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Posted: 18 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: ash9



good luck with your exams...👍🏼👍🏼
i just finished mine😊😊 im going away on my holiday soon
hope u get time to update b4 that


aww...ur soo lucky!!!

my exams are takin up da whole tym!!!

anyways enjoy ur hols!!

n yeh ill update soon!!!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hay i rad ur whole fan fic 2day & i must say it was just up to de m,ark...gr8..brilliant..eagerly w8g 4 de weddng..
best of luck 4 ur exams tioooo
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Posted: 18 years ago
#53
its jus 2.................. good
devoid of any probs
better than kekta crap
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Posted: 18 years ago
#54
all the best for ur exams , jus rock them 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼
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Posted: 18 years ago
#55
thnx guys!!!i no i wz studyin so...i didnt hav time bt i hav time so im gonna write nw!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#56

everyone in the house is really happy!!shiv anupam and da gang (da guys!!)cum and dey dance to mahi ve!!shiv goes and gets gauri...

mahi ve thts the way mahi ve &nbs p; &nbs p; &nbs p; &nbs p; tere maathe jhumar chamke
tere haatho kangana khanke
tere pairo payal chance hai re
maahi ve
naino se bole rabba rabba
mann mein dole rabba rabba
amrut ghole rabba rabba
tu soniye
jind maahi ve soniye soniye aaja mahi ve
everybody sing soniye soniye aaja mahi ve
jind maahi ve soniye soniye aaja mahi ve
everybody sing soniye soniye aaja mahi ve.

obviously gauri comes and dances as well...to da girl parts..and does all da acting!!hehe!!!they dont realise wen da song ends..evryone was havin a great time...dey all praised shiv and gauri 4 der dance...

gauri: dadi yeh mehndi kab otaroon....dry ho gayi hai... dadi: gauri yeh mehndi kay rang say yeh pata chalta hai kay hamaara pati hum say kitna pyaar kar ta hai...to is liye todi dair aur rakho phir utaar dayna... gauri: theek hai dadi jaisa aap kahen...

everythings goin well but jst den...

ipshita: gauri tumne anupam ko daikha hai????

gauri: nahin....main b abhi shiv ko doond rahi thi...pata nahin kahaan chala gaya....

ipshita: acha...ao daikh tay hain...dono saath hoan shaid..

gauri: haan ao...

on da othr hand....

dadi: nikhila beta mahen kidir hai...??

nikhila: pata nahin dadi kahan hain!!!

dadi: acha dekhna zara!!

nikhila: acha...theek hai!!

gauri: dadi shiv ko kahin dekha??

dadi: nahin beta!!!

ipshita: anupam bi nahin mil raha!!

dadi: acha mahen ka bi koi pata nahin!!

gauri: dadaji kahan hain???

dadi: woh....pata nahin!!!!

ipshita: lag ta hai saare saath gai hain!!!

kaya: vivann ko kahin dekha???

gauri: woh bi nahin hai???

kaya: kya matlab woh bi??

ipshita: woh anupam shiv mahen uncle dadaji aur ab vivaan kisi ka koi pata nahin!!!

gauri: pata nahin kahaan hoan gay!!!

kaya: main vivaan ko phone karti hoon!!

gauri: theek hai!!

kaya: phone to switched of hai!!!

ipshita: oh god!!!

gauri: kya karain!!!

kaya: kaun bata sakta hai!!!

shlya: kisi nay daksh ko daikha hai??

ALL: woh bi!!!

shyla: kyun kya hua!!??

dey tell her evrything!!!

dey look evrywer!!!

gauri calls shiv!!

oh god pick up!!!

he picks up!!!

gauri: hey shiv!!kahan ho yaar...itni dair say doond rahi hoon pagaloan ki tarhaan!!!

shiv: woh gauri...main....main dost kay ghar main hoon...haan!!

vivaan: shiv bhaiya chalo ao jaa kay dance kar tay hain!!saray kitna enjoy kar rahe hain!!!

gauri: shiv!!!!tell me...wer r u???

he hangs up!!!

ipshita: kis ko phone kiya tha!!

gauri: shiv ko!!

ipshita: kya kaha us nay!!!

she tells her!!

ipshita: well only one place den...

gauri: haan...r u thinking wat im thinking...

BOTH: bachelors party...ryt!!!

ipshita: lets goooo...

gauri: wait a min....like dis!!!

ipshita: haan...

gauri: chalo...change kar kay jaayne ge!!disco...remembr!!!

ipshita: kk...lets go!!!

Edited by Bratz - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#57
sorry guys 4 da lil mistakes!!!!
up der didnt see dem 1st!!!
i dnt hav tym to fix dem soo...plz adjust!!!
n i wanna thx...evryone....n as soon as my exams, christmas, eid, new years is all over i will post dem daily!!! 😉 😛 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
#58
cool cont soon 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
#59
oohhhh....cant wait for the next part~!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#60
wow.... thanx a lot
im glad u got time to update 1 more part.....
is shiv in trouble???? 😆
hope not
😊 😊 😊
write the next part after exams
😊

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