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First off I wanted to say thank you for all the positive response..it really motivated me to write again. Hope you enjoy..pls comment if you like it..thx
Cont on frm my first FanFic..
Gauri and Shiv reach home..
Entering in the house they have a little staring session 😉
Ippy sees them both walking in..
Ippy: Kaha thai tumlong?
Shiv gives one nasty look to Ippy
Shiv: (holding hands with Gauri) Chalo Gauri
Gauri gives one faint smile to Ippy
Ippy looking really confused and walks upto Nikhila's room.
Ippy to Nikhila
Auntie I think Shiv told everything to Gauri.
Nikhila:..wo nahi bataye ga sachai Gauri ko, he knows that I am sick and doctor nai kaha tha not to give me any stress.
Ippy: I hope you are right Auntie, do you know think Shiv ko Gauri sai pyar ho ga ya hai??
Nikhila: Nahi beta, Nahi mera beta etna bewakoof nahi hai, wo ek mamuley larki sai pyar nahi kare ga..aur Gauri..nahi nahi..wo tow sirf usko apna dost mangta hai. Shiv is just a nice person He doesnt love her.
Next Scene: Shiv and Gauri's Bedroom 😉
Shiv walks towards the portrait and starts to take it off.
Gauri: ye kya kar rahe ho Shiv?
Shiv: Aab iske koi zaroorat nahi hain, kyon ki mera pyar mera pass hai 😉
(Gauri is so shy, poor girl cant even look up)
Shiv: Tum he mere zindagi ka saach ho, ye tow ek tasveer hain aur tum mere zindagi,
I never knew what love was till now. All these years I was living in this infacutation..but after I met you I have realized Pyar KYa Hota Hain?
(mere pyar ki umar ho song playing in the bg)
Gauri: Its really late, you must be tired why dont you go freshen up.
Gauri trying to unbotton her sari blouse and she cant reach the back of the pins..trying really hard to unbotton her pins but it just doesnt open.. 😉
Shiv comes frm behind "may I".Gauri just nods her head 😳 ...Gauri closes her eyes everytime Shiv touches her back..
Gauri turns around trying to head to the washroom when her mangalsutr gets tangled on his shirt..Standing so close to each other and looking deeply into each others eyes. Gauri looking so scared and doesnt know how to react just rushes into the washroom..
Shiv gives a "ok,what should I do" type of look
Gauri comes out in a nice silky robe.(fully covered though)
She sees Shiv's clothes on the bed and walks towards the bed to fold them
Shiv: Gauri
Gauri turns around and sees Shiv..
Shiv tripps and takes along Gauri with him on the bed..
On the bed..Gauri on the bottom Shiv on top looking at each other..looking deeply in each other's eyes..
Than Gauri tries to move and again her mangalsutr gets trapped on Shiv's shirt..
Ippy walks in..
has this really jealous and OMG type of look on her face.
Shiv: Kya Ipshita, tummai knock nahi karne aati hain 😆 Jab miya biwi kamre main hote hain, kam se kam knock karna chahe hai 😆 (WAY 2 GO SHIV)
Ippy: ummm Sorry..Nikhila auntie tumhai bula rahe hain Shiv..
Shiv: Aur tum uske chamchi..ayna..? usne kaha Jaow Shiv ko bulado and you came..
Gauri: Choreye na Shiv
Shiv: Ok,ok,ok if you say so Gauri 😉
Shiv walks out of the room and gives Ippy one nasty look..(like the you better watch out) look
Ippy just runs out of the room looking upset.
Nikhila's room:
Shiv: kya huwa mom?
Nikhila: Beta main bemaar hoon, tum apne maa kai tabiyat kai kehyal nahi karte ho
Shiv: If my mom was really sick than I would ask her..
Whats the point.
Everyone walks into the room..Mahen,Dada,Dadi,Maya, Palak,Vivan,Daksh,Shyla
Mere maa kai liye mere zindage ek mazaak bangaye hai.
Nikhila: Kyun aise baat karey ho Shiv?
Shiv gets up looking really angry and facing the family
Haan ye sach hai..mere zindagi mere maa nai mazaak bana di. Magar aab nahi
Nikhila: kya kya kahe rahe ho? what did you do Shiv?
Shiv: maine pura sachai Gauri ko bataye di hain and than we see Shiv telling teh whole story like he did to Gauri.
Nikhila: Nahi Nahi nAHi!! ye sach nahi hain..
Gauri walks in followed by Ippy..
Gauri: Ye sach hai Baadi Maa..Shiv told me everything.. I know everything..main sachai sai anjaan nahi hoon..
Everyone looks so shockd!!!
