Lone Star...

Lone Star...

Evasive eyes..
Trembling voices..
Unconfessed emotions...
Hushed they remain...
In the silence of the night...

Uncherished moments..
Lost in time...
Shine like the lone star...
In the dark night...

A future in ruins...
It seems...
A doomed existence...
A lost life...
All encompassing ..
Like the eternal darkness...

Unquenched desires...
Buring passions.. unexpressed...
Seek a voice ...in desperation...

For in the silence ...
Of the dark night...
Shall the silent confessions
Be heard...

Searing pain.. tearing apart..
Shrieking soul... weeps...
As the soul in denial...
Awakens....

On edge of doom...
They stand...
Freedom from darkness...
They seek.....
On path afore...set afoot on..

Guided by the Lone star ...

- Sareeta

-For Shiv and Gauri, and their emotional turmoil yesterday, in face of doom

omg it's so good sareeta 👏 👏

Originally posted by: Rock_Star

omg it's so good sareeta 👏 👏

THank you so much! Glad you liked it!!! 😊

bravoo sareeta 👏
tht's reaally beutiful..❤️
unspoken love words are written in their eyes n silence.
i hope they will find their way home.. a real home. ( not kapoor house but their marriage )
i hope their honeymoon will become a life changing experience.. 😉 to appreciate each other..
besides their communication skills are getting better now.

i love you poems sareeta 🤗 they are really beautiful

Originally posted by: Eva J

bravoo sareeta 👏
tht's reaally beutiful..❤️
unspoken love words are written in their eyes n silence.
i hope they will find their way home.. a real home. ( not kapoor house but their marriage )
i hope their honeymoon will become a life changing experience.. 😉 to appreciate each other..
besides their communication skills are getting better now.

i love you poems sareeta 🤗 they are really beautiful

Awwww, thank you so much Eva. 😳

My eyes were moist too, watching the episode yday and the lines flowed...the clinching one for me , was when he struggles with himself , coz they have never had a conv before, before he asks her does she know life? and she, when she never wishing to demand him for answer, against her will, indesperation asks him.. "answer me.. I am asking you something..".. It said it all... all......😊

I love your poems ... and as I told you earlier, you should become a writer!

ahhh that scene almost brought tears to my eyes!! and u rote it down sooo welll sareeta!!! 👏 👏 mindblowingg!! 😳

Originally posted by: coolfire

I love your poems ... and as I told you earlier, you should become a writer!

Thank you so much! Glad you enjoy my verses so much!

As for becoming a writer, if alls well, the collection should be out early next year!

Originally posted by: srk_lover

ahhh that scene almost brought tears to my eyes!! and u rote it down sooo welll sareeta!!! 👏 👏 mindblowingg!! 😳

Aww, Thank you so much Megha! Glad you liked it so much!!😊

And yeah, the pathos and the intensity of emotions was shown very well in the episode yday, devoid of melodrama, if I may...

Pathos of seperation, was really clinching in ydays epi...

Originally posted by: sareeta

Awwww, thank you so much Eva. 😳

My eyes were moist too, watching the episode yday and the lines flowed...the clinching one for me , was when he struggles with himself , coz they have never had a conv before, before he asks her does she know life? and she, when she never wishing to demand him for answer, against her will, indesperation asks him.. "answer me.. I am asking you something..".. It said it all... all......😊

you are lucky sareeta at least you still look beautiful with moist in your eyes... it cud rid off dirts from your eyes. i must admit i m not really strong when i saw the video. i was reaally crying .. real cry n my other half was really shocked n asked me did i hurt your feeling dear😆..

i was crying a river here... felt hurt coz i saw agony in gauri's eyes not to let her husband go... oh God i cant listen to her voice calling Shiv... her voice really heart breaking to listen to 😭.. if we are in gauri's shoes, i dun think we will be able to think about our own safety.

yeap their conv now is getting better. b4 he treated her like ' dont speak to me unless you are spoken to'.. now he wanted to talk alot coz he knows the very next day.. he will never get a chance to speak to her. he likes the way she respond.. n u cud see his shy eyes when she looked at him without blinking...