt water on his face. he saw up only noticing that it was gauri. he eyes were twinkling with mischief. shiv stood there for a second then bent down and started throwing water on varni ang gauri. they seemed to be enjoying it. varnii and gaur started running suddenly gauri fell and dissapeared. shiv woke up. sweating. what kind of dream was it. he felt as if gauri was leaving varni too. not he woild not let that happen. if anyhting happened to gauri who would take care of gauri. he then again complained to god. "god app ne mere saath aisa kyun kiya. kyun bar bar app meri bachi ke sir se maa ka saya cheen lete hain. kyun app hum sab ki koshiyon pe nazar lagate hain. plz is bari koi unhoni na ho plz. after that shiv could not sleep. he marched up and down in the room. he picked up the phone and phoned mahen. "hello dad is everything ok there." "shiv tum abhi tak soye nahi" "nahi wo varni ki waja se jag raha tha" "acha haan yahan sab theek hai. gauri is much better now. tum so jao" shiv puts the phone on the side table. h e dreamed of her today. him her and varni as a happy family. he wondered how would the outcome had been if he had not left her. one thing kept ticking in his mind. why his mothere did what she did. was she wrong. did she plan al this against gauri. what would she get by ruining her life. gauri seemed so innocent. all of todays incident came back infront of his eyes. he saw the pain gauri went through. he felt how miserable she was. how she trembeled like a fish who could not get water. he wanted to see her happy. now he thought of the oain she went through when he left her. how miserable she would hae been them. the first night he loked in her eyes. he saw hopes dreams. he saw the gentlness the fragulness in her. but he broke them without thinking twice. if he mum was the reason behind it then what would he do. she was his mother how could he go against her. but if gauri did not do anything she was his wife how could he left her there at the sage. he did not reret anything. but what if his mum was proven guilty then what. would it make any difference. would gauri forgive him. he wanted to see her happy. he wanted her to move on.

Originally posted by: sum2005

omg shiv supporting gauri 😳 😳 against palak and mahen slapped nikki omg happy just got to see here and it wont happen in kaa.
gauri is ill 😭 is she also going to die ,omg poor varni 😭 😭 😭 .

nice update maria 👏

yes well he is the best and the unpredictable. you would never know what he would door when he would do it. thanks for your comment😉😉😉

Originally posted by: Iqbaladdict

wonderful update, our man is changing,beautiful update girly, will look forward to the new beginning, hehe, u have an amazing mind, loved this one too, Maria, well done 👏

thanks yaar. he is changing alright for good or worse you tell me.. hahai don't know why i said the new beginning. hmm may be there is a surprise left. so just wait and watch. thanks. mujeh nahi pata tha mera demagh acha hai mujhe to kaha gaya tha ke mera uper wala porshen khali hai😉😉😉

Originally posted by: ash9

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thanks ash

Originally posted by: iqbals4ever

awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!! 👏

thannnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk you so much for your huge applause😉😉😉

Originally posted by: prab_rockinn

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wonderful..............
things are beginnin to clear up in front of shiv 😃 😃
that slap was brilliant!!!!
Now i guess its shiv's nursing time....... he will definitely bring her back too good health.......

thanks prab well you know shiv bad one minute good the next😉😉😉

Originally posted by: jiya imdad

wow! wonderful update. For the first time i was not mad at shiv , atlast he got brains to think that his mom was playing with him. Good u put that machan's character to some use otherwise i thought his character is useless just like in the serial 😆. Mahen slapped nikhila 😲 [:D/] he got guts man 😆 afterall she deserved it 😡
u know ur a suspense queen so r u going to tell us what's wrong with gauri or do we have to keep guessing on ourselves!!
continue soon 😃

thanks. hahahaah look like i have done a good job then if you were not mad. but you see i like him better when he is not good. well he is still confused about his mother. hahaha yaar in the soap he is seriously a useless character i had to do something about that. once again he will not do that in the serial so i thought i make him slap her in my ff. yes keep guessing, i will see how much right gusses we get😉😉😉

Originally posted by: shivgauri

awesome part!!!whts wrong with gauri???pls don't tell me she is dyin.pls continue soon.

thanks yaar. well it will not be out til later so you will have to wait. or you can just guess😉😉😉