Nikhila: gives a nasty smile..
kya karlo gai tum dono..Karam ko badal nahi paow gai
Gauri: Ye sach hain kai Shiv ka kundli main likha hain kai uski pehle biwi ka moht ho jaye ga..lekin ye bhi sach hai kai main Shiv sai pyar karte hoon aur
Nikhia: Aur kya? Shiv ko tumse pyar nahi hain aurjaisa ek saal hoga tumhari shaadi ki,wo tumko chor dega
Shiv: MOM!!! MAIN GAURI SAI PYAR KARTA HOON!!!!!
Everyone looks shockd..Nikhila and Ippy looking as if they saw some ghost 😆 😆
Shiv: Ye sach hai..Main Gauri se pyar karta hoon aur hum dono ye jang larenge saath..Main Gauri ko kuch nahi hone dunga..Hum dono saath hain aur koi kuch nahi karpai ga. Aur if moht bhi awai..hum dono haste haste swikar karenge
Dadi with tears in her eyes touching Shiv's face:
aaj tunai saabit kardiya kai tum mere hi potai ho..
Dadi to Dada: sunye ji..ye mera hi Shiv hain..
Maine tumhai ketna galat samja tha..
Bhagwan tum dono ko Saab burey nazar sai batchai ( she looks and ippy and nikhila)
Dadi: Kush raho.
Gauri and Shiv take ashirwad from Dadi and she gives them blessings.
All one by one leave.
Mahen to Nikhila: Likhal jaow mere gharmai sai..
Nikhila: kya kahe rahe ho tum, ye hamara ghar hai Mahen
Mahen: Nahi nikhila, ye mera ghar hai..tum biwi ka, ek atchi maa nahi ban pai..Aaj sai tumhara aur mera rishta khatam
Nikhila: nahi mahen nahi..mujhe maaf kardo.
Mahen: Mafi tow uslog ko diya jati hain jisko apni galti ka ehsaas ho, tum jaan buch kar apne bete ko takleef powchai.
Nikhila sobbing away, on the floor crying
Mahen leaves and ippy runs crying also.
Shiv Gauri Room:
Shiv looking extremely upset and crying on the bed
gauri: kya huwa shiv? saab theek hai?
Shiv: main kyu ye kaam aur pehle nahi ke thi..aur ka aaj ye din nahi dekna parta
Gauri: jo hogaya so hogaya..just forget about it
Shiv hugs Gauri so tight that there was not enough air to breathe 😆 😆
Cont on frm my first FanFic..
Gauri and Shiv reach home..
Entering in the house they have a little staring session 😉
Ippy sees them both walking in..
Ippy: Kaha thai tumlong?
Shiv gives one nasty look to Ippy
Shiv: (holding hands with Gauri) Chalo Gauri
Gauri gives one faint smile to Ippy
Ippy looking really confused and walks upto Nikhila's room.
Ippy to Nikhila
Auntie I think Shiv told everything to Gauri.
Nikhila:..wo nahi bataye ga sachai Gauri ko, he knows that I am sick and doctor nai kaha tha not to give me any stress.
Ippy: I hope you are right Auntie, do you know think Shiv ko Gauri sai pyar ho ga ya hai??
Nikhila: Nahi beta, Nahi mera beta etna bewakoof nahi hai, wo ek mamuley larki sai pyar nahi kare ga..aur Gauri..nahi nahi..wo tow sirf usko apna dost mangta hai. Shiv is just a nice person He doesnt love her.
Next Scene: Shiv and Gauri's Bedroom 😉
Shiv walks towards the portrait and starts to take it off.
Gauri: ye kya kar rahe ho Shiv?
Shiv: Aab iske koi zaroorat nahi hain, kyon ki mera pyar mera pass hai 😉
(Gauri is so shy, poor girl cant even look up)
Shiv: Tum he mere zindagi ka saach ho, ye tow ek tasveer hain aur tum mere zindagi,
I never knew what love was till now. All these years I was living in this infacutation..but after I met you I have realized Pyar KYa Hota Hain?
(mere pyar ki umar ho song playing in the bg)
Gauri: Its really late, you must be tired why dont you go freshen up.
Gauri trying to unbotton her sari blouse and she cant reach the back of the pins..trying really hard to unbotton her pins but it just doesnt open.. 😉
Shiv comes frm behind "may I".Gauri just nods her head 😳 ...Gauri closes her eyes everytime Shiv touches her back..
Gauri turns around trying to head to the washroom when her mangalsutr gets tangled on his shirt..Standing so close to each other and looking deeply into each others eyes. Gauri looking so scared and doesnt know how to react just rushes into the washroom..
