Kismat Ka Khel ff updated pt33 pg91 - Page 20

Originally posted by: chat_222

well I still do not understnad what shiv's problem is 😡 . How could he say that he will not give permission to guari to go just because it will hurt his family members .Hello!!!! he hurt his own family by moving away with ipsitta first 🤢 . He is no one to giive permission to guari as there marriage is not even legal thus they do not share any relationship. 😡 Apart from these points I guess the story is going good. 👏 😛

well he can't just blame his mother for some things she had to be totally proved wrong. and i will do that soon. so just wait and watch. well he does care about his family now even more as things are clearing up. and i think he had to make her stay for his sake. welll. well they will have a relationship at some point so why not make them work for it. thanks for your comments. 😉

Originally posted by: kaira

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thanks kaira😉

Originally posted by: shivgauri

great part!!!pls continue soon!!!

thanks yaar i will😉

Originally posted by: jiya imdad

nice part Maria!! love the way shiv is melting and being drawn towards gauri . That's exactly what i want for him to realise her importance.
Varni is becoming less moody, no she shouldn't be infact she should give hard time to shiv 😆 so that he should know how hard it is to take care of a child.
Ok!! may be he doesn't know but i know very well my 1 yr old baby cousin didn't let me even sit for a second when i was taking care of him 4 only 1 night. I was roaming around the room with him in my arms 4 whole night bcuz as i would stop walking he would wake up n cry. But i can say 1 thing i didn't had to sing my music system did that task 4 me 😳.
But i must say 1 thing dear i can do anything but taking care of a child is out of question 😕
By the way when r u planning to end the suspense i m looosing my patience 😉
continue soon
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thanksssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss. i know. now that he is coming back to senses he wil know her imporatance. yes that is what i thought but i had to do that as i want him to let gauri hold varni's responsibilty when she is well. that way his trust wil build i think. hey don't talk to me about kids man. woo they are pain in the a** i used to live at my cousins house. woo there kids gave me such a headache. but they are always cute. hmm you can't take care of a child. and i am really good with them. i can give up all my priorites for taking care of a child. a just like them when they are 3 and above. 😉

Originally posted by: crystalclear

thanksssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss. i know. now that he is coming back to senses he wil know her imporatance. yes that is what i thought but i had to do that as i want him to let gauri hold varni's responsibilty when she is well. that way his trust wil build i think. hey don't talk to me about kids man. woo they are pain in the a** i used to live at my cousins house. woo there kids gave me such a headache. but they are always cute. hmm you can't take care of a child. and i am really good with them. i can give up all my priorites for taking care of a child. a just like them when they are 3 and above. 😉

yep the kids r really cute i can't help it but simply adore them and love to play with them. Ahan... u can give up all ur priorities for children 🤔 ermm... i m little selfish in this case simply can't do that. And i only love children under 2yrs . Unless until they can not talk n eat up my head i m comfortable with them😳. And just wanted to share a good news with u 😳 i'll be blessed with 2 new cousins later this year😳 just can't wait 4 that moment to arrive😳

