tum meri ho.....sirf meri!!ff

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey evryone dis is my 1st tym writing 4 KAA...so bare wid me!!i no i use explanation marks alot!!bt i hope u dnt mind nd enjoy dis!!i changed gauri's personality a bit!!i hope u all like her nw!!!

**~ParT 1~**

There was a beautiful girl called gauri…she was the daughter of the famous business man Alok Chatterjee….she had a younger sister called Kaya.

Gauri really cared about her family n friends.

One day Alok was just walking in the hall and called Gauri.

When Gauri came the doorbell rang….she went to get the door….she opened the door…..it was the postman……he gave a card to gauri….it was 4 Alok Chatterjee.

She walked over to him with the card and gave it to him….he opened it and it was an invitation….he and his family were invited to the Kapoor's party at their place.

Alok tells gauri to be ready at 8 tonight and to inform Kaya as well.

Gauri opens her wardrobe and can't decide what to wear….so she calls Kaya to help her.

Gauri: Kaya idhar ao!!

Kaya: What Gauri di??

Gauri: Kaya mujhe samaj nahin ara main kya pehnoo!!

Kaya: How about red…..yeh wala dress…it's beautiful!!

Gauri: Thanks Kaya!!

Kaya: Anytime!!

Everyone is ready to go to the party…they all come downstairs all dressed lovely!! gauri wearing a red suit…a short sleeveless kameez….n a churidaar pajama with her lovely dupatta…n her earrings!! And kaya wearing a black suit!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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nice new FF...
so where is shiv 😊
continue soon
n make it bit longer 😊 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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sure!!
he'll b in da party!!
dnt worry!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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**~ParT 2~**

They go to the party in the Mercedes……when they reach there they get out of the car and head inside.

Inside the party is going great….Alok goes over and meets Mahen…they start talking.


Mahen and Alok are really good friends and business partners….gauri and kaya usually came here…and nikhila was like a mom to gauri and kaya.


Gauri is just standing there when Dadi comes….and greets her.

Dadi: arey gauri beta, kaisi ho??
Gauri: main theekh hoon!! Ap kaisi hain??
Dadi: tumharey samney hoon!!
Gauri: nikhila auntie kahan hain??
Dadi: wo upar hai!!
Gauri main mil kay aati hoon!!
Dadi: theek hai!!


Gauri is walking upstairs….on the way up she bangs into someone and is about to fall….he holds her tight and they both look at each other….gauri makes her way up and…

Gauri: arey daikh kay nahin chal saktey??
Guy: main daikh kay hi chal raha tha!!tum..
Gauri: main kya??
Guy: tum nay aake mujhe dika diya!!
Gauri: excuse me…maine??
Guy: han tum!!!
Gauri: tumhse to behas karma fazool hai!!

And walks away before he could say anything else.


In anger she walks downstairs…..when mahen is making an announcement…..

Mahen: today this party is kept 4 my son….Shiv!!

As he walks 4rm behind dressed in a black suit looking gorgeous than evr!!evryones eyes are on Shiv!!
Gauri is shocked to see that he is mahen's son!!(the guy who banged into her)

Mahen: he has just come back 4rm America…completing his studies…..and its his birthday today!!

A lot ov ppl come gathering around him wishing him!!
Gauri feels bad about wat she said and decides to go to Shiv and apologise….

Gauri: Hi!!sorry mujhe nahin pata tha kay tum mahen uncle kay betay ho!!
Shiv: Its ok!!ghalti meri bi thi!!
Gauri: (giggles) yea!!

Mahen: evry1 on da dance floor!!

Shiv: wanna dance??
Gauri: sure!!

i'll cont. soon!!!




Edited by Bratz - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wooooow..veryy good..keep it up yaaaaar 👏 👏 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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tanx guys 4 all da sweet comments!! 😃 😃

**~ParT 3~**

shiv and gauri are both walking, hand in hand.
shiv puts his hand on gauri's waist and she puts her hand on his shoulder.a nyc slow song plays in da background.they are both dancing away.alok and mahen look at dem both and are really happy!!

Mahen: alokji ab yeh dosti rishtidaari main badaldain??
Alok: agar bachay khush hain to mujhe kya aitraaz!!

gauri gets bored ov dat song and so does shiv...gauri tells him to go and tell da DJ to change da song...shiv agrees and goes to da DJ.shiv whispers sumthng in da DJ's ear and den picks up da mic.

Shiv: dis song is dedicated to gauri!!
Gauri:(says to herself)itna bi boring nahin hai!!

shiv comes to gauri...da song (bindaas ahaas..teri yeh masti teray yeh nakhray pagal deewanay..)plays in da bkground...gauri likes da song...

Shiv: do u like it??
Gauri: yea!!itni bi buree choice nahin hai tumhari!!
Shiv: excuse me im Shiv Kapoor!!meri choice abviously buri nahin hai!!any doubt??
Gauri: apna attitude jaa kay kisi aur ko dikhana!!
Shiv: ahhhhh 😡 😡
Gauri: mujhe koi shoak nahin hai tumhse baat karne ka!!bye
Shiv: bye!!!(wid attitude)

Gauri: samajta kya hay apney app ko!!
Nikhila: arey bacha kis pay itna gussa ho rahi ho??
Gauri: aap ke ladle betay SHIV!!
Nikhila: shiv???
Gauri: har baat pay larai!!
Nikhila: wo to us ki aadat hai!!
Gauri: ajeeb aadat hai!!
Nikhila:(giggles)arey ao main tumhe kisi say milatee hoon.
Gauri kis say??
Nikhila: ao to!!
Nikhila: gauri yeh hai ipshita anupam ki biwi!!
Gauri: hi!!kaisi ho tum??
(gauri knows anupam cz he wurks wid shiv)
Ipshita: hi gauri!!main theek hoon tum kaisi ho??
Gauri: main bi!!
Nikhila: main ai tum loag bataen karo!!


Nikhila: arey shiv beta tumne gauri say kya kaha??
Shiv: kuch nahin mom!!woh...aisay hi...
Mahen: kya hooa??
Nikhila: gauri aur shiv ki larai!!
Mahen: shiv jaa kay sorry boalo!!
Shiv: but...dad...
Mahen: shiv....goo...
Shiv: OKAY!!!!

shiv walks ovr to gauri to apologise..

Shiv: gauri aek minute
Gauri: boalo
Shiv: im sorry!!
Gauri: should be!
Shiv: gauri...main..na...tumhe!!!
Gauri: oh...kkkk...im sorry!!
Both: giggle away!!

Edited by Bratz - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey guys!!
tanx alot 4 da comments!!!
im rli glad u all like it!!
da lst part is a bit long!!
i hope u all like it!!
Edited by Bratz - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow just read all three parts !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
i love exclamation points also !! 😆 😆 😆
PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE Cont SOOOOOOOOOOON 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: basket

wow just read all three parts !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
i love exclamation points also !! 😆 😆 😆
PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE Cont SOOOOOOOOOOON 👏

yea!!!i love dem as well!!!i use dem alot!!!

tanx!!!i will cont. soon!!!

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