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Posted: 18 years ago
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Here's my scenes. It will have more parts too it because i love to write a lot so hope you guys dont mind. This is the time when they both hate eachother but are starting to get feelings for eachother as well. So i havee gone ahead bt yeah lol. Hope you enjoyy. 😃

Shiv- Gaur... (stops and realizes that he is so used to saying Gauri in the morning for his breif case that he forgot she isnt here and she's at her dad's house for a liltle while)

He goes to look for his breif case while Gauri at her daD'S house IS doing the pooja and says "Shiv jaahan pe a-aoo" but remebers that he isnt here.

Kaya- Dhi tum kya karee ho mujhe parshad dhai-oo na?

Gauri- woh mai.. kuch bhi nahin yeh lai-oo.
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Shiv sits down oon the table for breakfast and is lookinf forward to those yummy parathas that Gauri made everyday but just couldn't admit to himself.

Shiv's Mom- Shiv yeh lai-oo merai hathon se garam garam parathai.

Shiv (takes the paratha but when he eats it realizes the taste is different)- Mom yeh paratha ka taste tho aaj alag sa hai. Mera matlab hai ke loon bahut hai or apnai merai man-pasand ke parathai tho nahin banaai.

Mom- Shiv mujhe tho lagai aa tha ke tumhe al-oo ke pasand thai.

Shiv- HAIN maa laikun maa jaise Gauri banathee hai waise chaheeai aap bhi naa...

Dhadhi- Hmmp. lagtha hai kai Shiv ko Gauri kaa khana hee pasand hai abh tho maa kaa bhi khana khakhai problems hai saiee khahaa Shiv 😆

Shiv - woh mai dhadhi aap bhi naa 😳

omgg guyz g2g if you wanna read moreee cuz im hardlii done just tell me then i will post if u wantt ...

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ba3ii k.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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i luved it ba3ii k 👏 👏 .. continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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This is another interesting scene I thought of.

Gauri is also going to work. So she needs to be dropped off at Daksh's work place. Mahen tells Shiv to take Gauri with him. But shiv makes this excuse that he has an important meeting and he needs to go early. But Mahen insists, So Shiv and Gauri both leave together in the car to the office. There is the driver, so Shiv and Gauri sit in the back together. 😳 Well this would be an awkward silent scene, where Shiv is shooting dirty looks at Gauri and Gauri looks a bit scared and intimidated. 😉 Ok something happens Driver slams the breaks hard, and Gauri falls on Shiv. 😉 Shiv is annoyed and was going to say something mean, but Gauri looks like she is in a bit of pain. So Shiv stops himself before saying anything to Gauri. 😳 Shiv yells at the driver to drive properly otherwise he is going to get fired. 👏 Driver apologizes says that it isn't his fault it was the car in front of him. Shiv gives his looks to Gauri, they are not so mean anymore, he is still a little annoyed at the same time there is a bit of concern in his eyes (only a bit). 😳 He doesn't say anything to ask how she is and she doesn't complain either. 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Ok guys I am nuts I cant stop writing I have nothing to do and these scenes keep popping into my head. So I thought what the heck I will entertain you guys.

Ok I know Shiv was very pathetic about protecting Gauri's honor the day his friend tried to forcefully dance with her. So lets invent another scenario.

There is a party at one of Mahen's hotels in celebration of some new business success. This is a family party so all the Kapoor family is there, inculding Shiv and Gauri looking gorgeous the star of the show. Mahen has not showed up yet, he got held at the office. He calls Nikila and informs her that he will be a bit late. Machan 🤢 yuck is there. Machan sees Gauri standing alone and goes up to her and says 'Namaste Babiji'. Gauri is scared seeing him, and tries to walk away. Machan block her way and tells her that it is so sad that Shiv married you because you are so tainted not just by one but by two men. Machen tells her first by Shashank and then by me at the hotel. He gives that nasty look. Gauri now is absolutely stricken and she has tears in her eyes. There is this big Camera turn and we see Shiv standing behind Machan having heard the whole thing. Shiv says Machan very sternly, he doesn't yell but it is a command. 👏Gauri too turns to see Shiv, Shiv and Gauri look at each other, Shiv is angry, He looks at Gauri and he sees that she has tears in her eyes. 😭Gauri walks away fast. Shiv goes up to Machan, there is the Shiv background music playing when he walks. Shiv asks Machan what the hell he is doing. Machan tries to cover up by trying to say something, but Shiv cuts him off. Shiv looks at him angrily and tells him to leave, 👏Shiv shoots a quick glance at Gauri and she is still extremely depressed. Machan is shocked and asks why, Shiv replies that my Dad will be here if he sees Gauri depressed then it will be my fault, so you should leave. Machan leaves reluctantly. Shiv slowly walks up to Gauri, she turns her head, she wipes away her tears, Shiv seems a bit sorry for her. She leaves him to talk to Anupam. 👏
Edited by maragathm - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: maragathm

Ok guys I am nuts I cant stop writing I have nothing to do and these scenes keep popping into my head. So I thought what the heck I will entertain you guys.

Ok I know Shiv was very pathetic about protecting Gauri's honor the day his friend tried to forcefully dance with her. So lets invent another scenario.

