FF: karva chaud--- Shivs pyar - Page 4

Originally posted by: rahena

thanks hun.....i cnt imagine him admitting it any other way...lokks like drinking a lot may be d only way he spills out his feelings......i shal be writting in a bit!.................

plz cant wait,....and the preview said something very intersting,.....plz conmt soon.

OMG hun u hav 2 update real sn, the last part was jus MAGNIFICENT!!!!!!!!!!!!plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cntinu sn

Originally posted by: Zoe89

OMG hun u hav 2 update real sn, the last part was jus MAGNIFICENT!!!!!!!!!!!!plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cntinu sn

thanks hun...im writting d next part..........hold on tight! 😆

OMG!!! i LUVED IT!!!!!!!!!! gosh... it was so awesome!!! okay, i have lyk died and gone to heaven yaar... update soon and plz lemme noe thru a little PM!!!! AWESOMEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏

Originally posted by: rahena

Part 3

she hugs him back...' do u really love me shiv?' she cries n asks. 'yes gauri, yes...if thinking about u leaving me kills me inside so much, n one defines dat as love...den yes gauri i love u so much'...'i never knew fully wat love is but now i have many ways of explaining wat love is... gauri'.... hearing shiv say it like dat, gauri hugs him tight...der hug last a long time.

Part 4

after wat seems like d longest hug ever...shiv breaks d hug, only to see whether gauri has stopped crying. his pleased to see a smile on her face, with her smile a glimps of her dimple sparks on her cheek. he wipes her cheeks...'no more crying gauri...it hurts me everytime u cry.'...'no shiv dis time i didnt cry because i was hurt, but because i was d happiest girl alive!'. she smiles at shiv, n wipes his tears...'now u dnt cry shiv, becos it dsnt suit u..'...den dey burst out laughing. he holds her by her shoulder...' gauri....ur amazing!'....gauri blushes n looks down. he lifts her head 'promise ul be mine in the next 6 liftime'...as shiv speaks thoses words..gauri feels a sharp feeling going through her heart.

she is speechless.. 'yes shiv i promise.......but 4 dis life u promise me dat me n u will avoid anything dat would make us upset'. shiv wonders wat she means....she continues...'for as long as i am with u in this life, i dnt want to hear anything else dat would disapoint me anymore....if der is anything else out der whether a raaz or secret...i dnt want to no shiv..pls dnt tel me...becos 4 me dis is wat ive dreamt 4 all my life..'...shiv feels guilty..but he promises her that he wouldnt spoil anything 4 her anymore. gauri den tells him....'come on lets go home...its very late now...' he kisses her on her cheeks n holds her by her hips n heads 4 d car. gauri blushes..with her first kiss on her cheek.

back in their room, shiv has already got changed, well he hasnt worn his top yet. gauri is still taking her jewels off by d dressing table. shiv attends to her to help her take her neckless off. 'let me help gauri...' he takes her hair sideways & takes her neckless off 4 her.gauri feels awkward cos its been a long time ever since she's seen him topless! he den helps her take her earings off. he watches her, sideways when taking it off. they get lost into each others eyes for a while. shiv wonders, how beutyful gauri is. ' ur eyes.....r so beutyful gauri....u make me lost in dem everytime i look at dem...' gauri blushes more...she avoids to meet his eyes.

he finally takes off d earings. gauri den gets up from d chair. n while turning to face d otherway, shiv suddenly pulls her by her hand, stopping her from walking away. he swings her to face him...very close. der eyes meet only a centimeter away. 'hold on gauri...' he almost whispers on her face, as he speaks gauri can feel his warm breath on her lips. he holds her by her hips with one hand & on her head with the other. gauri heart races faster, with every second shiv brings her closer. she closes her eyes for a fraction of a second, n den opens dem to see shiv looking at her lips.

he tilts his head & softly kisses her by her lips. gauri holds shiv by his shoulder, as he kisses under her lips she cringes his bare shoulder with her hands. he den slowly slides his mouth to directly go on her lips. n den he gives her a long passionate kiss. they both hold each other very tight. gauri almost stops breathing. this was her first passionate kiss & that too, to the man she loves. she felt her chest tighten up, her heart beat was chasing with time. shiv finally finishes his kiss. gauri looks at him, she's lost 4 words. shiv gives her a cheeky smile...n says '& ur lips r so edable...'. gauri hides her face, as she feels shy....

suddenly gauri feels shiv lifting her up....she looks into his eyes again...he looks deep into her eyes as he takes her towards the bed. gauri holds shiv around his shoulder. he slowly lays her down on d bed. he lays next to her, leaning on on hand, facing down on her side. with d other hand he moves gauri's hair face. he places one of gauri's hand over his shoulder, she holds on to him. he then kisses her for the second time, almost as if he didnt get enough last time. this time gauri is more confident in holding d kiss. shiv looks in her eyes. he den strokes her neck with his lips, making gauri blush more...

ill cont in a bit guys...if u want me to...lol

omg... omg... OMG... okay i need a little time to get over this...

13 seconds later....

AHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!! okay, was that awesomely sexii or was that awesomely sexii?!?! it was AWESOMELY SEXII!!! oh gosh i luved it yaar... the last part got me blushing and smiling lyk mad.. lols... it was soooo sexii yaar... i could rave about it for hours... gosh i wish i was gauri😳
PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ update sooooooooon!!!!!! a humble request from asha (aka chutki as my sana di lyks to call me😆) and plz pm me when u do so!!! if its not too much trouble ofcourse.... 😛

woah rahena!!!!!!!! how long did it take u 2 write all this???? its really good

Originally posted by: ash k

woah rahena!!!!!!!! how long did it take u 2 write all this???? its really good

not long...😆😆....

everyone's asking me to continue.... 😆 ..... emmmmm.....i wonder why 😆 .... looks like everyone's waited too long for all this eh 😳

another thing...im so happt that my threads had over 1000 views...for a thread dats not even 24 hours long...im so pleased 😃

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Too good my dear!
Please continue... I wonder what ipsita has to say about it though!

I wish that Ipsy sees their romance... jale pe namak chidakte hue accha rahega!