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Posted: 18 years ago
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**~pArT 8~**

da punditji said dat shiv and gauris wedding wud hav to take place in dis week or else....dey cant get married in a year!!

mahen: dats fine!!hum loag tayaariyan kar laytay hain!!kyun alokji??

alok: haan...theek hai!!kal sagai...or phir shaadi!!

shiv and gauri both look at each othr smiling and blushing!!😳

mahen: theek hai hum loag chaltay hain!!

nikhila: gauri beta chalo shopping chaltey hain!!

shiv: mom main b chalta hoon...

nikhla: acha...hehe!!chalo chalein!!

shiv: main ghari nikalta hoon!!

gauri: theek hai!!main ati hoon!!

shiv: jaldi karna saal mat lagana!!

gauri: ab lagaongi!!

shiv: mom...

nikhila: shiv go...a rahi hai!!

dey go to da shopping mall....nikhils walks ahead and gauri and shiv walk slowly behin!!

nikhila: ao rings pasand kar lo!!

shiv: gauri...yeh kaisi hai??

gauri: its rli pretty!!tumharay liye yeh wali??

shiv: yea its nyc!!

dey shopped shopped and shopped nikhila gt a call 4rm home!!so she had to go!!

shiv: bye mom!!

nikhila: bye!!

shiv: hum loag baad main atay hain!!

gauri: bye!!

nikhila: bye beta!!

she goes home....

shiv: acha hua mom ghar chali gai!!

gauri:shiv...hehe!!mujhe bohat bhookh lagi hai!!

shiv: acha meri maa!!ao jain!!

i will cont. soon!!

i dnt rli hav tym nw!!

i wz in tears in todays episode!!sooo sad!!😭😭😭

Edited by Bratz - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#32
please cont soon

u r just tooooooo good!!!

i cant wait
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Posted: 18 years ago
#33

thnx alot evryone!!!u all are absolutely awesome!!!im rli glad u all enjoy dis!!!😃cont. reading i wont let u dwn!!if u guys think i made a mistake do tell me!!

**~pArT 9~**

shiv and gauri both go to a resturant!!dey r both starving!!so dey order quickly!!wen dey r done dey go to da car!!

shiv: miss wer do u wanna go now!!

gauri: hmm...beach??

shiv: jo hukam mere akaa!!

gauri: hehe!!ure such a child!!abhi yeh haal hai to shaadi kay baad kya hoga!!

shiv: hehe!!gauri honey!!u wil hav to wait to find out dat!!anyways da beach is here lets go!!!

gauri: yeh!!

its 8 pm so its quite dark!!shiv and gauri are like da only ones on da beach!!

shiv: oooohhh...hw romantic...da two ov us....at da beach and no one here!!

gauri: haan...we will get to know each tohr betta nw!!

shiv: yeh!!lets walk!!(shiv holds gauri's hand wid one ov his hands and places da othr on her waist and she rests her head on shiv's shoulder nd dey walk!!)

gauri: hamari shaadi..aur yeh sab kuch..itni jaldi hoga..maine socha bi nahin tha!!

shiv: haan...maine bi!!

gauri: shiv u no wat!!jab main tumse party main mili na!!to bohat acha laga!!jaanay ka dil hi nahin hooa!!

shiv: ab to hamesha waheen rehna hai!!

gauri: haan but not da point!!main to wahaan rahoon gi jahaan mera shiv hoga!!😳

shiv: gauri...(he doesnt say anything else..he moves forward and kisses her on her cheek!!)

gauri: shiv..tumne kabi kisi say pyaar kiya hai??

shiv: haan..

gauri: (shocked!!)(hw cud he!!)kiss say??😡ab bi pyaar kar tay ho us say!!

shiv: haan gauri main ussay pyaar karta tha...ksrta hoon aur hamesha karta rahoon ga!!!

gauri is pissed!!wat da hell is he on abt we are getting married and he is aftr his love!!!who da hell is it!!😡😡

gauri: kaun hai woh!!

shiv: jaan na chahti ho!?

gauri: haan..

shiv:(he takes out a rose 4rm his pocet gets on his knees infront ov her!!!)its u gauri!!i love u!!!

gauri: (gauri's shocked!!she takes da rose gets him to stand up!!!)i love u 2 hunny!!!(hugs him)

shiv: thx gauri!!

gauri: 4 wat??

shiv: coming in my lyf!!i love u more dan anything in my lyf!!!

gauri: awww....shiv!!ure so sweet!!i love u too!!i will always keep u smiling lyk dis!!!

he bends dwn gets water nd dey hav a water fight!!aftr dat dey fall dwn gauri lies on shiv's chest!!he holds her tight!!

shiv: kal sagaii...aur phir...shaadi...im soo happy!!!

gauri: me too!!

shiv: cnt wait!!

gauri: me neither!!!

gauri gets a call 4rm alok!!!she ansers..

gauri:hello

alok: gauri beta!!

gauri: yea dad!!

alok: kahaan ho??

gauri: main shiv kay saath!!

alok: acha jaldi ghar aa jaa na!!!

gauri: okk..dad!!

alok: bye take care!!

gauri: yea bye!!u too!!

gauri: shiv dad ka fone tha keh rahe the ghar jaldi aana!!

shiv: acha...gauri chaltay hain!!mom bi pareshan ho gai hoan gi!!

gauri: haan chalo...1 night!!

shiv: yea!!!c'mon!!