There is a party at one of Mahen's hotels in celebration of some new business success. This is a family party so all the Kapoor family is there, inculding Shiv and Gauri looking gorgeous the star of the show. Mahen has not showed up yet, he got held at the office. He calls Nikila and informs her that he will be a bit late. Machan 🤢 yuck is there. Machan sees Gauri standing alone and goes up to her and says 'Namaste Babiji'. Gauri is scared seeing him, and tries to walk away. Machan block her way and tells her that it is so sad that Shiv married you because you are so tainted not just be one by two men. Machen tells her first by Shashank and then by me at the hotel. He gives that nasty look. Gauri now is absolutely stricken and she has tears in her eyes. There is this big Camera turn and we see Shiv standing behing Machan having heard the whole thing. Shiv says Machan very sternly, he doesn't yell but it is a command. Gauri too turns to see Shiv, Shiv and Gauri look at each other, Shiv is angry, He looks at Gauri and he sees that she has tears in her eyes. Gauri walks away fast. Shiv goes up to Machan, there is the Shiv background music playing when he walks. Shiv asks Machan what the hell he is doing. Machan tries to cover up by trying to say something, but Shiv cuts him off. Shiv looks at him angrily and tells him to leave, Shiv shoots a quick glance at Gauri and she is still extremely depressed. Machan is shocked and asks why, Shiv replies that my Dad will be here if he sees Gauri depressed then it will be my fault, so you should leave. Machan leaves reluctantly. Shiv slowly walks up to Gauri, she turns her head, she wipes away her tears, Shiv seems a bit sorry for her. She leaves him to talk to Anupam. 👏



Ok let me add to this scene a bit...if u dont mind...

Before gauri leaves to let shiv and anupam talk...shiv sees gauri crying...He feels bad but just walks away...
And then Anupam comes to gauri..and talks to her and makes her feel better..and then in his usual anupam style says some shero shayri..

He makes Gauri smile...(Shiv is watching all this...with a weird expression...he is jealous..but doesnt know he is jealous)
Then he sees gauri talk ...smile and laugh with anupam...gauri opens up to anupam..she feels nice and smiles...
Shiv gets very jealous of all this...he goes upto Ipshita and says lets dance...he goes and dances infront of gauri and anupam....and drinks and drinks a lot...
Then they go home

Ok..i dont think this is that good 😆😆😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Nice addition to my post. Oh we have seen everthing, the angry shiv, the some what kind Shiv, the embarassed Shiv. Seeing him in love and jealous that would be awesome to watch. 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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^^ omg awesome scene guyz 👏 👏
lol it will be so kool to see shiv jealous 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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so would anii one like me 2 continue and maragtham (can i knoww ur name) plzzzz continue writin more scenes...
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: *ba3ykush*

so would anii one like me 2 continue and maragtham (can i knoww ur name) plzzzz continue writin more scenes...

yeah u should continue😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Ok..so here I go everybody!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Mahen uncle wants Gauri and Shiv to deliver some Diwali gifts to his friend who lives in another city.Shiv is very upset to hear this "disappointing news",as he doesn't find it convenient to go anywhere with Gauri 😡

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Next day~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Gauri and Shiv are ready to leave the house...when suddenly,out of nowhere Mahen uncle comes running out the house 😕As he reaches Shiv and Gauri,he tells them that he has some very unfortunate news."The driver that was supposed to drive you to my friend's house has bailed out at the last minute 😭.Now you two will have to find another convenient way to get there."

At this point Shiv is so steaming mad that he's cursing at Gauri and telling her how unfortunate he is to have her as a good-for-nothin' wife ."You know what GAURI,you are such an UGLY person and your LUCK isn't doing either of us any good at all!!!!"Gauri's just walking on looking sad and hurt(with close to tears in her eyes)...so Shiv roughly turns her aroun and YELLS really LOUD in her face,"I HATE YOU MORE THAN ANYTHING ON THIS GOD DAMN EARTH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

It is night now and Gauri and Shiv have stopped to rest for a while.Gauri is sitting all by herself while she watches Shiv flirting with 3 very attractive young ladies 😔Then,Gauri has the flashback of the moment when Shiv hollered,"I HATE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!",and she is saddened to know how someone could possibly hate her when she did absolutely nothing to them 😭 😭.Gauri stands up and is walking toward Shiv,when suddenly a guy(that same guy from the bar)pops in front of her and starts dancing uncontrollably with her.She is scared and screams out Shiv's name many,many times,but he seems embarrassed by her and ignores her.Now,the guy has a hold of Gauri's hand and as she yanks her hand free...she falls backward and hits her head hard on the pavement 😭.Shiv sees this and is shocked!!He doesn't want to go anywhere near her because she has already embarrassed him in front of all the HOT models.But,he goes up to her anyways,and it is now visible that she is bleeding from her head.

Shiv has a worried and empathetic face.At this point he is in rememberance mode:He remembers all the bad times,all the times when he screamed and hollered at Gauri and is now crying as to why he did all that.Shiv asks himself,"Why did I do all that,why did I behave like such a bitchy jerk in front of Gauri when she didn't do anything to me to begin with?Gauri is a nice girl and I should respect her moral values.From now on I will behave like the real Shiv Kapoor,the one that I know I can be 😉 😉

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