Shiv gives a "ok,what should I do" type of look
Gauri comes out in a nice silky robe.(fully covered though)
She sees Shiv's clothes on the bed and walks towards the bed to fold them
Shiv: Gauri
Gauri turns around and sees Shiv..
Shiv tripps and takes along Gauri with him on the bed..
On the bed..Gauri on the bottom Shiv on top looking at each other..looking deeply in each other's eyes..
Than Gauri tries to move and again her mangalsutr gets trapped on Shiv's shirt..
Ippy walks in..
has this really jealous and OMG type of look on her face.
Shiv: Kya Ipshita, tummai knock nahi karne aati hain 😆 Jab miya biwi kamre main hote hain, kam se kam knock karna chahe hai 😆 (WAY 2 GO SHIV)
Ippy: ummm Sorry..Nikhila auntie tumhai bula rahe hain Shiv..
Shiv: Aur tum uske chamchi..ayna..? usne kaha Jaow Shiv ko bulado and you came..
Gauri: Choreye na Shiv
Shiv: Ok,ok,ok if you say so Gauri 😉
Shiv walks out of the room and gives Ippy one nasty look..(like the you better watch out) look
Ippy just runs out of the room looking upset.
Nikhila's room:
Shiv: kya huwa mom?
Nikhila: Beta main bemaar hoon, tum apne maa kai tabiyat kai kehyal nahi karte ho
Shiv: If my mom was really sick than I would ask her..
Whats the point.
Everyone walks into the room..Mahen,Dada,Dadi,Maya, Palak,Vivan,Daksh,Shyla
Mere maa kai liye mere zindage ek mazaak bangaye hai.
Nikhila: Kyun aise baat karey ho Shiv?
Shiv gets up looking really angry and facing the family
Haan ye sach hai..mere zindagi mere maa nai mazaak bana di. Magar aab nahi
Nikhila: kya kya kahe rahe ho? what did you do Shiv?
Shiv: maine pura sachai Gauri ko bataye di hain and than we see Shiv telling teh whole story like he did to Gauri.
Nikhila: Nahi Nahi nAHi!! ye sach nahi hain..
Gauri walks in followed by Ippy..
Gauri: Ye sach hai Baadi Maa..Shiv told me everything.. I know everything..main sachai sai anjaan nahi hoon..
Everyone looks so shockd!!!
Nikhila: gives a nasty smile..
kya karlo gai tum dono..Karam ko badal nahi paow gai
Gauri: Ye sach hain kai Shiv ka kundli main likha hain kai uski pehle biwi ka moht ho jaye ga..lekin ye bhi sach hai kai main Shiv sai pyar karte hoon aur
Nikhia: Aur kya? Shiv ko tumse pyar nahi hain aurjaisa ek saal hoga tumhari shaadi ki,wo tumko chor dega
Shiv: MOM!!! MAIN GAURI SAI PYAR KARTA HOON!!!!!
Everyone looks shockd..Nikhila and Ippy looking as if they saw some ghost 😆 😆
Shiv: Ye sach hai..Main Gauri se pyar karta hoon aur hum dono ye jang larenge saath..Main Gauri ko kuch nahi hone dunga..Hum dono saath hain aur koi kuch nahi karpai ga. Aur if moht bhi awai..hum dono haste haste swikar karenge
Dadi with tears in her eyes touching Shiv's face:
aaj tunai saabit kardiya kai tum mere hi potai ho..
Dadi to Dada: sunye ji..ye mera hi Shiv hain..
Maine tumhai ketna galat samja tha..
Bhagwan tum dono ko Saab burey nazar sai batchai ( she looks and ippy and nikhila)
Dadi: Kush raho.
Gauri and Shiv take ashirwad from Dadi and she gives them blessings.
All one by one leave.
Mahen to Nikhila: Likhal jaow mere gharmai sai..
Nikhila: kya kahe rahe ho tum, ye hamara ghar hai Mahen
Mahen: Nahi nikhila, ye mera ghar hai..tum biwi ka, ek atchi maa nahi ban pai..Aaj sai tumhara aur mera rishta khatam
Nikhila: nahi mahen nahi..mujhe maaf kardo.
Mahen: Mafi tow uslog ko diya jati hain jisko apni galti ka ehsaas ho, tum jaan buch kar apne bete ko takleef powchai.
Nikhila sobbing away, on the floor crying
Mahen leaves and ippy runs crying also.
Shiv Gauri Room:
Shiv looking extremely upset and crying on the bed
gauri: kya huwa shiv? saab theek hai?
Shiv: main kyu ye kaam aur pehle nahi ke thi..aur ka aaj ye din nahi dekna parta
Gauri: jo hogaya so hogaya..just forget about it
Shiv hugs Gauri so tight that there was not enough air to breathe 😆 😆
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