But 4 now i m waiting impatiently for ur update so hurrry up.....😛

part13

shiv was shocked by her mother's behaviour. he had never in dreams thought that his mother could hate someone so much. she could fall to such extent. she had destroyed gauri's life and he had helped her. he had done what she yold him. what a fool he was. who would not enquire before going a head. what did he know about gauri. nothing he knew all that his mother told him. how could he be so dumb to listen to what his mother said about her. how could he had played with her feelings. more than that he was mad on his mum. how could she pay with three lives. how could she play with his son's. he had stayed away from his family. for which till now he had balmed gauri. but she was innocent she did not do anyhting. it was all his mother's doing. all of her accussations on gauri hads prvoed wrong time and time again. if she was worried that gauri will take ipshita's place then why did she let her come into his life. why did she not stop the wedding a mother has enough power to stop all the things that is coming in the way of her childrens happiness. why did she not stop it. he did not even question. his mind was full of hatred towards gauri. who was so pure. so innocent. who could not think bad for anyone then why did people think bad for her. why did his mother caused her so much pain and stil trying to cause pain for her. why was she making her life a living hell. he took ipshita picture tears rolling down his cheeks. "ipshita tum mera pehla or akhiri pyar ho me tumhare ilawa kissi ko nahi chah sakta. lakin mama ne aisa kyun kya. un ko kyun lagta hai ke me gari ko chahta ho. un ko kyhun lagta hai ke gauri tumhari jaga le sakti hai. jab ke me or tum achi tarhan janti hoo ke tumhari jaga koi nahi le sakta. tum meri biwi ho. haan gauri ki jaga hai meri zindagi me lakin sirf meri bachi ki ma ki hasiyat se. she does not mean anything else to me. i want her to take care of my baby as you trusted her. because you asked that in time of your death. ohhh ipshita what have we done. how could we have been a part in runing someone's life. meri samujh me nahi ata kiya karoon. me to usse yeh bhi nahi keh sakta ke meri beti ko apni samujh ke palo. kiya haq hai mera us pe. me ne to apne sare haq kho diya jis din me usse chor ke gaya tha. me ne usse kitna dukh diya. badle me wo mujhe jitna marzii dukh de kam hai. lakin wo aisa bhi to nahi karti wo mujeh kuch anhi kehti. wo sab kuch apne andar samye bethi hai. wo kyun mujhe bura bhala nahi kehti. me ne us ko ajjj tak kissi se unchi awaz me baat karte nahi dekha. me ne usse kiya kuch nahi kaha. kitna buray ilfaz istemal kiye us ke liye. me bohto bura hon ipshita. i am feeling so guilty ipshita. me ne eik begunna ko us jurm ki saza di jo us ne kiya hi nahi" shiv cries and sleeps holding ipshita's photo.
varni wakes up early morning crying. shiv gets up he puts ipsita's photo on side and picks up varni and the empty bottle and goes towards the kitchen. he was at door and stoopped. he saw gauri making varni's bottle. she did not care about her illness instead she was making varni's bottle. she hears varni cry and turns around. she saw shiv standing there still sleep holding varni and bottle in his hand. she smiled. "bas shiv ho gaya me ap is ko sambhaliye me bas bottle fil kar lon." she quickly fills the bottle. and takes carni from shiv. shiv gives varni to her. gauri holds her in her arms and feeds her. "sorry shiv me dair se uthi is liye is ki bottle pehle nahi baan saki. agar pata hota ke yeh itna roye gi to me pehle hi uth jati." "aray nahi gauri tumhe to aram karna chahiye abhi kal hi to discharge hoi ho hospital se." shiv was so moved by the way gauri took care of varni neglecting her own health. he stands while gauri feeds varni. once finished she puts the bottle on the table and holds varni against her shoulder. shiv picks up teh bottle and moves towards the sink. he started washing it. "aray shiv yeh kiya kar rahe hain app me kar lon gi app chor di jiye." "kyun me itna sa bhi nahi kar sakta" gauri quietens. shiv puts the bottle on the cutlery stand and moves towards gauri and varni. now gauri was feeding her baby food. "gauri tum bohot achi ho or me ne tumhe kitna galat samjha. jab tum varni ke liye is tarhan care karti ho to mujeh apni galati ka shiddat se ehsas hota hai or dil karta hai ke kash kissi tarhan time ko wapis kar don. takay jo hoa na hota." thinking to himself just than dada ji walks into the kitchen.
"kyun bhai kiya hoa raha hai yahan" "kuch anhi dada ji varni ko bhok lagi thi to isse le ke aya ho" "achi baat hai me morni9ng walk ke liye ja raha hon tumhe jana hai" shiv nodss his head in no. "acha hai waise bhi agar tum saath jao ge to jealous feel karo ge. sab larkiyan tumhe chor ke mere peeche par jaye gi. or tumhe khamkha bura lage ga" both gauri and shiv laughed. "waise shiv tum ne bohot flirt kiya hai chalna hai kiya" "dadaji dadi app ke peeche khari hain" dada ji turned around quickly. to find no one there. "gauri tum bhi. shiv tum chal rahe ho ke nahi" shiv comes closer to dad ji and whispers in his ears "dada ji i am a married man with a kid. i am not interested in any other girl. pap enjoy ki jiye" he realises what he said. dada ji was shocked is well. shiv was surprised why he said that. dada ji smiled and said. "well i can see that. but you are missing a good chance." "nahi ap enjoy kariye. me dadi ko batata hoon" gauri gives varni to shiv and clears up varni plate and spoon. "gauri tum yeh chor do na. ramu kaka kar lien ge. tumhe apni health ka khayal rakhna chahiye. chalo ja ke aram karo." "bas yeh kar lon phir chali jaon gi waise bhi ab me theek hon." shiv leaves from there. he could not persuade gauri.