dey get into da car!!

gauri: shiv mujhe sardi lag rahi hai!!plz heater on karna!!

shiv: ohh..kk!!

gauri: thx!!(he rests her head on shivs shoulder!!he kisses her on her forehead!!)ab theek hai!!im warm nw!!

shiv: of course...y not!!aftr all im such a gd husband!!

gauri: shiv hamari shaadi nahin hui abi tak!!

shiv: haan magar jaldi ho gi!!

lo tumhara ghar aa gaya!!

gauri: dil nahin kar raha jaanay ka!!

shiv: acha!!to mat jao!!!

gauri: kaash!!

shiv: goodnight!!take care!!

gauri: (kisses on his cheek)good night!!!

wow!!dat wz long!!

well i hope u all enjoyed it!!

and didnt get bored!!!

i will cont. soon!!

so dnt worry!!!

Edited by Bratz - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#34
ohhh how cute honey 😳 cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#35
very cute and u were gr8 a usual!!!!

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anuyways please cont SOOOOOOOOOOOON!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#36
i read al the parts today and i think you're great!!! 👏
you're fab... carry on with the super story!!! 😃
good luck and i hope everyone is enjoying it!!! 👍🏼
(by the way even i love using exclamation marks!!!) 😆
RUKSAR
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Posted: 18 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: RuksarSattar

i read al the parts today and i think you're great!!! 👏
you're fab... carry on with the super story!!! 😃
good luck and i hope everyone is enjoying it!!! 👍🏼
(by the way even i love using exclamation marks!!!) 😆
RUKSAR
😃 😆 😃

thx alot!!i rli appreciate it!!u all rock!!yeh me 2!!i hope evryone's enjoyin it!!yeh i love dese to!!!i use de alot!!as u cn c!!its such a habit!!!😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
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*~*PaRt 10*~*

so da next day...evry1 is ready da houses are decorated!!evry1 is busy getting dressed!!shiv wears a dark blue shirvani wid light blue embroidery on it an gauri wears a light blue lehnga!!da ceremony takes place in da Kapoor house so evry1 gets der!!da place looks awesome!!and so do dey!!dey welcome alok kaya nd gauri!!

mahen: alokji come in!! &n bsp;

dey come in and start da ceremony...1st gauri puts da ring on....nd den shiv!!

shiv: nw ure oficially mine!!(in gauri's ear as he leans forward to kiss her!!😳i no he kisses her alot!!😆hehe!!)

kaya is nt paying attention and walking wen she bangs into vivaan!!dey are both into each othr!!wen dey cum bk!!

vivaan: ey..kaaya dekh kay chalo....pata nahin kab gir jao!!

kaya: tum ho na mujhe pakarnay kay liyay!!

dadi: kya ho raha hain yahaan pay??haan??

mahen: evryone on da dance floor plz!!

gauri and shiv walk over hand in hand,kaya n vivaan go to dance hand in hand,dada dadi,mahen nikhila,maya n (i dnt no his name!!)n ipshita n anupam!!

dey dance to a slow romantic song!!all are having a blast!!jst den dey hear a scream!!

shiv: who wz dat!!😡(in an angry voice!!)

ipshita: sorry it wz me...anupam stepped on my foot!!!!

anupam: sorry....

ipshita: leave it!!!

shiv: aik to itna acha mood kharab kar diya!!!

gauri: choro naa!!ghussa bohat ata hai!!!

shiv: hmm...

gauri: shaadi kay baad sab nikal doon gi!!!

shiv: acha...tab dekhen gay!!

all da guests leave so in da house der r only da kapoors n chatterjees!!

mahen: lets sit!!

nikhila: haan...bohat thak gai!!

kaya: dats it!!

vivaan: aur kuch nahin karna??

dadi: sarey thak gai hain beta!!

vivaan: main aur kaya kuch kartay hain!!

kaya: ao!!

dey both dance to mere haath main tera haath ho...saari janatein mere saath ho..tu jo paas ho phir kya yeh jahaan...teray pyaar main ho jaoon fanaa!!

da light r of n da spotlights wer on dem!!

gauri n shiv wer sitting beside each othr n enjoyin demselves holdin hands!!

gauri: kitnay achay lag rahey hain dono!!

shiv: haan..vivaan ko itni dair baad khush dekha hai..

dey dance until da song is ovr!!

kaya: dats wz cool!!

vivaan: yeh!!had a gr8 tym!!

kaya: i guess see u tomrw!!

vivaan: yeh!!take care!!

kaya: yeh!!u too!!

on da othr hand gauri n shiv r havin da same conversation!!

mahen: kal mehndi n sangeet!!n den da day aftr tomrw their wedding!!

alok: okk!!well we bettr leave nw...its late and hav to wake up early tomrw!!!

mahen: yeh!!bye!!

alok:bye!!

da following day da mehndi is at da girls hous(i hope im right!!)da guys cum wid da henna!!gauri is wearing a sleevless white suit!!looks pretty!!da girls apply mehndi on her hands!!

i will cont. l8r!!!

i dnt rli hav tym ryt nw hav to do h/w!!

so byeee!!!

hope u guys enjoyed it!!😉

do comment!!!😛

Edited by Bratz - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#39
UR FF IS 👏 AWESOME 👏
LOVE IT 😳
PLZZZZ CONT SOON
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Posted: 18 years ago
#40
that was soooooooo cute!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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PLEASE cont soooon!!!

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