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Posted: 19 years ago
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Pyaare Shiv, bhole...
Chale haule haule...
Najaane , kaunse
Khayaalon mein khoye hue...

Par pahunch gaye...
Bazaar... yunhi khoye ...
Aur laut ko ghar waapas aaye...
Haathon mein heeron ka haar liye..
Apni pyaari si biwi ke liye...

Idhar tohfa kya la diye...
Biwi ke chedne par...
Aapka sharmaana bhi dekh liye...

Biwi tho aapki thi,
aapki aadaaaon pe vaari,
Par aajse kahegi..
Ki nazaron se vaar tho kiya hai ..
Abse, in muskuraahaton se bhi
Var kiya kijiye..

-Sareeta😆

- For Shiv and Gauri...based on the Bday gift scene between them!!! 😊

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khushix thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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😆

i wish shiv was the one who put her the necklace...that wud be cool...and cute...
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Posted: 19 years ago
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great sareeta.. 😊

yes u said it rite kya sharmana tha shiv ka.. 😉

well written... 👏

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Posted: 19 years ago
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wowowo
sareeta too goood
tfs 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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me blushing too 😳 😳
awesome saree 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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sareeta di i am first replying to the post even before reading. i know it would be yet another wonderfull touchy poem. 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wowwwwww
tooo gud
i jus luv ur writinnn
me bcumin ur fan
👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Great job, Sareeta dii,

👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: khushix

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i wish shiv was the one who put her the necklace...that wud be cool...and cute...

THank you Khushi! Yeah I know, Shiv helping her with the necklace would have been a nice one... but I guess, it will be even better after the raaz is out now and they are more closer than ever! 😊

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Thank you soooooooo much!! 😊

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