gauri comes to her room. she phones the bank manager to talk about the loan and if she could draw it. "hello sir my name is gauri chattergee. i wanted to talk to you about my loan. i wanted to ask if i could get the loan now. i am in need of money." "sorry maam we heard that you are going to get a transfer. we can't provide you a loan if you are moving you have to stay with your old job if you want this loan." gauri was heart broken. "but sir" "sorry maam we can't do naything for you unlesss you cahnge your decision." "ok sir i am ready to stay with my old job but can you make the loan quick. as i am really in need of money. i will be really greatfull" "sure if you are staying then we have no problem" gauri puts the phoen down. gauri was desperate for money she needed to pay mahen papa for the hospital bills and also for her treatment. if it was not improtant then she would not have been bothered with the loan not passing. shiv got a call from the bank manager. "sir app ne jaisa bola tha hum ne waise hi kiya gauri ji ne apna faisla badal diya hai. un ka kehna hai ke un ko paise jald se jald chahiye. she is need of money seriously." "thank you so much. you can give her the money" "sure sir bye" shiv puts the phone down. he was happy that gauri had changed her decision but why would she need the money. that too a big amount. why wa she so desperate. one more thing taht he had to find out about gauri.
one week passed. it was time for gauri's appointment. she had an apponiment with natasha today. "chalo gauri hume dair ho rahi hai" "dadi ap kahan ja rahi hain" "me tumhare saath" "dadi me akeli ja rahi hon app varni ka khayal rakhiye. shyla chachi bhi out of town hai. hum usse na saath leke ja sakte hain na chor ke app plz ghar rahiye me ake app ko sab bataon gi." "chalo theek hai" shiv tum gauri ko hospital drop kar do me nahi chahti ke yeh akeli jaye. tum saaath ho ge to tasali rahe gi." "ji dadi" "dadi is ki kya zarorat hai me theek se chali jao gi. in ko office me kaam hoga. awain mere liye time waste kare ge. i will manage" "khabar dar tum kuch boli shiv tumhare saath jaye ga and thats final" gauri stayed quiet. she opened the back door and sat in. "hello madam me app ka driver nahi hon agay betho" gauri was surprised at shiv but silently got up and sat in the front. not comfertable with shiv around that tooo alone. shiv keeps looking at her now and then. she was quiet. looking out of the window al the time "kitni bholi hai yeh. totally pure or me mama ki baton me ake is ko kiya kuch nahi keh gaya. ghin ati hai mujeh apne app par gauri ko kitna sehna para hai meri waja se. eik bar bhi nahi socha ke mere jane ke bad us ka kiya hal hoa hoga. kis tarhan us ne logon ke sawalon ka jawab diya hoga. log to ise hi bura bhala kahe ge." they reached the hospital. they both got out of the car. he wanted to accompany her make sure everything was alright. "aray shiv app jaiye me manage kar lon gi. yunhi takleef hogi app ko" "nahi gauri ajj tumhari reports ani hain me un ka result dekh ke chala jaon ga" gauri got nervous. she did not want him to know. if he came in and natasha told him or he himseld found out then what. she walked in with him quietly. could not arhue because he will get angry. the came to the reception. the receptionist ask shiv for the fee.shiv was about to give it to her "shiv me deti hon app.." shiv took hold of her arm tightly. "chup nahi reh sakti tum. kab dekho kuch na kuch bolti rehti ho. de raha ho na to kiya problem hai" gauri lowered her eyes shiv smiled. he knew she would not say anything now. he take sth form and says "aray yaha pe tum in ka naam hi galat likha hai. in ka naam gauri chattergee anhihai balke mrs gauri kapoor hai. plz change that." gauri looks upto him shocled and angry regreting the moment she decidid to come here with him. they both go to meet natasha. natasha was surprised to see shiv. she came forward "shiv tum yahan mujhe to laga tha ke dadi aye gi" "dadi varni ke saath busy hain to me le aya gauri ko waise bhi ajj is ki reports ani thi." natasha takes gauri for checkup. they came out. "everything ok" "han shiv sab theek hai" "or reports ka kya" "me ne tumhe kaha tha na normal hon gi wo bhi theek hain. worry na kro" shiv knew by the expression that both of them were giving him that they were hiding something but what ould be wrong with gauri. he had to find out but knew tha ladies in fornt of him won't tell. they both say their good bye. once outside the hospital gauri stands and looks at shiv. "shiv wo me" "kiya hoa gauri tum kya" "varni ke kapre kam par gaye hainwo bari ho rahi hai us e liye naye kapre lene hai. me soch rahithi ke shopping kar le" "haan yeh to hai chalo betho" gauri sat and in 15 minutes they were in mall. "chalo varni ke liye shopping kar lete hain" the went into the shop "yeh lo gauri jo dil kare le lo varni ke liye" "shiv plz ap choose kariye shayad app ko meri choice achi na lage." shiv was hut. he did not know gauri was that scared of him. sheeven thought that he would not like the thingsshe chooses. that would have been true if he was still listening to his mother but things changed "aisa karte hain dono mil ke karte hain." gauri got happy. shiv looked at her face it was glowing of happiness and doing things for varni. shiv could not believe her motherly effection towards varni. she did not even give birth to her yet loved her as her own. he was touched. "gauri yeh dekho yeh kaisa hai" gauri made a weird face "shiv varni ki shopping kon karta hai. kyu ke mujhe nahu lagta ke ap ne khabhi bhi us ke liye shopping ki hai. wo bari ho rahi or yeh new born ka. bohot chota hai" shiv embaressed. "well i am not a