Create Shiv/Gauri romantic bonding scenes - Page 32

thanks sareeeta that was so awesome and well written.. 👏 👏 .

loved reading it .. 😊

after reading sareeta's story....i hope ekta takes some lessons from her and show us like 20% of it... 😆

I Agree. Sareeta Di u r extremely talented!!👏 👏 😊

Awwww, thank you so much people for reading the jungle scenes and enjoying them so much...

Sorry people , I had to end it.. coz the serial was gonna start today and I thought , it was best to end the scenes so that we cud enjoy the scenes of the serial... 😊

BTW, sorry for being mean and greedy, but I am waiting for some scenes penned by others... its been a while now.... 😕 ... I wanna read too, instead of writing 😭

sareeta di, i just read all the parts-- mindblowing!!! 👏 👏 👏 but do u HAVE to end it?? 😭 😭 😭 oh plz start another one-- the scenes rlly were awesome.. and the ending was just superb.. with the tumhi dekho song.... oh plz plz plz plz plz di... start a new one sooooooooon!!!!!

Originally posted by: sareeta

Awwww, thank you so much people for reading the jungle scenes and enjoying them so much...

Sorry people , I had to end it.. coz the serial was gonna start today and I thought , it was best to end the scenes so that we cud enjoy the scenes of the serial... 😊

BTW, sorry for being mean and greedy, but I am waiting for some scenes penned by others... its been a while now.... 😕 ... I wanna read too, instead of writing 😭

I'm going to write one just for you di!

but tks for evrythin sareeta diii 👏 👏 👏

For Gauri and Shiv it was a normal day. They woke up in there respective places. Gauri on the floor and Shiv on the bed.

Shiv took a shower and once again came out in his towel. He knew that him being only half-clothed bothered Gauri but that was why he wore only a towel. He liked to see Gauri look away shyly and turn her back to him. He liked it when that innocent smile danced on her lips when she discovered he was clothed. He didn't know why he just did.

So he came out again smiling deviously and once again he found Gauri making his bed.

Gauri looked up and saw that Shiv was once again wearing only a towel. She was getting used to this so she continued making the bed and staring at the sheets as if they were the most fasinating thing in the world.

Shiv got annoyed that he didn't get the reaction he was looking for so he decided that it was time for something new.

He walked up to Gauri who was fixing the already perfect bed. Now that he was standing so close her eyes began searching for an escape and her face was getting flushed. She cleared her throat and walked away from him only to find that he was stnding on the edge of her sari.

"Shiv...", she said almost pleadingly.

"Kya tum mujhse door jana chathi hoon?", Shiv said mockingly

"Woh...mein...to..."

"Sharmagi", Shiv said, finishing her sentence.

Gauri looked at him and he looked at her, the only difference between this time and all of the other times was Gauri didn't look away.

Shiv subconsciously tucked a bit of her hair behind her ear. When he looked away he realized what he had done and to cover up for his affection he started talking sarcastically.

"Tumare bal kitne dry hain. Ab tum paise acha chezzo par lagga sakti hoon" [Your hair is so dry. You know you can actually spend money on good things] , he said taunting her. Shiv accidentally added, (I don't know how to say this in hindi guys) "after all you are my wife"

After it dawned on him what he said he quickly got dressed and went to work leaving a happilly blushing Gauri behind.



Ok guys how was it! My hindi is horrible so forgive me for that.

~Jyoti 😊

That was so cute Jyothi...really.... 😊 Okay.. anotehr one coming up from my end in a while...

Originally posted by: sareeta

That was so cute Jyothi...really.... 😊 Okay.. anotehr one coming up from my end in a while...

Can't wait😃😃