Remember the Storyteller Contest???
If not, no worries here are links where you can find out about it:
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=448214&K W=Storyteller
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=463830&K W=Storyteller
Ring a bell now?
...Good!
Sorry for the delay in continuing this contest. However, we only got three entries for this part of the contest. Why so many winners for Part 1 and only three contestants for Part 2?
Rules to be followed while voting:
- If your entry is missing please contact me (Simply_Smart) as soon as possible.
- Every one has 1 vote.
- Advertising any entry in any way is NOT allowed and will cause for disqualification.
- Please do NOT make Multiple ID's for voting. Multiple ID's can be tracked and then your entry will be disqualified.
- The Last Date for voting is Sunday, December 24th.
- Please read all the entries before casting your vote and be fair!
👏👏 A big thank you to the participants! 👏👏
And now here are the entries:
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Entry # 1
shiv on the thailand trip for vacation wants to forget every single moment he spent with the gauri
The first incident happened was when they want to stay in a hotel like for a friendly . homely environment they stopped a girl passing by about it and she ans:"$25 per hour".
they were shocked so shiv said i think she is a call girl and this is all because of u and he was really angry.atlast a sardar ji helped out them from the situation.now they were happy but here all the things started getting wrong
the other day they entered a club there he saw a girl he paid her but when he brought the glass of wine and was almost to kiss her exactly then he saw the locket inon her neck and this took him back to mumbai in memory.
the mangalsutar gauri wears and he shouted at the call girl. and he rushed and started to pack all his things that yes he cant stay from that very beautiful gauri.
after landing on airport he reached his house but he found out that she left this house he was almost mad.everyone said that she is not
good for u stop thinking about her if she loves you why she went and nobodies knows where she is and he started crying and everyone was amazed by his reaction.because he was tho one who wanted the divorce then he said."main ussay
pyar karta hun laikn it was my ego now that is kilng me
,she needs protection,she gave all sacrifices in life to gain a powerful shoulders to hold and protect her i will die without her please help me find her.please God."
IN MANDIR----------"main to yahin hun shiv start u pray for me and show anger to me.and whenever i slaped u you only said that u dont want to give any excuses because you believed that i can understand why you did so why you left ."
by saying all this she came near him(she is in mandir and talking to God) and exactly then she fall off,but what is this there are those powerful hands who suddenly held her and when she saw him (shiv) she started to slap him,but why?
because she still was imagining that shiv has returned however shiv was actually there.he held her face near him and looking into her eyes he said am here and from here you will never be alone,as shiv is for gauri"
and you are the most beautiful gift God gave me, looking the way he was sorry as it was the first time when he was sorry ,and in love he was not looking cute but she was just crying and shiv again shouted why are u crying now? and thinking s kay paas ansoo kitnay hain of God kahan phasa dya)
and Gauri said almost shouting i know u are making fun of my tears! i will kill you.and they both start laughing".
they lived happily ever after
Entry # 2
The Revenge
In a dark room one ray of sun was spreading enough light for someone to see that a body on the bloody floor and a girl in white sari holding a gun. Her eyes were holding no emotion and yet the tears were streaming down her cheeks as if someone has opened a dam of a river. She didn't want anyone to hear her cry. She just sacrificed her special someone for reasons known to her and unknown to rest of the family. All they knew was that she was supposed to be on vacation with her husband who was her love, her pyar, and was supposed to keep her happy. The only thing this couple did was pretend and faked the gift of god. The gift was; it was their marriage created by god and for them to make it work. Now her husband was dead, Gauri's Shiv is dead because of all the fights, the slap, the abuse, and all the lies he told to Gauri. She fell in love with Shiv in the dream city Mumbai. Today, Gauri had murdered her own brother in order to take revenge for her dead husband. Gauri wasn't sorry for what she did and never will be. She felt hate, guilty, insane, and yet calm for killing her brother. The Gauri died as well because the reason for her survival died with Shiv and her brother.
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Entry #3
This is after shiv has proposed to gauri and she has happily said yes 😳 .
S:"Gauri ,I am really sorry for making u cry so much 😭 "
G:"its ok shiv.Just promise me that u wont fight with me again"
S:"I promise Gauri.I know tht our marriage was a sacrifice.Par ab mein tumse bohot pyar karta hoon.I hv fallen in luv with u",he was looking in her eyes 😳 .
S:"hey gauri,hum kahi Mumbai se door vacation par chale?this will b my first proper gift after marriage..watsay???"
G:" Hann haridwar chalet hain 😊 "
S:" Haridwar???? Gawwwd… 😆 ..how abt the alps?bohot hi romantic jagah hain"with a twinkle in his eyes 😉 .
Listening to this gauri blushed and went in his arms 😳 .
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As mentioned above voting will be continued till Sunday, December 24th.
The winner will be announced soon after that.
Regards,
Aji, Anu, Naina & Smarty
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