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Posted: 19 years ago
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Silent defiance,
Indifferent acceptance,
Subdued anger,
Unvoiced agony,
Mock thee,
As defeated you stand...
Come forth enraged..
Shall the devil within...
As defiant, she stands
Mocking the devil...

-Sareeta

- Gauri's behavior mocking the devil within Shiv....

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3 angels thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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well written once again sareeta... 👏 👏

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Posted: 19 years ago
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😭 i wish i could write like that. your poems are so good! 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Thank you so much! 😊

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: 3 angels

well written once again sareeta... 👏 👏

Thank you so much Khyaatee.... It was a flow of thought about how Shiv cant help getting mad at Gauri when she is so quite...😊

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Posted: 19 years ago
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well sareeta...

i just have one question 4 you...

do you know how good you are???
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Posted: 19 years ago
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u really write something which is interesting 🤗
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: raj_star

😭 i wish i could write like that. your poems are so good! 😊

Thank you so much , thank you for those kind words! I am so glad you enjoy them so much!! 😊

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Posted: 19 years ago
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so beautifully written 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: khushix

well sareeta...

i just have one question 4 you...

do you know how good you are???

Stumped totally....😕...

Dont know, and to tell you the truth..never bothered yaar... mere dil se jo baat nikalti hai, bas kalam lekar use kaaagaz par utaar thi hoon...

I jus pen the thoughts straight from my heart , thats all I know and never really thought much about anything else... Khushi...

Never really thought abt it....

But I hope you liked the post and enjoyed it!! As usual Shiv Kapoor stands the point of identification 😆

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