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Posted: 18 years ago
#81
i just read all the seven parts of ur fanfic. it was amazing. do continue soon. u write really well.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#82
awsome part 👏 👏 👏
whom is tht guy and wats his problem wid gauri? 😡
cont soon 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#83
he has to choose b/w Gauri and his family PLease continue soon! 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#84
what will he have to do???????????????? 😲
anyway pls cont soon!!! its just gr8 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#85

Thx 4 the comments!Back with the next part!

Recap:Shiv-Gauri are back in the hotel.Shiv goes out without telling.Gauri is tensed.Some guy whom we dont know threatens Shiv.Shiv has to choose between his family and Gauri.

Part 8

Shiv is back in the hotel and is on the way to his room.On the way,he's thinking the same thing again and again about what to do.There's a knock on the room door.Gauri opens it and see's shiv.
G:Shiv..
Shiv just walks in before Gauri said anything else.Gauri closes the door and follows him.
G:Shiv,Aap kahan chale gaye the?Aapki tabhiyat waise hi theek nahin hai..aur aap..
S:Gauri,Pls..Mujhe is waqt kuch mat pucho.Main bahut thak gaya hoon.
Gauri remains silent.Shiv was about to sit on the bed when..
S:Aur haan..Kal subha hum vapas ja rahein hai?
G:Vapas?Lakin..
S:Maine kaha na..Mujhse is waqt kuch mat pucho..
Shiv lies down.Gauri also does so next to him.They're facing different directions.
S(in his mind):I'm sorry Gauri,Is waqt mera apne parivaar ke saath hona bahut jaruri hai.Main kya karun?Na toh main apne parivaar ke bina reh sakta hoon aur na tumhare...Kyunki main tumse...
'Mere pyaar ke umar' male version plays.Shiv has tears in his eyes.

Next morning...

Gauri is doing the packing and Shiv is talking on the phone(booking the flight tickets).
S:Packing ho gayi?
G:Haan..
S:Filght ke tickets bhi book ho gaye hain..Chalo..
Shiv helps Gauri with the luggage.They check-out and leave.

At the airport
S:Gauri..Just wait here..Main tickets leker aata hoon.
G:Ji..
Shiv leaves leaving Gauri alone standing there.
Suddenly she hears a gun-shot and is shocked.She sees alot of of people running towards the direction she was standing.
Someone(to gauri):Bhagiye!Building mein bomp hai!Bhagiye!
G:Bomb?Shiv kahan chale gaye..
Gauri runs to the opposite direction of where everyone was runnung to find shiv.
G:Shiv!
Gauri goes to the ticket booth but Shiv wasnt there.In fact,there wasn't anyone there.People were only running for their lives.
G:Shiv!
Then we see someone with a mask positioning his gun on Gauri who was still searching for Shiv.The guy made a shot.And it was about to hit Gauri when....Shiv pushes Gauri and they both fall on the ground.Shiv on top of Gauri.😳The guy shoots again and they roll.Shiv covers Gauri completely.(Shiv doesnt get shot of course)
After the shooting was over,Shiv brought himself up a bit,facing Gauri.They stare at each other.The song 'mere pyar ki umar's tune plays.
Then again they hear noices from the crowd so they stand up and start running.While running Gauri sprains her ankle on one of those bumps.
G:Ouch!
S:Kya hua..
G:Ouch..Bahut dard ho raha hai..
S:Chalne ki koshish karo Gauri..
Gauri tries but she cant.So Shiv picks her up her arms.Gauri was very much in shock but stares at Shiv.Shiv also stares at her and starts walking.Gauri has her hands placed gently on his shoulders.

Finally they're out of the airport.But another problem was that they couldn't find any taxi.But luckily..
Someone:Shiv!
Shiv turns to see Anupam getting out of his car.Anupam runs towards them.
S:Anupam,Tum yahan?
A:Haan,Main actually kisi kaam se kahin ja raha tha aur dekha ki yahan bahut shor laga hua hai..Lakin tum yahan kya kar rahe ho?Aur Gauri..
S:Actually,Gauri ka paer fisal gaya tha..toh..
A:Oh..ek kaam karo..Tum log mere saath chalo..
S:Lakin..
A:Lakin wakin kuch nahin..Yahan bahut hungama macha hua hai..Chalo..
Shiv carrying Gauri in her arms follows Anupam to his car.Shiv makes Gauri sit in and so does he.Anupam drives away.

At the airport again we see the guy with the mask who wanted to shoot Gauri.He dials some number.
Guy:Kaam ho gaya saab..
He puts down the phone.


To be contd...Post your comments!

Edited by anu93 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#86
awesome part !!shiv carrying gauri in his arms 😳.....cute part plz con soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#87
Brill!! 👏 👏

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Posted: 18 years ago
#88
awsomeeeee

continue soon... 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#89

oooooooooooo excellent
mindblowing 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#90
😳 😳 😳 PLease continue soon!!!

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