Nothing but Hate!

Hey Everyone😊

Here is a little poem I just wrote...(was a little bored)😉😳

Brought Together by Fate

A relationship that Shared nothing but Hate

She spoke the language of Silence

Her eyes expressing only Innocence

They bonded in a time of Fear

We thought This would Bring them Near

But He had another Plan

Shiv was a very cunning Man

Alokji was Killed

The Enemy's Wish Fulfilled

All Gauri's hopes were crushed

Once again, Someone, Broke her Trust

Her Eyes now hold nothing but Sadness

Will Life Never bring her Happiness?

Was this to be her Fate

A Relationship, That Shared nothing But Hate?

Please let me know what you think?😳

--Chandni😃

Very nice poem u have wrote and very well wrote about Gauris life. 👏 👏

Originally posted by: meli

Very nice poem u have wrote and very well wrote about Gauris life. 👏 👏

Originally posted by: Eva J

nice one.. 👏

Originally posted by: boomerang123

well said !

Thank you😳

Well conveyed!! It was very nice Chandni!
I take this chance to say, have enjoyed reading your posts , ranging from fun to very deeply observant ones and its been a pleasure...

Looking forward for more!! 😊

Cheers!
Sareeta

that was beautiful do you write poetry on a regular basis

Originally posted by: sareeta

Well conveyed!! It was very nice Chandni!
I take this chance to say, have enjoyed reading your posts , ranging from fun to very deeply observant ones and its been a pleasure...

Looking forward for more!! 😊

Cheers!
Sareeta

OMG....that is such a nice compliment...thank you so much😳 ... especially from you, I have read your poems...and they are awesome👏👏

Originally posted by: seeta92

that was beautiful do you write poetry on a regular basis

Thank you😳 ... no not on a regular basis, just for fun sometimes...but u should read Sareeta's they are deep and enjoyable!!!😃

Brilliant...very well written...my god KAA forum does have some very talented people 😊 👏

well done dats a really nice poem

that was just great, the start and end was great 👏

Awesome.. loved the line of how they share a relationship of hate brought together by fate ... you should start writing more poems.. 👏 😃