Khamoshiyon Ki Zubaan...ff part 28(p.150) - Page 102

Originally posted by: sum2005

dc aap ka kahani likne ki andaz bahut bahut accha hai. 👏 . oye meri jaaney, tu kitni cute hai, thanku!!😉
i am a regular reader of ur ff and the way u write is mindblowing. thanks sweetie😳
aap ke kahani likne ki andaz ko tharif karnekeliye sare sabdh kafi nahin hai! haha, itni buri hai kya??😕😆
kash ekthamai app ki ff padi hothi tho app ko jaroor kaa creative head banadege. nawhhh... usse toh twist likhne wale log chahiye, aur hum nacheez ye sab kaise jaane?😳
and i wish it will happen in the near future as the present kaa is lacking effective screen play. 😭 😭😭 ugh... lets not start babes!😛
😭
waiting for the next update where i think shiv confesses his love towards gauri ,of coursce in kaa shiv uncle wont confess for anather year to test our patience. kya yaar, confession ki itni jaldi kyun? tohra aur suffer vagera hona chahiye na? after all, guess whose writing.😃 But somethings gonna happen... so keeping guessing what😉 another year!! hahaha, no exaggerations!!

Thanks yaar!!

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: Numera*

is he kidnapping her??? y on earth would he pull the tube out???!!! lol i think the johnny walker got to him LMAO!! continue soon hun that was awesome!

🤣😆 Lolz Numera!!! Haha, is he kidnapping his own wife??!!😆 Lagta hai sachi Johnny Walker ne apna kaam kardiya eh?!😆 Wait and watch... I don't even know what he's up to!😕

Thanks!!

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: kaira

great part 👏

thanks jaaneman😉

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: angel_tia

i am speechless
it was superb
continue soon!

*sighs* mer pyari Tia... "khamoshi" is for SG, not u guys, tumhare speech ko kya hua?!😆

Lub your comments!!

Thanks!

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: JCluvs srk

hai! kya update tha.....i cant wait 4 mor. i luved the last part wher shiv was talkin 2 her....soooo sexy.

Darling I could say the exact same for your fabulous update!! Thanks yaar!! ... I know, the voice... can u imagine him in such a rage? Hai, mein toh sochke hi margayi!😳 *heaven*

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: scorpionprinces

Hey dc, Hi Avi!

Just luuuuuuuuuuuuuuuvvvvvv the way u write. And I just love u!!😉 Mind blowing, amazing, I could read it over n over again n never get bored, leave alone bored,whenever I read from part one the same excitement n emotions go through my head as if I'm reading it for the first time. Haha, craziness!! Tum sab mujhe paka pagal kardoge!! Too sweet!!😳

N u've done it again. Yes the cliffhanger as well. *ahem*... um... addat se majboor... u know...😳 Knowing u, I know u'll update probably day after but cant u make it speedy, I mean maybe 2moro if not today?? sorry jaan, I have a massive "quiz" tomorrow and so can't update until Wednesday. Sowy

Thanks for your comments!

Cheers,

dc

Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeezzzzzzzzzzzzzzz?????????

Originally posted by: Addz

hey , it was excellent ,fantastic and as usual superb!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏

Addz,

You're friggen awesome yaar!! Thanks so much!!

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: Catwoman

What passion and flare!!!! So excellently excuted!!! 👏

*blushing*😳 Thanks Kat... Glad u liked it... How was the snowball fight with Batman?? Did u get him good?😉

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: apapap

oyeeeeeeeeee.....sniff sniff....pls u cant do this to him ! u have to wake her up !! my pooooor shiv... 😭 😭 Hai kuriye, tu roh rahi hai... don't yaar, warna mera kya hoga?😭 I know, I can't see my mirchi like this either... but don't worry, I'll take care of everything... Pakka.😉

u touch my heart each time re hai yaar, rulayegi kya?? *sniffles*... so sweet!! u do the same with ur cute comments!😳...kya kahoon mein....each time i think...i'll write somethin diff...somethin better for u....BUT...im left speechless every single time... chup'eh!! speechless ki bacchi, u better not go speechless on me warna!😆 btw, meri update kab hazir ho rahi hai???
shiv kapooor the eternal dream...thanks to u *sighs* Blessed imagination... Blessed soul... Lov'in your comments and you🤗

Cheers,

dc