Pal...

Waqt ke saaye mein...
Dhundlaagaye un palon..
Ko phir se jeete hai hum...
Har din.. har pal...
Karke tumhe yaad...
Ki zindagi yeh hamaari
Simat ke reh gayi hai...
Unhi chand palon mein....
Jo bitaaye... tumhaare saath...

-Sareeta

- For Shiv Kapoor , hanging on to the moments spent with Gauri, long after she is gone...

👏 really great!!! 👏

but is she really gone??? 😕

Originally posted by: shivgauri

👏 really great!!! 👏

but is she really gone??? 😕

No not sure, but considering that she is gone and Shiv would dubaaoo himself in a gham ka dariyaaa... penned these lines!! 😊

A possible scene... thatz all....figment of my imagination!

Thank you for the kind words! Glad you liked it!😊

ok now this 1 was easy for me to understand 😆
its reallllly gr8
look like u got free time today 😊

sareta another great thought.. 😊

so meaningful words that will reflect the reality which shiv may be will face after gauri's death...

he will miss her for sure and will realise so many things with these memories spent with gauri but unfortunately a bit late..

sareeta so perfect and keep it up as its a pleasure reading these beautiful lines.. 👏 👏

now u hav me in tears di 😭 😭 its sooo beautifull 😭 😭 kuch likkha hi nahi jaa raha......ur the best dii...yeh sirf aap hi kar saktii hai.....luv u...its just toooooo gud 👏

Originally posted by: ash9

ok now this 1 was easy for me to understand 😆
its reallllly gr8
look like u got free time today 😊

Awww, Ashu, thank god, you understand, I was gearing myself up to write the translation for it .... yeah I penned it 2 days back, but since my net conn has been back, havent been able to login for long... and today finally managed to login and post them.. So glad you enjoyed them...😊

Originally posted by: 3 angels

sareta another great thought.. 😊

so meaningful words that will reflect the reality which shiv may be will face after gauri's death...

he will miss her for sure and will realise so many things with these memories spent with gauri but unfortunately a bit late..

sareeta so perfect and keep it up as its a pleasure reading these beautiful lines.. 👏 👏

Awww, thank you sooooooooo much Khyaatee!!! Yeah I did write them considering that Gauri might die and Shiv would feel this way... but I seriously wonder if this is what we'd get to see anyway...

So glad you liked it soooooo much !!! 😊

Originally posted by: nazrinkhan

now u hav me in tears di 😭 😭 its sooo beautifull 😭 😭 kuch likkha hi nahi jaa raha......ur the best dii...yeh sirf aap hi kar saktii hai.....luv u...its just toooooo gud 👏

Gosh, Naz, tum log bhi na, itne acche shabd mere liye... bas post rulaya na ho, par your praise sure touches the heart and leaves me misty eyed!!!

Bas, hand on heart, I humbly bow down.... 😊

it excellent sareeta...beautiful 👏 👏 👏 so much emotion...hope gauri doesn die 😭 😭 😭

👏

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