Kismat Ka Khel ff updated pt33 pg91

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maria

@crystalclear

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Posted: 18 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: Jenna Dutt
Maria, very nice update, they are both in such a turmoil for different reasons of-course.......but Shiv is having a nice dream about Gauri,...... 😳 and I am sure Varni is going to play a cupid for both of them, great job darling.....waiting for the next part already.

thanks jenna. yes they surely are. he does not like his dream. hahahai am sure she will play a nice small cupid. just wait and watch. i will update tomorrow

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maria

@crystalclear

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Posted: 18 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: sum2005
👏 nice update.
wow gauri is in love with shiv ,but now she has no feelings due to shiv behaviour.

gauri make varni stop her crying . varni knows well than shiv about gauri.

thanks sum. well you know how gauri have that motherly love in her. a child knows where he could get that love. no she still loves him but lets see if that changes over time.

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jiya imdad

@jiya imdad

Voyager

Posted: 18 years ago

#73

nice part 👏
wow!! Varni is already so attached to gauri that's great 😳 . Well, what made shiv have that dream or shall i say a nightmare 😆 , as far as i have heard we dream about the things we think alot about, shiv dreamt about kissing gauri , is that what he thinks about her 😕 😆
gauri loves shiv n he hates her , that's interesting
continue sooon 😉

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suni

@sum2005

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Posted: 18 years ago

#74

waiting for next update please 😳 .

eagerly waiting to see varni and gauri together kicking shiv out 😆

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nerdynerd

@nerdynerd

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Posted: 18 years ago

#75

why does shiv have to be that mean?? that stupid man, he better accept gauri and fast 😃

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Shagufta

@JanuaryEmbers

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#76

awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏

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139271

Hibernated

Posted: 18 years ago

#77

awesome part 👏 !!!pls continue soon!!!

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prab_rockinn

@prab_rockinn

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Posted: 18 years ago

#78

👏
great part!!!!
wow he kissed her in his dream atleast.😳 😳 😳
hope it becomes reality soon......

continue soon......

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Iqbaladdict

@Iqbaladdict

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Posted: 18 years ago

#79

hey Maria, I have just read last three parts, and believe u me I was smitten, whered did u think of this lovely story and the way ur writing it's brilliant, the emotions and the way u put down ipshita part and finally got rid of her too 😆, i kno i'm a meanie, but glorious updates please keep writing, ti is such a wonderful story, simply can't wait, 👏