tum meri ho.....sirf meri!!ff - Page 7

its good
hope shiv is not ikn trouble
anyways gr8 part
best of lukk 4 exams

i hav just read the all parts of ur fanfic.it's going mindblowing yaar.plz cont soon.

best of luck 4 ur papers...cont soon..
hope shv's not in trouble.....

gauri and ipshita both go to gauri's house..to get ready to go to the disco..gauri wears a blue dress...she looks awesome..n ipshita wears pink!!dey both get ready to go to the disco..gauri says tht she wil drive..

wen dey reach da disco...dey get out ov da car...two guys come out ov da car next to dem..lookin awesome..both in black...dey wondered who dey wer...one of dem woz..one ov our hunks...lakshya!!4rm ksbkbt!!!n da othr woz kavya...4rm kavyanjali!!!gauri looks at dem and gets an idea walks ovr to dem...

gauri: hey!!im gauri and dis is my frnd ipshita!!

lakshya: hi..im lakshya..n dis s kavya..

gauri: nyc to meet u..cn u guys do me a favour??

kavya: sure..

gauri says somthing in der ears..n dey agree...

dey walk inside...da musiks gr8..da song..jeenay mera dil lutaya..jeenay meno mar sutaya...by jazzy b..played!!

u see....gauri walkin in wearin a lovely light blue dress...lookin gorgeous wid..lakshya!!(mayb this sounds funny bt bare wid me!!!!!)n den ipshita...wearin pink...n walking in wid kavya!!!(sounds weird too..i no!!!kavya shud hav bin wid gauri..but...ull see!!)

evryone der is jst looking at gauri n ipshita...so r....our very own...shiv n anupam...along wid...dadaji...daksh...vivaan...ayush...n mahen...

shiv comes ovr to gauri...n..is soooo pissed!!!

shiv: gauri..tum yahaan...yeh kaun hai??

gauri: haan...tum yahaan kya kar rahe ho...maine tumhe call kiya tha..yeh poochnay kay liyay kay tum kahan ho..kyunki mera dil disco..jaane ka ho raha tha..bt...anyways dis s my boyfriend..lakshya...

shiv: watt???boyfrnd?????😡

gauri: haan...tumhari...girlfrnds ho sakti hain..to meray boyfrnds nahin ho saktay???

shiv doesnt no wat to say..or do!!!!!hes absolutely pissed!!!!

on da othr hand...anupam's havin a fight wid anupam....on da same topic..her reply is da same...as gauri's!!!

both ov dem r sooo jealoused!!!😡

lakshya: gauri...dance??

gauri: yehh!!sure..lets go..

shiv: aaaggggghhhhh!!!!!😡😡

anupam: arey yaar..kida phas gaye..

shiv: agar main idhar pehle na aata..to shayad gauri kay saath hota...

anupam: ab kya karein??

shiv: hmmm.....

gauri lakshya ipshita n kavya r all havin a gr8 tym!!!dey dance away..enjoying da music....da song changes to one night by jay sean!!!(love him and da sonng!!!😳)

gauri: thx lakshya...

lakshya: who is he??

gauri: hes my fiance!!

lakshya: ohh....

shiv jst cant take it...he cant look 4 any longer...so..he goes ovr to gauri...widout saying anything..picks her up...n leaves..

lakshya: well....wish u all da best gauri...see you again!!(wen shes gone!!)

shiv takes gauri out ov der n.....

well dats it 4 2day!!!i will continue sooon...wen ive tym...i rli appreciate..ur comments guys...thnx alot!!!im nearly done my exams...ive a couple left bt ill cont. soon!!!thx..once again!!!to evryone!!!!👏u guys rock!!!!😛

sweet honey i love the simplicity of ur fanfic no unnecessary complications like ekta's serials 😆 😆 😆 cont soon 👏 👏

😆 😆 Shiv loves Gauri so much he just picked her up and away from Lakshya 😆 😆 I love it! PLease continue soon!

its awesome,i really love your ff its amazing,superb,marvellous plzzzzzzzzzz continue soon

superb....u've done a gr8 job...
shv take gauri wid him...interestng....lets see wht happen next...
eagerly w8g...cont soon>>>>>>. 👏

will cont tomrw guys!!sorry 4 da delay..bt im relli tired today!!!sooooo....sooooo....sorrryy!!!!

plssssss continue it was a gud one 😉