mother i don't know what to get her. me tpys dekhta hon tum colthes le lo." gauri shops for clothes while shiv for toys. gauri finished her shopping while shiv was still confused between toys. "gauri yeh kaisa lag raha hai" "shiv yeh larkon ke liye hai" shiv puts it down. they both reach for the samw toy. both there hands touch. they stare at each other. gauri withdraws her hand. they finish their shopping and head home. dadi saw them coming in with loads of bags. dadi saw gauri was really happy. her face glowing with happiness. "hum a gaye dadi. varni beta dekho hum app ke liye kiya laye hain" gauri takes varni from dadi. gauri shows her al the toys. and dadi was happy seeing gauri hapy. she looked upto tshiv and then walked upto him. "dekho shiv gauri kitni khush ahi me ne usse ajj tak zindagi me itna khush nahi dekha. shiv is bar gauri ko apni zindagi se na jane dena. varni needs her a lot. or waqt ke saath saath tumeh bhi ehsas ho jaye ga ke tumhe bhi us ki zaroorat hai. uperwale ne tumhe eik or moka diya hai. is moke ko haath se na jane dena. shiv apni khushiyan samait lo. in ko jane mat dena." saying this she leaves. shiv heard all of this and was surprised this was th first time dadi had said anyhting to him about gauri. he did not want to say anything too her. he kept quiet. shiv goes toward gauri. lao gauri varni ko mujhe de do. gauri gives varni to er and was about to leave. "gauri plz i can you make me a cup of coffee." "coffee shiv yeh waqt khane ka hai me app ke liye khana le aaon" "ok khana de do but only if you make me a cup after that" "ok me abhi lati hon" she goes to the kitchen and gets food for him. "yeh lien" and holds varni. shiv looks up she had not eaten anything either. he goes to the kitchen and gets another plate. "varni ko saide pe bitha do or khud bhi kaho tumhe waqt pe khana chahiye." gauri was hungry so she puts varni to a side. then puts rice into shiv's plate. and then puts it into her plate. once they finished their meal. shiv told gauri that he will be in his room. gauri went to the kitchen to make a cup of coffee for him. he drinks his coffee and then leaves for office.
in the afternoon gauri gives varno to dadi and tells dadi that she is going to the bank. she reached the bank. she went straight to the manager. "can i come in sir" "yes" "thanks" "me apna loan lene ayi hon." "oh sure baithiye" he gave her some form to fill in. shile he went in to get the her loan money. " me kuch paise mahen kapoor ke bank me dalna chahti hoon" she gave him the exact amount that mahen paid for her in the hospital. "sure maam" he done what she told him "or baki ke mere bank me deposit kar di jiye" "ok" gauri felt hapy finally she could get her treatment started. and by paying mahen's money she felt as if she had been freed froma heavy burden. she was shocked that all the things were happening so fast she was out of there in half an hour. the bank manager called shiv. "sir gauri maam ajj bank ayi thin" he fills him in with all the details. shiv thanked him. he was so angry with gauri. why would she return mahen the money. they had this right on her. they were there for her in her hard time. she did not even consider them her family. why was she so self respected. why would she not let anyone help her. mahen loved her alot. and she thinks that all the money given to her by him is pity. all because of him because he left her. he left the office and went home.
it was evening shiv comes home. he goes to his room and freshens up. takes a shower. puts on comfortable clothes then goes to gauri's room to get varni. he was still angry with her about the the money thing. he stops on the door way. he heard someone cry it was gauri. and he heard dadi consoling her. "dadi meri samujh me nahi a raha me kiya karon. me nahi chati ke mahen papa hurt hon. me ne un ke account me sari rakam transfer kara di jo unho ne mujhe pe spend ki hai." "dadi me theek hona chahti hon varni ke liye. dadi me us ke baghair nahi reh sakti me darti hoon dadi agar shiv ne use bhi mujhe se door kar diya to mera kiya ho ga dadi me mar aon gi dadi. dadi nikhila aunty or shiv dono nahi chahte ke me varni ke pass raho. par dadi wo meri kamzori ban chuki hai. me theek hona chahti hon dadi us ke liye. me janti hon me ne app ko bohot hurt kiya hai dadi" "beta me teri baat samujh rahi hon lakin kiya tum hume itna bhi haq nahi do gi ke hum tumhari madad kar sake. plz gauri hume madad karne do hum abhi zindahain. kiya hume haq nahi hai" "nahi dadi app ko pura haq gau lakin agar me ne aisa kiya to nikhila aunty ke lagaye sab ilzam sach ho jaye ge. me nahi chahti log mujeh paison ka bhoka kahe. me sirf itna chahti hon ke varni mere pass rahe meri ankhon ke samne. me us se dor nahi ho sakti dadi. lakin agar shiv ne us mujehse door kar diya to me kiya karon gi dadi. dadi me jald se jald apna treatment karaon gi take me lar sakon varni ke liye." she kept crying and dadi kept consoling her. shiv was shattered. she wanted the loan fer her treatment and he held it making her suffer. how worng can he get. she needed treatment but hat was wrong with her. she loved vrni so much. even he did not think like that about varni. dadi or gauri mujeh se kiya chopa rahe hain. kyun kisi ne mujeh gauri ki bemari ke bare me nahi bataya. kiya hoa hai gauri ko natasha ne bhi mujhe kuch nahi batya." he leaves from there full of guilt and did not even take varni from gauri. he did not have the courage to do that. he came to his room. "oh god yeh me kiya karne ja raha tha acha hoa time pe loan pass ho gaya. par meri waja se gauri kitna suffer kare gi. o varni se kitna pyar karti hai or me hon ke. god help me mujhe kuch samujh me nahi a raha. me kiya karon"

