pic fic - 3rd part (edited)

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Posted: 19 years ago
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sorry sweetiz 😳.......kept u waiting.........

so it goes like this.....

ipshita is really happy coz shiv called her to meet up.....

wow..shiv ne milnekeliye bulaya hai....aj to aise jaungi ke dekh kar hosh ur jayenge 😉

servant : ise dekh kar to sabke hosh asai ur jate hai....chehra dekh kar dar ke mare behosh jo hojate hai...😆

aaj to shiv ko manna hi parega ke mai gauri se jeyada khubsurat hu.....😉

shiv is trying to cool himself n waiting fr ipshita to cum....

us ipshita ke bhajaise gauri ke kareeb jana bhi mushkil hogaya hai...😡

while taking the name of gauri he cools down n starts thinking abt gauri......😳

gauri tum kitni achchi insan ho...kabhi kuch nahi kehti....

ipshita arrives......

shiiiiiiv......

itni jaldi pohochgayi....?

kitne achche khayal aa rahe the....thori der bad nahi aa saktithi....😡

shiv turns to talk n is shocked to c her......

mai kaisi lag rahi hoon....😳 ?

ufffffffff is ladki ka dimag kharab ho gaya hai.......

shiv....chilll....aj tumhe yah karna hi parega....

shiv tumne mujhe yaha kyun bulaya....meto tumhare ghar hi jarithi

shiv furious...to himself: isi baat ka to afsos hai....😡

gauri aur mai ek hafte ke liye kolkata ja rahe hai...

tum meri dost ho....socha tumhe bata ke jana chahiye....

to himself : apne phaide ke liye kya kya kehna parta hai...dost ( yuk) 😉

mujhe to laga tha ke ye mere saath bahar jaana chahta hai....😡

itne open blouses pahenneke bad woh aaj bhi fida nahi huya.....😭

apna khayal rakhna....hum tumhe bohot miss karenge..(oh gosh)..😡

tumbhi gauri ka khayal rakhna.......(gauriiii!!! 😡 )

ipshita leaves......

mai janta hoon ipshita tum waha jaroor jaogi......lekin tum shiv kapoor ko nahi janti...😉

ipshita to herself: shiv tum mujhe nahin jante....mai waha bhi tumhare peeche peeche chali aungi....😉

ipshita....tum nahin janti mere haath kya laga hai 😉 tumhare ex- bf's ka list......ab jo karna hai wahi karenge........😆

kolkata mai nahin tum jaogi.....apni ex- bfs ke paas....😉....

ipshitaz ex-bfs :

ye tumhe itna bore karega ke ek mahine tak bahosh rahogi....

aur uske baad kaun ayega yeto tumbhi jaan jaoogi...😆...ye tumhara peecha khabhi nahi chorega...😆

..ise kehte hai shiv kapoor...😉

ab mai gauri ke saath ek real honymoon pe jasakta hoon....

but unfortunately gauri finds out shiv with ipshita n misunderstands him

sheeeev......

to be continued........

nazrin telefilms limited

guyz i think im turning out like ekta.......im dragging it too much 😭

sry....i know itz gettin boring now.....if u say then i'll not continue...but u know wht i wanted ippiz bf to b the daku frm the jungle epi bt couldnt find his pic anywhere...so alokji was the next choice...

pls dont hesiate to write ur complains..... im all set to take the negative replyz 😭

N.B : those who didnt read the frst two posts....pls read them named : ist part - another pi fic n 2nd part - continution ( picfic). enjoy.......

Edited by nazrinkhan - 19 years ago

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Posted: 19 years ago
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its really good and u should carry on i love ur lil pic stories
thanx
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Posted: 19 years ago
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nono....do continuee....itss nott gettingg boredd.....infactt..i wass amusinggg readingg itt......
vais ipshitaa k liy...daku of that junglee....as bf.... 😆 loll...buraaa nahii haii....

i lubb the partt...veryy interestingg...gaurii misunderstandingg shivv... 😭 pooorr shivvv...gaurii k saath honeymoon jaan k liy...vohh ipshitaa k saath khel khell rahaa haii..& heree gauriii darling mis underrstandinggg himm....hou lala.....!! 😳 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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LOL 😆 😆 😆
awesome yaar-- plz continue!!! luved the ending... lols... 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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😆 😆 ab ipshita bhi shiiiiiiiiiv! 😆 plz cont man!
Edited by MrsEku - 19 years ago
Nazrin thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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😭 😭 😭 such little response 😭 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey yaar pls cont u r tooo gd 😆 😆
but one day i will kill ipshita 😡 if she comes again in the middle of sheeeev gouri 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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😆 itz superb sply dat sheeeev part 😆 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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😆 😆 😆 nazrin finally u used kitni achchi insaan ho dialogue 👏 👏 👏 great continue soon!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey u'r GR8 & sply the Shiv'sdailog
"ab mai gauri ke saath ek real honymoon pe jasakta hoon...." is Amazing 😆

And this is 4 u 👏

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