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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thx guys!Sorry for the long wait.It's almost a month.So srry!

Recap:Shiv and Gauri leave for the airport.There's a bomb in the building.A guy was about to shoot Gauri but Shiv saves her.They leave from there by anupam's help.

Part 9

In Anupam's house
Shiv and Anupam were sitting in the living room.
A:I think tum logonko kuch dino ke liye yahan rehne chahiye.Tab tak mein tumhare tickets ka intezam karta hoon.
S:Thx Anupam,Agar tum nahin hote toh..Thx alot.
A:Come on shiv,Dosti mein no thx no sorry.
Shiv smiles.Suddenly they here someone from the room.Its Gauri.
G:Shivv!
She screams.Tensed,Shiv and Anupam go to the room.
They see a terrified Gauri.Shiv goes to sit beside her.She hugs him.Shiv tried to console her.He brings her face up by holding her by her cheeks.
S:Kya hua Gauri?
G(terrified):Woh..Vahan..Koi..
She points at the window.Anupam goes to check if anyone is there.
A:Yahan toh koi bhi nahin hai.
G:Vahan tha shiv...Maine dekha!
Gauri's in tears now.
S:Gauri..Koi nahin hai vahan.Ye sirf tumhara vaham hai..Ab tum aaram karo..
Shiv wipes Gauri's tears.Gauri lies down and closes her eyes.
A:Umm..Shiv..Tum zara bahar aao.Mujhe tumse juch baat karni hai.
Shiv nods.Anupam goes out.Shiv was about to follow him when Gauri grabs his hand from behind.She still had her eyes closed and was mummering something.In all this only "Shiv" was understandable.Shiv was tensed at her condition.He freed his hand from Gauri's grip and left the room.

Outside..
A:Shiv,Mujhe lagta Gauri ek bahut bare sagmein se guzri hai.Tumhe use sambalna hoga.
S:Jaanta hoon..Tum phikar mat karo.
A:Thik hai..Ek dost hone ke naate mera tumhe ya bataana zaroori tha so bataya.Ab sab tumhare haath mein hai.
Anupam leaves to go to his room.Shiv was in deep thoughts when his cell rings.He looks at the number and is furious.
S:Maine kahan na,Mujhe waqt chahiye.Aur ab tumhari vajay se mujhe thode aur waqt ki zaroorat padegi.Kya zaroorat thi Building mein bomb lagane ki?!
Guy:Just shut up!Maine koi bomb nahin lagaya.
We see the same dark place.Its the same guy whom shiv always talks to.
Guy:Mujhe nahin pata ye sab kaise hua understand?Aur bhala main kyun Gauri ka nuksan chahunga?Tum toh jaante ho na..Forget that..Maine tumhe 24 gunte diye the..aur..
S:Aur ab,mujhe aur waqt ki zaroorat padegi..
Guy:Dekh..is mein meri koi galti nahin.Lakin kyunki tumne Gauri ki jaan bachaai isliya maine tumhe waqt dan diya.2 din...Only 2 din..Got it?
S:Hello?Hello?
He keeps down the phone.He then remembers all the time spent with Gauri including the night they slept together.
Scene changes to the room where Gauri was sleeping.Shiv enters and sits beside her.He holds her hands into his and kisses them.The song 'Tere bin' plays.
S(thinking):Im sorry Gauri,Main tumse bahut pyar karta hoon.Lakin mere liye mera parivaar bhi bahut zaroori hai.Main nahin jaanta ki main tumhare bina kaise rahunga.Lakin mujhe jeena padega.Aur tumhe bhi.But I love u Gauri..I love you..

To be contd..Do post your comments!I feel this part was shorter than usual.So forgive me for that!

Edited by anu93 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#92
I'm so happy you continued!!!!! it's great and Continue again soon!!!! I wonder who that guy is though.... 😕 😕
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Posted: 18 years ago
#93
this was sooo good
it brought tears to my eyes
anyways
continue ASAP 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#94
tht was nice.......and who is it??????gauri's lover????
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Posted: 18 years ago
#95
keep continuing as usual great part
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Posted: 18 years ago
#96
awsomeeeeeee....

i hope he doesnt leave her...

continue soon...
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Posted: 18 years ago
#97
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont. soon 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
#98
tht was awesum!!! seems lyk whoever it is wants Gauri for himself...cant wait 2 c who it is!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#99
that was gr888888888888888888888 👏 👏 👏 plssssssssssss plssssssssssss 😳 wat will happen next😉
Edited by fida-cute - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
that was gr8888 please count soon 😊

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