Originally posted by: jiya imdad

yep the kids r really cute i can't help it but simply adore them and love to play with them. Ahan... u can give up all ur priorities for children 🤔 ermm... i m little selfish in this case simply can't do that. And i only love children under 2yrs . Unless until they can not talk n eat up my head i m comfortable with them😳. And just wanted to share a good news with u 😳 i'll be blessed with 2 new cousins later this year😳 just can't wait 4 that moment to arrive😳

But 4 now i m waiting impatiently for ur update so hurrry up.....😛

oh congrats. mee too with one cousin. i am going to be a poopho this year. but too bad i won't be there as they are in pakistan. i have updated thanks for waiting

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maria very long update and a interesting one too.

at last shiv is using his brain and feeling guilty what he did to gauri simply by believing her mom. thank god he was out of her mother spell.

shiv considers himself as a married man with a kid 😉

omg what happen to gauri ,will shiv able to know the truth,maria u left us on a cliffhanger like kat 😕 😕

eagerly waiting for update.

awesome part 👏 waitin to find out wht is wrong with gauri pls continue soon!!!

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tooooooooooooooooooooooooo gooooooooood!!!!!!!
I loved it.... I'm so glad that Shiv has finally come to his senses...... Now he knows how good Gauri is.......
And that part where he considers himself a married man with a kid was so adorable.....
I jus hope he comes to know why Gauri requires treatment(and so do I).....
This part was so movin.... I felt so bad for both of them.......
thankyou so much for a wonderful update......

i'm anticipatin the next part......